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讀后續(xù)寫

重生之我是編劇上一世，你只是一個酷愛追劇的小孩；看得正高興的時候，什么！編劇居然把你最愛的角色寫死了！什么！編劇居然把你最磕的cp拆散了！一氣之下，一口氣沒過來，還好重生一世，你變成了一個編劇；這一次你要奪回你的一切......

假如你是一個編劇，那么，讀后續(xù)寫對你來說，等同于丟給你一個沒寫完的劇本，讓你創(chuàng)作

初識讀后續(xù)寫-----是什么讀后續(xù)寫：提供一段350詞以內的語言材料，要求考生根據所提供的

和

進行續(xù)寫；詞數要求：

，將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結構完整的短文。通過閱讀原文、思考劇本，利用語言描寫、動作描寫、心理描寫、環(huán)境描寫等等，推動故事情節(jié)發(fā)展，完成續(xù)寫方法：十句五定法（續(xù)寫10句，有5句可固定）材料內容兩段開頭語150詞左右Henrywasakind,goodboy.Hisfatherdiedofaterribledisease,whichcostmuchandleftthembadlyoff.Hismotherwasverypoor.Althoughsheworkedhard,shecouldonlymanagebothendsmeet.Hehadalittlesisterabouttwoyearsold.Hewantedtohelphismother,forshecouldnotalwaysearnenoughtobuyfoodforherlittlefamily.Andastheonlymanofthefamily,hehadbeenpreparinghimselftotakehisresponsibility.Heoncewantedtoquitschooltofindsomekindofjobtolessenhismother’sburden,butwasseriouslyrefused.Oneday,onthewayhomeafterschool,Henryspottedawalletlyingunderapileofleaves.Heopeneditcarefully,findingitwasfullofmoney!Butitwasdarknow,andtheemptystreetinthecoldwintersawononearound.Henrymighthavekeptallthemoney,fornoonesawhimwhenhefoundit.Buthismotherhadtaughthimtobehonest,andnevertokeepwhatdidnotbelongtohim.Sohedecidedtowaitinthefreezingwind.Afterwhatseemedacenturylater,therefinallycamebacktheworriedandhurryingowner.Themanwasmorethandelightedtogetbackthelostwallet.“Itwassuchasurprise!”themansaid,“Iheldnohopeforitatall.Well,boy,that’swhatyoudeserveforyourgooddeed.”Themangavehimadollarasthanksandapraiseforhishonesty.Howtodealwiththemoney?Thecandy?Anewpairofpants?Orotherthingshewaslongingforsomuch?Wait,nextmonthwasmother’sbirthday…Yes,Henrygottheideaandknewwhatheshoulddoandhewoulddoitsecretly.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150個左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Withthedollarheboughtabox,threebrushes,andsomeblacking(鞋油).___________________________________________________________________________________________Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.___________________________________________________________________________________________350詞左右的語言材料

未完成的劇本兩段開頭語6大要素:who;when;where;what;why;how主旨大意themainideavocabulary，sentence詞匯

，

句型structure結構linkingwords連接詞theplotandfeeling情節(jié)和感受thetense時態(tài)themaincharacter主要人物thestyle寫作風格語言生動，高級完成一篇“劇本”的基本步驟寫劇本---整潔書寫befullandattractive情節(jié)完整

有吸引力讀劇本---審題思劇本---構思情節(jié)合理的情節(jié)1.原文2.讀兩段提示語讀后續(xù)寫-----如何應對找出主角人物、主要情節(jié)和沖突、情感變化“劇本”寫作指南三大原則01原文一致原則內容要前后銜接，上下連貫語言表達風格一致。03曲折性原則凡是故事都應有跌宕起伏，其中人物會遇到困難或問題，但最終能解決。02正能量原則故事內容一定要正能量，弘揚社會主義核心價值觀。如迷路了但最終一定回到了家；失敗了或遇到困難了，但最終一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言歸于好，和睦相處；犯錯了，最后一定會改過自新，重新做人；賊逃了，最后一定是繩之以法，等等。主題人與社會

