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?TOELFWRIITNG托福寫作Getting 綜合寫作Integrated 獨(dú)?寫作Independent 寫作評(píng)分Score 獨(dú)?寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Score 題型分類Sample 單?利弊類/價(jià)值判斷Value 事實(shí)類/現(xiàn)象證明 ?較關(guān)系 絕對(duì)詞 復(fù)合題? 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Essay 開頭段 結(jié)尾段 正?段Body 讓步段Concession 機(jī)經(jīng)串講Independent 綜合寫作Integrated 考題結(jié)構(gòu) 補(bǔ)充語料Complementary 課堂練習(xí)Check- LessonGetting

1TwopartsinTOEFLWritingtest:theIntegratedWritingandtheIndependentWriting.2ThestandardtestprocedureintheIntegratedWritingsectionandIndependent3ThescoringrubricsofIndependentWriting.?? Integrated Independent1.1 Integrated Writing ????Step1Step1Youwillhave minutestoreadthepassage.Structure: (?Takenotesonscratchpaper. Thecanetoadisalarge(1.8kg)amphibianspeciesnativetoCentralandSouthAmerica.ItwasdeliberatelyintroducedtoAustraliain1935withtheexpectationthatitwouldprotectfarmers’cropsbyeatingharmfulinsects.Unfortunately,thetoadmultipliedrapidly,andalargecanetoadpopulationnowthreatenssmallnativeanimalsthatarenotpests.SeveralmeasureshavebeenproposedtostopthespreadofthecanetoadinAustralia.Onewaytopreventthespreadofthetoadwouldbetobuildanationalfence.AfencethatblockstheadvanceofthetoadswillpreventthemfrommovingintothosepartsofAustraliathattheyhavenotyetcolonized.Thisapproachhasbeenusedbefore:anationalfencewaserectedintheearlypartofthetwentiethcenturytopreventthespreadofrabbits,anotheranimalspeciesthatwasintroducedinAustraliafromabroadandhadaharmfulimpactonitsnativeecosystems.Second,thetoadscouldbecapturedanddestroyedbyvolunteers.Canetoadscaneasilybecaughtinsimpletrapsandcanevenbecapturedbyhand.Youngtoadsandcanetoadeggsareeveneasiertogatheranddestroy,sincetheyarerestrictedtothewater.IfAustraliangovernmentweretoorganizeacampaignamongAustraliancitizenstojoinforcestodestroythetoads,thecollectiveeffortmightstopthetoadfromspreading.Third,researchersaredevelopingadisease-causingvirustocontrolthecanetoadpopulations.Thisviruswillbespeciallydesigned:althoughitwillbeabletoinfectanumberofreptileandamphibianspecies,itwillnotharmmostoftheinfectedspecies;itwillspecificallyharmonlythecanetoads.Theviruswillcontrolthepopulationofcanetoadsbypreventingthemfrommaturingandreproducing.Thecanetoadwon’tbeaseasytogetridofasthereadingsuggests.Themeasuresproposedbythereadingarelikelyeithertobeunsuccessfulortocauseunwantedenvironmentaldamage.Firstofall,anationalfenceprobablywon’tstopthespreadofthetoad.That’sbecauseyoungtoadsandtoadeggsarefoundinriversandstreams.Nomatterwherethefenceislocated,atsomepointtherewillberiversorstreamsflowingfromonesidetotheother.Thesewaterwayswillbeabletocarrytheyoungtoadsandtheireggstotheotherside.Sinceit’sonlynecessaryforafewyoungtoadsoreggstogetthroughthefenceinordertoestablishpopulationontheotherside,thefenceisunlikelytobeeffective.Secondly,amassivegroupofvolunteerscouldhavesuccesstrappinganddestroyingtoads.Butit’slikelythattheseuntrainedvolunteerswouldinadvertentlydestroymanyofAustralia’snativefrogs.Someofwhichareendangered.It’snotalwayseasytotellthecanetoadapartfromnativefrogsespeciallywhenit’syoung.Third,usingthevirusisabadideabecauseitcouldhaveterribleconsequencesforcanetoadsintheiroriginalhabitatinCentralandSouthAmerica.YoumightbewonderinghowcanavirusreleasedinAustraliacauseharmintheAmerica.Well,Australianreptilesandamphibiansareoftentransportedtoothercontinentsbyresearchersorpetcollectorsforexample.OncetheanimalsinfectedbythevirusreachCentralandSouthAmerica,theviruswillattackthenativecanetoadsanddevastatetheirpopulations.ThatwouldbeandecologicaldisasterbecauseintheAmericacanetoadsareanativespeciesandavitalpartoftheecosystem.Soiftheyareeliminated,thewholeecosystemwillsuffer.Thereadingandlisteningmaterialshaveaconflictofopinionsabouthowtocontrolthepopulationofcanetoads.Thewriterputsforwardthreesolutions/ways/measures(tosolve/easetheproblem),whicharecontradictedbythefollowinglecture.Firstly,theauthorsuggeststhatanationalfenceshouldbebuilt.However,thelectureopposesthissuggestionbysayingthatyoungtoadsandtoadeggsarefoundinriversandstreamsthatwouldcarrythemtotheotherside,becausenomatterwherethefenceanother.Asaresult,thepopulationwillcontinuetogrow.Secondly,thepassageproposesthatvolunteerstrapanddestroycanetoads.However,thespeakerviewsthisissuefromanoppositeangle.Accordingtoher,untrainedvolunteerstendtoinadvertentlydestroyendangeredfrogssinceitishardtodistinguish(tellAapartfromB)themwhentheyareyoung.Thethirdmeasure(proposed/made/offeredbythewriter)istodevelopadisease-causingvirus.Bycontrast,inaccordancewiththeprofessor,thisviewdoesnotholdwater.Itisbecausecanetoads(infectedbythevirus)wouldbetransportedtoAmericas(wherethelocalcanetoadisavitalpartoftheecosystem).Oncethevirusattacksthem,thelocalecosystemwouldsuffer.1.1.2Independent Writing ????ThesecondtaskintheWritingsectionofTOEFLiBTistheIndependentWritingTask.Youarepresentedwithaquestion,andyouhave30minutestowriteanessayinresponse.Thequestionasksyoutogiveyouropiniononanissue.Hereishowthequestionistypicallyphrased:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?[Asentenceorsentencesthatpresentanissueappearhere.]Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.Sample:DoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingThetelephonehashadagreaterinfluenceonpeople’slivesthantelevisionUsespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourIdisagree.Telephonesmighthavechangedhoweasilywecancommunicate,butthetelevisionshavefundamentallychangedthewaysocietyworks.Firstofall,thetelevisionwidenedourawarenessoftheworld.Suddenly,eventsfromallaroundtheglobecouldbebeamedintoourlivingrooms,completewithaudioandvideo,almostassoonastheyoccurred.Sure,telephonesallowedpeopletotalktousoverlongdistances,andnewspapershadbeeninformingusaboutcurrenteventsforawhile,buttelevisionscouldpromptlycommunicatethesameinformation—plusvideo—toamassaudience.Thiswasrevolutionary.Peopleviewsandbeliefscouldbeshiftedonalargescalealmostinstantaneously.Forexample,ifyousawanewsstoryaboutcorruptpoliticians,there’sagoodchanceeveryoneelseinthecountrysawittoo.Thisstorymighthavepreviouslytakendaysorweekstoreachacriticalthresholdofexposure;nowitcouldpropagatetothatlevelinamatterofminutes,andthepoliticiancouldbeinvestigatedbeforehehadachancetohidehistracks.Secondofall,thetelevisiongaverisetowholenewculturalgroupsandphenomena.TaketheMTVculture,forinstance,whichwashugeintheU.S.inthe‘80sand‘90s.OrtheriseofshowslikeSurvivorandAmericanIdol.NoneofthatcouldhavearisenwithouttheadventoftheTV,becausethosetypesofshowswouldneverhaveachievedwidespreadsuccessinamovietheateroronastage.Onlytelevisionhasthepowertotielargeportionsofthepopulationtogetherthroughsharedculturalexperience.Telephonesdon’tevencomeclosetohavingthatkindofaninfluence.Thisisnottosaythattheinventionofthetelephonewastrivial.Itwasundoubtedlyamongthemostimportantinventionsofthecentury.However,itseffectsonsocietycannotbeasdrastic,becausethecontentitconveysisnowherenearlyasrichaswhatisdistributedthroughtelevision.Bythesameargument,Iwouldsaythattheinternethashadagreatereffectonsocietythanthetelevision,becauseitoffersbothinteractivityandnumerousaddedlayersofcontentrichness.Boththephoneandthetelevisionareincrediblemilestonesinthehistoryoftechnologicaldevelopment.However,whenwecomparethemintermsofsocietalinfluence,thetelevisionclearlywinsout. Range RawScaled54343RAWSCALE1.4ScoreRubric

