Unit5Offtospace牛津廣州版七年級(jí)上冊(cè)Whatisitliketotravelinspace?KeyquestionWritingChina’sspacedreamThousandsofyearsago,therewasaChinesestoryaboutChang’eflyingtotheMoon.DuringtheMingDynasty,theChinesemadethefirstrocket.On15October2003,YangLiweiwentintospaceintheShenzhouVspaceship.On24April1970,Chinasentitsfirstsatelliteintospace.Ifyouhaveachancetovisitspace,howwillyouplanyourtrip?SpaceAdventureHaveyoueverdreamtoftravellingtospace?Nowcomesyourchance:write

apostaboutyourdreamtripandsendittous.Thewriterofthebestpostwillwinafreetriptospace!Pre-writing太空冒險(xiǎn)你曾夢(mèng)想過(guò)去太空旅行嗎?現(xiàn)在機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)了:寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于夢(mèng)想中的太空之旅的網(wǎng)帖并發(fā)給我們。最佳網(wǎng)帖的作者可以贏得一次免費(fèi)的太空之旅!Writingapostaboutadreamtriptospace.Daviddrewamindmapbeforewriting.Let’smatchthetopicwitheachparagraph.dcbaBrainstormingIntroduction:BackgroundinformationWhen?Howlong?Where?What?Why?How?withwhom?ThingsWewillhavetodoinspacetiemysleepingbagtothewallwashinadifferentwaylearnhowtofloatsafelydoexerciseeverydaycommunicatewiththeEarthcheckandfixourspacecraftavoidpollutiontakeoxygentankseatspacefoodThingsWecandoinspacelookattheEarthfromspacedosomeexperimentsgoonaspacewalktakephotosoftheMilkyWay

encouragespacetravelexploreotherplanetslookforsignsoflifebuildnewstationslaunchsatellitesteachlivelessonsfromspacelookatstarsWhatthetripwillbelikeamazingwonderfulfantastichappyspecialinterestinggreatexcitingenjoyableCanyoufigureoutmore?dreamchancesendintroductionviewn.夢(mèng)想；理想v.

做夢(mèng)；夢(mèng)見(jiàn)n.機(jī)會(huì)；機(jī)遇v.郵寄；發(fā)送n.序言；引言n.景色；風(fēng)景Newwordssomedayexperiencegetintoorbitadv.總有一天；有朝一日n.經(jīng)歷；閱歷進(jìn)入軌道Newwords

IhopeIcantravelintospacewithmyfamilyoneday.Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.First,myfamilyandIwillflyoutintospaceonaspaceship.Whenwegetintoorbit,wewillvisitaspacestation.Itwilltakeusaboutsixhourstogetthere.Thingsareverydifferentinspace.Thereismuchlessgravity,sowewillhavetotieoursleepingbagstothewall

whenwesleep.Wewillalsohavetowashourhandsandbrushourteethinadifferentway.

ReadDavid’spostandfindouthowheorganizesthewriting.閱讀范文，找出重點(diǎn)詞匯和核心句式。Whenwearriveatthespacestation,IwillfirstlookoutofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth.Afterthat,Iwouldliketodosomeexperiments.Ireallywanttostudyhowplantsgrowinspace.Next,I’mgoingtoputonaspacesuitandgoonaspacewalk.Ireallylookforwardtotravellingintospacesomeday—itwillbeanamazingexperience!Writing假設(shè)你叫李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所學(xué)的知識(shí)，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于夢(mèng)想中的月球之旅的網(wǎng)帖，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，拓展內(nèi)容。要求：80詞左右;文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。

主題：人與自然——宇宙探索

文體：記敘文

人稱(chēng)：________和第三人稱(chēng) 時(shí)態(tài)：以_____________為主第一一般將來(lái)時(shí)Step1:題干細(xì)審開(kāi)頭0201VisitingtheMoon03結(jié)尾正文引入主題，介紹太空旅行的背景。Step2:謀篇布局總結(jié)太空旅行的感受和收獲對(duì)未來(lái)太空探索的展望

詳細(xì)描述太空旅行的過(guò)程，包括進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)和必須做的事情。1.這是我夢(mèng)想中的旅行。(looklike)________________________________________________2.在那里，我將需要做幾件事。(needtodo)________________________________________________3.讓他們知道我們的發(fā)現(xiàn)和我們面臨的挑戰(zhàn)是很重要的。(It’s句型)________________________________________________________________________________________________4.月球之旅一定會(huì)是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷!(besureto...)________________________________________________Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.ThereareafewthingsI'llneedtodothere.It'simportanttomakethemknowourfindingsandanychallengesweface.ThetriptotheMoonissuretobeanunforgettableexperience!Step3:句型點(diǎn)撥VisitingtheMoonIhopeIcanvisittheMoonwithmyfamilyoneday.Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.First,myfamilyandIwillflytotheMoononaspaceship.

TheMoonisaround380,000kilometresfromtheEarth,soit’lltakeusaboutthreedaystogetthere.Thingsaredifferentinspace.ThereareafewthingsI'llneedtodothere.Thereismuchlessgravity,soeverythingfloats,includingus!We'llneedtolearnhowtofloatsafely.It'slikebeingasuperherowhocanfly,butwithpracticetomastertheartof'spacewalking'.

BecausethereisnoairontheMoon,wemusttakeoxygentankswithus.

Eventhoughwe're

farStep4:擴(kuò)充成文away,

wecanstilltalktoourfriends

andscientistsonEarth.Weuseradiosandsatellitestosendmessagesbackandforth.It'simportantto

makethemknowourfindingsandanychallengesweface.Sometimes,

wesharebeautifulpicturesofEarthfromspace!Whenwearriveatthespacestation,

IwilltakeawalkontheMoonandtakeasmanyphotosasIcan.

Afterthat,Wecanhelpbuildnewstations.Spacestationsarelikehomesforastronauts.It’smeaningfultodoso.Next,Iamgoingto

teachlivelessonsfromspace,tosharemyexperiencesandknowledgewithstudentsaroundtheworld.Ireallylookforwardtoitnow.ThetriptotheMoonissuretobe

anunforgettableexperience!Ican'twaittoembarkonthisincrediblejourney!Post-writingCheckandrevise

檢查和修改Tick(√)theboxestocheckyourwriting,andthenreviseit.根據(jù)下面的清單檢查和修改作文。Ifocusedonacleartopicineachparagraph.我專(zhuān)注于每個(gè)段落中明確的主題。IdescribedwhatIwillhavetodoinspace,suchas________________,andwhatIamgoingtodothere,such