專題一應(yīng)用文寫作第七節(jié)收放自如的記敘文(本欄目對(duì)應(yīng)學(xué)生用書P376)Type

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人物描寫人物描寫屬于記敘文的寫作范疇。寫作時(shí)要圍繞人物組織材料，要做到主題鮮明，內(nèi)容清楚，并注意結(jié)構(gòu)的完整性。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：【提分寫作素材】1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)①As

for

my

favourite

figure…，itmustbe…至于我最喜歡的人物……，一定是……②AndthepersonI

respect

mostis…我最尊敬的人是……③Among

the

outstanding

figuresinChinesehistory，…ismyfavourite.在中國(guó)歷史上的杰出人物中，我最喜歡……2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)①Iadmirehimbecauseofhiscontributions

totheworld.因?yàn)樗麑?duì)世界的貢獻(xiàn)，我很欽佩他。②Infact，hewasamanfullofimagination，creationandwisdom.事實(shí)上，他是一個(gè)富有想象力、創(chuàng)造力和智慧的人。③She’sofmediumheight，withlongandblondehair.她中等身材，長(zhǎng)著金色的長(zhǎng)發(fā)。④Itwas…whomade

me

aware

of

the

importance

of…是……讓我意識(shí)到……的重要性。3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)①Fromhim，Irealise

the

secret

of

successis…從他身上，我意識(shí)到成功的秘訣是……②I

do

thank

him

forwhathedidforme.我確實(shí)感謝他為我所做的一切。③Setting

a

great

example

to…，shefullydeserves…她為……樹(shù)立好榜樣，完全值得……【佳作賞析】你們學(xué)校正舉辦主題為“用英文講中國(guó)故事”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇介紹中國(guó)歷史人物的短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.人物簡(jiǎn)介及事跡；

2.意義或啟示。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】

Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues，

respectforelders，

andsocialharmony.Confuciustravelledthroughoutthecountry，impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.

ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture，

fosteringrespectforauthority，

harmoniousrelationships，

andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday，hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Confucius’slifeoffers

valuable

lessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation，respectforelders，andthepursuitofknowledge，

which

serves

as

a

guiding

light

inourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremind

us

of

the

importance

ofintegrity，compassion，andsocialresponsibility.【即時(shí)演練】你校正在組織英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)以身邊值得尊敬和愛(ài)戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.人物簡(jiǎn)介；

2.尊敬和愛(ài)戴的原因。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)增加，以使行文連貫。The

Person

I

Respect

Therearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ MrsLiu，mymotherisoneofthem.Sheisakindandlovingpersonwhodedicatesherlifetotakingcareofthefamily.Shealwaysputstheneedsandwantsofothersbeforeherown.

WhatIadmiremostaboutmymotherisherunwaveringstrengthandresilience.Shehasfacedmanyobstaclesinherlifebuthasalwaysmanagedtocomeoutontop.Herdeterminationandperseverancearetrulyinspiring.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Overall，mymotherisanamazingpersonandanincrediblerolemodel.IamblessedtohaveherinmylifeandItrulybelievethattheworldwouldbeabetterplaceiftherearemorepeoplelikeher.Type

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敘事短文敘事短文屬于記敘文的寫作范疇，文章多以事件為中心，以時(shí)間和空間為線索，按事件的發(fā)生、發(fā)展、結(jié)局的順序展開(kāi)故事。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：【提分寫作素材】1.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)①Lastweekourschoollaunched

a

campaign

focusing

on…上周我們學(xué)校開(kāi)展了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于……的活動(dòng)。②In

order

to

encourage

students

to…，ourschoolorganised…為了鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生……，我們學(xué)校組織了……③With

the…approaching，we’regoingtoparticipate

ina…隨著……的臨近，我們要參加一個(gè)……2.主體部分常用語(yǔ)①Theyalsovisited…andlearnedabout…他們還參觀了……并了解了……②First，thethemeoftheactivityistoknowmoreabout…首先，活動(dòng)的主題是了解更多關(guān)于……③Last，everyoneis

called

on

to…最后，每個(gè)人都被要求……3.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)①Theactivitywas

highly

praised

by…活動(dòng)得到……的高度贊揚(yáng)。②Inaword，theactivitieshave

benefited

me

a

lot，makingmerealise…總之，這些活動(dòng)使我受益匪淺，讓我意識(shí)到……③Ihopethatyoucan…ifyouhavetimeinthenearfuture.如果你在不久的將來(lái)有時(shí)間，我希望你能……【佳作賞析】上周末你參加了校學(xué)生會(huì)組織的“認(rèn)識(shí)我們身邊的植物”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇文章，介紹此次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；

2.收獲與感想。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

Lastweekend，Iparticipatedinanactivitywithathemeof“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”organisedbyourStudents’Union.

Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist，

whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferentplants.Throughouttheevent，Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedfor________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________medicalpurposes，aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.

Overall，

itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.【即時(shí)演練】假定你是李華，上周末，你和同學(xué)去新星農(nóng)場(chǎng)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語(yǔ)角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：

1.農(nóng)場(chǎng)情況；

2.采摘過(guò)程；

3.個(gè)人感受。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________