人與自我

人與自然

（溫情或化險為夷的故事，表達人間有真情、大愛）（主角的自我發(fā)展、變化或成長）（人與動物或自然和諧相處）PartOne讀劇本

Step1.讀劇本之找人主角+配角Whoareinthestory?Henrywasakind,goodboy.Hisfatherdiedofaterribledisease,whichcostmuchandleftthembadlyoff.Hismotherwasverypoor.Althoughsheworkedhard,shecouldonlymanagebothendsmeet.Hehadalittlesisterabouttwoyearsold.Hewantedtohelphismother,forshecouldnotalwaysearnenoughtobuyfoodforherlittlefamily.Andastheonlymanofthefamily,hehadbeenpreparinghimselftotakehisresponsibility.Heoncewantedtoquitschooltofindsomekindofjobtolessenhismother’sburden,butwasseriouslyrefused.Oneday,onthewayhomeafterschool,Henryspottedawalletlyingunderapileofleaves.Heopeneditcarefully,findingitwasfullofmoney!Butitwasdarknow,andtheemptystreetinthecoldwintersawononearound.

Henrymighthavekeptallthemoney,fornoonesawhimwhenhefoundit.Buthismotherhadtaughthimtobehonest,andnevertokeepwhatdidnotbelongtohim.Sohedecidedtowaitinthefreezingwind.Afterwhatseemedacenturylater,therefinallycamebacktheworriedandhurryingowner.Themanwasmorethandelightedtogetbackthelostwallet.“Itwassuchasurprise!”themansaid,“Iheldnohopeforitatall.Well,boy,that’swhatyoudeserveforyourgooddeed.”

Themangavehimadollarasthanksandapraiseforhishonesty.Howtodealwiththemoney?Thecandy?Anewpairofpants?Orotherthingshewaslongingforsomuch?Wait,nextmonthwasmother’sbirthday…Yes,Henrygottheideaandknewwhatheshoulddoandhewoulddoitsecretly.Withthedollarheboughtabox,threebrushes,andsomeblacking(鞋油).

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Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step2.讀劇本之找時間Whendid/doesthestoryhappen?決定續(xù)寫需要用的主要時態(tài)Henrywasakind,goodboy.Hisfatherdiedofaterribledisease,whichcostmuchandleftthembadlyoff.Hismotherwasverypoor.Althoughsheworkedhard,shecouldonlymanagebothendsmeet.Hehadalittlesisterabouttwoyearsold.Hewantedtohelphismother,forshecouldnotalwaysearnenoughtobuyfoodforherlittlefamily.Andastheonlymanofthefamily,hehadbeenpreparinghimselftotakehisresponsibility.Heoncewantedtoquitschooltofindsomekindofjobtolessenhismother’sburden,butwasseriouslyrefused.

Oneday,onthewayhomeafterschool,Henryspottedawalletlyingunderapileofleaves.Heopeneditcarefully,findingitwasfullofmoney!Butitwasdarknow,andtheemptystreetinthecoldwintersawononearound.Henrymighthavekeptallthemoney,fornoonesawhimwhenhefoundit.Buthismotherhadtaughthimtobehonest,andnevertokeepwhatdidnotbelongtohim.Sohedecidedtowaitinthefreezingwind.Afterwhatseemedacenturylater,therefinallycamebacktheworriedandhurryingowner.Themanwasmorethandelightedtogetbackthelostwallet.“Itwassuchasurprise!”themansaid,“Iheldnohopeforitatall.Well,boy,that’swhatyoudeserveforyourgooddeed.”Themangavehimadollarasthanksandapraiseforhishonesty.Howtodealwiththemoney?Thecandy?Anewpairofpants?Orotherthingshewaslongingforsomuch?Wait,nextmonthwasmother’sbirthday…Yes,Henrygottheideaandknewwhatheshoulddoandhewoulddoitsecretly.Tense:_____________simplepasttense(一般過去時)Step3.讀劇本之找事情節(jié)

