匯報：稻殼兒

2026屆高考英語沖刺復(fù)習(xí)五步妙筆生花

續(xù)寫滿溢芳華

--以2024年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫為例一審審要素二定定主題三推測兩步段首句定發(fā)展四構(gòu)思“Q&A模式”構(gòu)思

每段三個微情節(jié)五成文梳理思路草擬正文六要素whenwherewhowhatwhyhow正能量原則弘揚社會主義價值觀；民族和文化自豪感；人類共有的人文精神...標(biāo)出段首的________________原則關(guān)鍵詞“三銜接”第一段：銜接______;故事______；

銜接______第二段：解決________；故事_____；

主題_____首句發(fā)展第二段矛盾沖突結(jié)局升華“六所”技巧，即主角的所見、所聞、所做、所說、所想和所感應(yīng)用高級詞匯、高級語法結(jié)構(gòu)、亮點句型衡水字體、卷面整潔解題方略五步妙筆生花解題原則5絕不3原則

1.不添加枝葉：不可以增加______，否則會使情節(jié)發(fā)展偏離原文主題。2.不節(jié)外生枝：續(xù)寫的情節(jié)需要和原文達成協(xié)調(diào)一致，不額外擴展______

情節(jié)。3.不懸而未決：題目要求中已表明“使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文”，懸而未決

無法使整個故事完整，因此續(xù)寫部分要___________。4.不偏離主題：續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容應(yīng)圍繞__________進行情節(jié)推進不能有任何相悖。5.不違背常理：續(xù)寫的情節(jié)發(fā)展和細節(jié)要符合一般規(guī)律、道理、日常認知和

生活_________。角色1.正能量原則：圍繞_________展開，增長知識或傳播正能量，弘揚社會主

義核心價值觀。2.沖突解決原則：在續(xù)寫部分，矛盾趨于解決，故事走向_______。3.協(xié)同原則：______協(xié)同、______協(xié)同、______協(xié)同、______協(xié)同。旁支解決問題原文中心常識真善美結(jié)局主題情節(jié)語言情感匯報：稻殼兒真題感悟閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

（2024新高考全國I卷）ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.

ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."

注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右。

IrantoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一審審要素When&where[1]ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettable_________inSeptember.[1]Ihadplannedtoflyto________andtakeabusto_________foraconference.WhoI;________Whathappened?[1]I_____________inViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentI________theplane,I____likecrazythroughtheairportbuildingand___________thefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.[2]Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunter____________________and_______thecar.[3]Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewe___________thebusstation.eveningViennaPragueGuntertoucheddowngotoffranjumpedintoputhisphonedownstartedrolledintoWhathappened?[4]JustthenIrealisedthatI_____________inmywallet.[5]I______________thecar,madeamad_____forthemachine,and_______mycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry."HowdidIfeel?[1]ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlike_____...[3]__________,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.[4]Iflashedhiman___________smileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.[4]Afeelingof_____________washedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.[5]Ijumpedoutofthecar,madea_____runforthemachine...hadzerocashjumpedoutofrunpoppedcrazyThankfullyapologetichelplessnessmad二定定主題:正能量原則最大的沖突解決主題WithGunter’shelp,IarrivedatthebusstationintimebutIcouldcouldn’tpayGunterthetaxifare.Gunterchargeddidn’tchargeme.IpromisedtopaybackGunteranddidn’tkeepkeepmypromise———————————————kindnesshonestytrust★★★標(biāo)出段首的關(guān)鍵詞“三銜接”原則三推測兩步段首句定發(fā)展:“三銜接”原則第一段段首句：

IrantoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.第二段段首句：

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.1.根據(jù)第一段段首句可知，“我”跑回去告訴岡特這個壞消息。之后的銜接應(yīng)為：_________________________2.根據(jù)第二段段首句可知，四天后，當(dāng)我回到維也納時，我按照承諾給岡特打了電話。由此可推測第一段的結(jié)局：岡特幫助了我，_________________________3.由此可知，第二段段首句之后的銜接應(yīng)為：________________岡特聽到壞消息之后的反應(yīng)。讓我順利地登上了公共汽車。我和岡特之后的互動。四構(gòu)思Q&A模式：構(gòu)思每段三個微情節(jié)（“六所”技巧）第一段段首句：IrantoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.根據(jù)第一段段首句的關(guān)鍵詞_____________和第二段段首句的關(guān)鍵詞_______________、______________和_________構(gòu)思三個微情節(jié)。[Question1]HowdidIfeel?（所感）[Answer]_______________________________________[Question2]What’sGunter’sreaction?（所做，正能量原則作答）[Answer]__________________[Question3]What’smypromise?（所說，根據(jù)第二段段首句作答）[Answer]____________________________________________________________________thebadnewsbackinViennacalledGunterpromisedIfeltextremelyembarrasedandanxious.Hecomfortedme.IpromisedtocallhimandpaythetaxifarewhenIwasbacktoVienna.第二段段首句：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.根據(jù)第二段段首句的關(guān)鍵詞_______________、______________和_________構(gòu)思三個微情節(jié)。[Question1]What’sGunter’sreaction?（所感、所做）[Answer]________________________________________________________________[Question2]Whathappenedwhenwemet?（所做，正能量原則作答）[Answer]______________________________[Question3]WhatdidIlearnfromtheexperience?（總結(jié)全文，升華主題）[Answer]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________backinViennacalledGunterpromisedThoughhesitating,henoddedhisheadandwavedgoodbyetome.Ipaidthefareandthankedhim.Lookingback,Irealizeditwasthisexperiencethatmademeunderstandtheimportanceofhonestyandtrust.（1）話題詞匯（2）形容詞短語作狀語

