建議信考點(diǎn)要求考察形式2025年2024年2023年建議信選擇題非選擇題2025年北京卷：聯(lián)合國正面向全球青少年開展倡議征集活動2025年1月浙江卷：在校園內(nèi)用手機(jī)拍攝短視頻的現(xiàn)象,提出建議2024年北京卷：給外國好友Jim提建議：介紹中國的發(fā)展成就2023年新高考1卷和2卷：課后練習(xí)口語分組的建議2023年6月北京卷：“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動的建議考情分析一、往年真題特點(diǎn)1.話題緊扣生活與社會：常圍繞校園生活改進(jìn)（優(yōu)化食堂飲食、改善圖書館環(huán)境）、社會問題解決（減少交通擁堵、推廣垃圾分類）、個人發(fā)展困惑（學(xué)習(xí)方法提升、職業(yè)規(guī)劃選擇）等話題展開,要求考生結(jié)合實(shí)際提出可行建議。2.任務(wù)要求明確：題目通常設(shè)定寫信人身份（如學(xué)生、市民）和具體問題場景,明確要求考生分析問題并提出合理建議,部分題目還會限定建議數(shù)量或方向,確保寫作內(nèi)容不偏離主題。二、命題思路通過模擬現(xiàn)實(shí)中需要提出解決方案的場景,考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用英語分析問題、表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)和提出建議的能力。重點(diǎn)檢驗考生能否結(jié)合生活經(jīng)驗,用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言清晰闡述問題,并從不同角度提出切實(shí)可行的建議,體現(xiàn)英語在實(shí)際問題解決中的應(yīng)用價值。三、命題重點(diǎn)1.內(nèi)容的邏輯性與可行性：正文需包含問題描述、原因分析和具體建議,各部分邏輯緊密；建議要結(jié)合實(shí)際,具有可操作性,如針對“改善校園衛(wèi)生”,可提出“增加垃圾桶數(shù)量”“開展衛(wèi)生評比活動”等具體措施；合理使用連接詞（如Tobeginwith、Furthermore、Inconclusion）增強(qiáng)文章連貫性。2.語氣的恰當(dāng)性與針對性：根據(jù)收信人與寫信人的關(guān)系及身份差異,調(diào)整語言風(fēng)格和語氣。給平輩提建議可較直接、親切；給上級或機(jī)構(gòu)提建議則需更禮貌、委婉,體現(xiàn)尊重與專業(yè)性。復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)與備考策略一、復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)1.提升語言能力：積累多樣化的詞匯和句式,能夠根據(jù)不同話題靈活運(yùn)用,實(shí)現(xiàn)準(zhǔn)確、豐富的語言表達(dá)。2.強(qiáng)化邏輯思維：學(xué)會構(gòu)建清晰的文章結(jié)構(gòu),合理組織內(nèi)容,增強(qiáng)文章邏輯性與連貫性。3.提高任務(wù)完成能力：保證在考試中精準(zhǔn)把握題目要點(diǎn),完整、高效地完成寫作任務(wù)。二、備考策略1.積累專項素材：針對?？荚掝}（如環(huán)保、文化、校園生活）整理常用表達(dá)、名言警句和優(yōu)秀范文,建立個人素材庫；背誦經(jīng)典開頭、結(jié)尾及過渡句,提升寫作效率。2.真題模擬演練：分析近五年真題,總結(jié)命題規(guī)律與高頻考點(diǎn)；按照考試時間要求進(jìn)行限時訓(xùn)練,提升寫作速度與應(yīng)變能力；對照范文和評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),找出自身不足,針對性改進(jìn)。3.拓展視野與思維訓(xùn)練：關(guān)注時事熱點(diǎn)和生活中的各類問題,思考不同解決方案；閱讀英語新聞評論、建議類文章,學(xué)習(xí)他人分析問題和提出建議的思路與表達(dá)方式,拓寬寫作視角?？键c(diǎn)一寫作技巧知識點(diǎn)1命題規(guī)律建議信是作者就有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議,以便讓對方接受自己的想法、主張并解決有關(guān)問題。建議信可以寫給個人,就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法或觀點(diǎn)；也可以寫給某個組織或者機(jī)構(gòu),就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)等提出建議或忠告。這類信件通常結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,開篇會簡要介紹寫信的背景或目的,明確指出要討論的問題。主體部分則詳細(xì)闡述建議的內(nèi)容,包括問題的分析、具體的改進(jìn)措施或解決方案,以及這些建議的可行性和預(yù)期效果。知識點(diǎn)2寫作技能提升建議信要給出寫信的原因,建議的內(nèi)容,提出建議的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,語氣一定要得當(dāng),既要委婉禮貌,又要有說服力。一般來說,建議信可分為三個部分：（1)開頭；開門見山,簡要陳述事由,簡單介紹自己并陳述自己的觀點(diǎn),注意語氣。（2)主體；說明建議的內(nèi)容,對所提出的建議進(jìn)行分析、說明原因。這一部分注意要簡明扼要,目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。（3)結(jié)尾；對自己提出的建議簡單地做一小結(jié)并表達(dá)愿望?？键c(diǎn)二經(jīng)典必背知識點(diǎn)1常用詞匯1.give/offersb.someadvice(on) 給某人提建議2.asksb.foradvice 向某人征求意見3.asfollows 如下4.inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview 在我看來5.find..…h(huán)elpful/useful/beneficial 認(rèn)為……有用6.takepartin/participatein... 參加7.follow/take/adoptone'sadvice 采納某人的建議8.takesth.intoaccount/consideration 把……考慮在內(nèi)9.withregardto 關(guān)于；就10.putforward 提出11.inthisregard/inthisrespect 在這點(diǎn)上/在這方面12.sharesth.withsb. 與某人分享某事13.withtimegoingon 隨著時間的推移14.Befacedwith 面臨15.takesth.seriously 重視；認(rèn)真對待知識點(diǎn)2必背開頭段IamwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourspokenEnglish.我寫信是想就如何提高英語口語水平給你一些建議。