高三上學(xué)期期中英語《作文專項(xiàng)》教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)一、選定修繕對象高級短語castmyvotefor（投票支持，選擇）remendrenovating（建議修繕）opttoupgrade（選擇升級）that...bethat...berefurbished（提議修繕……）advocatetherenovationof（主張修繕）giveprioritytotheupgradeof（優(yōu)先考慮升級）suggestinvestingintherefurbishmentof（建議投資修繕）makeacaseforchoosingtorenew（為選擇更新……進(jìn)行論證）高級句子Aftercarefulconsiderationofthecurrentsituationoftheschool’sfacilities,Ifirmlyremendrenovatingthelibrary,asitisthespiritualcoreofthecampusandinurgentneedofimprovement.（在仔細(xì)考量學(xué)校設(shè)施的現(xiàn)狀后，我堅(jiān)決建議修繕圖書館，因?yàn)樗切@的精神核心，且亟待改善。）Fromtheperspectiveofallstudents’longtermdevelopment,Iopttoupgradethelaboratory,whichisessentialforscientificresearchandpracticallearning.（從全體學(xué)生的長遠(yuǎn)發(fā)展角度出發(fā)，我選擇升級實(shí)驗(yàn)室，它對科研和實(shí)踐學(xué)習(xí)至關(guān)重要。）Havingweighedtheneedsofdifferentgradelevels,Iproposethatthegymnasiumberefurbished,sincephysicalhealthisthefoundationofacademicprogress.（在權(quán)衡不同年級的需求后，我提議修繕體育館，因?yàn)樯眢w健康是學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)步的基礎(chǔ)。）二、選擇的理由高級短語catertothediverseneedsof（滿足……的多樣化需求）facilitateacademicresearch（促進(jìn)學(xué)術(shù)研究）booststudents’physicalwellbeing（提升學(xué)生的身體健康）beindispensablefor（對……不可或缺）lagbehindthetimes（落后于時代）enhancethelearningexperience（提升學(xué)習(xí)體驗(yàn)）fosterapassionforscience（培養(yǎng)對科學(xué)的熱情）serveasahubfor（作為……的中心）高級句子Thelibrarycurrentlylacksmodernreadingfacilitiesandupdatedbookcollections,whichfailstocatertothediverselearningneedsofstudentsinthedigitalage;thus,itsrenovationiscrucialtoenhancethelearningexperience.（圖書館目前缺乏現(xiàn)代化的閱讀設(shè)施和更新的藏書，無法滿足數(shù)字時代學(xué)生多樣化的學(xué)習(xí)需求，因此修繕?biāo)鼘μ嵘龑W(xué)習(xí)體驗(yàn)至關(guān)重要。）Thelaboratory’soutdatedequipmentandlimitedexperimentalspacehavebeeabottleneckforscientificexploration,andupgradingitwillnotonlyfacilitateacademicresearchbutalsofosterapassionforscienceamongstudents.（實(shí)驗(yàn)室陳舊的設(shè)備和有限的實(shí)驗(yàn)空間已成為科學(xué)探索的瓶頸，升級它不僅能促進(jìn)學(xué)術(shù)研究，還能培養(yǎng)學(xué)生對科學(xué)的熱情。）Thegymnasium’swornoutsportsgearandnarrowactivityareascannolongermeetstudents’demandforphysicalexercise,anditsrefurbishmentwilleffectivelyboostphysicalwellbeingandenrichcampuslife.（體育館破舊的運(yùn)動器材和狹小的活動區(qū)域已無法滿足學(xué)生的運(yùn)動需求，修繕?biāo)鼘⒂行嵘眢w健康，豐富校園生活。）三、給出改進(jìn)建議高級短語installadvancedequipment（安裝先進(jìn)設(shè)備）expandthefunctionalarea（拓展功能區(qū)域）updatetheresourcedatabase（更新資源庫）introduceinteractiveteachingfacilities（引入互動教學(xué)設(shè)施）optimizethespatiallayout（優(yōu)化空間布局）addspecializedzones（增設(shè)專項(xiàng)區(qū)域）equip...withdigitaldevices（為……配備數(shù)字設(shè)備）organizeregularmaintenance（安排定期維護(hù)）高級句子Forthelibrary,Isuggestinstallingelectronicreadingscreensandselfserviceborrowingmachinestomodernizeitsservices,andexpandingthestudyareatocreatequietzonesforindividuallearningandgroupdiscussionareasforcollaborativeprojects.（對于圖書館，我建議安裝電子閱讀屏和自助借閱機(jī)來實(shí)現(xiàn)服務(wù)現(xiàn)代化，同時拓展學(xué)習(xí)區(qū)域，設(shè)置個人學(xué)習(xí)的安靜區(qū)和合作項(xiàng)目的小組討論區(qū)。）Toupgradethelaboratory,wecouldreplaceoutdatedinstrumentswithadvancedonesandaddadedicatedinnovationzonewherestudentscanconductindependentscientificexperimentsandresearchprojects.（為升級實(shí)驗(yàn)室，我們可以用先進(jìn)儀器替換陳舊設(shè)備，并增設(shè)專門的創(chuàng)新區(qū)，讓學(xué)生能開展自主的科學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)和研究項(xiàng)目。）Regardingthegymnasium,myproposalistoreplacewornoutsportsequipmentandoptimizethespatiallayoutbydividingitintozonesforballgames,fitnesstrainingandindoorsports,whichwillbetteracmodatedifferentsportsactivities.（關(guān)于體育館，我的建議是更換破舊的運(yùn)動器材，同時優(yōu)化空間布局，劃分出球類運(yùn)動區(qū)、體能訓(xùn)練區(qū)和室內(nèi)運(yùn)動區(qū)，更好地適配各類體育活動。）四、作文題目VI.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.Theschoolhasreceivedaspecialfundfortherenovationandupgradingofoneofthefollowingfacilities:1.Gymnasium;2.Library;3.Laboratory.Theschoolissolicitingopinionsfromstudents.Supposeyouareastudentoftheschool,pleasewritealettertotheprincipal.Yourlettermustinclude:Whichfacilityyouchoosetorenovate;Thereasonsforyourchoice;Suggestionsonhowtoimproveit.五、范文賞析LettertothePrincipalDearPrincipal,I’mastudentoftheschool.Havingcarefullyconsideredthethreefacilityrenovationoptions,Ifirmlyremendrenovatingthelibrary,asitistheheartofthecampusandinurgentneedofanupgradetomeetmodernlearningdemands.Thelibrarycurrentlylagsfarbehindthedigitalage:itsbookcollectionisoutdated,andtherearenoelectronicreadingdevicesorselfserviceborrowingsystems.Asahubforacademicgrowth,itfailstocatertostudents’diverselearningneeds—welackquietindividualstudyspacesandcollaborativediscussionareasalike.Arenovatedlibrarywillnotonlyenhancethelearningexperiencebutalsofosteradeeperloveforreadingandresearchamongallstudents.Fortherenovation,Isuggesttwokeyimprovements.First,updatethebookcollectionwithmorecontemporaryliteratureandacademicresources,andinstallelectronicreadingscreensandselfserviceborrowingmachinestomodernizeservices.Second,optimizethespatiallayoutbydividingthelibraryintoaquietstudyzoneforindividualworkandagroupdiscussionzonewithmultimediafacilitiesforcollabo