Unit6Atonewithnature單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)概要寫作單元話題語篇展示概要寫作The'SmartFit'bracelet,anewwearabledevice,issettorevolutionizehealthandfitnessmonitoring.Developedbyateamofengineersandscientists,itaccuratelytracksvariousbiometricdatasuchasheartrate,bloodpressure,andsleeppatterns.Italsoprovidesrealtimefeedbackonactivitylevelsandcalorieexpenditure.WithGPScapabilities,userscantrackworkoutsandroutes.Thebraceletisdesignedtobefortable,lightweight,andsleek,makingitsuitablefordailywear.Itsinnovativefeatureshavegarneredattentionfromfitnessenthusiastsandtechexperts,andthedevelopersareconfidentitwillappealtoawideaudienceandimpactthewearabletechnologymarket.?英語概要寫作要求考生在理解原文的基礎(chǔ)上，?用較為簡短的篇幅?準確、?完整地再現(xiàn)原文的主要信息。?這要求考生具備良好的閱讀理解、?信息篩選和語言表達能力：（1）?閱讀理解?：?考生需要準確理解原文的主旨、?細節(jié)以及作者的態(tài)度和觀點。?(2)?信息篩選?：?從原文中提煉出關(guān)鍵信息，?包括主要觀點、?重要事實、?數(shù)據(jù)等。?(3)?語言表達?：?使用簡潔、?準確的語言對原文進行概括，?避免使用原文中的具體細節(jié)和例子。?(4)?邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)?：?保持原文的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)，?確保概要的條理清晰?？枷蚍治雠c應(yīng)對策略英語概要寫作的技巧主要包括以下幾點：??理解原文?：?首先需要仔細閱讀原文，?確保完全理解文章的主旨和要點。??刪除細節(jié)?：?概要寫作要求簡潔明了，?因此需要刪除原文中的具體細節(jié)和例子，?只保留主要觀點和信息。??簡化描述?：?使用概括性的詞語和短語來替代原文中的具體描述，?使概要更加精煉。??句式變換?：?通過改變句式結(jié)構(gòu)，?如將復(fù)合句變?yōu)楹唵尉洌?或使用不同的表達方式，?來避免直接引用原文句子。??邏輯連貫?：?在概要中保持信息的邏輯連貫性，?使用適當?shù)倪B接詞和過渡句來組織內(nèi)容。??檢查修改?：?完成初稿后，?仔細檢查并修改概要，?確保沒有遺漏重要信息，?且語言表達準確流暢。?概要寫作是要求學生對一篇文章進行歸納概括,用簡潔的語言總結(jié)文章要點。所表達的信息要忠實于原文,但不可原句照搬。I.話題詞匯(1)目前:currently=nowadays=presently(2)常見的現(xiàn)象:amonphenomenon=It’smonforsb.todo...(3)與……有聯(lián)系;與……有關(guān):beassociatedwith,connectwith(4)導(dǎo)致:contributeto,leadto,resultin(5)解釋:accountforII.話題句式1．常用開頭語(1)議論文...passage/authorarguesthat...本文/作者主張……...passage/authorhighlightstheimportanceof...本文/作者強調(diào)了……的重要性。...passage/authordiscussestheimpactof...本文/作者討論了……的影響。......ssage/authorpares...with...本文/作者比較了……與……(2)說明文...ordingtothepassage,wecanknow...根據(jù)文章我們可知……...spassage/articleismainlyabout...這篇文章主要是關(guān)于……...thepassage,thewriter/authormainlytellsus...在這篇文章中作者主要告訴我們……...ewstudyfound...一個新的研究發(fā)現(xiàn)……...purposeofthereportistoshow...這一報告的目的是表明……(3)記敘文...passage/storyismainlyabout...本文/這個故事主要是關(guān)于……...authortellsusastoryabout...作者告訴我們一個關(guān)于……的故事...passageisastoryabout...本文是一個關(guān)于……的故事2．要點連接詞(1)順序firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally首先，第二，第三，最后；tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally首先，然后，其次，最后；tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally首先，然后，其次，最后。(2)并列......las也；notonly...but(also)...不僅……還……；including/included包括。(3)對比............and...ontheotherhand...一方面……另一方面……；foronething...foranother...一方面……另一方面……；onthecontrary與此相反；nevertheless然而；paredto與……相比；incontrastwith與……形成對比；though/inspiteof盡管。(4)遞進even甚至；besides除了……之外(還)；what'smore還有；moreover而且；furthermore此外；inaddition另外；worsestill＝what'sworse＝tomakemattersworse更糟糕的是。