Unit1ScienceandScientistsUsinglanguageDesignedbyMr.YangWritingPostreadingAccordingtothetwoarticles,Whatwillbeincludedinyouressayifyouarewritingaboutagreatscientist?Briefintroduction.LifestoryAchievementsPersonalities/qualitiesWritingSkills總領(lǐng)：在寫人物介紹時(shí)，尤其是著重于介紹其精神品質(zhì)的，切記要選取該人物身上最典型的事例，用以突出人物的個(gè)性和品質(zhì)?！緦懽鞣椒ā竣偈锥危喝宋锔艣r（Briefinformation--名字，身份，頭銜）。②主體：人物事跡，成就及科學(xué)家精神。(personalexperience+qualities)

人物的事跡＋其體

現(xiàn)的科學(xué)家精神，注意事跡和精神一定要匹配；

注意事跡可以按時(shí)間順序，一個(gè)事跡不夠，事跡太多字?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)超過(guò)，選取兩三個(gè)即可。③尾段：總結(jié)升華，概括該人物所表現(xiàn)出來(lái)的科學(xué)精神及對(duì)自己的影響。

(Summary&influence--學(xué)習(xí)，生活，態(tài)度的影響)Sentencepatterns首段常用句型(Briefinformation):1.Iamgoingtointroduce

oneofmyfavoritescientiststoyou.

我要向你介紹我最喜歡的一位科學(xué)家。2.Heis

oneofthemostfamousandinfluentialscientistsin…

他是在……領(lǐng)域最著名和有影響力的科學(xué)家之一3.

Heisthefirstscientisttodosth.

他是第一個(gè)……的科學(xué)家。(使用不定式作定語(yǔ))

[試一試]袁隆平是第一個(gè)研制出雜交水稻的科學(xué)家。

YuanLongpingisthefirstscientist

todevelopthehybridrice.Sentencepatterns首段常用句型(Briefinformation):過(guò)去分詞做后置定語(yǔ)1.sb,knownas+頭銜,

isoneofthegreatest+身份+

intheworld.

某人，被譽(yù)為…,是世界上最偉大的…之一。【試一試】林巧稚，被譽(yù)為萬(wàn)嬰之母，是中國(guó)最偉大的醫(yī)生之一。

LinQiaozhi,knownas“themotheroftenthousandbabies”,isoneofthegreatest

doctorsinChina.定語(yǔ)從句2.Sb,whoismyfavoritescientist,isconsideredtobe+頭銜。某人，是我最喜歡的科學(xué)家，被譽(yù)為….【試一試】錢學(xué)森是我最喜歡的科學(xué)家，他被譽(yù)為導(dǎo)彈之父。

QianXuesen,whoismyfavoritescientist,isconsideredtobe“thefatherofmissile.”Sentencepatterns中段常用句型(personalexperience&qualities):1.Bornina…familyin…,he…在…年出生于…家庭，他…2.Inthecourseof+時(shí)間段,hemetalotofdifficulties.However,hewasdeterminedandnevergaveup.

在……期間,他遇到很多困難,但是他意志堅(jiān)定,從不放棄。3.Notonlyis/was/does/didhe…,butalsohe…

他不僅……，而且……4.Heachievedfame/becamefamouswhenhe…

當(dāng)…的時(shí)候，他成名了。5.Hemadegreatcontributionsto…

他對(duì)……做出很大貢獻(xiàn)。

【試一試】他對(duì)解決人們饑餓問(wèn)題做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)。

Hemadegreatcontributionstosolvingtheproblemofhunger.Sentencepatterns中段常用句型(personalexperience&qualities):Usefuladjectivesforqualitiespatriotic(愛(ài)國(guó)的); devoted(奉獻(xiàn)的);selfless(無(wú)私的); diligent(勤奮的);hard-working(勤奮的); responsible(有責(zé)任感的),tireless(孜孜不倦的); persevering(堅(jiān)持不懈的)knowledgeable(學(xué)識(shí)淵博的)； determined(堅(jiān)決的)gifted(有才華的)； modest(謙虛的) Sentencepatterns末段常用句型(influence):1.Heinspiresmetobeapersonlikehim.

他激勵(lì)我成為像他一樣的人。2.Whatinfluencedmemostis….

對(duì)我影響最深的是…【試一試】對(duì)我影響最深的是他對(duì)科學(xué)和祖國(guó)的熱愛(ài)。

Whatinfluencedmemostishisaffectionforscienceandourcountry.3.Havingknownhisstory,Imakeupmymindtodosth.