5AnessayatthislevellargelyaccomplishesalloftheEffectivelyaddressesthetopicandIswellorganizedandwelldeveloped,usingclearlyappropriateexplanations,exemplification,and/ordetailsDisplaysconsistentfacilityintheuseoflanguage,demonstratingsyntacticvariety,appropriatewordchoice,andidiomaticity,thoughitmayhaveminorlexicalorgrammaticalerrors4AnessayatthislevellargelyaccomplishesalloftheEffectivelyaddressesthetopicandtaskwell,thoughsomepointsmaynotbefullyelaboratedIswellgenerallyorganizedandwelldeveloped,usingappropriateandsufficientexplanations,exemplification,and/ordetailsDisplaysunity,progression,andcoherence,thoughitmaycontainoccasionalredundancy,digressionorunclearconnectionsDisplaysfacilityintheuseoflanguage,demonstratingsyntacticvariety,appropriatewordchoice,andrangeofvocabulary,thoughitmayhaveoccasionalnoticeableminorerrorsinstructure,wordform,oruseofidiomaticlanguagethatdonotinterferewith3AnessayatthislevelismarkedbyoneormoreoftheAddressesthetopicandtaskwellusingsomewhatdevelopedexplanations,exemplification,and/ordetailsDisplaysunity,progression,andcoherence,thoughconnectionsofideasmaybeoccasionallyobscuredMaydemonstrateinconsistentfacilityinsentenceformationandwordchoicethatmayresultinlackofclarityandoccasionallyobscuremeaning.MaydisplayaccuratebutlimitedrangeofsyntacticstructuresandvocabularyLessonSample

Di?erenttypesofquestionsinTOEFLIndependentTask.Howtorecognizethesedi?erenttypesofquestionsinthetest.Thewaystosolvedi?erenttypesofquestionsinthetest. ????/????? (Value ?? ?1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Studentsshouldstudyabroadaftertheygraduate.Firstly,studyingabroadenablesstudentstobroadtheirAdditionally,studyingabroadisbeneficialtosocialFurthermore,studyingabroadmakesitpossibleforstudentstoimprovetheiracademicperformance.?2:[2007031201ML]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Peopleshouldnotpayforpublictransportation.Tobeginwith,freepublictransportationwilldrawmoreFurthermore,freetransportationbenefitsgovernment’ssupportingInaddition,thetransportationcompanymightreceivesubsidiesfromthegovernment.?3:[20100924NA]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Peopleshouldtakeseveraldifferentkindsofjobbeforetheytakeacareerinalongterm.Firstly,takingdi?erentjobsenablespeopletoenrichtheirworkingMoreover,di?erentjobsmakesitpossibleforpeopletoenlargetheirsocialcircle.Finally,bydoingdi?erentjobs,peoplecangetmorechancestounderstandthemselves. ?????/? ???: ?? ??1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Moreandmorestudentsarechoosingtostudyabroadaftertheygraduate.Firstly,studentsaremoreinternationally-Furthermore,advancedtechnologymakeitpossibleforstudentstogetchanceforstudyingabroad.Finally,morepoliciessupportingstudyingabroadencouragemorestudentstogoout.?2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Playingsportsteachespeoplelessonsaboutlife.Firstly,asportcanteachusisthevalueofSecondly,sportscanalsoteachusabouthowtodealwithFinally,sportscanteachusthingstheconceptof?3:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Advertisementsmaketheproductsseembetterthantheyreallyare.Firstly,technologicaldevelopmentmakesadvertisementsseemsFurthermore,betterperformanceinadvertisementfulfillsthewillingtosellmoreproducts.Finally,somedisadvantagesofproductsareshelteredtomakebetterreputationforcompanies. 1 ?:??; 2??:2.1 /??; ;2.2 ??; ; ; ?; ?1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Studentsshouldstudyabroadaftertheygraduate.Iworkplace+setfoundationforhigh-payinglivingplace+convenientcampuslife+advancedIprimaryschoolstudents+betterpickupmiddleschoolstudents+getusedtocommunicatingwithcollegestudents+learnadvancedIstudentsinengineering+high-payingstudentsinliberalarts+immersedinatmospherewithstudentsinbusiness+advancedtheoriesin (Check-Peopleshouldtaketimetorelaxwithhobbiesorphysicalactivitiesthatareverydifferentfromwhattheydoatwork.Ichildren+broadenteenagers+comprehensiveadults+stimulateTomakechildrendowellinschoolparentsshouldlimitthehoursthatchildrenspendonwatchingTVormovies.sci-fimovies+increaseromancemovies+howtogetalongwithcomedies+Studentsshouldspendayeartotravelortoworkbeforetheygotocollegeoroncampus+accumulatemoreadvancedindailylife+experiencedi?erentinworkplace+workInordertoattractgoodstudents,manyuniversityspendalotofmoneyinsocietyactivities.oncampus+getusedtothestudyindailylife+essentialcommunicationinworkplace+importanceofThewayapersonisdressedinisagoodindicationofhis/herclimate+a?ecthowpeopleoccasions+a?ecthowpeopleemotionstate+a?ecthowpeople???: ??

