讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)模版練習(xí)（人與社會(huì)：矛盾沖突，冷靜思考）一、復(fù)習(xí)寫(xiě)作框架：“負(fù)轉(zhuǎn)正”十句法Para1:提示句Para2:提示句S1：銜接1S6：銜接3S2：負(fù)：情緒、場(chǎng)景S7：情緒S3：轉(zhuǎn)：個(gè)人：想到|看到|聽(tīng)到互動(dòng)：動(dòng)作（拍摸抱）+語(yǔ)言S8：動(dòng)作S4：正（心理）：S9：結(jié)局S5：正（行為）：/銜接2S10：升華二、寫(xiě)作材料Tirednesswasoverwhelming(壓倒)meafterwork;yet,themallIhadjustenteredwasfullofenergy.PeoplewerefocusedonsecuringtheirlunchforthedayandIfinallymanagedtoarriveattherestaurantIwaslookingfor.Outoftheblue,apersonsuddenlyknockedintome!Mybelongingsfellalloverthefloortogetherwithmyblackbag.“Whydidthishavetohappen?”Iplained,startingtoregretingtothemallasIbentdowntopickupmybag.Atthatmoment,ayoungteenagerspottedme.Whenhesawthecontentsofmybagonthefloor,hehurriedover.Tomysurprise,hebentdownandstartedputtingmybelongingsbackintomybag.Hewashelpingme!Oncehewasdone,hepassedmybagbacktomeandgentlysaid,“Hereyougo,ma’am.Ibelievetheseareyourthings.”“Thanksalot,”Iresponded.AsIwatchedhimdisappearintothecrowd,Ismiled.Whilewaitingformyqueuenumberattherestaurant,Iwasshoppinginanearbykeychainshopwhensomethingcaughtmyeye.Anadorable,tinymodelofababypenguinshonebeforeme.“That’ssocute!Ishouldbuythat!”Iexclaimed.Withthetinypenguininonehand,Iwalkedovertothecounter.OnceIplacedthekeychainonthecounter,theladypleasantlyinformedme,“Thatwillbethreedollarsplease.”Nodding,Ireachedintomybagtotakeoutmywallet.However,mywalletwasnowheretobefound!Mysmileimmediatelyturnedupsidedown.Nervously,Istartedpacingbackandforth.Suddenly,apictureoftheteenagerappearedinmymind.“Itmustbehim!”Ishouted.Abandoningthekeychain,IraninthedirectionIhadseentheteenagerwalkingtowards.Amazingly,Ifoundhim!AsImadeabeelineforhim,Ishoutedinasharptone,“Stophim!He’sathief!”Hearingmycry,flummoxedfacesturnedtowardsmeasafewothersquicklyrestrained(控制)theteenagertomakesurehecouldnotescape.根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容，接著兩段的首句來(lái)續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容，續(xù)寫(xiě)字?jǐn)?shù)約為150詞：Para1:“What?I’venevermittedacrime!”theteenagerrespondedwithashockedexpression....a2:Hearinghiswords,Ireachedintomybackpocketand...mywalletwasindeedinthere.三、語(yǔ)料積累動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)撞到某人身上彎腰撿起某物匆忙趕來(lái)把某物遞回給某人消失在人群中注意到某物（引起注意）丟下某物朝著某個(gè)方向跑去pacebackandforthmakeabeelineforsb控制某人情緒狀態(tài)1.overwhelmingtiredness2.驚訝的表情3.開(kāi)始后悔做4.翻轉(zhuǎn)、轉(zhuǎn)換銜接1.outoftheblue語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)exclaimplain高興地告知尖銳的語(yǔ)氣四、練習(xí)應(yīng)用：以“矛盾爆發(fā)→情緒升級(jí)→轉(zhuǎn)折觸發(fā)→冷靜解決→主題升華”為情節(jié)主線，聚焦人際沖突中的誤解化解與理性思考。句子功能與情節(jié)走向?qū)懽魅蝿?wù)與構(gòu)思指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容描寫(xiě)參考S1：銜接1（負(fù)：震驚/對(duì)峙）接續(xù)提示句，描寫(xiě)沖突雙方的即時(shí)反應(yīng)，強(qiáng)化矛盾張力核心詞匯：：tremble（顫抖）,glare（怒視）,snap（厲聲說(shuō)）,protest（辯解）,accuseaccusation（指控）.