1、 2010年英語中考作文復習一：歷年英語中考作文中出現(xiàn)的常見錯誤。1. 單詞拼寫錯誤。tree/teer, fruit/friut, pool/poor,visitor/visiter, themselves /theirselves/ themselves etc.l 病因:沒有根據(jù)音標記單詞，或平時讀音不準，或沒真正掌握構詞法。2 .名詞不注意單復數(shù)或復數(shù)形式不正確。l 病因：可能受母語影響,或語法掌握得欠扎實。3.  動詞原形和過去式亂用。build /built, lie /lay, should/can 后加to do doing 都有l(wèi) 病因：到底哪個是原形，哪個是過去式

2、不清楚。情態(tài)動詞后加原形的結構很不熟練。4、形容詞比較等級亂用。more healthy/more stronger/much strong等都有。l 病因：比較等級欠透。5.    少主語或亂用主語，尤其動名詞作主語多用成原形了。There can plant /Liu Ying thinks plant fruit trees./Li Ping thinks plant trees is a good way./ Its can /Mount Feng can build /It can buildl 病因：賓語從句和動名詞及情態(tài)動詞的句子結構沒搞懂。6. 詞

3、數(shù)不足，極個別太多，或遺漏要點，或將我寫成自己的名了。l 病因：審題不仔細。7. 易混淆詞或詞組亂用。摘pick寫成pick up， 亂造make/set up/build，keep health/keep in good healthy, 胡花費pay money for sthspend in there/ relax/relaxing/relaxed亂用。l 病因：詞性和詞組沒吃透。8. There be 句型寫成了There have9. 中國式英語表達形式較多。10. 欠連貫，缺少連接過渡詞。11. 口頭語挺多，盡量要少用。12.不注意標點符號，If youre free.Youll

4、 .到高中，由于標點亂用，這樣兩個句子都要算錯了的。極個別甚至連英語句號是實心點等的常識都不知道。13. 書寫欠規(guī)范，涂汰現(xiàn)象不少。不注意書寫整潔。二：英語中考列文（請同學們務必熟看每篇作文，從中你會學到許多表達方式，可以幫助你培養(yǎng)語感，積累短語和句型，總之能一舉幾得）（1）How To Learn English Well (怎么學好英語)English is important in the modern world. It is spoken all over the world. But a few students don't learn English well. So t

5、hey want to drop English. I suggest that you shouldn't give up English, because English is used in many countries as the first or second language. Most business letters are written in English. It is helpful for you to work in the future. If you don't know English, you will fall behind others

6、 in future. How can you learn English well? First, you should persevere. It's true that English is sometimes really very difficult for us. But if you have a good method of learning, I think you will be good at it. Both English listening and speaking are the most difficult for almost every beginn

7、er. Sometimes, it seems impossible to learn. But I think if you do a lot of practice, you will make progress, you should speak more and listen more often. You'd better speak English with your classmates as often as possible not only in class but also out of class. I advise you to buy a radio, so

8、 you can listen to some English programmes over the radio. （2） If I had a million dollarsIf I had one million dollars, I would do a lot of helpful things. For example, Id give a part of dollars away to poor people. Id give some money to medical research. Id use some money to build a large library fo

9、r children who like reading. Id also buy a big car for my father use the rest money. What would you do if you had one million dollars? Dear Ms Li, （3）I'm very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days. Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I don't enough time to

10、 sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk, or play together. When I get back home from school, I'm not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favourite music. I feel worried about them. I don't know what I should do. Could you p

11、lease give me some suggestions?Best wishes.（4）My sisterThis is a picture of my sister, Alice. She likes dancing very much. My sister is very cute. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. She always wears glasses. She has long hair. And she is of medium height. She's kind of thin. She likes sport

12、s, too. She's the captain of the tennis teamDear sir, （5）Ill writing to tell you some information of a survey with my senior middle school. 40% think middle school student can wear mobile phone, but other student are against the idea. In my opinion,Middle school student should wear mobile, for i

13、t do more good than harm.For example, it is convenient if we contact our friends; if we have poser, we canSolve it on internet; sometimes, it's impossible for us to remember more useful information, then we can put it in it; As a middle school student, we have more and more pressure, we need som

14、ething to make us relax. Sure, we can play some games with it, too.As for its bad effect on our study, when it rings, Oh, I think we can adjust it to vibration. The above are my survey result, and some viewpoints of mine.（6）假如你是新華中學的學生，名叫MIKE。去年6月1日，我國已經禁止使用塑料袋，你對此有何看法和什么好的建議?Im Mike. I am a student

