書面表達（15題）目錄TOC\o"1-1"\h\u一．（24-25九年級上·陜西寶雞·期末） 1二．（23-24九年級上·江西新余·期末） 3三．（23-24九年級上·湖南長沙·期末） 4四．（23-24九年級上·陜西寶雞·期末） 6五．（23-24九年級上·廣西百色·期末） 8六．（23-24九年級上·江西南昌·期末） 9七．（23-24九年級上·河北承德·期末） 11八．（23-24九年級上·河南周口·期末）

13九．（23-24九年級上·云南昭通·期末） 15十．（23-24九年級上·遼寧大連·期末） 16十一．（22-23九年級上·陜西延安·期末） 18十二．（23-24九年級上·云南昭通·期末） 20十三．（22-23九年級上·江西宜春·期末） 21十四．（22-23九年級上·山西朔州·期末） 23十五．（22-23九年級上·廣西河池·期末） 25一．（24-25九年級上·陜西寶雞·期末）你的美國朋友Ben想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請選擇一個你最喜歡的節(jié)日并寫信告訴他。開頭部分已寫好，請根據(jù)問題完成剩余部分，寫一篇70—80詞的短文。（1）Whenisthefestival?（2）Whatdoyouusuallydoatthefestival?（3）Whatspecialfooddoyoueat?（4）Whydoyoulikeitbest?DearBen,IamhappytoknowyouareinterestedintraditionalfestivalsinChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,_____【答案】例文DearBen,IamhappytoknowyouareinterestedintraditionalfestivalsinChina.

IwilltellyouhowIspendtheMid-AutumnFestivalwithyou.TheMid-AutumnFestivalfallsonthe15thdayofthe8thmonthoftheChineselunarcalendar.Onthisday,Ispendtimewithmyfamilyathome.Asalways,mymomandImakemooncakestogether.Iliketomakemooncakesofdifferentshapes,suchasroundandfish-shaped.Atnight,aftermydadsetsthetableintheyard,mywholefamilyenjoythemooncakesandadmirethefullmoon.MygrandmausuallytellsusthestoryofChang’e.Itisreallyawonderfulday.IliketheMid-AutumnFestivalbestbecauseitisatimeforfamilymemberstogettogetherandeveryonehasgreatfunonthisday.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己最喜歡的節(jié)日，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意要點齊全，并突出重點寫作。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題，表達很高興分享自己是如何度過中秋節(jié)的；第二步，具體介紹自己是如何度過中秋節(jié)的，包括時間、活動、食物及感受；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，進行總結(jié)。[亮點詞匯]①asalways一如既往②suchas例如③gettogether團聚[高分句型]①Atnight,aftermydadsetsthetableintheyard,mywholefamilyenjoythemooncakesandadmirethefullmoon.(after引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)②IliketheMid-AutumnFestivalbestbecauseitisatimeforfamilymemberstogettogetherandeveryonehasgreatfunonthisday.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)二．（23-24九年級上·江西新余·期末）科技改變生活，發(fā)明無處不在，如computers、cars、smartphones、e-books、robots、Internet……請結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)剆martphones對你的影響以及它是如何改變你的生活的。要求：1.詞數(shù)80—100（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Technologychangesourlifeandinventionsarearoundus.Inmydailylife,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Technologychangesourlifeandinventionsarearoundus.Inmydailylife,thesmartphonehashadagreaterinfluenceonmethananyotherinvention.ItakemysmartphonewhereverIgobecauseit’sconvenient.Withitshelp,Icansearchforusefulinformationatanytime.IcanalsodownloadandstorethingsthatIneed.Butthesmartphonebringsmesomeproblemsatthesametime.Staringatscreenstoomuchisbadformyeyes.AndsometimesIusemysmartphonetosearchforsolutionswithoutthinkingandexploringonmyown.So,Ithinkthesmartphoneisadouble-sidedswordandweshoulduseitcorrectlyandwisely.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，不要遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，引出話題；第二步，介紹智能手機是如何改變自己的生活的；第三步，表達感受，總結(jié)全文。