(5)例證asamatteroffact/infact事實上；forexample/forinstance例如。(6)強調(diào)especially特別；indeed確實；atleast至少；atmost最多；notatall根本不；orrather更確切地說；particularly特別地。(7)因果thanksto多虧；asaresult結(jié)果；becauseof/asaresultof/onaccountof/dueto因為；owingto多虧；forthisreason由于這個原因。(8)總結(jié)inshort總之；generallyspeaking一般來說；briefly/inbrief簡言之；tosumup＝tosummarize＝insummary/toconclude總之。III.模版框架1．進行概要寫作時要注意以下四點：(1)一般使用第三人稱。(2)不可加入自己的觀點。(3)一定不可對原文內(nèi)容加以評論。(4)一定不要引入與原文內(nèi)容無關(guān)的信息。2．概要寫作步驟在寫概要時，要按照“六步法”的程序進行，具體操作方法如下：(1)Scanthepassage—覽全文，定體裁(2)Underlinethemainpoints—劃要點(3)Missthedetails—省細節(jié)(4)Analysethestructure—析結(jié)構(gòu)(5)Restatethepoints—換表達(6)Organizethemainpointsintoapassage—連全文閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Herbalmedicine(草藥),whichhasbeenusedformedicinalpurposes,istheuseofplantstotreatdiseases.Manyherbalistsusetheentireplant,fromtheflowers,stems,leaves,androots,intheformofeverythingfromteastopills.Theseplantscontainnatural,chemicalthingsthatcantreatthebodyforavarietyofdiseases—suchasallergies,asthma,rheumatoidarthritis,migraine,chronicfatigue,andcancer,amongothers.Nowadaysanincreasingnumberofpeopleprefertoadopttheseplantstotreattheirdiseasesbecauseparedwithchemicalmedicine,herbalmedicinehasitsownadvantages.Herbalmedicineandremedies(治療)aremoreeffectivethanchemicalmedicineforcertaindiseases.Thechemicalmedicinegivenbyachemistcouldhavecertainnegativesideeffects.However,manyoftheherbalmedicineandremediesdonothavenegativesideeffects.Ifany,theyaresofterthanchemicalmedicine.Obesityisthecauseofmanyofthehealthproblems.Herbalmedicinecanhelpweightlossmoreeffectivelyandimproveoverallhealth.However,thecureusingherbalmedicineandsupplements(營養(yǎng)品)wouldtakesometime,andthereforepeoplearesupposedtopossessenoughpatience.Worsestill,herbalmedicinecontainsavarietyofingredients(成分)andpeoplehavetobesurethattheirbodyagreeswiththeingredientsandthatitisnotallergic(過敏的).Whenusedcorrectlyanddirectedbydoctors,herbscanhelptreatavarietyofdiseases.Butkeepinmindthattheherbalmedicineindustryisnotregulated,soherbalproductsareoftenmisleadingandmaycontainadditives(添加劑)andthatarenotlistedonthelabel(標簽).Someherbsmaycauseallergicreactionsorinteractwithotherdrugs,andsomearepoisonousifusedimproperlyorathighdoses(劑量).Takingherbsonyourownincreasesyourrisk.【寫作分析】[結(jié)構(gòu)梳理]Introduction→Paragraph1.DefinitionConclusion→ Paragraph4.Advice[要點提煉]Paragraph1.Herbalmedicineistheuseoftheentireplantstotreatavarietyofdiseases.Paragraph2.Unlikechemicalmedicine,herbalmedicineismoreeffectiveandhasnoorfewernegativesideeffects.Paragraph3.However,herbalmedicinealsohasdisadvantages,suchastimeconsumingandpossibleallergy.Paragraph4.Peopleshoulduseherbalmedicinecautiously.[要點改寫]Paragraph1.Herbalmedicineisawayoftreatingsomediseases_____________________containingpowerfulthingsinvariousforms.

