高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)《成長類讀后續(xù)寫》語料教學(xué)設(shè)計主備人審核人第一部分寫作任務(wù)與參考范文任務(wù)一短文寫作肢體語言在日常交流中起著重要的作用，請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇英語短文介紹肢體語言，并給校英文報投稿。內(nèi)容包括：肢體語言的作用（如最強(qiáng)大的交際手段之一）；了解不同文化中肢體語言的重要性。注意：詞數(shù)80左右?！緟⒖挤段摹緽odylanguageisoneofthemostpowerfulmeansofmunication.Itplaysagreatroleinmunicatingwithothers.Whentalkingwithothers,wecannotonlyusewordsbutalsousefacialexpressionsandbodymovements.Bodylanguagevariesfromcountrytocountry.Asaresult,itisimportanttoknowthemeaningofgesturesandmovementsofaforeigncountry.Usingbodylanguageinacorrectwaywillmakeuseasilyunderstoodinaforeigncountry.Inaword,Ithinkitnecessarytolearnandusebodylanguageinourdailylife.任務(wù)二演講稿寫作假定你是學(xué)校學(xué)生會主席，現(xiàn)請你就肢體語言寫一篇演講稿，幫助師生了解常用的肢體語言及其含義。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式作答。【參考范文】Goodmorning,everyone.MynameisthechairmanoftheStudentUnion.Today,I'mgoingtotalkaboutbodylanguageonbehalfoftheschool.Asweallknow,bodylanguageisoneofthemosteffectivemethodsofexpressingourfeelingswhenitestomunication.Forexample,smilingisthemostuniversalexpressionofhappiness.Lookingawayfromapersonmeansshowingnointerestinthepersonorwhatheorshesays.However,notallculturesgreetpeopleinthesameway.Idobelievetheknowledgeofbodylanguagewillbeverybeneficialwhenwemunicatewithpeoplefromothercountries.Thankyouforyourlistening.任務(wù)三郵件寫作假定你是學(xué)校學(xué)生，你校英語角下周六將討論“中西方肢體語言差異”。請你寫一封郵件，邀請外國交換生參加，內(nèi)容包括：討論主題；時間與地點(diǎn)；你的期待。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。【參考范文】DearExchangeStudent,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoadiscussionofourschool’sEnglishCorner,whosethemeis“DifferencesinBodyLanguageBetweenWesternandChineseCultures”.p.m.p.m.heduled,thediscussionwillbeheldintheStudents’Centerfrom3:40p.m.to5:00p.m.nextSaturday.Wewouldlikeyoutoeandshareyourpointofviewaboutthetopic.Ibelievethediscussionwillincreaseourknowledgeaboutdifferentculturesanddeepenourfriendships.Hopeyou’llacceptmyinvitation.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,ASchoolStudent第二部分成長類核心素材庫一、心理描寫高級詞匯與句型（一）消極情緒（掙扎期）恐懼/緊張：Heartpoundedlikeadrum.（心如擂鼓）/Awaveofpanicwashedoverhim.（一陣恐慌席卷了他）/Hispalmsweresweatyandcold.（他手心冰冷，滿是汗水）between...and...stornbetween...and...（他在……和……之間掙扎）/Abattleragedinhismind.（內(nèi)心在進(jìn)行激烈的斗爭）自卑/絕望：Asenseofhelplessnessoverwhelmedme.（一股無助感淹沒了我）/Iwasonthevergeofgivingup.（我?guī)缀跻艞壛耍ǘ┓e極轉(zhuǎn)變（抉擇時刻）決心：Anewfoundcouragesurgedthroughhisveins.