1、中 考 專 題 復(fù) 習(xí) 課,Writing,將過程變得美麗 讓結(jié)果更加輝煌,中考英語書面表達(dá)應(yīng)對(duì)技巧,中考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),滿分檔（15分）：長(zhǎng)度符合要求（80-90字），書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要 點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴(yán)密，詞匯豐富，沒有任何語法錯(cuò)誤。 第五檔（12-14分）：文本長(zhǎng)度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié) 構(gòu)規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴(yán)密，詞匯比較豐富有少量語法錯(cuò)誤。 第四檔（9-11分）：文本長(zhǎng)度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，基本涵蓋要點(diǎn)（有2 要點(diǎn)得給9-10分），行文比較連貫，詞匯不夠豐富，有一些語法錯(cuò)誤。 第三檔(6-8分)：文本長(zhǎng)度與要求有明顯距離，書寫不規(guī)范，要點(diǎn)不完整 （只有

2、1個(gè)要點(diǎn)），行文不連貫，詞匯量不足，錯(cuò)誤較多，勉強(qiáng)能看出作文意圖。 第二檔（3-5分）：能用句子表達(dá)，錯(cuò)誤百出，只能勉強(qiáng)猜測(cè)出作文意圖。 第一檔（0-2分）：有一些英語單詞，但與話題毫不相干。 （白卷0分）,Discussion,How to Write English Compositions,集句成段,組段成篇,審清題意,連詞成句,抓住要點(diǎn),抄寫規(guī)范,1,2,3,4,5,6,Writing skillssix steps,欣賞范文,1.愛是心中的太陽，融化你我身邊的冰雪。假設(shè)你是李明，你們學(xué)校的“English Garden”正在舉辦主題為“付出即是收獲”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你聯(lián)系自己平時(shí)的愛心

3、行為和感受寫一篇文章投稿。 要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。 2.80100詞。標(biāo)題和文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Giving is Receiving My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old peoples home and do some clea

4、ning for them once a month. I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?,2. 許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班

5、特意開展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life為主題的英語演講比賽,請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享,內(nèi)容包括： 同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么； 我的壓力是什么； 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。 Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well w

6、ith their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt t

7、ired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Thats all. Thank you!,3. 幸福是什么？幸福是父母為你營(yíng)造的溫馨的家，幸福是老師望向你的贊許的目光，幸福是孤獨(dú)時(shí)朋友送來的一杯奶茶，幸福是 請(qǐng)以My happiness為話題，寫一件曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的令你感到幸福的事情。 要求：條理清晰，語言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確, 字跡工整，8090詞。 Happiness is

8、 important in our life. In fact , happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesnt mat

9、ter, my child. Remember well be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents love. I want to be a good child for my parents.,初中生寫作

10、“六大病癥”,1) 審題不清，抓不住要點(diǎn)，東拉西扯； 2) 單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤； frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite wear shorts and a T-shirt; polite(有禮貌的)，happy,5. Writing task: 根據(jù)表格所提供的信息寫一篇短文，描述你的筆友馬小跳，80個(gè)左右的單詞, 開頭已經(jīng)給出。,開頭： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He,6. 考考你的眼力: Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 year old. He is tall or thin. He has blac

11、k hair and he like wear short and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chickens best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He like little animals. He often play with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I

12、very like him.,7. 正確示例: Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 years old. He is tall and thin. He has black hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He likes little animals. He often pla

13、ys with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I like him very much.,自從實(shí)施教育新政，中學(xué)生有了更多自主支配的時(shí)間，但有些 同學(xué)不知如何利用好這些時(shí)間，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校 園英語之聲”欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時(shí)間”進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你 用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括： 注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 參考詞匯: make good use of, interest g

14、roups social activities, do sports, net bar,第一步:審清題意,認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作主題、體裁、人稱、字?jǐn)?shù)、結(jié)構(gòu)、時(shí)態(tài)、提示要點(diǎn)和補(bǔ)充信息,具體做法：用筆勾畫,自從實(shí)施教育新政，中學(xué)生有了更多自主支配的時(shí)間，但有些同學(xué)不知如何利用好這些時(shí)間，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語之聲”欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時(shí)間”進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：,注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),主題,體裁,人稱,結(jié)構(gòu),時(shí)態(tài),字?jǐn)?shù),已知信息,未知信息,以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,第二步： 列出寫作提綱（Outline）。,具體做法： 根據(jù)

15、段落整理寫作要點(diǎn),不要遺漏要點(diǎn)！,Introduction Main body Conclusion,problems,opinions,suggestions,Write an outline,花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛好上 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲 -,-,合理安排時(shí)間 參加興趣小組 -,List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _ _ 2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _,第三步：抓住

16、要點(diǎn)，列關(guān)鍵詞,not good for study and health,Spend -on, hobbies, be crazy about,- - -,抓住要點(diǎn)，列關(guān)鍵詞,Problems be crazy about (7B4) play computer games (7A1) watch too much TV (8A1) spend too much time on their hobbies (9A3) refuse to do homework (9A3) spend - on (7A2) Opinions not good for our health and study

17、(7A2) focus on (9A3) Pay more attention to (9A1) Suggestions plan time carefully (9A3) achieve a balance between study and bobbies (9A3) take part in different after school activities (7A2) join interest groups (8A2) do some sports (7A4) do some housework(7B5),Make sentences with the keywords about

18、problems. Sentences: _ _ 2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. Sentences: _ _ 3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _ _,第四步：連詞成句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and cant finish their homework on time.,I dont think its good for our study and health.,第五步：集句成段，組段成篇,There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in