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1/15試卷第=page11頁,共=sectionpages33頁專題09讀后續(xù)寫之2020-2025高考真題01讀后續(xù)寫六年高考考情統(tǒng)計(jì)年份卷別主題話題類型2025全國一卷人與社會(huì)家庭聚會(huì)中兄弟產(chǎn)生嫌隙后和解家庭親情類全國二卷人與自我跨文化交流意識(shí)到文化身份認(rèn)同個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類浙江1月卷人與社會(huì)/自我勇尋真相并且學(xué)會(huì)共情的重要性生活故事類八省聯(lián)考卷人與社會(huì)/動(dòng)物鐵漢柔情讓我感動(dòng)流浪犬守護(hù)者關(guān)愛動(dòng)物類2024新課標(biāo)I&II卷人與社會(huì)車站履行承諾還錢給出租車司機(jī)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類浙江1月卷人與自我利用腦圖來確定方位找到教學(xué)樓校園生活類九省聯(lián)考卷人與自然志愿者訓(xùn)練意外發(fā)現(xiàn)海豚的秘密關(guān)愛動(dòng)物類2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷人與自我老師鼓勵(lì)參加作文比賽終獲大獎(jiǎng)寫作競(jìng)賽類浙江1月卷人與自然作者兩次與蜂鳥的神奇邂逅感悟關(guān)愛動(dòng)物類2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷人與自我鼓勵(lì)身殘志堅(jiān)男孩參加校越野賽越野比賽類浙江6月卷人與社會(huì)為社區(qū)無家可歸的人們發(fā)放食物助人為樂類浙江1月卷人與社會(huì)與“最不合拍”搭檔終成為好朋友校園生活類2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷人與社會(huì)孩子母親節(jié)給媽媽做早餐送驚喜家庭親情類浙江6月卷人與自我作者上學(xué)時(shí)一次打工掙錢的經(jīng)歷個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類浙江1月卷人與社會(huì)少年頭意外卡在南瓜中爆紅網(wǎng)絡(luò)生活故事類2020新課標(biāo)I&II卷人與社會(huì)三個(gè)孩子幫助貧困家庭孩子掙錢個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類浙江7月卷人與自然與北極熊面對(duì)面的一次脫險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷關(guān)愛動(dòng)物類浙江1月卷人與自然幫助寵物狗重獲快樂收獲新伙伴關(guān)愛動(dòng)物類02讀后續(xù)寫六年高考話題解讀考點(diǎn)五年考情(2020-2025)命題趨勢(shì)考點(diǎn)1人與自我(6年4考)2025全國二卷—學(xué)生因名字意識(shí)到文化身份;2024浙江1月卷—腦圖定位找目標(biāo);2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷--寫作比賽逆襲獲獎(jiǎng);2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷—?dú)埣材泻⒓釉揭芭堋?.三大考點(diǎn)交替考查,貼近校園,貼近生活,貼近學(xué)生。2.通過研讀材料,利用段首句,續(xù)寫合理的情節(jié)走向,體現(xiàn)人物合理情感狀態(tài)。3.故事的結(jié)尾都傳遞正能量,矛盾得到圓滿解決,人際關(guān)系更加融洽。4.綜合考查學(xué)生閱讀、歸納、思辨和寫作能力,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生堅(jiān)定理想信念、提升品德修養(yǎng)??键c(diǎn)2人與社會(huì)(6年5考)2025全國一卷—鬧別扭的兄弟和解;2025浙江1月卷—看到陌生人進(jìn)入鄰居家后;2024新課標(biāo)I&II卷—誠信回報(bào)陌生司機(jī)相助;2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷—母親節(jié)驚喜早餐;2020新課標(biāo)卷—愛心爆米花幫鄰居脫困??键c(diǎn)3人與自然(6年4考)2025八省聯(lián)考卷—機(jī)車黨硬漢柔情;2024九省聯(lián)考卷—海豚的秘密百寶箱;2023浙江1月卷—蜂鳥奇遇記;2023四省聯(lián)考卷—呵護(hù)小松鼠回家。03讀后續(xù)寫題型深度指導(dǎo)一、故事主題從表格中,我們不難找出該題型選題上的一些共性:故事主題主要傾向于選擇家庭趣事或溫馨小事,或者驚險(xiǎn)刺激、充滿懸念的野外遇險(xiǎn)故事、善舉助人、難忘回憶:故事主要角色的屬性較為固定;故事主要場(chǎng)景一般是家中或者野外。由此可見,在對(duì)所給文章進(jìn)行續(xù)寫時(shí),動(dòng)作、語言、神態(tài)和心理的描寫是四大基本要素。備考時(shí),考生需重點(diǎn)積果這四大要素的常用及出彩表達(dá),并不斷進(jìn)行相應(yīng)主題的練習(xí)。