15、 in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I dont like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production. And they cant decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree with the rule, which people cant

16、get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. Its good for our environment.So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment.Lets make our worl

17、d more and more beautiful.（7）6月5日( June 5)是世界環(huán)境保護日， 我們周圍的環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕，污染越來越嚴重。假如你是學生Jone.，你校要進行“如何保護我們的環(huán)境?”專題演講比賽，要求：1、舉例說明環(huán)境存在的問題13方面;2、如何保護好我們的環(huán)境，采取怎樣的措施，舉例13方面進行說明，字數(shù)80左右。Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:Im very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, Im a bit nervous a

18、s Ive never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse .In some places we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do

19、 something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike. We can use shopping baskets not plastic bags .when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word, if everyone pays more at

20、tention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. （10）2010年我的世博會Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 W

21、orld Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. Our government has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Chain, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more abo

22、ut Shanghai.(11) 中國是一個地震多發(fā)國，由于“汶川地震”的發(fā)生，成千上萬的學生和老師失去了生命，假如你們學校要進行一場“地震逃生知識講座”，假如你是講座演講人,名叫LinTao ，請據(jù)以下幾方面寫一個簡單的發(fā)言稿，可以自由發(fā)揮,但至少要補充兩條注意事項。1.地震來臨前要鎮(zhèn)定，為了您自己和家人的人身安全請躲在桌子等堅固家具的下面; 2.搖晃時立即關火，失火時立即滅火; 3.不要慌張地向戶外跑 ;4.將門打開，確保出口; 5.在戶外的空曠的場合，要保護好頭部，避開危險之處; 6.在學校，購物中心、劇場時依工作人員的指示行動。(劃線部分是要求填寫補充的)Dear classmates

23、, teachers, head teacher headmaster :Im LinTao in Class 6,Im very proud Ive been chosen to speak to you . I make a speech : “How to protect and save our lives?” When the earthquake happens, how to protect and save our lives is important? In “Wenchuan earthquake” on “5.12” in Sichuan, thousands of st

24、udents and teachers died of it.You must be/keep calm when the earthquake happens. You go into under the table or hard furniture fast. You must turn off or put out the fire so that you and your families are safe when the buildings are shocking. Dont run out nervously; Open the door and keep EXIT open

25、. When you are in the open air, you must sit on the wide place/ground, such as :playground etc, you must look after your head and keep away from the dangerous things.When you are at school, in the shopping center or theatre, you must follow the teachers or offficers,let them lead you to the safe pla

26、ces. Bring some food, water and medicines to safe place as possible as you can, you must wait the people to save you if youre in dangerous . You must keep living (12) How to stay our health /fit?Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle school student first youd better do more exer

27、cise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(繩子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Dont eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit. Third you need enough sleep or rest. Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger. Last yo

28、u mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thank you bye! (13) We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at the school gate at eight in the morning and we will go there on foot. Take your pens and n

29、otebooks with you. We should listen and watch carefully and write down something interesting when you visit the museum. Please don't make any noise in the museum and don't take any pictures. You'll have to hand in a report about the visit next Monday（14）My Chinese TeacherOf all the subje

30、cts, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to

31、leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we're getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese

32、. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.（15）My Father My father is a kind man. He is not very tall but he is a man of perseverance. He works very hard and his services are highly appreciated. My father is a man of devotion. Every morning he gets up the earliest

33、 to make breakfast for us. In the evening, he is always the late to come back home. At weekends, he always takes us to go outing in his car. He is a man of few words, but he often says to me "A little learning is a dangerous thing". I will always remember these words. （16）A Wonderful Day L

34、ast November 24 was my birthday. I had a party at my home. My friends came to my home in the afternoon and I got a lot of presents from them. At the party, we ate a big cake, sang songs, watched TV and listened to music. We were very happy. But all good things must come to an end. We said goodbye at

35、 about ten. We had a very good time on November 24（17）An Unusual Experience One day, I went to ski with my friend, Li Mei. We were playing happily on the ice when I heard a shout” Help". I turned back and was surprised to see a boy falling into a ice hole. But neither of us could swim. So Li Me

36、i and I ran to ask for help. A few minutes later, a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. What an unusual experience it was!（18）Planting Trees It was fine on March 12 ， 2001 . I got up early that day. All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees. We arrived at the hil

37、l at eight oclock. The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees. Then we started digging ， planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of time. Among us ， Wang Lin ， our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill ， he worked harder . When