? ?1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itismoreimportantforstudentstostudyabroadthantostudydomesticallyaftertheygraduate.StudyAdmittedly,studyingabroadbroadenstudentsFirstly,studyingdomesticallyprovidemoretimeforstudentstoadapttotheenvironment.Furthermore,studyingdomesticallyisbeneficialtolearning?2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:GovernmentshouldspendmoremoneyonimprovingpublictransportationthanonInternetpublicForcitizens,improvingpublictransportationwillmakethesecommuters’livesmucheasier.Betterpublictransportationwillhelpgovernmenttobetterregulateairpollution.Granted,Internetaccessis?3:[20090227]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Ajobwithmorevacationbutalowsalaryisbetterthanajobwithahighsalarybutless?? AjobwithahighsalarybutlessFirst,ahighsalaryhelpsmeetpeople’sbasicSecond,ahighsalaryallowsmetopursuepersonalAdmittedly,morevacationmighthavebenefits.…However,?4:[20090227]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Peoplerelyontheirneighborslessnowthantheydidinthepast.RelylessInitially,technologicalmeanshelpmoderndwellerssolvemanyInaddition,peoplecaresmoreaboutprivacy,whichmakesthemlesslikelytoaskhelpfromothers.Whatismore,governmentisdedicatedtosolveproblemsfor (Absolutism)?? ??: :1 ?2?????

;?1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement:Studyingabroadaftergraduationisthebestchoiceforstudents.Admittedly,studyingabroadhascertainbenefits.…Initially,domesticcollegesaremoreeasilytobeInaddition,domesticcollegesaremuch?2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Increasingteachers’salaryisthebestwaytoimprovetheeducation.Admittedly,teacherscanbemotivatedtosomeextentbyanincreaseinsalary.However,hiringmorefamousteachersishelpfulinimprovingthequalityofeducation.Furthermore,betterschoolfacilitiesalsoimproveacademic?3:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Onlymoviesthatcanteachpeoplesomethingaboutreallifeareworthwatching.Admittedly,movieswitheducationalpurposeareworthy,becausetheycanalwaysinspirepeopleorchangetheirattitudetowardslifeHowever,thepopularcomediesalsobringspeoplelaughterandhappiness,despiteitslackofreallifelessons.Thirdly,viewerswatchingromancemoviesandanimationsmayfindsincerity,hopeandbeliefinthem.? ???: ,?? -1????;

?1:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Forthepurposeofachievingmoreadvancedknowledge,studentsshouldstudyabroadaftertheyInitially,studentsinbusinesscouldreceiveadvancedtheoriesinInaddition,studentsinengineeringcouldhavemorechancetopracticetheoriesfromtextbooks.Finally,studentsinliberalartscouldhavemoreopportunitiestoexperiencedi?erentcultures.?2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Ifparentswanttheirchildrentoperformwellatschool,theyshouldlimittheirchildren’stimeonwatchingtelevision.Initially,parentsshouldnotlimitchildren’stimeonInaddition,evenifparentsshouldlimitchildren’stimeontelevision,thishasnothingtodowithchildren’sperformanceatschool.What’smore,contentsinmoviesmighthavesidee?ectson ???:? ?? ??: —1??? ?