Paragraph2._____________________chemicalmedicine,herbalmedicineisbetterinseveralwayssuchasitsmoreeffectivenessandfewernegativesideeffects.

Paragraph3.Herbalmedicinerequires_____________________forrecoveryandtendsto_____________________aswell.

Paragraph4.Peopleshoulduseherbmedicine_____________________.

[銜接成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、短語翻譯1.Thiscasewill_________________________________________________________________________________________________________(對……有積極影響)judicialpractice.2.IfIwereyou,Iwould____________________________________________________________________________________(花更多時間在)English.3.Thereis_______________________________________________________________(沒什么比……更好)toseesmilingfaceofyou.4.When__________________________________________(有疑問),callthedoctor.5.Enoughmoney____________________________________________________________________________________(允許她旅行)aroundtheworld.6.Theteacher_______________________________________________________________(和,還有)hisstudentsvisitedthefamousmuseum.7.Hefellasleep____________________________________________________________________________________(蠟燭點著).8.Youshould__________________________________________(反省)yourmistakeseveryday.二、語篇翻譯（2425高二上·全國·課后作業(yè)）短文漢譯英當你餓了的時候你喜歡去哪家餐館？這條街上有各種各樣（飲食風格）的餐館，不同的餐館滿足幾乎所有的口味。有些餐館以美味中餐而聞名，有些以西餐而聞名，也有些以其當?shù)靥厣劽?。不管你喜歡哪一個，不管你喜歡什么，總會有一家很棒的，能夠吸引你的餐館。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三．書面表達閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Bambooisoneoftheworld'smostusefulplants.Forthousandsofyearsbamboohasbeenusedinmanydifferentways—fromfoodtomedicinetoclothingand,insmallways,asabuildingmaterial.However,bambooisnotoftenusedasabuildingmaterialinthedevelopedworld.AprofessorattheUniversityofPittsburghinPennsylvaniaistryingtochangethat.Theprofessorandhisstudentsaretestingthestrengthofbamboo.Theyaretestingitsradialload,orhowmuchpressureorweightitcantakebeforebreaking.KentHarriesisaprofessorattheUniversityofPittsburgh.Harriessaysthattestingmethodsforbambooneedtobethesameforall.Theyneedtobestandardized.Harriessaysbambooisstronginnature.Thestrengthofatleastthreespeciesofbambooissimilartosteel.Besidesitsstrength,Harriessaysthatbamboohasotherfeaturesthatmakeitagreatbuildingmaterial.Hesaysitisresilient,meaningitkeepsitsshapeandstrengthevenunderpressure.Bambooalsogrowsquickly.Bamboothatissuitableforconstructionneedsmuchlessresourcesthanwood.Theharvestcycleofbambooisabout3years.Softwoodssuchascedar,pineandsprucehaveaharvestcycleofabout10years.Andhardwoodsthatefromfloweringplantssuchasoak,mapleandwalnutneedmorethan30years.Bambooiswidelyusedasfoodforpandabears.Itisalsousedforflooringandwindowcovers.However,forbuilding,bambooisnotusedmuchoutsideitsnativegrowingarea.Thisismostlybecauseofitsroundshape.Butthereareotherreasonstoo.Peoplethinkthatbambooisalow-qualitybuildingmaterial.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2018·浙江11月高考)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校園)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushou