華中師大一附中2023-2024學(xué)年度上學(xué)期高三期中檢測(cè)原題呈現(xiàn)Lilywasrenownedforherdesiretoachieveperfectionineverythingsheundertook.Whetheritwasschoolprojects,artassignments,orevenhelpingherparentswithhouseholdchores,Lily’scommitmenttoexcellencewasunwavering.Onesunnysummerday,Lily’sfamilydecidedtospendadayatthebeach.Astheyarrived,Lily’seyeswereimmediatelydrawnbyagroupofchildrenwhoplayfullybuiltandthentoredowntheirsandcastles.Theygiggledandshouted,theirexcitementonfulldisplay.“Howsilly,”shethought,notquitegettingwhytheyenjoyeddoingthat.Lily,beingherself,decidedtobuildaperfectsandcastlethatwouldbecometheenvyofallbeachgoers.Shebegantoplaneverydetailinhermind,fromthebalancedstructuresofthetowerstothedelicatedecorations.Then,shesetaboutpilingsandtomakethetowersandwallsofhersandcastle.Painstakingly,shecraftedeachfeatureofherwork,carefullysmoothedthesurfacesandadjustingeverydetailtohervision.Jake,Lily’syoungerbrother,didn’tseemtooconcernedwithbuildingafantasticsandcastle.Hepickedaspotnearbyandamusedhimselfwiththesand.Hescoopeduphandfulsofsand,letitslipthroughhisfingerslikegrainsoftime,andthenmoldeditintocarelessshapeswiththecarefreeabandonofachild.Jake’shappinesswascontagious.MomandDadjoinedhim,laughingandjokingoverJake’splayfulcreations.Fromtimetotime,theycalledouttoLilyandinvitedhertojointhefun,knowingthatthepursuitofperfectioncouldbeexhausting.Nevertheless,Lilystayedwhereshewas,determinedtocreateanimpressivesandcastle.ShefrownedatJake’sunconventional,abstractart-likesandcastleshapesandpersistedinherefforts.However,theprocessdidn’tgoassmoothlyasshehadanticipated.Thesanddidn’talwaysholditsshape,andthewavesconstantlylappedattheedgesofhercreation.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按照如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthedayworeon,Lily’ssandcastlekeptlosingitsform.Withbittersmile,Lilydecidedtojoinherfamily.如何構(gòu)思該題目講述了一個(gè)叫Lily的女孩，她追求完美，去海灘玩耍時(shí)想打造一個(gè)完美的沙堡，但在做的過(guò)程中遇到挑戰(zhàn)，而她的弟弟Jack卻在海灘上隨意地玩耍，享受快樂(lè)。該文章旨在告訴學(xué)生有時(shí)候追求完美并不是最重要的，享受過(guò)程也是同樣重要。滿分作文Asthedayworeon,Lily’ssandcastlekeptlosingitsform.Thewallofthecastlewasonthebrinkofcollapseasthewindcarriedwavestothebeach.Whensherestoredoneside,theotherswerewashedawaywithouthernoticing.Lilygraduallylosthertemperandfrownedconstantly.Discouragementhadtakenholdofherandherdeterminationyielded.Havingjustcreatedanamusingsandcastleshape,Momliftedhereyelidsandfoundherdaughter’sblurringeyes.ThensheyelledtoLily,“Comeon,honey!Joinusandshowcaseyourcreativity!”Shepointedather“work”andwavedtoLily.Withabittersmile,Lilydecidedtojoinherfamily.Perceivingherdismay,allthefamilymemberscrowdedaroundherandencouragedhertotrytomakeitmorecasual.Collectingheremotions,Lilyscoopeduphandfulsofsandandmadeabaseofthecastle.“Wow,that’scool!”“Hah,whatafunnyshape...”Withlaughterlingering,Lilyrevealedalineofteethandgraduallyimmersedherselfinplayingratherthanshaping.Shethrewthepursuitofperfectionbehindandsampledthesweettasteofpurejoy.Wesometimesbecomesostubbornaboutperfectionthatweignorethepurejoy.Thankfully,wecanrestorethejoyasLilywhenitisn’ttoolate.譯文隨著時(shí)間的流逝，Lily的沙堡逐漸失去了形狀。當(dāng)風(fēng)將海浪吹向海灘，城堡的墻壁瀕臨倒塌。當(dāng)她修復(fù)一邊時(shí)，其他的部分卻在不知不覺(jué)中被沖走了。Lily漸漸開始發(fā)脾氣，不停地皺眉頭。沮喪占據(jù)了她，她的決心屈服了。剛剛做出了一個(gè)有趣的沙堡形狀，媽媽抬起眼瞼，發(fā)現(xiàn)了女兒模糊的眼睛。然后她對(duì)Lily喊道:“來(lái)吧，親愛的!加入我們，展示你的創(chuàng)造力!”她指著她的“作品”并向Lily揮手。帶著苦澀的微笑，Lily決定加入她的家人當(dāng)中去