1、讀后續(xù)寫素材積累1一、境描述的素材境描述分客和主兩種角度:客從境事物自己下手,主從察者角度描述。平時在描述主客交替行,主描述比重稍大?？途趁枋?Part1境描述的adj要求:有聲,有色,有感,有味道thebluesky(天)thesongsofbirds()thethunderingclouds(光雷)thefragileflowers(嫩的花);(thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚)thegreengrass(青草)thefragrantroses(的玫瑰);thesetting/risingsun(斜陽/漸漸升起的太陽)Part2境描述的verb(vi&vt)要求)

2、.Wind(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,一吹,吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條,就像卷起的窗簾。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.,柔卻寒冷,點著枝,著斜坡下的灌木。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.涼爽的微吹拂著沉靜的公園。4.Acoldbreeze

3、waftedthroughmyhair.冷(吹拂我的)Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.(今日正是放箏的晴日氣,的力了箏的上升。).Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)聲音:1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某,潺潺的的水聲在山谷中奏響。色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurfa

4、ce.水是深色的,陽光在透明的玻璃表面光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.離此不,有一條小溪,在色的河岸奔耀。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.憂如它在溫柔低,就一位天真少女著她那慈的母私。(action,sound,colour).Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.

5、天空是的灰色,伴著的云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar的天空高高立主境描述:1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人某物(狀/作/被).2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/聽到/感覺/到某物(狀/被)3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是這樣.致使于4.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/光景使我這樣陶醉/驚/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower光景我完好驚呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike光景看起來像二、景描述

6、的素材(來自原著:追箏的人)Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.(放風(fēng)箏的場景描述,從各個角度,立體描述

7、)空中已經(jīng)掛著最少二十來只風(fēng)箏,仿佛紙制的鯊魚,巡游搜獵食品。不到一個鐘頭,這個數(shù)字翻了一番,紅色的、藍(lán)色的、黃色的風(fēng)箏在蒼穹來回飛舞,熠熠生輝。寒冷的細(xì)風(fēng)吹過我的頭發(fā)。這風(fēng)正合適放風(fēng)箏,風(fēng)速不大,恰好能讓風(fēng)箏飄浮起來,也便于控制。2.Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄藍(lán),波平如鏡,陽光照在湖上熠熠生輝。ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovet

8、hetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.(場景、比喻)我抬初步,看見兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏,帶著長長的藍(lán)色尾巴,在天空中漸漸升起。它們舞動著,飛越公園西邊的樹林,飛越風(fēng)車,并排飄浮著,仿佛一雙眼睛俯視著舊金山,這個我現(xiàn)在看作家園的城市。Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.Creekswh

9、ereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby.(場景、比喻)天空一碧如洗,陽光像烙鐵般灼痛后頸。整個春天我和哈桑在溪流取水漂,到了夏天它們也枯竭了。黃包車嗒嗒走過,揚(yáng)起陣陣灰塵。5.Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefain

10、tsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某個地方傳來樹枝劈啪作響的聲音,還有貓頭鷹的叫聲。寒風(fēng)輕輕拂動樹枝,吹過山坡上的灌木叢。而下面,水流在山谷淌動,傳來陣陣稍微的聲音。6.Bythreeoclock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark.(天氣)到三點時,雨停了,鉛灰色的天空陰云密布,一陣寒風(fēng)吹過公園。7.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthe

11、cracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.(情形)太陽開始下山,那些岌岌可危的房子的裂縫中,溢出閃閃的紅色斜暉。三、描述時間,動作,心理和感情)、感情好詞:1.喜樂Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石相同閃閃發(fā)光。Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface他.臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣激動聲穿過他們。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里繚繞。Hiseyestwinkl

12、edwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。Awildgaiety(快樂)tookholdofher.一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石相同閃閃發(fā)光,嘴角保持著牢固的微笑。Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我快樂得難以形容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface她.臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照

13、亮了整個房間。Sheshedtearsofjoy.她快樂得流下了眼淚。Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢著幸福。Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激動得滿臉通紅。Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起歡樂。Iwasfloatingonair.我飄揚(yáng)在空中。Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛顯露出快樂的神情。2.氣憤:Iwasseizedbyanger我.充滿了氣憤。Hewasfuming

14、withrage.他氣得雷霆之怒。Hisangerboiledover.他的氣憤爆發(fā)了。Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充滿著怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的聲音因氣憤而顫抖。Hegavemealookofburninganger他.氣憤地看了我一眼。Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼熱的目光怒目著我。Heflaredupattheword.他一聽到這個字就勃然大怒。Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他氣得神

15、情陰沉。3.悲Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著,眼淚著面流了下來。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness我.飄揚(yáng)在悲的海洋里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears她.的手在抖。她快要哭了。Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine聽.到個信息,他望地把悲淹沒在酒里。Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起來,跑出了房。Shesob

16、bed,hidingherfaceinherhands她.掩面哭泣。Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼淚。/我的眼里充了淚水。Afrown(眉)nowstoodonhisface.他起了眉。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他坐在那處,著一郁。Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.信息使他上蒙上了一陰影。Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen.他是悲Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他陶醉在沉痛之中。Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.些日子他情低落。4.害怕:Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他身來,眼里充了害怕。Fearslowlycreepsuponher.害怕慢慢地延長到她身上。Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen.她感覺害怕Shewaschokedbyfear她.因害怕而窒息。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她色白地站在那處,舌打。Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一害怕。/害怕淹沒了他。Her