38、 he finished his task ， he went on to help others without even a little rest . He was wet all over after work. “ I must learn from him ，” I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees ， we smiled happily ， forgetting our tiredness .（19）A Picnic It was a sunny day. We decided to have a p

39、icnic outside the city. In the morning, we took an early bus to Nanhui. It was quite a colorful world. There were GREen trees, orange leaves, red peach blossoms. At noon, we reached the place; we sat by the river bank and took out a lot of things, such as bread, orange juice, apples, cakes, eggs and

40、 so on. But all of a sudden, it began to rain. Unluckily there was no shelter nearby. We had to take a bus to go back home in a hurry. What an unforgettable picnic it was!（20）Nobody can get through life without friends. Im no exception. I met my best friend Sunny in a cram school during our last yea

41、r of junior high school. We prepared for the high school entrance examination together and often discussed our lessons as we were studying after school. Sunny is a smart and well-mannered girl. Not only is she as expert at studying, but she also knows how to have fun. Every time I am blue, she sooth

42、es me and helps me find solutions to my problems. Im glad that I have a friend who is like an intimate sister. I value our friendship and hope that it will last forever. （21） Making Friends on Line These days many students like to make friends on line. Most of them think its interesting to know a st

43、ranger through the Internet. As a matter of fact, only a few of them have succeeded in getting a real good friend in this way. Most of them have been cheated. Some of them have committed crimes withThe friends on line. So we should be careful of making friends on line. Wed better pay more attention

44、to our study.（22）Study in Class and out of Class Our study can be divided into two parts: one is in class and the other is out of class. Both of them are important to students. They depend on each other. We must attach importance to after-class what we have learnt in class is very. Limited, because

45、only knowledge in textbooks can be acquired. However, we can learn more out of class. A most important thing is that knowledge comes from practice. In the after- class study we can apply out knowledge to practice. Just Iike after-class study, study in class is also very important. It occupies most o

46、f our time. We must pay much attention to it. In-class study and after-class study are closely connected with each other and improve each other.（23）my student life Speaking of my student life, its very interesting. Besides studying, we have many parties at our school for special festivals. Of course

47、, we must study many subjects at school and do homework every day. I receive instructions from my teachers and discuss problems with them. Although sometimes we have many exams in our student life, it can be good for us. Everyone hates exams, but it helps us realize how much wehave learned from scho

48、ol. Just enjoy your student life. It goes by fast. ( 24) MoneyMoney is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love. I dont think we should r

49、egard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life. What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers. This way, all of us can lead a happier lives. (25) the Way to Keep Healthy Its important for us to be healthy a

50、ll our life. We cant study or work well without healthy body.Therere many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstai

51、rs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: "Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise." (26)Water pollution 水源污染W(wǎng)ater is used in homes, in farming, and in manufacturing. The water used by the people comes from oceans,

52、 lakes, rivers, and streams. Many water sources are becoming polluted. People are throwing things into the water. Factories are dumping waste materials into the water. Cities are dumping sewage into the water. Some water sources have become so badly polluted that the water cannot be made fit to use.

53、 Would you like to drink water that came from a source that had been so badly mistreated? Now is the time that we should take up our responsibility to protect our environment from being polluted.(27)My Experience in Examination In my opinion, examinations are one of the important activities in schoo

54、l life. I have gone through all sorts of examinations since my primary school I have tasted the flavor of happiness and sadness. Before examinations, I always have a hard time and don't know what to do. During examinations I feel nervous and sometimes my mind becomes blank. Only after examinatio

55、ns does the world seem to be bright again and am I brimming with vigor. We often complain that our teachers make trouble for us on purpose. But it is not true. The fact is that examinations are just a way to help us do better in our study.(29) Teachers' DaySep. l0th Wednesday Fine It is Teachers

56、' Day on September 10th every year. Teachers are the greatest people in the world, I think, because they teach us how to write and read. The most important is that they teach us how to be a real man. They are also kind to everybody and they don't want anyone to fall behind others. They alway

57、s get on very well with their students, and they are our best friends. When students are in trouble, they can help them in time.' I will be a teacher when I grow up.(30)We often hear the saying "Time is money.”But I think time is much more precious than money. Because If we lost time, we ca

58、n't find it. But We can try to woke harder to get more money. No matter whatever you do ,you can not get lost time back."Time flies time and tides wait for no men". You can see how important time is. Lunxun had said” I spent the time on my work while others are having coffee.” We must make good use of our time, especially for our students, we shouldn't waste time in playing games and the like.(31)愛護動物-Take Care of Animals June 23rd Sunday Sunny It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were so interesting