（3）介詞短語

作狀語

_____________________________（既尷尬又著急）,Iwas___________（不知所措）whattodo.“六所”細節(jié)?語言協(xié)同著急的adj.___________尷尬的adj._______________催促v.________又說到v._______安慰v./n.__________放松，如釋重負n.______立刻adv.___________上車v.________錯誤n._______善解人意的adj._______________沖向v.______真誠的adj._________表達感謝v._________________不知所措prep.___________下車v.___________猶豫的adj.____________anxiousembarrassedurgeaddcomfortreliefinstantlyboardfaultunderstandingrushsincereexpressgratitudeatalossgetoutofEmbarrassedandanxiousatalosshesitating_______________________（令我非常驚訝的是）,Gunter__________（安慰）meand______（催促）metogetonthebus.Muchtomysurprisecomfortedurged（4）with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)（5）無靈主語

（6）現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語“六所”細節(jié)?語言協(xié)同__________________________________________（臉上帶著善解人意的微笑）,he_______（又說到）thatIdidn’thavetopayhimbecauseitwasnotmy______（錯誤）.Withanunderstandingsmileonhisfaceaddedfault___________________________________________________（一股強烈的放松和感激之情籠罩著我）asIwalkedtowardsthebus.AwaveofreliefandgratitudewashedovermeBefore___________（登車）,IaskedGunterforhisphonenumber,____________（承諾）thatIwouldcallandpayhimwhenIwasbacktoVienna.boardingpromising（7）副詞作

狀語（8）動詞的

聯(lián)動

（9）虛擬語氣“六所”細節(jié)?語言協(xié)同Afewminuteslater,whenGunter____________（下車）hiscar,I__________（沖向）tohim,_______（給予）abearhugand__________________________________（表達我誠摯的感謝）.gotoutof_________（幸運的是）,hewasfreeandagreedtomeetme.LuckilyItoldhimthat________（沒有）hishelp,I_________________________（不可能參加）theimportantconferenceintime.withoutrushedgaveexpressedmysinceregratitudecouldn’thaveattended匯報：稻殼兒

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Embarrasedandanxious,Iwasatalosswhattodo.Muchtomysurprise,Guntercomfortedmeandurgedmetogetonthebus.Withanunderstandingsmileonhisface,headdedthatIdidn’thavetopayhimbecauseitwasnotmyfault.Instantly,awaveofreliefandgratitudewashedovermeasIwalkedtowardsthebus.Beforeboarding,IaskedGunterforhisphonenumber,promsingthatIwouldcallandpayhimwhenIwasbacktoVienna.Thoughhesitating,Gunternoddedhisheadandwavedgoodbyetome.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Luckily,hewasfreeandagreedtomeetme.Afewminuteslater,whenGuntergotoutofhiscar,Irushedtohim,gavehimabearhugandexpressedmysinceregratitude.ThenIgavehimthemoneyandasmallgift.Itoldhimthatwithouthishelp,Icouldn’thaveattendedtheimportantconferenceintime.Lookingback,Irealiseditwasthisexperiencethatmademeunderstandtheimportanceofhonestyandtrust.五成文梳理思路，草擬成文續(xù)寫滿溢芳華匯報：稻殼兒

IranbacktoGunterandoldhimthebadnews.SoembarrassedwasIthatIcouldfeelmyfaceturnred.Tomysurprise,Guntercomfortedmewithanunderstandingexpression,explainingthathedidn'tneedthepaymentandinsistedthatIshouldgetonthebusinsteadofjustwastingtime.Hissincerewordstouchedmyheart,andwarmthtakeplaceofcoldness.Asreturn,IpromisedtoGunterthatIwouldcallhimafterexchangingourphonenumbers.Hesmiled,wavingmegood-bye.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Theminuteheansweredthephoneandheardmyvoice,hewasabletorecognizeme.Obviouslythathekeptourstoryinmind.Iinvitedhimtohavedinneratarestaurant.Heagreedandwewerethensittingfacetofaceexpressingourthoughtsandrecallingtheoldmemory.ItwasbythischanceIcouldultimatelyshowmygratitudeandrewardhimforhistrustandkindness.習(xí)作點評匯報：稻殼兒

IranbacktoGunterandoldhimthebadnews.SoembarrassedwasIthatIcouldfeelmyfaceturnred.Tomysurprise,Guntercomfortedmewithanunderstandingexpression,explaini