Unit7WhenTomorrowComes單元話題寫作講練

本單元教材寫作情境為“寫出你

20年后的生活”,屬于“人與社會”主題范疇中“社會服務(wù)與人際溝通”這一主題群,涉及子主題“家鄉(xiāng)和社會的變遷,歷史的發(fā)展,對未來的暢想”。常見的寫作任務(wù)是預(yù)測自己或他人未來的理想生活。體裁多為說明文。Let’sshareLastclass,wemadeaninterviewabouthowthefuturelifewouldbedifferent.Todaycouldyoushareushowyourfuturelifewillbelike?

What’syourdreamjob?Whatwillyoudotomakeithappen?LeadinLet’readMandy’sfuturedreams.Itcanhelpyouwriteapassageaboutyours.Whatmightthesedreamsbeabout?anartmuseum/agallarycountryside/aquietplace/anaturalplace,...placetoliveplacetovisitReadaboutMandy’sdreamsforthefutureandfindoutwhatshewantstobe.Shewantstobeanartist.willstudyartinFrancewillvisitalltheartmuseumswilllearnaboutdifferentartwillcreateherownart3aCompletethetableaboutMandy’sdreamsandyours.ItemMandyYouFuturejobPlacetoliveFreetimeactivityHowtomakedreamscometrue3bLet’scheckMandy’sdreamsfirst!MyDreams

for

the

FutureWhatwillmylifebelikein20years?It'snotaneasyquestion,buthereareafewofmypredictions.Iloveart,soIthinkIwillbecomeanartist.IwanttostudyartinFrance,andthenIwillvisitallthefamousartmuseums.Iwilllearnalotaboutdifferentartistsandtheirworksofart,andIwillcreatemyowntoo.Asanartist,Iwillliveinthecountrysideandstayclosetonature.Therewillbeflowersandplantsaroundmyhome.Lifetherewillgivemegoodideasformakingart.Attheweekend,Iwillinvitefriendstocomeoverandhavefuntogether.IbelievethesedreamswillcometrueaslongasIstudyhardandkeepontrying.ItemMandyFuturejobPlacetoliveFreetimeactivityHowtomakedreamscometrueArtistCountrysideinFranceVisitmuseums,createart,invitefriendsStudyhardandkeeptryingCompletethetableaboutMandy’sdreams.3b小紅書：Christina在努力Completethetableaboutyourdreams.ItemYouFuturejobPlacetoliveFreetimeactivityHowtomakedreamscometrue3bWherewillyoulivein20years?Whatwillyoudoinyourfreetime?Howareyougoingtodothat?Whatwillyoubewhenyougrowup?MyDreams

for

the

FutureWhatwillmylifebelikein20years?It'snotaneasyquestion,buthereareafewofmypredictions.Iloveart,soIthinkIwillbecomeanartist.IwanttostudyartinFrance,andthenIwillvisitallthefamousartmuseums.Iwilllearnalotaboutdifferentartistsandtheirworksofart,andIwillcreatemyowntoo.Asanartist,Iwillliveinthecountrysideandstayclosetonature.Therewillbeflowersandplantsaroundmyhome.Lifetherewillgivemegoodideasformakingart.Attheweekend,Iwillinvitefriendstocomeoverandhavefuntogether.IbelievethesedreamswillcometrueaslongasIstudyhardandkeepontrying.BeginningBodyEndingIntroducetopicMydreamjobStudyactivitiesLifeactivitiesConclusionLet’sanalyze

4Post-reading(Writing)Part1.Whatwillyourlifebelikein20years?Writeashortpassageaboutyourdreamsforthefuture.Useyournotesin3b.3c寫作指導(dǎo)

文本體裁話題分析要求想想自己20年后的生活將會是什么樣，然后寫一篇關(guān)于對未來夢想的短文。本文根據(jù)3a與3b提示的內(nèi)容，可知是描述未來情況的文章，因此偏記敘文。人稱時(shí)態(tài)以第一人稱為主；以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般將來時(shí)為主。(1)Howmanyparagraphsarethereinthearticle?(2)Whatisthecontentofthisarticle?twoObserveandthinkParagraph1Paragraph2futurejobplacetolive(3)Howdoesthefirstparagraphnarrate(敘述)?Firstsentence:QuestionThirdsentence:interest+futurejobSecondsentence:feelingaboutthequestionFourthandfifthsentences:expectations(activities)

(usethesimplefuturetense)(4)Howaboutparagraph2?Firstsentence:placetolive

Thirdsentence:combinethejobcontentSecondsentence:environmentaldescriptionFourthsentence:expectedactivity

Fifthsentence:Howtomakedreamscometrueusethesimplefuturetense教材寫作品讀Life

in

20

Years

My

life

in

20

years

will

be

very

different

from

what

it

is

now.

Here

are

some

of

my

predictions.

I

think

I

will

be

a

teacher.

In

the

classroom,①there

will

be

more

new

teaching

tools.

教材原句①【Section

B

1b】However,there

will

be

more

challenging

jobs

in

the

future,such

as

space

pilots

and

AI

experts.（there

be句型的一般將來時(shí)）I’ll

learn

②how

to

use

them

to

make

my

classes

more

interesting.

At

home,there

will

be

a

robot

to

help

with

housework.③It’s

really

great

for

me

to

have

more

free

time

to

read

books.②【Section

A

2a】Machines

will

tell

us

how

to

solve

small

health

problems

before

they

become

bigger.（how

to

do結(jié)構(gòu)）續(xù)表

My

neighbourhood

will

be

greener

and

more

beautiful.

It’s

easy

for

people

to

live

there

comfortably.