（一股新生的勇氣涌遍全身）/Hetookadeepbreath,summoningallhisdetermination.（他深吸一口氣，凝聚起所有的決心）/"Icandothis,"hewhisperedtohimself.（“我能行，”他對自己輕聲說）頓悟：Itdawnedonmethattruestrengthliesinfacingyourfears.（我突然明白，真正的力量在于面對恐懼）/Atthatmoment,Irealizedthatrunningawaywouldsolvenothing.（在那一刻，我意識到逃避解決不了任何問題）二、動作描寫鏈（讓成長“看得見”）（一）從退縮到前進(jìn)退縮：Shrankback（退縮）,loweredhishead（低下頭）,hesitated（猶豫）前進(jìn)：Straightenedhisback（挺直腰板）,steppedforwardfirmly（堅定地向前邁出一步）,squaredhisshoulders（挺起胸膛）（二）從沉默到發(fā)聲沉默：Voicetrembled（聲音顫抖）,wordsstuckinhisthroat（話語堵在喉嚨）發(fā)聲：Spokeinaclear,firmvoice（用清晰、堅定的聲音說）,foundhisvoice（找到了自己的聲音）（三）從接受幫助到提供幫助接受：Reliedon（依賴）,washelpedby（被……幫助）提供：Lentahelpinghand（伸出援手）,offeredhissupport（提供支持）,tooktheinitiativeto（主動去……）三、萬能亮句&主題升華句勇氣：Thatday,Ilearnedthatcourageisnottheabsenceoffear,butthetriumphoverit.（那天，我明白了勇氣不是沒有恐懼，而是戰(zhàn)勝了恐懼）責(zé)任：Aheavyweightseemedtoliftfrommyshoulders,replacedbyasenseofresponsibilityIhadneverknown.（仿佛一副重?fù)?dān)從肩上卸下，取而代之的是一種我從未體會過的責(zé)任感）自信：LookingatwhatIhadachieved,asmiletouchedmylips.Iwasnolongertheonewhodoubtedmyselfateveryturn.（看著自己取得的成就，我嘴角泛起微笑。我不再是那個處處懷疑自己的人了）理解：Forthefirsttime,Isawtheworldthroughtheireyes,andallmyangermeltedaway,replacedbyunderstanding.（第一次，我透過他們的眼睛看世界，我所有的憤怒都消散了，被理解所取代）四、個人成長后的升華句ItwasonthatverydaythatItrulyrealizedthevalueofsincerityandhonestyinfriendship.（在那一天，我真正意識到真誠和誠實在友誼中的價值）ItwasonthatverydaythatItrulyrealizedthemostimportantthinginlifeistospendtimewithfamily.（就在那一天，我真正意識到生命中最重要的事情就是和家人在一起）Itdawnedonmethattheaffectiontowardsourfamilyislikeatouchofgreentea,refreshingandheartwarming.（我突然感悟到，那份親情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，溫暖人心）Speechlessandhappy,sheheldherlovedonetightlyinherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.（她高興得說不出話來，把親人緊緊地抱在懷里，眼里噙滿了淚水）Eventually,everyonelearntauniversallessonthateveryonewantsanddeservestobetreatedwithrespect,dignityandlove.（最終，每個人都明白了一個普遍的做人道理——人人都希望得到別人的尊重、理解和關(guān)愛）IrealizedthatinnocasewouldIgiveup,especiallywhenintrouble.（我意識到在任何情況下，都不要放棄，尤其是遇到麻煩的時候）Thespecialexperienceislikeaneverlastingflower,bloomingintheriverofmymemories.（這個特殊經(jīng)歷就像一朵永恒的花朵，盛放在我記憶的長河里）Thisturnedouttobeanunforgettableexperience,whichwillneverfadeawayfrommymemory.（結(jié)果證明這是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，永遠(yuǎn)不會從我的記憶中消失）Withtheearlysunlightstreamingin,everyonewasbathedinloveandkindness.