知道他的故事后，我下定決心做某事?！驹囈辉嚒恐浪墓适潞?，我決定全身心投入于科學(xué)。

Havingknownhisstory,ImakeupmymindtokeepgoingwhateverdifficultiesImeet. Appreciation

TuYouyou,

who

wasawardedtheNoblePrizein2015fordiscoveringartemisinin(青蒿素),ismyfavoritescientist.

Aftergraduating

from

PekingUniversityMedicalSchoolin1955,TuYouyousoonappliedherselftotheresearchontreatingmalaria(瘧疾).Althoughfacedwithlotsofdifficulties,sheandherteamnevergotfrustrated.ItwasbecauseoftheirhardworkandpersistencethattheyfinallydiscoveredartemisininunderTu’sleadership,makingitpossibleto

curemalaria.TuYouyouissuchadiligentanddeterminedperson

thatinspiresmeto

pursueacareerinscientificresearchinthefuture.

Briefinformationpersonalexperience&qualitiesSummary&influence定語(yǔ)從句強(qiáng)調(diào)句結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句【寫作要求】請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語(yǔ)對(duì)鐘南山作簡(jiǎn)單介紹。1.鐘南山是21世紀(jì)中國(guó)最著名的醫(yī)學(xué)家之一。2.1936年10月出生于南京；1960年畢業(yè)于北京醫(yī)學(xué)院；2003年春，鐘南山在抗擊“非典”中做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)；2020年初鐘南山再一次投身到新型冠狀病毒的抗疫前線。3.他是一位受國(guó)人尊敬的好醫(yī)生。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Usingthestructuresbelow.Remembertouselinkingwords.Part.1IntroductionPart.2UsestoriestoembodypersonalityandqualitiesPart.3Ending(opinions)1.詞匯①?zèng)Q定

②醫(yī)學(xué)家

③畢業(yè)于

④擔(dān)任

⑤取得成就

makeachievements【遣詞造句】determine

medicalscientist

graduatefrom

workas

2.(1)要點(diǎn)翻譯①鐘南山是21世紀(jì)中國(guó)最著名的醫(yī)學(xué)家之一。ZhongNanshanis__________________________________________________________inthe21stcenturyinChina.

②他1960年于北京醫(yī)學(xué)院畢業(yè)后就在那里任教。Heworkedasateacherthere____________________________BeijingMedicalCollegein1960.

③盡管很危險(xiǎn)，鐘南山還是決定再一次參加抗疫斗爭(zhēng)。_________________________________,ZhongNanshanwasdeterminedtotakepartinthebattleagain.

one of themost famous medical scientists

aftergraduating from

Although it was dangerous

句式(2)句式升級(jí)④用as引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句改寫句①。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑤用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)改寫句②。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑥用倒裝句改寫句③。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dangerousasitwas,ZhongNanshanwasdeterminedtotakepartinthebattleagain.Asweallknow,ZhongNanshanisoneofthemostfamousmedicalscientistsinthe21stcenturyinChina.

HavinggraduatedfromBeijingMedicalCollegein1960,heworkedasateacherthere.

Pairwork---polishtheessayExchangedraftswithapartnerandusethechecklisttohelpyoureviewhis/herdraft.1.

Doesthewriterexplainclearlythepersonalqualitiesthatmakeupthescientificspirit?2.

Doesthewritergiveexamplesfromthelivesofthescientist(s)

toillustratethepoints?3.

Doesthewriteruseappropriatelinkingwordsandphrasestotietheideastogether?4.

Doesthewriteruseseparateparagraphs,eachwithitsownfunction?Asweallknow,ZhongNanshanisoneofthemostfamousmedicalscientistsinthe21stcenturyinChina.HewasborninOctober1936inNanjing,JiangsuProvince.HavinggraduatedfromBeijingMedicalCollegein1960,heworkedasateacherthere.Inthespringof2003,ZhongNanshanledhisteamtofightagainstSARS.Aftertheyhadworkedhardforseveralmonths,theymadeoutstandingachievementsinthebattleatlast.Intheearlyof2020,COVID-19brokeout.Dangerousasitwas,ZhongNanshanwasdeterminedtotakepartinthebattleagain.Heworkedwithhisteamdayandnighttreatingthepatients.Finally,itwastheirhardworkthatmadetheepidemicsituationundercontrolinChina.ZhongNanshanisagooddoctorwiththespiritofdedication.SoheisrespectedbyallthepeopleinChina.THANKSHomework:假定你是中學(xué)生李華，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你以農(nóng)業(yè)