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《高考英語寫作銜接與升華專項練習(xí)》基于文檔中“銜接技巧+主旨升華”的核心框架,選取近年高考真題,編寫包含銜接方法應(yīng)用、主旨升華示范的專項練習(xí),確保與原文結(jié)構(gòu)一致、實用性強(qiáng):一、6種銜接句式+6種主旨升華方法銜接句式類型示例句型形容詞(短語)作狀語Anxiousbutdetermined,shesteppedontothestage.非謂語動詞作狀語Havingrealizedhismistake,hehurriedtoapologize.倒裝句銜接Infrontofthecrowdstoodtheboywhohadoverealldifficulties.介詞短語/副詞銜接Tohisamazement,hiseffortsfinallypaidoff.對話/獨白銜接“Ineverdoubtedyou,”hermothersaidwithawarmsmile.狀語從句銜接Assoonasthebellrang,theyrushedouttocelebrate.主旨升華方法適用場景名言結(jié)尾法友情、合作、堅持類主題情感升華法親情、感恩、成長類主題修辭運(yùn)用法文化、自然、感悟類主題首尾呼應(yīng)法故事性強(qiáng)、情節(jié)閉環(huán)類主題感悟體會法個人經(jīng)歷、挫折成長類主題畫面定格法溫暖瞬間、情感共鳴類主題二、高考真題實戰(zhàn)解析(2023?新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)(一)真題原文contest.Ithinking.Iwriting.Myl,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere'shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(銀匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswereing.Mystorywouldestraightfromthehorse'smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere'shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalf-dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn'twin,Iwouldn'tcare.續(xù)寫段首句:1.Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.2.Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.(二)銜接技巧應(yīng)用示范第一段續(xù)寫(銜接+情節(jié)推進(jìn))Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Muchtomyastonishment(介詞短語銜接),theprincipalannouncedovertheschoolradiothatIhadwonfirstprize.MyhandstrembledasIlistened,memoriesoflatenightsrevisingessaysandmysister'spatientgrammarcorrectionsfloodingmymind(獨立主格銜接).Rushingtotheclassroom,Ifoundmydeskcoveredwithcongratulatorynotesfromclassmates.“Iknewyourstorywouldstandout,”mydeskmatesaidwithagrin.NeverhadIfeltsoproudofmyefforts(倒裝句銜接),andIcouldn'twaittosharethejoywithmyteacher.第二段續(xù)寫(銜接+主旨升華)Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.TheminuteIknockedonthedoor(狀語從句銜接),hegreetedmewithabighug.“Youdidit!”heexclaimed,holdingupmyessay.“Rememberwhenyouhatedwriting?Nowyou'vefoundyourvoice.”Lookingathisencouragingeyes,Ifeltasurgeofgratitude(情感描寫銜接).Irealizedthatwinningwasn'ttherealreward—whatmatteredwasthecouragetotryandthejoyofcreating.Asthesayinggoes,“Wherethere'sawill,there'saway”(名言結(jié)尾法升華).Fromthatdayon,Inolongerfearedwriting;instead,Iembraceditasawaytoexpressmythoughtsandsharemystories.(三)銜接與升華亮點解析1.第一段用“Muchtomyastonishment”銜接段首句,用“NeverhadIfelt...”倒裝句強(qiáng)化情感,自然引出下文找老師的情節(jié);2.第二段用“TheminuteIknocked...”狀語從句銜接首句,通過對話呼應(yīng)原文老師的鼓勵,結(jié)尾用名言升華“堅持與嘗試”的主題;3.兩段均通過細(xì)節(jié)描寫(同學(xué)祝福、老師擁抱)實現(xiàn)語義連貫,符合“情節(jié)推進(jìn)情感遞進(jìn)主題呼應(yīng)”邏輯。三、高考真題實戰(zhàn)解析(2022?浙江卷)(一)真題原文Itwasacoldwinterevening.Iwasaseniorhighschoolstudent,andIhadstayedafterschooltopreparefortheupingexam.Ilosttrackoftimeanddidn’trealizeitwasalready9p.m.whenIpackedmybooks.Theschoolgatewaslocked,andIhadtoclimboverthefence.AsIwalkedhomealone,thewindhowled,andthestreetlightsflickered.IregrettednottellingmymomIwouldbelate—shealwaysworriedaboutme.Halfwayhome,myphonedied.Ifeltanxious,notknowinghowtocontactmyfamily.Theroadwasdark,andtherewerefewpassersby.JustasIwasabouttocry,acarpulledupbesideme.Itwasmyneighbor,UncleWang,whoworkedasadeliverydriver.