（清晨的陽光照進(jìn)來，每個人都沉浸在愛和善良中）第三部分讀后續(xù)寫個人成長語料梳理一、成長前的苦惱（負(fù)面情緒塑造）負(fù)面的心理描寫可以揭示人物在成長前的內(nèi)心世界，展現(xiàn)人物的性格、情感等，為后期成長過程埋下伏筆。（一）緊張MyheartbeatsoviolentlythatIfeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.（心跳如此劇烈，我感到如坐針氈）IwasabouttorespondwhenIfeltmytonguetiedandpalmssweating.（我正要回答時，感到舌頭打結(jié)，手掌開始出汗）（二）困惑Myheartskippedabeatanddisbeliefwashedoverme.（我的心為之一顫，充滿了懷疑）WhenIstoodonthestageinfrontofthelargeaudience,mymindwentblank.（站在舞臺上面對大批觀眾時，我的頭腦一片空白）（三）憂慮IwassonervousabouttheEnglishtestthatIlayawakehalfthenight,worrying.（我對英語考試感到如此緊張，以至于大半夜都睡不著覺，心神不寧）Onhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.（一聽到這個壞消息，她被一股悲傷之情籠罩，忍不住失聲痛哭）（四）孤獨(dú)Awaveoflonelinesswashedoverme.（一陣孤獨(dú)感席卷了我的全身）Coldwithnohopeforwarmth,Ifeltlikedrowninginacrowdofpeople.（我感到又冷又無取暖的希望，仿佛在人群中窒息）（五）絕望Hearingthenews,hewassodesperatethathedrownedhissadnessinwine.（聽到這個消息，他極度絕望，借酒消愁）Desperateandhelpless,shekneltdown,withtearsofregretstreamingdownhercheeks.（絕望而無助的她跪了下來，悔恨的淚水順著面頰流了下來）（六）疲憊Exhausted,Islidintobedandfellfastasleep.（我精疲力竭地躺在床上，很快就睡著了）Shefeltexhaustedandsatbythestream,restingherachingfeet.（她感到精疲力竭，坐在溪邊休息著疼痛的雙腳）（七）羞愧Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.（她感到非常羞愧，甚至能感覺到臉頰發(fā)燙）Shefeltsoashamedofherfoolishbehaviorthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.（她為自己的愚蠢行為感到萬分羞愧，臉頰火辣辣的）二、成長中（努力掙扎應(yīng)對+反思）（一）驚訝Scaredandshocked,shecouldn'tsayaword.（她又害怕又震驚，一句話也說不出來）Raisinghereyebrowsinsurprise,shefroze,asifrootedtotheground.（她驚訝地?fù)P起眉毛，僵在原地，仿佛生了根一般）（二）反思Ireflectedonmyinitialdoubtsandhesitations.（我反思了自己最初的疑慮和猶豫不決）“That’snottherightway.Patience,patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearsaftertheyleft.（“這不是正確的方式。耐心，要有耐心，”他們離開后，一個聲音在我耳邊回響）（三）希望Asparkofhopekindledintheirhearts.（他們心中燃起了希望的火花）Lookingupatthem,theireyessparkledwithhopeanddetermination.（抬頭望著他們，眼里閃爍著希望與堅定的光芒）（四）喜悅Hewasinhighspirits,feelinglikebeingontopoftheworld.（他情緒高漲，仿佛站在了世界之巔）Shelaughed,hereyestwinklingwithexcitement.（她笑了起來，眼睛因興奮而閃閃發(fā)光）（五）感動Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shethankedthemagainandagain.（她淚流滿面，再三向他們道謝）Iwasdeeplymovedbywhattheyhaddone,tearsrollingdownuncontrollably.（我被他們的所作所為深深打動，淚水情不自禁地奪眶而出）三、成長后的升華（感悟+感激+升華）（一）感激Ilookedatthem,tearsofloveandgratitudewellingupinmyeyes.（我看著他們，愛與感激的淚水奪眶而出）“Thankyou,”Ireplied,withamixtureofgratitudeandexcitement.（“謝謝你，”我?guī)е屑づc興奮的心情回應(yīng)道）（二）感悟IknewforsurethateverytimeIlostpatienceinthefuture,Iwouldrememberthosevaluablewords.（我確信，將來每當(dāng)我失去耐心時，都會想起那些珍貴的話語）ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadtrulyrealizedthemeaningofthatgift—patience.（這是我第一次真正體會到那份禮物的意義——耐心）Itdawnedonmethatoneshouldsticktotheirdreamnomatterwhathappens.（我突然意識到，無論發(fā)生什么事，都要堅持自己的夢想）Isaid,“Thankyouforteachingmehowtopursuemydreamthroughpracticalefforts.”（我說：“謝謝你教會我如何通過實際行動去追求夢想”）第四部分個人成長類主旨升華句句型一：It’s...that...（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）Itwashisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatfinallymadesomethingextraordinaryhappen.（正是他那顆勇敢的心和堅定的信念，才使得一些不同尋常的事情最終發(fā)生）Itwassomeoneimportantwhotaughtmethatweshouldnevertakeforgrantedthethingsthatmostdeserveourgratitude.（是一位重要的人教會我，我們永遠(yuǎn)不應(yīng)把那些最值得感激的事情視為理所當(dāng)然）句型二：fromthenon+行動ThereisnodoubtthatImaturedsignificantlyandgainedadeepersenseofselffromthatdayon.（毫無疑問，從那天起，我變得成熟了許多，對自我也有了更深的認(rèn)知）Thisunforgettableexperiencehastaughtmethatsuchrandomactsofkindnesshaveaprofoundinfluenceonme.（這次難忘的經(jīng)歷讓我明白，這種不經(jīng)意的善舉對我有著深遠(yuǎn)的影響）句型三：Itdawnedonsb.that...Itdawnedonmethatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.（我恍然大悟，一個簡單的舉動竟能讓世界變得如此美好）Itsuddenlyoccurredtomethat“Oneshouldsticktotheirdreamnomatterwhathappens.”（我突然意識到“無論發(fā)生什么事情，一個人都應(yīng)該堅持自己的夢想”）句型四：Only...（倒裝句）Onlywhenweopenupthedoorofourheartcanwebebathedinthebrilliantsunshineoffriendship.（只有當(dāng)我們打開心扉，才能沐浴在友誼的燦爛陽光中）Onlybytakingthefirststepcanwediscovernewpossibilities.（只有邁出第一步，我們才能發(fā)現(xiàn)新的可能）句型五：非謂語動詞AsIgrewolder,Irealizedtheimportanceofsettinggoalsandthevalueofworkinghardtoachievethem.（隨著年齡的增長，我意識到設(shè)定目標(biāo)的重要性以及為實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)而努力奮斗的價值）Heusedtobeafraidofspeakinginpublic,butnowhecanconfidentlysharehisideas.（他過去很害怕在公共場合發(fā)言，但現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)能自信地分享自己的想法了）Aftercontinuouspractice,shewasfinallyabletoplaythepianoconfidentlyinfrontofanaudience.（經(jīng)過持續(xù)的練習(xí)，她終于能夠在觀眾面前自信地彈奏鋼琴了）Thoseinspiringwordsignitedconfidenceinhisheart,makinghimnolongerafraidoffailure.（那些鼓舞人心的話語點(diǎn)燃了他心中的自信，讓他不再害怕失?。┚湫土喝f能主題句Thespecialexperienceislikeaneverlastingflower,bloomingintheriverofmymemories.（這個特殊經(jīng)歷就像一朵永恒的花朵，盛放在我記憶的長河里）Thisturnedouttobeanunforgettableexperience,whichwillneverfadeawayfrommymemory.（結(jié)果證明這是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，永遠(yuǎn)不會從我的記憶中消失）Withtheearlysunlightstreamingin,everyonewasbathedinloveandkindness.