短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：standrootedtothespotinshock（震驚地呆立當(dāng)場(chǎng)）eyeslockinatensestare（雙眼在緊張的對(duì)視中交匯）alookofdisbeliefcrossesone’sface（臉上掠過(guò)難以置信的神情）voicesriseinprotest（抗議的聲音越來(lái)越大）S2:負(fù)(情緒/場(chǎng)景)刻畫(huà)當(dāng)事人的負(fù)面情緒（憤怒、焦慮、委屈）或圍觀者反應(yīng)，烘托沖突氛圍 核心詞匯：anger,wrong（委屈）,worry,annoyance,whisper短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：angersurgesthroughsb（某人怒火中燒）awaveofwrongwashesoversb（某人內(nèi)心涌起一陣委屈）onlookersgatherinacircle,whispering（圍觀者圍成圈......）tensionhangsthickintheair（空氣中彌漫著濃重的緊張氣氛）S3:轉(zhuǎn)(互動(dòng)與決策)通過(guò)語(yǔ)言對(duì)話或細(xì)節(jié)觀察，出現(xiàn)打破誤解的關(guān)鍵線索（回憶、物證、他人提醒）核心詞匯：mention,remember（記起）,notice,pointout,explain短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：sb’swordsjog/evokeone’smemory（某人的話喚起了...記憶）suddenlyspotacluethat...（突然發(fā)現(xiàn)一條關(guān)于……的線索）“Waitaminute,”sbexclaims,“...”（“等一下，”某人喊道，）assbspeaks,adetaildawnsonsb（隨著某人的講述，某人突然想起一個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)）S4:正(心理轉(zhuǎn)變)描寫(xiě)當(dāng)事人從沖動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)為冷靜，開(kāi)始理性審視事件核心詞匯：calm,think,reconsider,reason（v.理性分析）短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：asenseofcalmreplacesanger（冷靜取代了憤怒）forceoneselftothinklogically（強(qiáng)迫自己邏輯思考）stepbacktoassessthesituation（退一步評(píng)估局勢(shì)）regretbeginstocreepin（懊悔之情開(kāi)始悄然浮現(xiàn)）S5:正(行為/銜接2)線索、停止指控等行動(dòng)，為第二段化解矛盾鋪墊核心詞匯：check,prove（證實(shí)）,apologize（道歉）,stop,search短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：hurrytoconfirmsth（急忙去核實(shí)某事）reachfor/riflethrough...tofind...（伸手去拿/匆匆翻找..尋找...）mumbleanapologyforthemistake（為自己的錯(cuò)誤低聲道歉）Para2:提示句（真相浮現(xiàn)，如發(fā)現(xiàn)物證、回憶起細(xì)節(jié)等）S6:銜接3(負(fù)轉(zhuǎn)正)接續(xù)提示句，明確真相，強(qiáng)化“誤解”的反轉(zhuǎn)感核心詞匯：confirm（確認(rèn)）,realize,admit,makeclear（澄清）短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：Itturnsoutthat...（結(jié)果證明……）Onlythendosbrealize...（倒裝，直到那時(shí)某人才意識(shí)到……）Thetruthhitssblikeatonofbricks（真相如巨石般砸向某人）Alldoubtsareclearedup（所有疑慮都煙消云散）S7:情緒(正面情感)描寫(xiě)當(dāng)事人的愧疚、感激、釋然等情緒，體現(xiàn)態(tài)度轉(zhuǎn)變核心詞匯：guilt（愧疚）,relief,regret，humiliation（恥辱）短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：beoverwhelmedwithguiltfor...（因……而滿(mǎn)懷愧疚）awaveofreliefwashesoverbothsides（雙方都如釋重負(fù)）feeldeeplygratefultosbfor...（因……而對(duì)某人深感感激）remorsegnawsatone’sheart（懊悔啃噬著某人的心）S8:動(dòng)作/互動(dòng)（情感深化）通過(guò)道歉、補(bǔ)償、握手等具體動(dòng)作，修復(fù)人際關(guān)系核心詞匯：apologize,makeup（彌補(bǔ)）,forgive（原諒）,shakehands短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：extendasincereapologytosb（向某人致以誠(chéng)摯的道歉）sb’seyessoftenwithforgiveness（某人眼神因原諒而變得溫和）shakehandsfirmlytomendtherift（緊緊握手以修復(fù)裂痕） S9:結(jié)局(明確狀態(tài))交代沖突解決后的局面，雙方關(guān)系回歸平和。核心詞匯：makeup（和好）,leave,continue,peaceful（平和的）短語(yǔ)/結(jié)構(gòu)：partongoodterms（友好道別）castaglanceof（投以...的眼神）thecrowddisperseswithsmiles（人群微笑著散去）harmonyisrestored（和諧重新回歸）S10:升華(點(diǎn)明主題)提煉事件背后的道理，強(qiáng)調(diào)冷靜、信任、溝通的重要性核心詞匯：thought（思考）,wisdom（智慧）,patience（耐心）,understanding（理解）,caution（謹(jǐn)慎）短語(yǔ)