[亮點詞匯]①haveaninfluenceon對……有影響②searchfor尋找③atthesametime同時④double-sidedsword雙刃劍[高分句型]①ItakemysmartphonewhereverIgobecauseit’sconvenient.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）②Staringatscreenstoomuchisbadformyeyes.（動名詞作主語）三．（23-24九年級上·湖南長沙·期末）手機正改變著人們的聯(lián)系、娛樂和出行等方式。你知道手機的起源和發(fā)展嗎？請根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息，結(jié)合手機的發(fā)展情況、外形、用途等方面，談?wù)勊淖兓c發(fā)展。要求：1.80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。第一部手機由美國人MartinCooper發(fā)明于1973年。外形特點；以前的手機屏幕較小并且多為黑白屏幕；現(xiàn)在的手機屏幕多為彩色，并且屏幕越來越大，有的還擁有全屏（fullscreens）等。功能用途：以前一般用于打電話和發(fā)短信（textmessages）等；現(xiàn)在手機擁有各種軟件（apps），被應(yīng)用于生活的各個方面，如：聽音樂、支付、購票、上網(wǎng)等。Mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantinpeople’sdailylife.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantinpeople’sdailylife.Doyouknowtheoriginanddevelopmentofmobilephones?ThefirstmobilephonewasinventedbyAmericanMartinCooperin1973.Previously,mobilephonescreensweresmallerandmostlyblackandwhite.Nowadays,mostmobilephonescreensareincolorandaregettingbiggerandbigger.Somealsohavefullscreen.Peopleusedtouseitfrequentlytomakephonecallsandsendtextmessages.Butnowtherearevarioussoftwareonmobilephones.Theyareusedinvariousaspectsoflife,suchaslisteningtomusic,payingbills,buyingtickets,surfingtheInternetandsoon.Inshort,mobilephoneshavemadeourlivesincreasinglyconvenient.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時及一般過去時為主；③提示：寫作要求已給出，考生注意不要遺漏表格中所給信息，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，表述完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接上文，用提問的方式引出“手機的發(fā)展”這一話題；第二步，具體介紹手機的歷史和幾個方面的變化；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，總結(jié)手機的便利性。[亮點詞匯]①usedtodo過去常常做某事②makephonecalls打電話③Inshort總之[高分句型]①ThefirstmobilephonewasinventedbyAmericanMartinCooperin1973.（被動語態(tài)）②Nowadays,mostmobilephonescreensareincolorandaregettingbiggerandbigger.（比較級+比較級）四．（23-24九年級上·陜西寶雞·期末）假如你是李華，你校正在舉辦以“科技改變生活”為主題的演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，用英語寫一篇演講稿，介紹一些身邊的科技發(fā)明及其優(yōu)點。參考詞匯：convenient,shoponline,havevideocalls,savetime,easytotravel,environmental-friendly,…要求：1.可選擇使用參考詞匯，亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）Hello,everyone!IamLiHua.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologybringsusgreatinventionsandtheinventionsmakeourlifebetterandbetter.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallmyspeech.Thankyou!【答案】參考范文：Hello,everyone!IamLiHua.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologybringsusgreatinventionsandtheinventionsmakeourlifebetterandbetter.Today,Iwanttotalkaboutfourgreatinventions.Theyaresmartphones,robots,high-speedtrainsandelectriccars.Thesmartphonesmakeourlifeconvenient.Wecanshoponline,watchmovies,andhavevideocallsbyusingthesmartphone.Asfortherobot,itcanhelpuswithhousework.Itsavesusalotoftime.Thehigh-speedtrainhasgreatlyimprovedourtravelspeed.Travellingbecomeseasierthanbefore.Theelectriccarhasalsochangedourlife.