昨天已經(jīng)過去，明天還沒到來。只有今天是一份禮物。Yesterday

ishistory,tomorrowisamystery,buttodayisagift.Welcometoourclass建議信寫作講評(píng)

假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友James來信告訴你，他打算明年到你所居住的城市游玩一個(gè)星期，并向你請(qǐng)教相關(guān)事宜。請(qǐng)你就此給他回信，提供一些旅游建議。要點(diǎn)如下:出行的最佳時(shí)間；值得游覽的景點(diǎn)；適宜住的酒店。其他。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可恰當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以適全文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

典題例練開門見山，表明寫作意圖。在本段中，寫信人應(yīng)該先簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，然后陳述事由，表明寫信的目的及原因。委婉地提出建議及改進(jìn)措施，或提出忠告。禮貌地總結(jié)并期盼對(duì)方的回復(fù)。

佳句賞析Inaddition,youaresupposedtotakemoreclothesincasetheweatherisgood.

---劉錦莉AsfarasIamconcerned,threelanesandsevenalleysisworthytobevisitedandsomefamouspeoplelivedthereatonetime.

----楊瓊Whatcallsforspecialattentionisthatyoushouldtakesunglassesandsunscreencream.

---楊瓊Finallyandmostimportantly,sinceyouwanttocomehere,Irecommendyoutotakethedeliciousfoodhere.Itwilldefinitelymakeandeepimpressiononyou.

---陶京

Step1典型錯(cuò)誤1.Youareworthvisiting.Theplaceisworthvisiting.2.Theweatherisnothotandcold.Theweatherisneitherhotnorcold.3.Herearesomeadvicestoyou.Herearesomesuggestionstoyou.4.Youmusttakesomethickclothes.Youmusttakesomewarmclothes.5.Therehaveverygoodenvironmentandservice.Thereisaverygoodenvironmentandservice.Step2典型錯(cuò)誤6.YoumusthavefuninFuzhou.YouwillhavefuninFuzhou.7.Itwillcoldatnight.Itwillbecoldatnight.8.Idobelievethatyouwilllikethiscityandhaveagoodtimeinhere.Idobelievethatyouwilllikethiscityandhaveagoodtimethere.9.Thespringisoftenrains.Itoftenrainsinspring.10.Finallyandmostimportantlyisthat…Finallyandmostimportantly,Whatmattersmostisthat…常用句式Ihopethefollowingsuggestionswillbeofhelptoyou.Itisagoodideatodosth.Youhadbetterdo…Whynot?Istronglyadviseyoutodo.Isuggestthatyoushoulddo.Iholdaviewthat…Itisnecessary/importanttodo.Step3重點(diǎn)短語既不。。。也不。。。值得做某事給。。。留下深刻印象名人參觀來自國(guó)內(nèi)外在于，位于對(duì)某人來說做某事是方便的。對(duì)。。。高度評(píng)價(jià)我堅(jiān)定地認(rèn)為玩得開心景點(diǎn)名勝古跡Neither…norBeworthdoingMakeadeepimpressiononCelebrityPayavisittoFromhomeandabroadLieinItisconvenientforsbtodosth.ThinkhighlyofIdobelievethatHaveagoodtimeScenicspotsPlacesofinterestStep4看圖說話

neither…norStep5Beworthdoing,celebrity

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itisconvenientforsb.todosth.Localdishesthinkhighlyof謀篇布局Iamverydelightedthatyouarecomingtomycityforavisit.Ihopethefollowingsuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Firstofall,_____________comehereinspringorautumn,foritisneithertoocoldnortoohotatthistime.Besides,____________________payavisittoThreeLanesandSevenalleys,whichiswellworthvisitingandhasattractedmanypeoplefromhomeandabroad.Manycelebritiesusedtolivethere.Itslonghistoryanduniqueculturewillcertainlymakeadeepimpressiononyou.Whatismore,______________livein

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.Itliesinthecitycentersoitisconvenientforyoutogoeverywhere.Finally,____________trysomelocaldishesinFuzhou.Youwillthinkhighlyofthem.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatyouwillhaveagoodtimeinmycity.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.YouhadbetterIstronglyadviseyoutoitisagoodideatoWhynotStep6

如何算是一篇好文章？－覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)－應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯－有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。要點(diǎn)全詞匯,句型（高級(jí)）和語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語言地道連接詞自評(píng)互評(píng)

AWelcometomycity.IhopethatIcanhelptoyou.Tobeginwith,ourFuzhouisverygood.Itisverycool.IthinkyouwillcometoFuzhouinspring.Whatismore,ifyoucometoFuzhou,youwillstayin…h(huán)otel.Finally,youshouldvisittheThreelanesandsevenalleys.IwilltakeyoutothexiLake.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Goodluck！(74words)6Step7_______________________________________________________________BIamverydelightedthatyouarecomingtomycityforavisit.SoIwillgiveyousometipsthatIhopethefollowingsuggestionswillhelpfultoyou.Firstofall,theweatherisveryimportant.IthinkOctoberisthebest.Becauseitneithercoldnorhot.Inaddition,Irecommendsomescenicspotsforyoutovisit,suchasthethreelanesandthreealleys,MountGu.Theseplacesareworthvisiting.Finallyandmostimportantly,acomfortablehotelisthekey.Ithinkmycitywillgiveyouadeepimpression.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.(90words)13__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CIamverydelightedthatyouarecomingtomycityforavisit.Ihopethefollowingsuggestionswillhelpyou.Fuzhouisasuitablecitytovisit.Theweatherhereisgood.Andyoucanchoosespringorfalltocome.Thesetwoseasaren’ttoohotortoocold.Besides,Fuzhouhassomanyplacesofinterest,SuchasThreelanesandsevenalleys.Itisworthvisiting.Longtimeago,thereweremanypeoplelivingthere.Itcanhelpyoutoknowaboutthelocalculturehere.Third,Fuzhouhasmanyhotelstochoose,eachofthemcanofferyouthebestservice.Sodon’tworryaboutit.Finallyandmostimportantly,sinceyouwanttocome,Irecommendyoutotastethedeliciousfoodhere.Itwilldefinitelymakeadeepimpressiononyou.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.(125words)20_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________最后檢測(cè)

Iamverydelightedthatyouarecomingtomycityforavisit.Ihopethefollowingsuggestionswillbesomehelptoyou.Firstofall,youhadbettercomehereinthespringorautumn,foritisneithertoocoldortoohotatthistime.BesidesIstronglyadviseyoutopayavisittoThreeLanesandSevenalleys,whichare

wellworthvisitingandhadattractedmanypeoplefromhomeandabroad.Manycelebritiesusedtolivingthere.Itslonghistoryanduniqueculturewould

certainlymakeadeepimpressiononyou.Whatismore,itisagoodideaforyoutolivein

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Hotel.Itliesinthecitycentersoitisconvenientforyoutogoeverywhere.Finally,WhynottrysomelocaldishinFuzhou.Youwillthinkhighlyofthem.IamfirmlyconvincedthatIwillhaveagoodtimeinmycity.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasusefully.__nor__is___has__live—will——dishesuseful—you∧of﹨———Step8T4今天你學(xué)會(huì)了什么？

Iamverydelightedthatyouarecomingtomycityforavisit.Ihopethefollowingsuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Firstofall,youhadbettercomehereinspringorautumn,foritisneithertoocoldnortoohotatthistime.BesidesIstronglyadviseyoutopayavisit