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?1:[20071208]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:StudentsshouldstudyabroadaftertheygraduatebecausetheycouldreceivebetterInitially,studentswillnotnecessarilyreceivebetterEvenifstudentscouldstudybetter,studyingabroadhasotherWhat’smore,evenifstudentsshouldstudyabroad,thismighthavenothingtodowithbettereducationornot.?2:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisnotagoodideatomovetoanewplacebecauseofthelossofoldfriends.MovingtoanewcitydoesnotnecessarilymeanthelossofEvenpeoplemightloseoldfriends,movingtoanewplacemightstillbegood.Inaddition,evenifmovingsomewhereelseisbad,thismightnocomefromthelossoffriends.2.62.6 ??(Check-?1:[20110108]Doyouagreeordisagreethatwiththefollowingstatement:Inthepastpeopleatefoodsthatwasbetterfortheirhealththanpeopletoday.?2:[20110409]Doyouagreeordisagreethatwiththefollowingstatement:It’smoreimportantforthegovernmenttosupportmuseumsandmusicperformancesthanrecreationalfacilities(suchasplaygrounds,swimmingpool).?3:[20110611]:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Althoughmanypeopleinmanycountriescareaboutenvironmentalproblemssuchaspollutionandglobalwarming,theenvironmentwillnotbebetterinthe?4:20110619:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Allhigh-schoolstudentsshouldtakebasiceconomiccourses.?5:20110625:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Moviesandtelevisionsshouldalwaysshowaudiencegoodpeoplearebeingrewardedandbadpeoplearebeingpunished.?6:20111119:Somejobscanpayhighsalariesbutrequireemployeestoleavetheirfamilyandfriends.Somejobspayfewsalariesbutallowemployeesstayingwithfamilyandfriend.Whichjobdoyouprefer?Why?20110805:Ifoneofyourfriendsneedsassistanceinoneofthecoursesyouaregoodat,itisbetterforhimtoturntoyouoraskatutorforhelp?20130125:Inordertobesuccessfulinbusiness,companieshavetoinvestmoreonadvertising.LessonEssay

1Howtocomposeaintroductionparagraph.2Howtocomposeaconclusionparagraph.3Howtocomposeamainparagraph. Awell-writtenintroductoryparagraphperformsfourimportantItattractsthereaders'interest,encouraginghimorhertocontinuereadingtheItsuppliesanybackgroundinformationthatthereadermayneedtounderstandtheItpresentsathesisItindicatesaplanofdevelopment.Inthis"preview,"themajorsupportingpointsforthethesisarelistedinorderinwhichtheywillbepresented.--JohnLangan,CollegeWriting;;1ThesisSampleSample?1:[20090530]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Youngerschoolchildren(agedfromfivetoten)shouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinadditiontomath,language,scienceandhistory.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofparentsarediscussingthenecessitytotakecoursesinWhetherartseducationismandatoryforstudentsinadditiontomath,scienceandothercourseshasarousedawidediscussion.Frommyperspective,exploringartandmusicarejustasimportantforachild’sdevelopmentasstudyingthemainsubjects.Inordertobemorecompetitiveincollegeentranceexams,parentsplaceanundueemphasisonthecoresubjectsofmaths,language,scienceandhistory,ignoringartsWhilesomepeopleclaimartandmusiccoursesareredundanttoschoolcurricular,Idonotthinkso.AsfarasIamconcerned,exploringartandmusicarejustasimportantforachild’sdevelopmentasstudyingthemainsubjects.?2:[20080517]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:ItisbettertowatchseriousmoviesthathelppeoplethinkthantowatchmoviesthatamuseandNowadays,contentsinthemovies,beingseriousorbeingamusing,havebroughtawidediscussionamongmovie-goers.WhetherseriousmoviesaremoreworthwatchingisthemaindebatingInmyopinion,Idisagree,andmovieswithamusingcontentsismoreSeriousmovieshelpaudiencesunderstandthelifeandhumanAsamatteroffact,manymovie-goersandcriticsarguethattheyaresuperiortoentertainingmovies.However,frommyperspective,entertainingmoviesattractmoreaudiencesinmost?3:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Playingsportsteachespeoplelessonsaboutlife.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofsportenthusiastsappreciatethespiritstheylearnfromoutdooractivities:teamworkfrombasketball,senseofcompetitionfrommarathonandpersistencefromclimbing.Whilesomepeopleadvocatethepositiveroleplayingsportsmightbringus,Iviewthisfromadi?erentangle.Inmyopinion,playingsportswouldmakethingsworse.Thereasonwhypeopleplaysportsvaries:somepeopleaimstobuildbetterphysicalcondition,butotherstrytodrawlessonsduringthecompetition.Infact,whetherplayingsportsworksforbringingpeoplemeaningfulexperienceshasarousedawidediscussion.AsfarasIamconcerned,itsvalueshouldbeevaluatedonacase-by-caseDoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Therapidgrowthofcitieshasamostlypositiveimpactonthedevelopmentofthesociety.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Thebestwaytoimprovethequalityofeducationistoincreaseteachers’salary.