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsoprotecttheenvironment.That’sallmyspeech.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為演講稿。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中一些身邊的科技發(fā)明及其優(yōu)點的介紹，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“請你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，用英語寫一篇演講稿，介紹一些身邊的科技發(fā)明及其優(yōu)點”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“智能手機、高鐵、機器人等”幾個方面重點介紹一些身邊的科技發(fā)明及其優(yōu)點的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達感謝。[亮點詞匯]①wanttodosth想要做某事；②bydoingsth通過做某事；③asfor至于；④notonly,butalso不僅，而且。[高分句型]①It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.(“It’sagreathonorforsbtodosth”句型)②Travellingbecomeseasierthanbefore.(動名詞作主語)五．（23-24九年級上·廣西百色·期末）安全對每個人都很重要。為了進一步增強中學(xué)生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，你校將開展以“安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請根據(jù)以下提示及要求，以“Safetyrulesatschool”為題寫一篇演講稿，介紹你們在學(xué)校應(yīng)該注意的安全準則。提示：1.上、下樓梯不要擁擠；2.不要從樓上往下扔雜物；3.玩耍時不能使用刀等尖銳物品；4.在學(xué)校不抽煙、不喝酒。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。SafetyrulesatschoolHello,everyone!It’simportantforustokeepsafeatschool.Tobesafe,wemustfollowtheserulesatschool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Onepossibleversion:SafetyrulesatschoolHello,everyone!It’simportantforustokeepsafeatschool.Tobesafe,wemustfollowtheserulesatschool.First,don’tcrowdwhenwegoupstairsordownstairs,orwemayhurtourselvesbyfallingoffsteps.Second,wearenotallowedtothrowrubbishoutofthewindowsoftallbuildings.Third,wemustn’tusesharpthingslikekniveswhenweplaywithourclassmates.Fourth,smokinganddrinkingarenotallowedatschool,either.They’rebadforourhealth.Last,weshouldbefriendlytoourteachersandclassmates.Don’tfightwithourclassmates.Remembertheserules,andwe’llbesafeatschool.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是演講稿；②時態(tài)：主要時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中“提示信息”的幾個要點均要一一闡述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。借用“在學(xué)校保持安全非常重要”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點——不要擁擠、不要扔雜物、不拿尖銳物品、不抽煙喝酒均要一一闡述。第三步：書寫結(jié)語。表達“謝謝您的聆聽”的感謝。[亮點詞匯]①followtheserules遵守這些規(guī)則②hurtourselves傷害我們自己③fightwith與……戰(zhàn)斗[高分句型]①Third,wemustn’tusesharpthingslikekniveswhenweplaywithourclassmates.(when引導(dǎo)的狀語從句）②Don’tfightwithourclassmates.(祈使句)六．（23-24九年級上·江西南昌·期末）發(fā)明物改變了我們的生活。請你寫一個你熟悉而且一直在使用的發(fā)明物，以“InventionandLife”為題寫一篇短文內(nèi)容，包括以下幾點：1.Whatistheinvention?2.Whydoyouthinkitishelpful?3.Whatdoyouusuallydowithit?4.Doyouthinkpeoplewillstilluseitinthefuture?Why?要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。InventionandlifeTherearefamousinventionsliketheTVs,computersandbicycles.Amongthem,Ithinkthemostusefulformeisthe…_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Inventionandlife

TherearefamousinventionsliketheTVs,computersandbicycles.Amongthem,Ithinkthemostusefulformeisthebicycle.

Igotoschoolbybike.Itisnotsoexpensivethatmostofuscanaffordit.Itmakesnopollution,whichisgoodforourenvironment.Whatismore,bikeridingisakindofexercisewhichisquitegoodforourhealth.

