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讀六要素，梳理情節(jié)山

十句五定，三原則填充

修改草稿，潤色升級Reading&Searching六要素whenwhowherewhatwhyhow主要人物故事時間故事地點事件原因情節(jié)人物性格特征注意事件地點變化一個核心人物對應(yīng)一個核心事件矛盾問題情節(jié)和情感同時發(fā)展Reading&SearchingReadthewholepassagetosearchforthethemeandsixelements.ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ltoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn’theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.WhoI,GunterWhenacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptemberWhatIhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Reading&SearchingReadthewholepassagetosearchforthefiveelements(5w).Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.JustthenIrealizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.WhereWhythebusstation“I”hadzerocashinmywallet.Themehelpneedypeople;keeppromiseReading&SearchingReadthewholepassagetosummarizetheplotandemotiondevelopmentIwasinahurrytocatchthe___________toPragueduetothedelayedflight.Ijumpedintoataxiwhosedriverwas_________andarrivedatthebusstationwithno________.The____________and_____________didn'tworkbutthethebusqueuewasthinningout.thelastbusGuntercashcardmachinecashmachineanxiousembarrassedhelplessParagraph1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Paragraph2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.ShowTimeWorkingroupstoperformthestorytohaveadeepunderstandingofit.WritingPara1.A0（段首句）Para2.B0（段首句）定

A1:銜接句--就地取材，文字接龍定

B1：銜接句--就地取材，文字接龍A2:B2:A3:B3：A4:定

B4:故事性結(jié)尾（happyending描述畫面）定

A5:過渡句到P2--反向文字接龍定

B5:主題升華十句五定法的思路剩下的五句補(bǔ)齊細(xì)節(jié)：三大原則+所見，所聞，所說，所做，所思1.Action—Response原則

角色A的行為引起其他角色的反應(yīng)2.Conflict—Solution原則

原文出現(xiàn)的問題，續(xù)寫中解決問題3.Negative—Positive原則

情感變化，積極正能量

聽到這個消息后，Gunter的反應(yīng)坐上了去往Prague的公交車

我在車站再次見到Gunter，載我去機(jī)場

付費給Gunter;和Gunter成為朋友

升華主題：誠信，友善，傳播善意12345345Para.2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Para.1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews

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IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PolishTherearesomanytipstopolishthewritingHowtochoosethemostsuitabletipstomakeyourwritingmoreconsistent(一致的，吻合的)withoriginaltext(原文）?從文章中來，到文章中去Readingfor

languageFinally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.JustthenIrealizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”動作描寫；語言描寫；心理描寫；環(huán)境描寫；外貌描寫動作鏈+從句直接引語副詞+無靈主語+用動作體現(xiàn)心理practice方式一使用非謂語1.Doing...,...或者…，doing....2.With+n+doing/done/todo...（with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）例句翻譯：“對不起，銀行的提款機(jī)壞了，我拿不出現(xiàn)金?！蔽覍擂蔚亟忉尩溃樕匣鹄崩钡?burn)。"Sorry,thebankmachineisoutoforder,soIcan'ttakethecashout."Iexplainedembarrassedly,withmyfaceburning.practice方式二使用動作鏈