Youaskedmeforadviceintheletterabout...andherearemysuggestions.Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideaifyoucould...你在信中問了我一些建議,關(guān)于……以下是我的建議。如果你能做到的話,我想這將是個好主意Withregardtotheproblemyoumentionedinyourlastletter,mysuggestionsareasfollows.關(guān)于你上一封信中提到的問題,我的建議如下。I'mmorethandelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...I'llmakesomesuggestionshere.我非常高興收到你的來信,詢問我關(guān)于……的建議。我在這里提一些建議。Ihavelearnedthatyouhavesometroublein...and1wouldliketogive/offeryouthefollowingsuggestions.我得知你在……方面有些困難,我想給你提如下一些建議。知識點(diǎn)3必背主題句Asahighschoolstudent,Inoticedthatmanystudentshadaseriesofhealthproblemsbecauseofirregulardiet.作為一名高中生,我注意到很多學(xué)生都因為飲食不規(guī)律而出現(xiàn)了一系列健康問題。Myfavouritesportsisropeskipping,becausenotonlycanIdoitathomeconvenientlybutalsoitcanhelptorefreshmeafterIgettiredfromdoinghomework.我最喜歡的運(yùn)動是跳繩,因為跳繩不僅可以方便地在家里做,而且可以幫助我在做完作業(yè)累了之后提神。Additionally,ItakedelightinvariousactivitiesinthereadingclubeveryFriday,whereIgetimmersedintheseaofliterature,greatlyimprovingmyliterarycompetence.此外,我喜歡每周五在閱讀俱樂部的各種活動,在那里我沉浸在文學(xué)的海洋里,大大提高了我的文學(xué)能力。Onlyifwetakeactiontoexercisecanwebehealthierandhealthierinthefuture.只有當(dāng)我們采取行動去鍛煉時,我們才能在未來變得更健康。Foronething,notonlydoestheoceanoffersusvariousofseafoodtoeat,butalsoitishometomanykindsofanimals.首先,海洋不僅為我們提供了各種各樣的海鮮可以吃,而且它也是多種動物的家園。Notonlydoesplayingbasketballbuildupmybodyandrelievestressfromstudy,butitalsopromotesfriendshipwithothers.打籃球不僅增強(qiáng)了我的體質(zhì),減輕了學(xué)習(xí)的壓力,而且增進(jìn)了與他人的友誼。Facedwiththechallengeofbeingdestroyed,missingorevenbeingstolen,traditionalChineserelicsareurgenttobeprotected.面對被銷毀、失蹤甚至被盜的挑戰(zhàn),中國傳統(tǒng)文物迫切需要得到保護(hù)。知識點(diǎn)4必背結(jié)尾句Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/proposalshelpful.我希望你現(xiàn)在會發(fā)現(xiàn)這些建議/建議會有所幫助。HereIaminthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtotheimprovedversionofourschoolEnglishPost.在此,我希望我的建議能夠為我們學(xué)校的《英語報》的改進(jìn)版增添精彩的一筆。Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.無論如何,我希望這些建議對你有所幫助。我會非常高興看到情況改善。Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work!無論你決定做什么,祝你學(xué)習(xí)/工作好運(yùn)!知識點(diǎn)5滿分模板必背（模版1）Inrecentdays,wehavetofacetheproblem____________A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,____________(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second,____________(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀).ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,____________(解決方法一).Foranother____________(解決方法二).Finally,____________(解決方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat____________(我的解決方法).（模版2）Dear______(稱謂)Itiscommontoseethat______(陳述現(xiàn)象).Notonly______,butalso______(現(xiàn)象的影響).I’mwritingtocallonusstudentsto______(呼吁).Firstly,wearesupposedto______(建議一).What’smore,itissuggestedthat______(建議二).Eventually,whateverpossibleit’sgoodto______(建議三).Suchmeasurescandefinitelymakeamarkedimprovementin______(在什么方面提高),wewouldlikeallofyoutoattachimportanceto______(主題)!Yoursincerely,LiHua考點(diǎn)三體悟真題與新考向知識點(diǎn)1真題演練1.2025年北京卷假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。聯(lián)合國正面向全球青少年開展倡議征集活動。你的外國好友Jim打算參加,為此發(fā)來郵件,就倡議內(nèi)容詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復(fù),內(nèi)容包括：

1.提出的建議;2.建議的理由。

提示詞：倡議proposal

