如何寫(xiě)中考滿(mǎn)分作文書(shū)面表達(dá)(本題滿(mǎn)分20分)81.藝術(shù)陶冶情操,涵養(yǎng)生命。你喜歡的藝術(shù)形式是什么,有過(guò)怎樣的經(jīng)歷,又有怎樣的感受呢?請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝袌D示中任選一種或自選一種其他藝術(shù)形式,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右,短文開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。Artplaysanimportantroleinourlife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Artisanimportantpartofourlife.Myfavouriteartismakingkites.Accordingtomygrandparents,whenIwasyoung,Ilookedforwardtoflying.Oneyear,whenspringcame,mygrandfathermadeakitewhichmademequiteexcited.Whileholdingalinetoletmykiteflyintothesky,Iknewthatmydreamofflyingcametrue.AsI’mgrowingolderlikeakite,Iwillleavemyparents.ButIknowthelineisstillinmyparents’hand.Withthembehindme,Icanflyfartherandfarther.Artteachesusalot.Itmakesourliferichandcolourful.【寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)評(píng)】作者認(rèn)真審題，第一段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，確定主題：Artisanimportantpartofourlife.第二段圍繞主題小時(shí)候爺爺為他制作風(fēng)箏和放風(fēng)箏的故事。第三段圍繞風(fēng)箏，發(fā)揮聯(lián)想，把自己比作風(fēng)箏，父母牽著風(fēng)箏的線。獨(dú)具匠心。第四段點(diǎn)明主題，Artteachesusalot.Itmakesourliferichandcolourful.【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)，高分句】makingkites用動(dòng)名詞做表語(yǔ)。whenIwasyoung,時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。whichmademequiteexcited.定語(yǔ)從句。whileholding比whileIwasholding更高級(jí)。thatmydreamofflyingcametrue賓語(yǔ)從句。Withthembehindme,with結(jié)構(gòu)。Iwillleavemyparents.ButIknowthelineisstillinmyparents’hand.比喻句，作者把自己比作風(fēng)箏，父母的愛(ài)和牽掛比作風(fēng)箏的線。令閱卷老師拍案叫絕！【解題思路及注意事項(xiàng)】1.仔細(xì)解讀：題目要求從所給的圖示中任選一種或自選一種其他藝術(shù)形式，寫(xiě)一篇短文來(lái)介紹自己喜歡的藝術(shù)形式，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：開(kāi)始寫(xiě)作之前，先要確定自己要選的藝術(shù)形式，并根據(jù)所選內(nèi)容列出寫(xiě)作提綱，以第一人稱(chēng)展開(kāi)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)?？梢韵冉榻B自己喜歡的藝術(shù)形式是什么，接下來(lái)談?wù)勛约河羞^(guò)什么樣的經(jīng)歷，最后談?wù)勛约旱母惺?；文章開(kāi)頭已給出，注