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A?????????A? 3.23.2??????1:[20090530]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Youngerschoolchildren(agedfromfivetoten)shouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinadditiontomath,language,scienceandhistory.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthatartscoursesbringprofoundinfluenceforstudentsbothinclassandoutsideclass.?2:[20080517]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisbettertowatchseriousmoviesthathelppeoplethinkthantowatchmoviesthatamuseandentertain.Duetotheabovementionedreasons,itisnotdi?culttodrawtheconclusionthatmovieswithentertainingcontentsarenotonlyhelpfulinreducingstressbutalsoindispensableinbuildingfamilyties.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Therapidgrowthofcitieshasamostlypositiveimpactonthedevelopmentofthesociety.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Thebestwaytoimprovethequalityofeducationistoincreaseteachers’salary.3.33.3 ??? (Body Original:Childrenusuallylackdiscipline.Andtelevisionprograms,forinstance,cartoonpictures,cantotallyengrosstheirattention.Thusitisverylikelythatchildrenspendexcessiveamountoftimeonwatchingtelevisionandthushavelesstimeforhomework.Asaresulttheiracademicperformanceswilldrop.Revised:WatchingTVmayhavenegativeinfluenceonchildren.Thereasonsaretwofold.Firstly,childrenusuallylackdiscipline.Secondly,televisionprograms,forinstance,cartoonpictures,cantotallyengrosstheirattention.ThusitisverylikelythatchildrenspendexcessiveamountoftimeonwatchingtelevisionandthushavelesstimeforBodyBodyBodyBodyBody2 3???:

Topic ????2Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:AmericanfoodisbetterthanChinesefood.IsAmericanfoodAmericanfoodisAmericanfoodistastelessandgreasybecauseAmericanusetoomanycanned,frozenfoodandbecauseeverythingisfriedinoilorAmericanfoodisAmericanfoodistastelessand?1:[20090530]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Youngerschoolchildren(agedfromfivetoten)shouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinadditiontomath,language,scienceandhistory.BodyParagraphBodyParagraphBodyParagraph?2:[20080517]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisbettertowatchseriousmoviesthathelppeoplethinkthantowatchmoviesthatamuseandentertain.BodyParagraphBodyParagraphBodyParagraphTopicSentence Explanation Example ▲

Firstly,collegestudentswhochoosetostudy[A]couldhavebetterjobopportunitiesInotherwords,someawesomeexperiments[C]addtheoddstofindhigh-payingjobs.A:study ?C:awesome B:betterFinally,artsclasses[A]areabletogivestudents

chancetorelaxthemselves.Thatistosay,whatstudentswouldencounter classissomethingotherthanmath,scienceandhistory.[C]A:arts ?C:somethingotherthanmath B:?1:[20090530]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Youngerschoolchildren(agedfromfivetoten)shouldberequiredtostudyartandmusicinadditiontomath,language,scienceandhistory.TopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentenceExplanation?2:[20080517]Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisbettertowatchseriousmoviesthathelppeoplethinkthantowatchmoviesthatamuseandentertain.TopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentenceExplanationTopicSentence Explanation Example

Firstly,collegestudentswhochoosetostudy[A]couldhavebetterjobopportunitiesInotherwords,someawesomeexperiments[C]addtheoddstofindhigh-payingjobs.Forexample,IchoosetostudyinStanford[a]aftercollegelife,andwhenIamincomputersimulationclass,Iinitiateaprogramthatcanbeusedtocollectsstudents’dataonclassperformanceandpredicttheirscoresincomingexams.[c]Asaresult,thisprojectexperiencecouldbeaddedintoresume,andaftertellingthejobinterviewerthisexperience,heisimpressiveaboutmyprojectandmightfinallyo?ersmethejob[b]asasoftengineerinEdxIncorporation,oneofthebiggesteducationcompaniesdedicatedtoimprovestudents’academicFinally,artsclasses[A]areabletogivestudentsachancetorelaxthemselves.[B]Thatistosay,whatstudentswouldencounterinclassissomethingotherthanmath,scienceandhistory.[C]Forexample,studentsattendingartclasses[a]cantalkaboutthemeaningofthemysterioussmileofMonaLisa[c]orthebeautyofVincentvanGogh’sSunFlower[c].Similarly,studentshavingmusicclasses[a]willfindplentyoftopicsoverthepowerfulsymphoniesofB

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