Inmyopinion,bikeswillbemoreandmorepopularinthefuture,becausemoreandmorepeopletakecareoftheirhealth.Inaddition,ourgovernmentencouragesustodriveless.Welookforwardtohavingtheblueskyandthefreshair.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：本文的時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：本文的要點以問題形式呈現(xiàn)，所以要注意條理清楚；[寫作步驟]第一步，總述認為最有用的發(fā)明是自行車；第二步，解釋為什么它是有用的，用它做什么；第三步，在未來仍然會使用它，并給出原因。[亮點詞匯]①Inaddition此外②lookforwardto期待③Inmyopinion在我看來[高分句型]①Itisnotsoexpensivethatmostofuscanaffordit.（結(jié)果狀語從句）②Whatismore,bikeridingisakindofexercisewhichisquitegoodforourhealth.（定語從句）七．（23-24九年級上·河北承德·期末）假如你是李雷，上周參觀了以“Makegooduseofthewaste”為主題的環(huán)保作品展。請你根據(jù)以下信息，寫一篇短文，在英語課上介紹相關(guān)展品并分享自己對環(huán)保的想法。WhatwereonshowWhattheyweremadeof/fromWhatyouthinkacathousetoysmodelcar…wastepaper/clothesplasticbottlesusedwoodandglass···creativesaveenergy…要求：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、學(xué)校等信息。（2）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。MakegooduseofthewasteHello,everyone!I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“Makegooduseofthewaste”.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MakegooduseofthewasteHello,everyone!I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“Makegooduseofthewaste”.Anumberofcreativeworkswereonshow,suchasacathouse,amodelcar,sometoysandsoon.Ofalloftheworks,Iwasmostinterestedinamodelcar.Itismadeofusedwoodandglass.Theyaregluedtogetherandpaintedindifferentcolorssothemodelcarlooksverybeautifulandfashionable.Makingtheseworksisagoodwaytorecyclethewaste.Itreallyhelpstosaveenergy.Anditwon’tpollutetheenvironment.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”。③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，根據(jù)要點提示，介紹自己在環(huán)保作品展上的所見所聞。第二步，介紹環(huán)保作品的原材料。第三步，介紹自己的看法。[亮點詞匯]①suchas比如②beinterestedin對……感興趣[高分句型]Theyaregluedtogetherandpaintedindifferentcolorssothemodelcarlooksverybeautifulandfashionable.(so引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)Makingtheseworksisagoodwaytorecyclethewaste.(動名詞作主語)八．（23-24九年級上·河南周口·期末）

假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在開展“創(chuàng)建綠色校園，我們都是參與者”的活動。學(xué)校微信公眾號計劃做關(guān)于綠色校園的系列推送，現(xiàn)就綠色環(huán)保這一話題在校內(nèi)收集材料。請你用英文給微信公眾號留言，向同學(xué)們提出倡議，請大家談?wù)劚Ｗo校園環(huán)境的重要性，以及怎樣做才能使校園環(huán)境更美好。提示詞:healthyandhappy,duty(責(zé)任),takecareof,clean,rubbish.提示問題：●Inyouropinion,whyisitimportanttoprotecttheschoolenvironment?●Whatcanyoudotomakeyourschoolgreener?要求：1.不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)90個詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。題型分析：從學(xué)生的角度談?wù)撊绾蝿?chuàng)建一個綠色校園。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，適當(dāng)使用情態(tài)動詞即可。行文思路：根據(jù)提示的問題，短文可以分兩部分闡述。第一部分闡述創(chuàng)建綠色校園的重要性；第二部分詳細闡述如何創(chuàng)建綠色校園，可以從身邊的事情說起，如定時清潔校園、不要亂涂亂畫、不要隨意踩踏草地和亂扔垃圾等。高分點撥：本次作文可以分為三段：第一段，補充完已給出的開頭，闡述為什么要創(chuàng)建綠色校園，點題；第二段，分幾個小點來詳細論述創(chuàng)建綠色校園的意見；第三段，簡明扼要地扣題。適當(dāng)使用連詞and,if,when,what’smore.佳作展示：I’mLiHua,fromClass1,Grade9.Ithinkprotectingtheschoolenvironmentisveryimportant._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sdoitfromnowon.Thanks.