此外,考生也應(yīng)注意積累環(huán)境描寫以及動(dòng)物描寫相關(guān)的表達(dá),并對(duì)一些節(jié)日風(fēng)俗有基本了解。二、能力要求讀后續(xù)寫是創(chuàng)造性地將“閱讀”與“寫作”融為一體的新題型,難度較大。能夠更加有效地考查考生的語言綜合運(yùn)用能力、思維能力、學(xué)習(xí)能力和書面表達(dá)能力。反映考生在面對(duì)生活實(shí)踐或?qū)W習(xí)探索情境中,運(yùn)用正確的思維方法,有效結(jié)合英語語言學(xué)科知識(shí),認(rèn)識(shí)問題、分析問題和解決問題的綜合素質(zhì)。讀后續(xù)寫所提供的材料一般都是故事性較強(qiáng)的文章。文章通俗易懂,故事線索的邏輯性較強(qiáng),要求考生續(xù)寫的部分多是故事發(fā)展的高潮或結(jié)局。情節(jié)曲折跌宕,線索性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)。1.創(chuàng)造性:即發(fā)揮想象力,該題型具有一定的開放性,考生需用自己的語言對(duì)故事情節(jié)進(jìn)行內(nèi)容創(chuàng)造;2.邏輯性:即根據(jù)已提供的關(guān)鍵信息,按照可能的合理的方向續(xù)寫,使文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)完整;3.豐富性:即語言能力的充分體現(xiàn),詞匯句法的準(zhǔn)確與復(fù)雜程度等都將讓故事更加立體飽滿。三、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分檔次內(nèi)容語法銜接五檔(21-25分)與所給短文融洽度高,與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理,富有邏輯性,續(xù)寫完整;使用了多樣且恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu),可能有個(gè)別小錯(cuò),但完全不影響理解;有效的使用了語句間銜接手段,全文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰緊湊,意義連貫。四檔(16-20分)與所給短文融洽度較高,與所提供各段落開頭語銜接較為合理,比較富有邏輯性,續(xù)寫比較完整;使用了比較多樣且恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu),可能有些許錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解;比較有效的使用了語句間銜接手段,全文結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰,意義比較連貫。三檔(11-15分)創(chuàng)造了基本豐富合理的內(nèi)容,有一定的邏輯性,續(xù)寫基本完整,與原文情境相關(guān);使用了簡(jiǎn)單的詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu),有一些錯(cuò)誤或不恰當(dāng)之處,但基本不影響理解;使用了簡(jiǎn)單的語句間銜接手段,使全文內(nèi)容連貫。二檔(6-10分)內(nèi)容或邏輯有一些重大問題,續(xù)寫不夠完整,與原文情境有一定程度脫節(jié);所使用的詞匯有限,語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào),錯(cuò)誤較多,影響理解;未能有效地使用語句間銜接手段,全文結(jié)構(gòu)不夠清防晰,意義不夠。一檔(1-5分)內(nèi)容或邏輯有較多重大問題,續(xù)寫不完整,或有部分內(nèi)容抄自原文,與原文情境基本脫節(jié);所使用的詞匯有限,語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào),錯(cuò)誤很多,嚴(yán)重影響理解;幾乎沒有使用語句間銜接手段,全文結(jié)構(gòu)不清晰,意義不連貫。0分未作答,或者所寫內(nèi)容太少;無法看清以致無法判斷評(píng)判,所寫內(nèi)容全抄原文或與題目要求完全不符。四、734原則七個(gè)不要:1.不要盲目增加人物:續(xù)寫內(nèi)容應(yīng)聚焦原文已有的人物,新增人物會(huì)使故事失去平衡,分散情節(jié)焦點(diǎn),讓故事難以圍繞原有的核心人物和主線發(fā)展。2.不要增加旁支情節(jié):續(xù)寫情節(jié)必須緊扣原文主線,旁支情節(jié)易導(dǎo)致故事偏離主題,使整體結(jié)構(gòu)松散,無法有效推動(dòng)故事朝著合理的方向發(fā)展。3.不要用過多小對(duì)話:對(duì)話可豐富故事,但過多會(huì)使文本冗長(zhǎng)繁雜,影響敘事節(jié)奏和流暢性,應(yīng)合理控制對(duì)話比例,以更好地展現(xiàn)故事發(fā)展。4.不要用負(fù)能量結(jié)局:故事結(jié)尾需傳遞正能量,體現(xiàn)勇氣、善良、正義、團(tuán)結(jié)等積極價(jià)值觀,給讀者帶來希望和鼓舞,避免消極、悲觀或不良導(dǎo)向的結(jié)局。5.不要在文末設(shè)懸念:續(xù)寫要給讀者完整的結(jié)束感,避免在文末留下無法解答的懸念,否則會(huì)使故事顯得不完整,不符合續(xù)寫任務(wù)要求。6.