“Whyareyouwalkingaloneatthishour?”heasked,concerned.Iexplainedthesituation,andheofferedtogivemearide.Whenwearrivedatmyneighborhood,Isawafamiliarfigurestandingunderthestreetlight—mymom.Shewaswearingathincoat,pacingbackandforth,herhandsrubbedtogethertokeepwarm.續(xù)寫段首句:1.Ijumpedoutofthecarandrantowardsmymom.2.Thatnight,asIsatbythefireplacewithmymom,Ifeltwarm.(二)銜接技巧應(yīng)用示范第一段續(xù)寫(銜接+情節(jié)推進(jìn))Ijumpedoutofthecarandrantowardsmymom.Tearsstreamingdownmycheeks(獨立主格銜接),Ithrewmyarmsaroundher.Sheheldmetightly,herbodyshiveringfromthecold.“Wherehaveyoubeen?I’vebeencallingyouforhours,”shewhispered,hervoicetremblingwithworry.Iexplainedabouttheexam,thelockedgate,andUncleWang'skindness.GratefultoUncleWang(形容詞短語銜接),mymomthankedhimrepeatedlybeforehedroveoff.Aswewalkedhome,momkepttuckingmyhairbehindmyear,hergentletouchcalmingmyanxiety.第二段續(xù)寫(銜接+主旨升華)Thatnight,asIsatbythefireplacewithmymom,Ifeltwarm.ShemademeacupofhotcocoaandlistenedquietlyasItalkedaboutmyday.Staringathertiredeyesandgrayinghair(非謂語動詞銜接),Irealizedhowmuchshecaredaboutme.“I’msorryformakingyouworry,”Isaidsoftly.Shesmiledandpattedmyhand:“It’sokay,aslongasyou’resafe.”Atthatmoment,Iunderstoodthattrueloveisn'tgrandgesturesbutthequietwaitingandunshakablecare(感悟體會法升華).Fromthenon(常用升華句式),Ialwaysmadesuretoinformmyfamilyofmyplans,cherishingeverymomentofwarmthweshared.(三)銜接與升華亮點解析1.第一段用“Tearsstreamingdown...”獨立主格銜接段首句,用“GratefultoUncleWang”自然過渡到感謝鄰居的情節(jié),邏輯連貫;2.第二段用“Staringathertiredeyes...”非謂語動詞銜接首句,通過母子對話凸顯“親情”主題,結(jié)尾用“Fromthenon”引出行動改變,升華“珍惜親情”的主旨;3.環(huán)境描寫(壁爐、熱可可)與情感描寫結(jié)合,實現(xiàn)場景與主題的深度銜接。四、實戰(zhàn)演練(2021?新高考Ⅰ卷改編)(一)真題原文Onabeautifulsummerday,myfamilyandIdecidedtogocampingbythelake.Mydadhadpackedeverythingweneeded:tents,food,andfishinggear.Mylittlesister,Lily,wasespeciallyexcited—shehadneverbeencampingbefore.Aswedrovetothecampsite,Lilykeptaskingquestionsaboutthelake,thetrees,andtheanimalswemightsee.Whenwearrived,westartedsettingupthetent.Mydadshowedmehowtotietheknots,butIwasclumsyandkeptmakingmistakes.Lilylaughedatme,andIfeltalittleembarrassed.“Don’tworry,”mydadsaid,“practicemakesperfect.”Withhishelp,Ifinallygotthetentup.Wethenbuiltafireandcookedhotdogsfordinner.Asthesunset,wesataroundthefire,tellingstoriesandroastingmarshmallows.Suddenly,astrongwindbegantoblow.Thefireflickered,andthetentstartedtoshake.“Weneedtotakedownthetentbeforeitgetsworse,”mydadsaid.Wehurriedtopackourthings,butthewindwasgettingstronger.Lilystartedtocry,scaredbytheloudnoise.續(xù)寫段首句:1.ItriedmybesttocalmLilydownwhilehelpingmydad.2.Afterthestormpassed,welookedaroundthecampsite.(二)要求1.運(yùn)用至少2種銜接句式(任選);2.采用1種主旨升華方法(名言/感悟/畫面定格均可);3.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)150左右。(三)參考范文ItriedmybesttocalmLilydownwhilehelpingmydad.Holdinghertightlyinmyarms(非謂語動詞銜接),Iwhispered,“It’sokay,Lily.We’llbesafe.”Mydadworke
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