寫作話題《勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐》【命題探索】為了切實(shí)落實(shí)教育改革要求學(xué)生“德智體美勞”全面發(fā)展，近幾年全國中高考試題都不同程度增加了五育的考查。如“結(jié)合自身體會(huì)談?wù)撊绾闻囵B(yǎng)勞動(dòng)精神”。分析全國中考真題可知，此話題有以下命題角度：樹立勞動(dòng)觀念，進(jìn)行實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。如：云南省卷“DoingHouseworkMakesme________”；南充“我勞動(dòng)，我快樂”；重慶A卷“SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinOurSchool”；煙臺(tái)“邀請(qǐng)好友參加勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐周活動(dòng)”；2019湘潭“HelpwithSomeHousework”等；2)參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，倡導(dǎo)健康理念。如：懷化“申請(qǐng)當(dāng)亞運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者”；婁底以‘Sports’為題的征文比賽；襄陽“談一談你對(duì)中考體育考試的改革方案的態(tài)度和觀點(diǎn)”；3)滲透美育知識(shí)，引導(dǎo)審美情趣。如：衡陽“介紹中國的文化特色”；杭州“接受朋友的邀請(qǐng)去發(fā)表關(guān)于中國民族音樂的演講并詢問相關(guān)事宜”；連云港“邀請(qǐng)外籍教師參加學(xué)校舉辦的‘我是美猴王’在線才藝展示活動(dòng)”；荊門“向筆友介紹學(xué)校的‘戲曲進(jìn)校園’展演活動(dòng)”等。一、寫作指導(dǎo)假定你是李華，近日你校開展了以“熱愛勞動(dòng)，珍愛糧食”為主題的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下圖示，用英語給筆友John寫一封信，分享活動(dòng)過程和感受。詞數(shù)80左右。注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名和校名。五步寫作法——審列擴(kuò)連查第一步細(xì)審題定要點(diǎn)（五審法：審主題、審人稱、審文體、審時(shí)態(tài)、審要點(diǎn)）1）審主題：熱愛勞動(dòng)，珍愛糧食2）審時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主3）審人稱：以第一人稱為主4）審文體：應(yīng)用文第二步分段落列要點(diǎn)首段(Beginning)：開門見山，引出話題：自己在田間勞動(dòng)一日的經(jīng)歷。中間段(Body)：詳細(xì)介紹活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容以及自己的感受。結(jié)尾(Ending)：用疑問句來呼應(yīng)首段（已給出）。第三步擴(kuò)句子精加工首段：引出話題：田間勞動(dòng)[一般句]I’mgladtotellyoumyexperienceinricefields.[高分句]I’mgladtotellyoumyone-dayexperienceinricefields./Myone-dayexperienceinricefieldsiswellworthsharingwithyou.中間段：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容及感受【要點(diǎn)一】活動(dòng)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)[一般句]OnJune18,myclassmatesandIwenttothecommunityfarm.[高分句]OnJune18,myclassmatesandIwenttothecommunityfarm,laughingandjumping.(v.-ing形式作伴隨狀語)【要點(diǎn)二】活動(dòng)內(nèi)容[一般句]Somelearnedtoharvestrice.Somehelpedtocarryrice,andotherspickedearsofrice.【要點(diǎn)三】活動(dòng)感受[一般句]Afterone-daywork,weweretired,butwefelthappy.AndIhavecometorealizethatweshouldsavefoodfromnowon.第四步連句子成短文???????DearJohn,??Howiseverythinggoing?I’mgladtotellyoumyone-dayexperienceinricefields.OnJune18,myclassmatesandIwenttothecommunityfarm.Whenwearrived,wevisitedthefarmandwatchedvideosonfarming.Thenweworkedtogetherwithfarmers.Somelearnedtoharvestrice.Somehelpedtocarryricewhileotherspickedearsofricefromthefields.Throughtheactivities,I’vegotthepleasureofhardworkandlearnedtovalueeachgrain.Haveyouhadanyexperienceofthiskind?Yours,LiHua第五步查全文得高分首先依次檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，要點(diǎn)是否齊全；然后檢查句型、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否正確。素材積累勞動(dòng)教育:做家務(wù)dochores整理房間tidytheroom疊衣服foldtheclothes做飯cookmeals種樹和種菜planttreesandgrowvegetables做志愿服務(wù)工作dovolunteerwork拜訪養(yǎng)老院visittheoldpeople’shome組織游學(xué)organizethestudytour建立實(shí)踐俱樂部setuppracticeclubs開設(shè)勞動(dòng)教育課offer/runalaboreducationcourse學(xué)習(xí)更多的生活技能和變得更加獨(dú)立learnmorelifeskillsandbecomemoreindependent培養(yǎng)責(zé)任感和好習(xí)慣developasenseofresponsibilityandgoodhabits理解勞動(dòng)的意義understandthemeaningoflabor培養(yǎng)我們的獨(dú)立性developourindependence美育知識(shí)：尋找生活中更多的幸福與美findmorehappinessandbeautyinlife課外活動(dòng)after-classactivities上培訓(xùn)課attendtrainingcourses充分利用課外時(shí)間makethebestuseoftimeafterschool培養(yǎng)興趣愛好takeuphobbies增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的身心健康improvestudents’physicalandmentalhealth實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練假如你是李斌，開學(xué)初老師在勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐課(laborclass)上布置了一項(xiàng)作業(yè)，內(nèi)容是栽培一種植物(綠植、花、水果、蔬菜等)，觀察并記錄它(們)的生長變化。你完成了這項(xiàng)作業(yè)并且覺得很有趣，打算寫一封郵件和你的筆友Tom分享此次經(jīng)歷和感受。詞數(shù)100左右。提示：1.Whatdoyougrow?2.Howdoyoulookafterit?(watch,record)3.Feelings:afeelingofsatisfaction,fun,learn,...注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭和格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名。參考答案【高分句】1．Somelearnedtoharvestrice.Somehelpedtocarryricewhileotherspickedearsofricefromthefields.2．Throughtheactivities,I'vegotthepleasureofhardworkandlearnedtovalueeachgrain./Thankstothesevaluableactivities,I'vegotastrongsenseofresponsibility.Moreimportantly,Iknewthepleasureofhardworkandthevalueoflabor.【實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練】時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主人稱：以第一人稱為主要點(diǎn)：thenameoftheplant;howtolookafterit,feelingsHiTom,??How’sitgoing?I’dliketosharetheinterestingexperienceofmylaborhomeworkwithyou.Thisterm,myteacheraskedustogrowaplantandrecorditschanges.IchoseasunflowerandnameditSunny.Iputtheseedintoanicecontainerandcarefullyrecordeditschanges.Eachday,IwateredandlookedafterSunnywithcare.Itwasfascinatingtoseehowitslowlygrewtallerandstronger.WhenIsawthesunflowergrowwell,Igotastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.Andthefunnyshapeofthesunflowerma