【答案】例文I’mLiHua,fromClass1,Grade9.Ithinkprotectingtheschoolenvironmentisveryimportant.Becauseacleanandpleasantenvironmentcanmakeushealthyandhappy.What’smore,it’sourdutytotakegoodcareofourschoolandprotectourschoolenvironment.Toprotectourschoolenvironment,weshouldcleantheschooleveryday.Whenweclean,doitcarefullyandtrytomakeeverythingclean.Weshouldn’tthrowrubbishhereandthere.Whenweseeitontheground,weshouldpickitup.Andweshouldn’tpicktheflowersintheschoolgarden.What’smore,drawingonthewallisterrible.Wemustn’tdoit.Ifwehaveagoodschoolenvironment,wecanstudybetter.Let’sdoitfromnowon.Thanks!【詳解】[總體分析]題材：本文是一篇材料作文；時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，指出保護校園環(huán)境很重要；第二步，具體闡述如何創(chuàng)建綠色校園；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，號召從現(xiàn)在做起。[亮點詞匯]①takegoodcareof好好照顧②hereandthere各處③pickup撿起[高分句型]①Toprotectourschoolenvironment,weshouldcleantheschooleveryday.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）②Ifwehaveagoodschoolenvironment,wecanstudybetter.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）九．（23-24九年級上·云南昭通·期末）The_________HasChangedMyLife提示：發(fā)明無處不在，各種各樣的發(fā)明(如computers,robots,Internet…)不斷地改變著我們的生活。什么發(fā)明改變了你的生活？請以“The_________HasChangedMyLife”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勥@個發(fā)明物是怎樣改變你生活的。要求：1.用適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)明物補全題目，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于60個；2.語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；3.文中不得使用真實姓名，校名，否則以零分計；4.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ThecomputerHasChangedMyLifeInventionsarearoundus.Amongtheinventions,thecomputerhasagreatinfluenceonmeandithaschangedmylife.BeforeIhadacomputer,Iusedtocommunicatewithmyfriendsbyletter.WhenImetnewwords,Ihadtolookthemupinthedictionary.WhenIfeltstressed,IjustlistenedtomusiconMP3.AfterIreceivedacomputeronmytwelfthbirthday,mylifechanged.Icancommunicatewithmyfriendsfreelybyreceivingandsendinge-mails.Icanusethecomputertosearchforsomeusefulinformationandlookupnewwords.WhenIfeelstressed,Icanlistentomusiconlinetorelaxmyself.Inaword,thecomputerhaschangedmylifealot.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求先將題目補充完整，然后再進行寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意語句通順，表達清晰。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，介紹改變生活的是哪種發(fā)明物；第二步，具體介紹這個發(fā)明物是如何改變生活的；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，進行總結(jié)。[亮點詞匯]①haveagreatinfluenceon對……有很大影響②communicatewithsb和某人交流③lookup查閱[高分句型]①WhenImetnewwords,Ihadtolookthemupinthedictionary.

(when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)②Amongtheinventions,thecomputerhasagreatinfluenceonmeandithaschangedmylife.(and連接的并列句)十．（23-24九年級上·遼寧大連·期末）地球一小時（EarthHour）是世界自然基金會（WWF）應(yīng)對全球氣候變化所提出的一項全球性節(jié)能活動（2023年地球一小時時間為3月25日晚上20:30—21:30），家庭及商界用戶關(guān)上不必要的電燈及耗電產(chǎn)品一小時，以此來表明他們對應(yīng)對氣候變化行動的支持。今年的EarthHour你是如何度過的？請你寫一篇題為“MyEarthHour2023”的短文。要點如下：1.你今年參加EarthHour這個活動了嗎？請表達你參加或者沒有參加的心情。2.請你描述你當(dāng)時在哪里，與誰一起度過，做了什么事。3.請列舉兩件以上你在日常生活中經(jīng)常做的有利于環(huán)保的事。4.號召大家加入明年的EarthHour活動中來。注意：1.作文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。2.詞數(shù)80—100。作文的標(biāo)題、開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。MyEarthHour2023TheEarthHourwasfrom8:30p.m.to9:30p.m.onSaturdayMarch25ththisyear.