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earJim,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.I'mmorethanwillingtoofferyousomesuggestionsontheproposal.Isuggestyoufocusonenvironmentalprotection.Youcanproposeacampaigntoencourageteenagersaroundtheworldtoreduceplasticwaste.Thereasonisthatplasticpollutionhasbecomeaseriousglobalproblem.Itnotonlyharmstheenvironmentbutalsoaffectsthehealthofanimalsandhumans.Bylaunchingthiscampaign,wecanmakeadifferenceandraisepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.I'mlookingforwardtoyourexcellentproposal.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇是回復(fù)朋友Jim關(guān)于提案建議的書信,兩篇范文分別圍繞“環(huán)?；顒印焙汀拔幕涣黜椖俊闭归_,符合應(yīng)用文寫作規(guī)范,內(nèi)容充實(shí)且邏輯清晰?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累樂意做：bewillingto→beeagerto提議：propose→putforward增強(qiáng)：enhance→strengthen打破刻板印象：breakdownstereotypes→dispelprejudices2.句式拓展原句：Youcanproposeacampaigntoencourageteenagersaroundtheworldtoreduceplasticwaste.拓展句：Itwouldbeadvisabletoproposeacampaignthatencouragesteenagersworldwidetoreduceplasticwaste,asthisissuehasreachedurgentproportions.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thereasonisthatplasticpollutionhasbecomeaseriousglobalproblem.（使用“thereasonisthat...”表語從句,清晰闡釋建議的核心依據(jù)）[高分句型2]Bylaunchingthiscampaign,wecanmakeadifferenceandraisepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.（用“by+動名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)說明行動方式,“makeadifference”短語增強(qiáng)說服力）2.2025年1月浙江卷你將參加英語課上的“一分鐘演講”活動。請你針對部分同學(xué)在校園內(nèi)用手機(jī)拍攝短視頻的現(xiàn)象寫一篇演講稿,內(nèi)容包括：(1)陳述看法;(2)提出建議。注意：(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。MyViewsonFilmingShortVideosonCampus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MyviewsonfilmingshortvideosoncampusGoodmorning,everyone!Today,I’dliketosharemythoughtsonfilmingshortvideosoncampus.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,filmingoncampushasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ontheonehand,it’sagreatwaytorecordbeautifulmomentsandexpresscreativity.Ontheotherhand,itmayaffectlearningandevendisturbothers.Therefore,Isuggestweshouldfilmatsuitabletimesandplacesandavoiddistractingclassmates.Let’smakeourcampusaharmoniousandinspiringenvironment.Thankyou!【導(dǎo)語】本篇是英語課“一分鐘演講”活動的演講稿,圍繞部分同學(xué)在校園內(nèi)拍攝短視頻的現(xiàn)象,闡述看法并提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累表達(dá)：express→convey影響：affect→impact干擾：disturb→interfere和諧的：harmonious→peaceful2.句式拓展原句：Ontheonehand,it’sagreatwaytorecordbeautifulmomentsandexpresscreativity.拓展句：Ontheonehand,it’sagreatwaythatcanbeusedtorecordbeautifulmomentsandconveycreativity.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Justaseverycoinhastwosides,filmingoncampushasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.（as引導(dǎo)方式狀語從句,生動形象地引出對校園拍攝短視頻現(xiàn)象的辯證看法）[高分句型2]Therefore,Isuggestweshouldfilmatsuitabletimesandplacesandavoiddistractingclassmates.（使用虛擬語氣“suggestsb.shoulddo”,明確提出合理建議,增強(qiáng)說服力）3.2024年6月北京卷假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的外國好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國成立75周年,他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國的發(fā)展成就,發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復(fù),內(nèi)容包括：(1)建議投稿內(nèi)容；(2)就以上建議簡要說明理由。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourarticle.Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlightsinthepastfewdecades.Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.Inaddition,youcanalsomentionChina’sroleinhelpingsolvingglobalissuessuchastheglobalwarming,offeringamorecomprehensiveview.Lookingforwardtoreadingyourarticle!Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫。外國好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國成立75周年,他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國的發(fā)展成就,要求考生給他回復(fù)郵件,就此給予他建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累很好的：great→wonderful成就：achievement→accomplishment建議：suggestion→advice此外：Inaddition→what’smore2.句式拓展原句：It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.拓展句：It’sgreattohearwhatyou’replanningtowriteaboutisChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlightsinthepastfewdecades.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句）【高分句型2】Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.（運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）4.2023年6月新高考1&2卷假定你是李華,外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組,讓大家課后練習(xí)口語,你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括；1.說明問題；2.提出建議。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyanI’mLiHuafromClass3.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作,要求考生給外教寫一封郵件,告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組,讓大家課后練習(xí)口語,你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建議：suggestion→advice選擇：choose→select2.句式拓展原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（運(yùn)用了省略句和who引導(dǎo)定語從句）5.2023年6月北京卷假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動,他發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復(fù),內(nèi)容包括：(1)活動形式；(2)活動內(nèi)容。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給好友Jim策劃的“綠色北京”社團(tuán)活動給出一些建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→tip提供：offer→provide開展：carryout→conduct主題：theme→topic2.句式拓展原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)6.2022年全國乙卷學(xué)校英文報正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)習(xí)活動狀況描述；2.簡單評論；3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文,要求考生使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿,對學(xué)生的英語學(xué)習(xí)活動狀況進(jìn)行描述并作簡單的評論,提出建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累缺乏：lack→shortage加強(qiáng)：strengthen→enhance各種各樣的：various→allkindsof就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展原句：However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.拓展句：However,thosewhochoosereadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語,that引導(dǎo)主語從句以及who引導(dǎo)的定語從句)【高分句型2】Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句)7.2022年6月北京卷假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你打算邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次關(guān)于英語寫作的線上經(jīng)驗交流。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括：1.建議交流的具體內(nèi)容及其原因；2.交流時間和其他相關(guān)事項。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearJim.How'severything?I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinetalkonEnglishwriting.Ourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganisation.Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?Thetalkwillbeaboutanhour,andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.Pleaseletmeknowwhichplatformyou'llbeusingItwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華邀請英國好友Jim開展線上英語寫作經(jīng)驗交流的電子郵件,內(nèi)容涵蓋建議交流內(nèi)容及原因、交流時間和相關(guān)事項,符合100詞左右的應(yīng)用文寫作要求?