三、建議信建議信是作者就有關(guān)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并針對(duì)這些問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和建議，以便讓對(duì)方接受自己的想法、主張并解決有關(guān)問(wèn)題。建議信的寫(xiě)作目的是提出建議或忠告，一定要簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力，并注意要禮貌當(dāng)先。具體寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)如下：1．開(kāi)頭句(1)Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/offeryousomeadviceon/abouthowto...我寫(xiě)信就如何……給你一些建議/忠告。(2)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我寫(xiě)信是要表達(dá)我關(guān)于……的看法。(3)Youhaveaskedformyadviceon/about...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.關(guān)于……你向我征求意見(jiàn)，在此我盡力提出一些有用的建議。(4)I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...我很高興收到你就……征求我的建議的來(lái)信。(5)Herearesometips/suggestionstohelpyou.這里有對(duì)你有幫助的一些建議。(6)Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowthefollowingadvice/theadvicebelow.如果你聽(tīng)從以下建議，我認(rèn)為你會(huì)做到的。2．中間句(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...我認(rèn)為對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)最適合的……是……(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建議……(3)You’dbetter.../It’sbestto...你最好……/最好是……(4)AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion/Asforme/Frommypointofview，itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看來(lái)，采取如下行動(dòng)是明智的。(5)Foronething...；foranother...一方面……，另一方面……(6)IfIwereyou，Iwould...如果我是你，我會(huì)……(7)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...我認(rèn)為如果你能……將會(huì)更有益。3．結(jié)尾句(1)Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/considerationseriously.我希望你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。(2)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.我希望你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這些建議實(shí)用/有用/有幫助。(3)Iwillbemorethanhappy/delightedtoseeyourimprovementsinthisregard.看到你在這一方面取得進(jìn)步我會(huì)非常高興。(2023·北京)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，他發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：1．活動(dòng)形式；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100個(gè)左右；2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。滿分佳作名師點(diǎn)評(píng)DearJim，Delightedlyhearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitythemed“GreenBeijing”，Iamwritingtomakemysuggestionsfortheevent.Tobeginwith，IsuggestorganizingawalkingtouraroundthecitytoexplorethegreenspacesinBeijing，whichwillallowparticipantstoexperiencethebeautyofthecity’sparksandgardenswhilepromotingeco-friendlytransportation.Anothereffectiveactivityisplantingtreestocontributetothecity’sgreenefforts.ThiscouldbeacollaborativeeffortwithlocalvolunteersorenvironmentalorganizationsthatarecommittedtothepreservationofBeijing’snaturalenvironment.Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful.I’mlookingforwardtoyoursuccessfullyorganizingtheevent.Yours，LiHua1.文章開(kāi)頭扼要地介紹了寫(xiě)信的目的，使用了建議信的套語(yǔ)：Iamwritingtomakemysuggestionsfor...。2.書(shū)信的主體部分提出了自己的建議，使用了過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)：tobeginwith，anothereffectiveactivity；高級(jí)詞匯：explore，allow...to，promote，collaborative，becommittedto...等；還使用了復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和狀語(yǔ)從句的省略等。3.信的結(jié)尾使用了建議信的套語(yǔ)：Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful.I’mlookingforwardto...表達(dá)了希望。(2024·廣東江門(mén)聯(lián)考)假定你是李華，你校外教Smith準(zhǔn)備利用即將到來(lái)的中秋節(jié)假期去北京游玩，想征詢你的建議。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封英文郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．旅行建議(景點(diǎn)、美食、交通等)；2．表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2．格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMrSmith，Yourssincerely，LiHua參考范文DearMrSmith，I’mgladtoprovideyouwithsomesuggestionsonyourupcomingtriptoBeijingduringtheMid-AutumnFestival.Beijing，asthecapitalofChina，offersarichculturalexperience.ThePalaceMuseumshowcasesChinesehistory.TheTian’anmenSquareisasymbolofChina.TheGreatWalloffersbreathtakingviews.Youcanalsoexplorehutongs(traditionalalleyways)toexperiencetraditionalChineseculture.Asforfinefood，youcantryBeijingRoastDuck，ZhajiangmianandBingtanghulu.Bytheway，usethesubways，busesortaxistogetaround.