Whether

my

dreams

can

come

true

④depends

on

whether

I

work

hard

now.③【Section

B

2b】It

is

important

for

young

students

to

develop

skills

that

will

be

valuable

in

the

future.（it

is+adj.+for

sb.to

do

sth.句型）續(xù)表

All

in

all,the

future

is

full

of

hope.

We

never

know

what

will

happen

in

the

future,but

I’ll

keep

trying

my

best.④【Section

B

2c】It

depends

on

how

we

choose

to

improve

and

use

AI

to

meet

future

challenges.（“depend

on+賓語從句”結(jié)構(gòu)）續(xù)表開頭句每個(gè)人都對他們的未來生活有一個(gè)預(yù)測。翻譯:___________________________________________Everyone

has

a

prediction

for

their

future

lives.中間句1.There

will

be

more

new

teaching

tools.仿寫:道路上將會有更少的汽車，因?yàn)樗鼈儯ㄆ嚕诳罩酗w行。________________________________________________________________加后置定語和伴隨狀語升格:將會有更多的汽車在空中飛行，載著我們?nèi)ト魏斡腥さ牡胤?。There

will

be

fewer

cars

on

the

roads

because

they

will

fly

in

the

sky.There

will

be

more

cars

flying

in

the

sky,taking

us

anywhere

interesting.2.機(jī)器人將在我們的生活中發(fā)揮作用。翻譯:_________________________________Robots

will

play

a

part

in

our

lives.3.It

is

important

for

young

students

to

develop

skills

that

will

be

valuable

in

the

future.（教材Section

B

2b）仿寫:人們可能會擁有更多的空閑時(shí)間來放松。___________________________________________________It’s

possible

for

people

to

have

more

free

time

to

relax.結(jié)尾句我認(rèn)為未來將會越來越好,人們將過著更加美滿的生活。（比較級+and+比較級）翻譯：______________________________________________________________________

I

think

the

future

will

be

better

and

better

and

people

will

live

a

happier

life.【名言積累】1.The

future

belongs

to

those

who

believe

in

the

beauty

of

their

dreams.未來屬于那些相信自己夢想之美的人。2.The

best

way

to

predict

your

future

is

to

create

it.預(yù)測未來的最好方法就是創(chuàng)造未來。

在科技迅速發(fā)展的今天,人們的生活發(fā)生了很多變化,未來也一定會有新的變化。假定你是李華,你將參加你校英文廣播站舉辦的以“Life

in

the

Future”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。審題指導(dǎo)1.文體:________2.人稱:____________________3.時(shí)態(tài):____________說明文第一人稱和第三人稱一般將來時(shí)4.寫作要點(diǎn):①__________;②__________;③__________________;④__________交通方面住房方面機(jī)器人的使用方面我的感受思路點(diǎn)撥（溫馨提示：請先完成下面的寫作提綱）No

one

knows

what

the

future

will

be

like.Everyone

has

a

prediction

for

their

future

lives.flying

carsunder

the

seaon

other

planetshelp

do

easy

jobsMy

feelings小試身手Life

in

the

Future______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Although

no

one

knows

what

the

future

will

be

like,everyone

has

a

prediction

for

their

future

lives.

As

far

as

I

know,the

future

life

must

be

very

different

from

now.

To

begin

with,we

will

find

the

footprints

of

humans

anywhere,under

the

sea

or

on

other

planets.

Also,there

will

be

more

cars

flying

in

the

sky,taking

us

anywhere

interesting.

More

importantly,robots

will

play

a

part

in

our

lives

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________and

help

with

some

simple

and

boring

jobs.

Last

but

not

least,it’s

possible

for

people

to

have

more

free

time

to

relax.

I

think

the

future

will

be

better

and

better

and

people

will

live

a

happier

life.Writeyourarticleaccordingtotheinformationmentionedabove.Payattentiontoyourspellingandstructure.Becareful!BeginningBodyEndingIntroduction(Topic)

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Job:Ilove...,soIthinkIwillbecome.../IthinkIwillworkas.../Iwillbe...andIwillbeknownfor...Place:

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(Resolution&Feeling)IbelievethesedreamswillcometureaslongasI.../That’swhatIthinkabout.../Howinterestingmylifewillbe.../I’msureI’llhavea/an...lifeinthefuture.Howdoyoumakedreamsforthefuture?Let’ssummarizeNow,youcanexchangeyourwritingswithyourpartnerstocheckeachother’swriting.ChecklistSelf-evaluationPeer-evaluationTeacher-evaluationClearstructureTopicsentenceMorerelativeinformationRightlinkingwordsRightgrammarRightspellingGoodhandwritingGreatGoodTryharderWhatwillmylifebelikein20years?Ioftenthinkaboutit.Ilovehelpingothers,soIhopetobeadoctor.Iplantostudymedicineinatop-notchmedicalschool.Afterthat,I'llworkinabighospital,savingpatients'livesandrelievingtheirpains.Asadoctor,I'llliveinamoderncity.There,Icanmeetvariouspatientsandlearnfromdifferentmedicalcases.Inmyfreetime,I'lltakepartinmedicalvolunteeractivities,goingtopoorareastoofferfreemedicalcare.IbelievemydreamwillcometrueaslongasIstudyhardnowandkeepimprovingmymedicalskills.Forexample-1In20years,whatwillmylifebelike?Well,I'mreallyintotechnology,soIwanttobeasoftwareengineer.I'llstudycomputerscienceatafamousuniversityfirst.Then,I'llworkinahigh-techcompany,creatingusefulappsandsoftwaretomakepeople'sliveseasier.I'llliveinasmartcity,whereeverythingisconnectedbyadvancedtechnology.Duringmyfreetime,I