主題Whathappened?Events(Whathappened)Henry’sfatherdiedofaterribledisease.Hismotherwasverypoor.Althoughsheworkedhard,shecouldonlymanagebothendsmeet.Oneday,onthewayhomeafterschool,Henryspottedawalletlyingunderapileofleaves.Hedecided

towaitinthefreezingwind.Heoncewantedtoquitschooltofindsomekindofjobtolessenhismother’sburden,butwasseriouslyrefused.Nextmonthwasmother’sbirthday…Yes,Henrygottheideaandknewwhatheshoulddoandhewoulddoitsecretly.Themangavehimadollarasthanksandapraiseforhishonesty.Whichisthetheme?

A.AninterestingstoryB.Afamilytragedy(悲劇)C.Anhonestboy’sloveformomHewantedtohelphismother.Heoncewantedtoquitschooltofindsomekindofjobtolessenhismother’sburden,butwasseriouslyrefused.Henrymighthavekeptallthemoney,fornoonesawhimwhenhefoundit.Buthismotherhadtaughthimtobehonest……Sohedecidedtowaitinthefreezingwind.clue線索whenwhereOneday,onthewayhomeTense:_____________simplepasttensestreetwhoHenryThemanHenry’smomthirdpersonperspective第三人稱視角開端beginning高峰climax結尾endingstorymountain上升情節(jié)下降情節(jié)Henry’sfatherdied.Theywereverypoor.Hewantedtofindsomejobtolessenmother’sburden.Oneday,onthewayhome,Henryspottedawalletfullofmoneyonanemptystreet.Hewaitedinthefreezingwind.theownerfinallygotbackandgavehimadollarasthanks.Nextmonthwasmother’sbirthday…Yes,Henrygottheideaandknewwhatheshoulddoandhewoulddoitsecretly.故事線Henry:anxious情感線worried,desiredsurpriseddelighted,hopefulParttwo創(chuàng)作劇本

十句五定法Para1①承接第一句所給內容②調配演員，描寫情緒（可有對話）③動作/環(huán)境/語言④關鍵情節(jié)⑤接第二段的第一句（從第二段第一句倒推）Withthedollarheboughtabox,threebrushes,andsomeblacking(鞋油).

Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.aboutthemaincharacter,Henry十句五定法Para2①接第二段第一句所給內容②關鍵情節(jié)（各個角色做什么）③動作/環(huán)境/心理/語言(可有對話)④交代結局：問題解決（積極向上，符合價值觀）⑤點睛升華：價值觀/感嘆/諺語Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.betweenHenryandhismomWiththedollarheboughtabox,threebrushes,andsomeblacking(鞋油).

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.然后他帶著這些東西去到大街上（第一段首句）Para.12.他禮貌地詢問過路的人們是否需要刷鞋3.慢慢地，大家注意到他并讓他幫忙刷鞋4.他把賺到的錢一點點存起來,期待著媽媽收到這個大大的驚喜5.這一天終于到來（從下一段倒推）Tip1:由已知信息推理未知信息

語言描寫環(huán)境/動作描寫動作/心理描寫Tip2.ThinkingfortheendingPara.2Hesmiledandhandedthemoneytohismother.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.媽媽看到后，生氣地質問錢從哪里來的（結合第二段首句）2.Henry解釋他如何靠自己賺到的錢3.媽媽聽后非常感動，流下了開心的淚水4.妹妹也祝媽媽生日快樂，一家人幸福地擁抱在一起（故事結局）5.整個家里再次充滿了歡笑，多么溫馨畫面啊!（升華主旨）語言描寫心理，情緒，動作描寫ThemeTimePlaceCharactersrelationshipsPlot(情節(jié))Anhonestboy’sloveformomOneday，nextmonth,mom’sbirthdayOnthestreet,homeHenry,father,mother,sister,themanHenryblackedothers’shoestoearnmoneywonderingasurpriseMomwasangryfountoutthetruthThefamilyhuggedandburstedintolaughter范文賞析