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累薄弱的：beweakin→bepoorat建議：suggestions→tips邏輯地：logically→coherently決定：decideon→confirm2.句式拓展原句：Ourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganisation.拓展句：Sinceourclassmatesoftenstrugglewithessaystructure,theyseemtobeweakinorganisationalskills.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?（使用“疑問詞+不定式”結(jié)構(gòu)作賓語,并列三個寫作痛點(diǎn),清晰呈現(xiàn)交流需求）[高分句型2]Thetalkwillbeaboutanhour,andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.（用and連接兩個分句,前半部分說明時長,后半部分體現(xiàn)對對方時間的尊重,語氣得體）[高分句型3]Itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.（使用it作形式主語,if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句,委婉提出互動請求,符合邀請信的禮貌原則）8.2021年6月全國乙卷你校將舉辦英語演講比賽,請你以Besmartonlinelearner寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽,內(nèi)容包括：分析優(yōu)勢及不足；提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.題目和首句以為你寫好。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】BesmartonlinelearnersJustliketheoldsayinggoes,"eachcoinhastwosides."Ontheonehand,providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.Ontheotherhand,whatwelearnonlineisn'tnecessarilywhatweneed,nottomentionitsconstantdamagetooureyes.Forme,onlinelearningis,afterall,justatool.It'snotthenewmethoditselfbutthepersonwhouseitthatreallymatters.Tobecomeasmartonlinelearner,notonlyshouldwecarefullychoosefromcountlessalternativeswemayface,butextraattentionneedstobeattachedwhenwetakelessonsonline.What'smore,onconditionthatwecouldapplywhatwelearnonlinetoourdailylife,onlinelearningwouldbemoremeaningful.Thanks,everyone.Hopeweallcouldbesmartonlinelearners.【導(dǎo)語】這篇發(fā)言稿屬于應(yīng)用文,以“Besmartonlinelearners”為主題,通過闡述線上學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)勢與不足,提出學(xué)習(xí)建議,旨在引導(dǎo)聽眾成為優(yōu)秀的在線學(xué)習(xí)者,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,觀點(diǎn)明確。【詳解】1.詞匯積累工具：tool→instrument選擇：choose→select2.句式拓展原句：Ontheonehand,providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.拓展句：Ontheonehand,sinceonlinelearningprovidesaneasyaccesstoamultitudeofexcellentlearningsources,itservesasavaluablehelpinghandforlearners.原句：What'smore,onconditionthatwecouldapplywhatwelearnonlinetoourdailylife,onlinelearningwouldbemoremeaningful.拓展句：Furthermore,ifwecaneffectivelyutilizetheknowledgeweacquireonlineinourdailylifesituations,onlinelearningwillundoubtedlybecomemoremeaningfulandpractical.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Justliketheoldsayinggoes,"eachcoinhastwosides."（引用諺語開篇,增強(qiáng)文章文化底蘊(yùn),自然引出主題,為下文論述做鋪墊）[高分句型2]Ontheonehand,providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語“providinganeasyaccessto...”作伴隨狀語,說明線上學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)勢,使句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,表達(dá)流暢）[高分句型3]It'snotthenewmethoditselfbutthepersonwhouseitthatreallymatters.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句結(jié)構(gòu),突出人的主觀能動性在在線學(xué)習(xí)中的關(guān)鍵作用,增強(qiáng)說服力）[高分句型4]Notonlyshouldwecarefullychoosefromcountlessalternativeswemayface,butextraattentionneedstobeattachedwhenwetakelessonsonline.（notonly位于句首引起部分倒裝,強(qiáng)調(diào)成為聰明在線學(xué)習(xí)者應(yīng)采取的措施,使句式富有變化,吸引聽眾）9.（2019北京卷）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游,發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。