（清晨的陽光照進(jìn)來，每個人都沉浸在愛和善良中）第五部分個人成長類詞塊梳理overefear戰(zhàn)勝恐懼persisttotheend堅持到底selfbreakthrough自我突破takethefirststep邁出第一步fullofconfidence充滿信心embracechallenges迎接挑戰(zhàn)positivemindset積極心態(tài)thejourneyofgrowth成長的旅程inspiringstory激勵人心的故事pushone’slimits挑戰(zhàn)自我極限achievedreams實現(xiàn)夢想thevalueofresilience韌性的價值learnfrommistakes從錯誤中吸取教訓(xùn)stepoutoffortzone走出舒適區(qū)broadenhorizons拓寬視野discoverpassions發(fā)現(xiàn)熱愛gothroughsetbacks經(jīng)歷挫折givebacktothemunity回饋社區(qū)helpothersinneed幫助有需要的人buildupconfidence增強(qiáng)自信第六部分個人成長類句式仿寫句式一：so+情感形容詞+was+主語+that…示例：Sosadwasshethatshecriedquietly.（她太難過了，以至于悄悄哭了）仿寫1：她對演唱會如此興奮，以至于一整晚都睡不著覺。Soexcitedwassheabouttheconcertthatshecouldn’tfallasleepthewholenight.仿寫2：老人被陌生人的幫助感動得如此之深，以至于不停地說著“謝謝”。Somovedwastheoldmanbythestranger’shelpthathekeptsaying“thankyou”.句式二：nosoonerhad+主語+done+than+…示例：Nosoonerhadheopenedthedoorthanhisdogranout.（他剛打開門，他的狗就跑了出去）仿寫1：他剛一結(jié)束演講，觀眾就爆發(fā)出熱烈的掌聲。Nosoonerhadhefinishedhisspeechthantheaudiencebrokeintowarmapplause.仿寫2：他剛讀到信里的壞消息，眼睛就紅了。Nosoonerhadhereadthesadnewsintheletterthanhiseyesturnedred.句式三：Itdawnedonhimthat…示例：Itdawnedonhimthatthey’dbeenhelpinghimallalong—hefroze.（他突然意識到，他們一直在默默幫他——整個人都愣住了）仿寫1：他突然意識到自己贏了——眼睛一下子亮了起來。Itdawnedonhimthathe’dwon—hiseyeslitup.仿寫2：他突然意識到“無論發(fā)生什么事情，一個人都應(yīng)該堅持自己的夢想”。Itsuddenlyoccurredtohimthat“Oneshouldsticktotheirdreamnomatterwhathappens.”第七部分個人成長類片段訓(xùn)練片段一本文以情感發(fā)展為線索展開，講述了作者從期待與好友分在同一組到意外被分配到一個由“不合群”的同學(xué)組成的小組，并最終發(fā)現(xiàn)這個小組成員的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和價值的過程。IheldbacktearsasIwalkeduptotheteacher.“Idon'tunderstand,”1.（我用顫抖的聲音對她說）.“Iwassupposedtobeingroupthreewithmygoodfriend.”Theteacherlookedatmegently.“Iknowwhatyouwereexpecting,butIwantyoutotrythis.You’lllearnalotfromit.”2.（我不情愿地和其他同學(xué)加入了他們的小組）.Asthedayswenton,3.（我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己很難融入他們）.Wehadpletelydifferentinterestsandwaysofdoingthings.Bymidweek,Ifeltmyselfenjoyingthepanyofthesethreepeerswhoseemedtobemisfits.4.（我們發(fā)現(xiàn)彼此實際上有很多共同之處）.Onesharedhisloveforsoccer,anothershowedmeherpassionforart,andthethirdintroducedmetoherinterestinscience.5.（令人驚訝的是，他們原來是我見過的最體貼的人）.What'smore,ouruniqueperspectivesontheprojectaddedafreshdimensiontoourpresentation.6.（我突然意識到，和形形色色的人共處一個團(tuán)隊，會是一段受益匪淺的經(jīng)歷）.【參考答案】IsaidtoherinatremblingvoiceReluctantly,IjoinedtheotherstudentsintheirgroupIfoundmyselfstrugglingtofitinwiththemWediscoveredthatweactuallyhadalotinmonSurprisingly,theyturnedouttobethemostcaringpeopleIhadevermetItdaw