不要偏離原文主題:續(xù)寫始終要圍繞原文主題展開,深入挖掘和升華主題,使新內(nèi)容與原文自然融合,共同傳達(dá)一個(gè)明確且連貫的主題思想。7.不要違背邏輯常理:人物行為和情節(jié)發(fā)展必須符合現(xiàn)實(shí)邏輯和生活常理,不能出現(xiàn)與人物性格、背景以及現(xiàn)實(shí)情況相悖的不合理情節(jié)。三個(gè)原則:1.文本一致性原則:續(xù)寫內(nèi)容在人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、事件等方面要與原文保持高度統(tǒng)一。使用與原文一致的人稱視角,保證敘述連貫;遵循原文時(shí)態(tài),維持故事時(shí)間線的一致性;事件發(fā)展要基于原文情節(jié),符合其內(nèi)在邏輯。2.情節(jié)曲折性原則:為增強(qiáng)故事的可讀性和吸引力,續(xù)寫時(shí)可適當(dāng)設(shè)置沖突與矛盾,如人物之間的意見分歧、目標(biāo)受阻、意外情況等,但沖突要合理且最終能得到妥善解決。3.結(jié)尾正能量原則:整個(gè)故事,包括續(xù)寫部分,要傳遞積極向上的價(jià)值觀,展現(xiàn)人性美好、困難克服、成長(zhǎng)進(jìn)步等正面內(nèi)容。四個(gè)銜接:1.續(xù)寫第一段第二句:銜接(給出的)第一段首句:第一段第二句要緊密承接第一段首句的情節(jié)和話題,自然延續(xù)故事發(fā)展,通過合理的動(dòng)作、心理、環(huán)境等描寫,將首句所開啟的情節(jié)進(jìn)一步展開。2.續(xù)寫第一段尾句:銜接(給出的)第二段首句:第一段尾句要巧妙設(shè)置懸念或過渡,為第二段首句的出現(xiàn)做好鋪墊,使兩段之間在情節(jié)和邏輯上無縫銜接,讀者能自然地從第一段過渡到第二段。3.續(xù)寫第二段第二句:銜接(給出的)第二段首句:同理,第二段第二句要依據(jù)第二段首句的內(nèi)容繼續(xù)推進(jìn)故事,深入挖掘首句所蘊(yùn)含的情節(jié)發(fā)展可能性,保持故事的連貫性。4.續(xù)寫第二段尾句:銜接前文并升華原文主旨:第二段尾句不僅要總結(jié)整個(gè)續(xù)寫故事,與前文情節(jié)呼應(yīng),還要對(duì)原文主旨進(jìn)行升華,從故事中的具體事件提煉出更具普遍意義和深度的主題思想,使文章更具內(nèi)涵。五個(gè)步驟:1.精讀原文:仔細(xì)研讀給定材料,梳理出故事的“5W1H”,即時(shí)間(When)、地點(diǎn)(Where)、人物(Who)、事件起因(Why)、經(jīng)過(What)和結(jié)果(How)。明確故事的核心沖突、人物性格特點(diǎn)和情感變化,把握文章的主旨和寫作意圖,為續(xù)寫奠定堅(jiān)實(shí)基礎(chǔ)。2.分析首句:認(rèn)真分析所給的兩段開頭語,理解其在情節(jié)發(fā)展中的作用和方向指引。思考如何從首句出發(fā),自然地展開故事,確保續(xù)寫內(nèi)容與開頭語緊密銜接,符合邏輯。3.構(gòu)思情節(jié):基于對(duì)原文和首句的理解,結(jié)合“7-3-4”
原則,構(gòu)思合理且富有創(chuàng)意的情節(jié)??紤]故事的發(fā)展方向、沖突解決方式以及人物的成長(zhǎng)變化等,設(shè)計(jì)出完整的故事框架,包括主要情節(jié)的起承轉(zhuǎn)合。同時(shí),要注意情節(jié)的合理性和可行性,避免出現(xiàn)荒誕離奇或不符合邏輯的情節(jié)。4.豐富細(xì)節(jié):在構(gòu)思好情節(jié)的基礎(chǔ)上,通過細(xì)節(jié)描寫使故事更加生動(dòng)、具體、充實(shí)。運(yùn)用人物的動(dòng)作、語言、神態(tài)、心理描寫,以及環(huán)境描寫等,增強(qiáng)故事的真實(shí)感和感染力,讓讀者能夠更好地融入故事之中。例如,通過細(xì)膩的心理描寫展現(xiàn)人物在面對(duì)困難時(shí)的掙扎與抉擇,通過生動(dòng)的環(huán)境描寫烘托氛圍,推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展。5.檢查修改:完成續(xù)寫后,仔細(xì)檢查文章的語法錯(cuò)誤、詞匯拼寫錯(cuò)誤、語句通順度以及邏輯連貫性。檢查是否遵循了“7-3-4”
原則,內(nèi)容是否與原文緊密銜接,情節(jié)是否合理完整,語言表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)?shù)?。?duì)發(fā)現(xiàn)的問題及時(shí)進(jìn)行修改和完善,確保提交的作文質(zhì)量較高。04讀后續(xù)寫六年高考真題再現(xiàn)考點(diǎn)01人與自我類讀后續(xù)寫【2025全國二卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?!