請你給他回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.交通出行；2.必備衣物。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearJim,I’mpleasedthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.IsuggestthatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.Tianjinwillbeyournextstop.Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,whereyoucanstayforaweek.Youcantakehigh-speedtrainstobothcities.Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sotakesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,要求給朋友寫回信。【詳解】紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華的英國好友Jim打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游,發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息。要求給他回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.交通出行；2.必備衣物。本文時態(tài)應(yīng)采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,用第一人稱和第二人稱來寫。文章可以分為三部分來寫：首先表達(dá)歡迎Jim來中國；然后交代交通出行和必備衣物；最后盼望朋友的到來。注意使用高級詞匯和句式,為文章增添色彩；注意使用連接詞、銜接詞,使文章自然、流暢。詞匯積累showyouaround帶你參觀；takehigh-speedtrainstobothcities坐高鐵到這兩個城市；takesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou帶上夏季服裝和雨傘；Lookingforwardtoyourarrival期待你的到來?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整,語言表述流暢。文章使用了幾個高分句型。thatyou’recomingtotourinChina.和thatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.是賓語從句。whereyoucanstayforaweek.是非限制性定語從句。10.【2019·天津卷】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津,英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動?；顒悠陂g,英方教師Chris將做一個有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見。請根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件:（1）你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；（2）選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；（3）希望從中有何收獲。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100：（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出、不計入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【參考范文】DearChris,I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighschool.Hearingthatyouwillbesenttoourschooltoparticipateinaone-weekcommunicationactivityonbehalfofourpartner-school,Ifeelexcitedtogivesomeadviceonthespeechaboutwesternart,whichwillbegivenbyyou.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Frommyperspective,amongallthethemesonwesternculturelikemusic,drawinganddancing,Iwouldliketohaveabetterunderstandingofmusic,foragreatnumberofmyclassmatesarefondofmusic.Toenhanceourknowledge,Iwouldappreciateitifyouaddsomeinformationaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofwesternmusic.Inaddition,someexcellentworksofmusicandtheintroductionofseveraldistinguishedmusicianswouldbeagoodwaytobroadenourhorizon.Anyway,Ican'twaittomeetyoufromthebottomofmyheart!Thankyouforyourtime!Yours,LiJin【導(dǎo)語】此篇郵件屬于應(yīng)用文,是李津就英方教師Chris將開展的西方藝術(shù)講座,向其表達(dá)自己期望的講座話題、原因、感興趣內(nèi)容及收獲期待,符合信息溝通類郵件的寫作需求。【詳解】1.詞匯積累參加：participatein→takepartin建議：advice→suggestions觀點(diǎn)：perspective→viewpoint杰出的：distinguished→eminent2.句式拓展原句：Hearingthatyouwillbesenttoourschooltoparticipateinaone-weekcommunicationactivityonbehalfofourpartner-school,Ifeelexcitedtogivesomeadviceonthespeechaboutwesternart,whichwillbegivenbyyou.拓展句：WhenIheardthatyouwillbesenttoourschooltotakepartinaone-weekcommunicationactivityonbehalfofourpartner-school,Iwasfilledwithexcitementandeagertogivesomeadviceonthespeechaboutwesternartthatyouw