UNIT3寫(xiě)作能力提升練

假如你是吳明，愛(ài)好繪畫(huà)并且經(jīng)常在業(yè)余時(shí)間從事志愿者活動(dòng)。你收到一位微信好友發(fā)給你的消息，其中提到一位來(lái)自武漢國(guó)際學(xué)校的英國(guó)男孩Michael稱他的學(xué)校正在舉辦為貧困學(xué)生募捐的畫(huà)展，你非常興奮，于是想加Michael為好友，并準(zhǔn)備給他寫(xiě)一封信。內(nèi)容如下:1.自我介紹；2.表達(dá)自己想去參加畫(huà)展的意愿；3.對(duì)畫(huà)展的具體時(shí)間、去Michael學(xué)校的交通方式等進(jìn)行詢問(wèn)。［謀篇布局］理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。［遣詞造句］1.在我閑暇時(shí)，我總是樂(lè)意做一些志愿工作。Inmysparetime,_______________________________________.2.我能多了解一些關(guān)于畫(huà)展的信息嗎？MayIgetsomemore________________________________?就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)完成句子。I'malwaysreadytodosomevoluntaryworkinformationaboutthepaintingshow3.請(qǐng)問(wèn)你能告訴我怎樣才能到達(dá)你們的學(xué)校嗎？Couldyoupleasetellme__________________________?4.請(qǐng)問(wèn)你能告訴我畫(huà)展將在何時(shí)開(kāi)始嗎？Couldyoupleasetellme______________________________?5.你能告訴我每幅畫(huà)多少錢嗎？Couldyoutellme_______________________________?howIcangettoyourschoolwhenthepaintingshowwillstarthowmucheachofthepaintingsisHi,Michael,I’mWuMingandI’mgladtomakefriendswithyou.IlikepaintingandI’malwaysreadytodosomevoluntaryworkinmysparetime.I’minterestedinthepaintingshowinyourschoolandIwouldliketogothere.MayIgetsomemoreinformationaboutthepaintingshow?Couldyoupleasetellmewhentheshowwillstart?Howmuchiseachofthepaintings?CouldyoupleasetellmehowIcangettoyourschool?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.WuMing［連句成篇］1.思路清晰，采用了“總—分—總”結(jié)構(gòu)。2.連接詞運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，尤其是and,when的運(yùn)用為作文增彩。3.正確運(yùn)用一些短語(yǔ)，比如：makefriendswith，beinterestedin，bereadyto等使文章更加豐富精彩。4.Couldyoupleasetellme+賓語(yǔ)從句？的運(yùn)用成為文章的加分點(diǎn)。高分點(diǎn)評(píng)：假如你校有幾位來(lái)自美國(guó)的交換生，他們打算周末步行去翠湖公園。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示為他們寫(xiě)出前往翠湖公園的路線，并簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下公園的情況。詞數(shù)80左右。要點(diǎn)提示:1.路線（見(jiàn)上圖）；2.公園環(huán)境優(yōu)美、涼爽，還可以游泳、野餐等；3.……________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CuihuParkisnotfarfromhere.It’seasytogetthere.Justgostraight思路分析：首先開(kāi)篇引出話題，描述路線；接著寫(xiě)對(duì)公園的簡(jiǎn)介及評(píng)價(jià)；最后表達(dá)作者的希望。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CuihuParkisnotfarfromhere.It'seasytogetthere.Justgostraightandturnrightatthefirstcorner.Walkalongtheroadandturnleftwhenyoufindahospital.CuihuParkisdownthestreetonyourright.Acrossfromtheparkisarestaurant.Theparkisreallyagoodplacetohavefun.It'sbeautifulandcoolwiththetreesandflowers.