癢hatisyourname?”isaquestionmostfrequentlyaskedwhenpeoplemeetforthefirsttime.Butforme,itwasthefirstchallengeIencounteredasaninternationalstudentinIreland.ThepronunciationsystemoftheChineselanguageisquitedifferentfromthatofEnglish.FornativespeakersofEnglish,someChinesewordsareratherdifficulttopronounce.MygivennameQiuyu(秋雨),forinstance,happenedtobeagreatchallengeformanyofthem.EverytimeIgaveaself-introduction,Ihadtoexplainhowtopronouncemynameatleastfivetimes,yettheystillcouldnotsayitthewayIdid.Onceinalecture,theprofessortriedrepeatingmynameaftermeoverandoverinfrontofthirtyclassmates.IreallydidnotknowwhetherIshouldcontinuecorrectinghimorsimplydropthematter.Ifearedthatmyclassmatesmightgrowtiredofmyeffortsorevenlosepatiencewithme.Afterall,Ididcareabouthowotherswouldthinkofme.IrealizedthatifIdidn’tstop,theentirelecturewouldberuined.“It’sokay,professor,”Ishrugged(聳肩).Theawkwardmomentendedwiththeclasseruptingintolaughter.Iforcedasmile,unsurehowtorespondfurther.Afterthatincident,Istoppedactingasa“Chineseteacher.”Insteadofcorrectingotherswhentheywerestrugglingtopronouncemyname,Ijustsmiledandnoddedapprovingly.Thisapproachsparedmethediscomfortofhavingtoover-explain.However,Isoonfoundthatbydoingso,Imightbelosingsomethingmoreimportant:theopportunitytoshareasmallpartofmyculturalidentity.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。InaclassdiscussionIwasinvitedtoexplainthemeaningofmyname._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Manyofmyclassmatesgotinterestedandcameuptomeafterclass._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2025浙江1月卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Kevinwasprettybored.Hismotherwasatwork,andhisfatherhadbeenawayonbusiness.Therefore,hewasleftinthecareofMrs.Hill,anoldladywholivednextdoor.Hisparentshadraisedthe12-year-oldtobeagoodboy.Henevergotintotrouble,thoughsometimeshewantedtodoriskythings.Mrs.Hillwasasleep.Kevinsighed(嘆息)andhopedsomethingexcitingwouldhappen.Suddenly,amovementoutsidecaughthiseye.Mrs.Hill’sfrontwindowfacedMr.andMrs.Green’shouseacrossthestreet.Thecouplehadbothgonetowork,soitwasstrangethatsomeonewasoverthere.Kevinstaredatthemanattheirfrontdoor.Suddenly,themanjumpedthroughanopenwindowintothehouse.Withhisheartinhismouth,KevingrabbedMrs.Hill’shomephoneandcalledthepolice.Thinkingthatthemanmightgetawaywithwhateverhewantedbeforethepolicearrived,Kevindecidedtodosomething.HerushedoutofMrs.Hill’shouseandcrossedthestreetquickly.Grabbingabranchfromacut-downtree,hejumpedinthroughthewindow.“Stoprightthere!Youmustleaverightnow!”hecalledout,holdingthebranchwithbothhands.Themanfrozeforasecond,butwhenhesawtheskinnyboyhebreathedasighofrelief.