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyEarthHour2023TheEarthHourwasfrom8:30p.m.to9:30p.m.onSaturdayMarch25ththisyear.IamverygladthatItookpartinthisactivitywithmyfamily.Itwasawarmandrelaxingeveningandwehaddinnerearliersothatwecouldenjoytheone-hourdarkandenergy-savingtimewitheachother.WeturnedthelightsandTVoffanditwasamazingtoseethatmostofthelightsintheneighborhoodbecamedarkduringthatperiod.Wegatheredtogetherandtoldeachotherthingsthathappenedrecentlyandwelaughedalot.Ithinkitwasreallyameaningfulactivity.Infact,therearelotsofactivitieswecandotoprotecttheenvironment,suchassavingwaterortakingabustogooutinsteadoftakingataxi.Ibelievethatwecanmakeourearthabetterplaceifeveryoneplaysanactivepartinsavingit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：根據(jù)要點提示完成寫作，注意文中要包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)；注意時態(tài)，無語法錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接文章開頭，介紹你參加的這次“地球一小時”的活動詳情，并具體介紹自己做了哪些事；第二步，介紹還可以做些什么有利于環(huán)保的事；第三步，發(fā)出號召。[亮點詞匯]①takepartin參加②protecttheenvironment保護環(huán)境③insteadof代替[高分句型]①Itwasawarmandrelaxingeveningandwehaddinnerearliersothatwecouldenjoytheone-hourdarkandenergy-savingtimewitheachother.（sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句）②weturnedthelightsandTVoffanditwasamzingtoseethatmostofthelightsintheneighborhoodbecomedarkduringthatperiod.（it作形式主語；賓語從句）十一．（22-23九年級上·陜西延安·期末）習(xí)近平主席曾寄語青少年：想象力、創(chuàng)造力從哪里來？要從刻苦的學(xué)習(xí)中來。既勤學(xué)書本知識，又多學(xué)課外知識，還要勤于思考，多想想，多問問，這樣就能培養(yǎng)自己的創(chuàng)造精神。請你根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇小短文。提示：1.Whathaveyouevercreated/made?2.Whatdidyoulearnfromthatexperience?要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實信息；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：Creativityisthekeytohumanprogress.Everymajorscientificdiscoverybeganwithsomeoneimaginingtheworldinacreativeway.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,itgetsmoreandmoreimportant.Iamabigfanofscience.Monthsago,Iwantedtomakeamodelplanethatcouldfly.Atfirst,Ithoughtitwaseasy.Butduringtheprocess,Iranintomanydifficulties.Luckily,myscienceteacherhelpedmealotandsheadvisedmetosearchonlineanddoalotofreading.Finally,aftertwoweeks’hardwork,mymodelplanecouldflyfortwominutes.NowIknowifyouwanttocreateorinventsomething,youmustincreaseyourknowledgefirst.Oryoucanbehardlysuccessful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)綜合使用“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹創(chuàng)造力的重要性；第二步，介紹自己創(chuàng)造過什么以及從那次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到了什么；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①withthedevelopmentof...隨著……的發(fā)展②runintomanydifficulties遇到了許多困難③searchonline在線搜索④increaseone’sknowledge增加知識[高分句型]①Luckily,myscienceteacherhelpedmealotandsheadvisedmetosearchonlineanddoalotofreading.（并列句）②NowIknowifyouwanttocreateorinventsomething,youmustincreaseyourknowledgefirst.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）十二．（23-24九年級上·云南昭通·期末）HowtoProtecttheEnvironment提示：近年來，全球自然災(zāi)害頻發(fā)，極端天氣頻頻出現(xiàn)，環(huán)境惡化給全球帶來的危害正日益凸顯。盡管我國政府出臺了一系列環(huán)保方面的政策，成效也很顯著，但是，我們還需要付出更多的努力。請以“HowtoProtecttheEnvironment”為題，寫一篇短文，給大家提出一些保護環(huán)境的建議，為營造我們更好地地球家園做出努力。要求：1.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔、詞數(shù)不少于60詞；2.文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名，否則以零分記；3.書面表達必須寫在答題卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowtoProtectTheEnvironmentTheenvironmentalproblemsareveryseriousthesedays.Inordertomakeourcountrymorebeautiful,weshoulddosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.First,weshouldturnoffthelightstosaveelectricitywhenweleavetheroom.Second,we’dbetterturnoffthetapswhenwebrushourteeth.Third,weshouldadviseourpar