2026屆新高考英語(yǔ)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫JanetLeadinEnjoyabeautifulsong.

一壺漂泊浪跡天涯難入喉流浪太苦了你走之后酒暖回憶思念瘦

好想你，我瘦了水向東流時(shí)間怎么偷

時(shí)間過的太快了花開就一次成熟我卻錯(cuò)過

我錯(cuò)過了唯一的機(jī)會(huì)Whichoneisbetter?Howtomakeyourdescriptionvivid?Show，don'ttellVersion1:

Shefeltcold.Version2:

Shepulledhercollarup,tightenedherscarf,andturnedherfaceawayfromthebitingwind.

Tell是直接陳述結(jié)論，而Show則把讀者拉到你描述的場(chǎng)景當(dāng)中，通過故事細(xì)節(jié)的展示，讓讀者自己得出結(jié)論。ReadandCompareTellShowWhatisShow，Dont'tell?Showmeansgivethereadersactions,thoughts,senses,andfeelingsratherthansimpledescriptions.How？Shewalkedtothewindow.Sheslippedoutofbedandtiptoedtothewindow.她溜下床，躡手躡腳地走到窗戶旁邊。Skill1：ChoosespecificVerbs用精準(zhǔn)動(dòng)詞代替籠統(tǒng)動(dòng)詞Howtoshow(1)Allofthewordsbelowcantaketheplaceofsaid,buttheyareusedunderdifferentconditions.Choosetheproperwordstofillintheblanks.TheMathTestAsthetestbegan,Mikeleanedoverto_________,"I'mstuck.”"Focus,"Tom

mutteredback.Minuteslater,Mikehadto_______,"Tellmetheanswer”"No,"Tom________firmly."Please,"Mikebeganto______,"I'llfailifyoudon’ttellme."Tomstartedto___________,"it'swrong!”Suddenly,theteacherstoodoverthem,asking"Isthereaproblem?”Miketriedto________,"Iwasjust...askingforapencil."askbegexplainreplywhispercomplainwhisperaskrepliedbegcomplainexplain

低語(yǔ)詢問回答

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解釋

想要增添“讀后續(xù)寫”的表達(dá)效果，特別要注意避免使用泛泛而談的抽象詞，應(yīng)該多使用具體詞匯。Tell

：HeiseatingLatiao.Show：Hetorethepackage,squeezedoutonestrip,andtookabigbite.Howtoshow(2)

Skill2:BreakdownactiontoformactionchainHewasdisappointedtoseethetestpaper.

看到試卷

He_______________________quickly,______thescore,and_____

thetableindisappointment.如何分解動(dòng)作：掃視試卷看到成績(jī)捶打課桌scannedthetestpaperspottedpoundedMomspankedme.指出錯(cuò)誤媽媽打我嚴(yán)肅的看著我輕輕的打了我Mom_________meseriously,____________

mymistake,and_________

megentlyasalesson.staredatpointedoutspanked畫面：下車動(dòng)作拆解：收拾行李，起身，下車He

hisluggage,

fromthechairandthen________thecarexcitedly.pickeduprosegotoffScene:跳水救人Henryjumpedintotheriverandsaved

Robert.When

the“Help!”,Henry

theriverside,

________hisclothesand

thewaterwithouthesitation.He

Robertjustashewassinkingthelasttime.Bygreateffort,andwithmuchdangertohimself,hefinally_________Roberttotheshore.hearingdashedtotookoffjumpedintoreachedpulled/draggedWatchavideoclip

文本分析Itriedtoshakeheroff,butshejustclampedontightandyankedmealong,saying,"Comeon!"Mymomcameoutofthehouseandimmediatelygottheworld’scomplexlookonherface."Well,hello,"shesaystoJuli."Hi!"I'mstilltryingtopullfree,butthegirl'sgotmeinadeathgrip.Mymom'sgrinning,lookingatourhandsandmyredface."Andwhat'syourname,honey?""JuliannaBaker.Iliverightoverthere,"shesays,pointingwithherunoccupiedhand."Well,Iseeyou'vemetmyson,"shesays,stillgrinningaway.

FinallyIbreakfreeanddotheonlymanlythingavailablewhenyou'resevenyearsold—Idivebehindmymother.Howdoesthewriterletusfeeltheboy’sdislike?Fromwhataspects?

文本分析Itriedtoshakeheroff,butshejustclampedontightandyankedmealong,saying,"Comeon!"Mymomcameoutofthehouseandimmediatelygottheworld’scomplexlookonherface."Well,hello,"shesaystoJuli."Hi!"I'mstilltryingtopullfree,butthegirl'sgotmeinadeathgrip.Mymom'sgrinning,lookingatourhandsandmyredface."Andwhat'syourname,honey?""JuliannaBaker.Iliverightoverthere,"shesays,pointingwithherunoccupiedhand."Well,Iseeyou'vemetmyson,"shesays,stillgrinningaway.bodylanguagevoicefacialexpressionsFinallyIbreakfreeanddotheonlymanlythingavailablewhenyou'resevenyearsold—Idivebehindmymother.Skill3

Face+Body+VoiceLiuJingyangandhermotherhuggedeachotherexcitedlyafterhervictory.①Face:Liu’seyes___________________withgreatdelight.

Abroadsmile__________acrossherface.Tears__________inhermom’seyes.Show:Theywereexcited.sparkled/twinkledspreadglistened閃耀漾開展開She________towardhermom,and_____herontheshouldersgently,sharingherjoywithherexcitedly.Momproudlygaveherathumps-up.Show:Theywereexcited.②Body:sprintedpatted“Imadeit”shescreamed/yelled/exclaimedatthetopofherlungs.“I’msoproudofyou!”Momsaid,hervoicetremblingwithjoy.③Voice:Show:Theywereexcited.①Sb.+V,with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)②Sb.+V,獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)③Sb.+V,V-ing伴隨狀語(yǔ)④

“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)句UsefulsentencepatternsCrossingthefinishline,LiuJingyangsprintedtowardhermomatonceandpulledherintoatighthug(body).“Mom,Iwon!”sheexclaimed(voice).Tearsglisteninginhereyes(face),momstrokeherbackgently(body).“I’msoproudofyou!”shesaidinachokedvoice.(voice),givingherathumps-up.(body)ShowitfacebodyvoiceShe_______________hereyebrows.Hereyes_____________withanger.Hercheeksturned________________She_________herfistsand______themwidelyintheair.Herwholebodywas_______.Shepacedbackandforthlikeacaged_____.“I’mverydisappointed.Isthishowyourepaymyefforts?”Sheyelledatthetopherlungs.Janetwasangrybecausemanystudentsdidn’tfinishhomework.furrowed/knittedred/flushburnt/explodedclenchedwavedshakingtigerfacebodyvoiceWithhereyebrowsknitted,eyesexplodingwithanger,andcheeksflushed,Janetclenchedherfistsandwavedthemwidelyintheair.“Howdareyou!Isthishowyourepaymyefforts?”sheyelledatthetopofherlungs.Janetwasangrybecausemanystudentsdidn’tfinishhomework.Suppose:Youwereboundforanothercitywhereyouwillstudy,youexchangedgoodbyewithyourmotherattherailwaystation.

Describethesceneofseparation.“Takecare,mydear!”Momsaidinachokedvoice.Shethrewherarmsaround