“Hey,kid,putthatdown.Itwasmyhome.Myparentsusedtolivehereandmyfather’swatchwashere,”heexplained,tryingtoliftafloorboard.Atthatmoment,thesoundsofapolicecarechoed(回響)intheair.Themanstoodupinapanic,thenranthroughthehousetowardthewindowandjumpedout.Kevinfollowedoutandtoldthearrivingpoliceofficerswhathadhappened.Theypursuedandarrestedtheman.KevinwentbacktoMrs.Hill’shouse.Somehowhewasn’tsurehehaddonetherightthing.“Whatifhehastoldthetruth?”hethoughttohimself.Theman’swordssoundedprettyconvincing.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2024浙江1月卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthemajorheadachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.Itwasasix-storybuilding.Oneachfloor,hallwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers’offices.Somewhereinthebuilding,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.Allthedifferenthallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.Shedecidedthatshewouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn’texist.InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearoundthetrackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshefearedmorethanhavingtorunawholemile.ToEva,“amile”wasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometohergrandfather’s,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar!WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(哨子),Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeofherclassmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind.”It’sjustthebeginning,“shethought.“I’llcomeinlastforsure.”SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusingamindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword”mile.“Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved(拐彎).Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2023新課標(biāo)I&II卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2022新課標(biāo)I&II卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考點(diǎn)02人與社會(huì)類讀后續(xù)寫【2025全國一卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2024新課標(biāo)I&II卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊(duì)列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2020新課標(biāo)卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy-hisnamewasBernard-hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon'tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右:2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考點(diǎn)3人與自然類讀后續(xù)寫【2025八省聯(lián)考卷】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(紀(jì)錄片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfu
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