讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作：AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.考場優(yōu)秀文展示1.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Knowingthesituation,dadcomfortedthetwoimmediatelyandasked,“Whynotmakeyourdivisionofworkclear?”Dad'swordswerelikeahammerblow,remindingthemwhatcontributedtotheirformerfailure.Itwastheirhurryandconfusionthatmessedeverythinginthekitchenup.Havingtidiedupthestove,theyassignedthetasksatagreatlick—Jeffstaredatthepotattentively;Jennahadanothertwoslicesoftoastfried.Thankfully,atthistime,theyfinishedtheircookingsmoothlywithdad’spatientguidance.WhenJeffputshreddedchickenontotheporridgeandJennalaidthetoastontheplace,theysmiledintoeachother'seyes.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Withgreatblearyeyes,momwassurprisedtofindthathertwochildrenhadpreparedbreakfastforher,notverydeliciousasitseemed.Butherkids’expectantfacesseeminglyaddedflavortothisbreakfastasshehadatasteofit.“Notbad.”Shethoughtinmind,afterasipoftheporridge.Finishingthebreakfast,sheexpressedgratitudetohertwins,movedandtouched.Theywerealsoexcitedwiththeirmom’spraise.Theythoughttherewasnothingtoitwhenitcametomakingbreakfast,butfromtheexperience,theyfinallyknewhowlaborioustheirmotherwasatordinarytimes.Sincethen,thewholefamilybecametightenedandcherishedeachotherallthemore.2.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Glancingatthedisorderedkitchen,hegrinnedwithjoy.“Areyoumakingbreakfastforyoumother,kids?”Thetwinsnodded,“Butallofoureffortswereinvain.”Jennasighedinfrustration.“Don’tworry.Youstillhaveampletime.”Thefathersaidencouragingly.Undertheinstructionofthefather,Jeffadjustedthefirecarefullyandputtheporridgepotontoit.NextJennacutoffanothertwoslicesofbread,immersingitintotheeggmixture.WhileJeffwatchingthestovecarefully,Jennafriedbreadtoanappropriatecolor,whichissotempting.Finally,theyputsomechickenintotheporridgeandthebreakfastwasdone.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Uponopeningeyes,whatgreetedherinstantlywasaplateofhotandtastybreakfast.“HappyMother’sDay!”exclaimedthekidsexcitedly.“Thankyou.It’sreallyabigsurprise!”saidmom,asifchokedtotears.Withthecompanyofthetwokids,momdevouredthebreakfastquickly.ThefriedFrenchtoastwassoftandthick,whilechickenporridgewaswarmandjuicy.HuggingJennaandJefftightly,momsmiled,“ThisisthebestMother’sDay”.Withaheartfilledwithlove,youareboundtogiveyourbelovedmotheranunforgettableMother’sDaysurprise,nomatterhowarduousitmightbe.3.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Shockedbythisterriblescene,fatherwidenedhiseyesandaskedindisbelief,“Whatonearthareyoudoing?”Jennastutteredwithtimidvoice,“Wejustwanttogivemomasurprise,but…wemessitup.”DadcheckedJeff’shandfirstandletoutasighofrelief.“I’llhelp.”Dadsaid,strokingJenna’sheadaffectionally.Thetwinssprangtotheirfeetandrestartedalloveragainmerrily.Underthedad’sguidance,theysuccessfullypreparedFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Rubbinghereyesunconsciously,theirmotherwasalittlebitconfusedtobeawaken.Thenthefragranceofthedelicatebreakfastfloatedintohernose.“HappyMother’sDay.Weloveyouforever!”Thetwinshandedmomtheplatewithradiantsmile.Themoistredeyeindicatedmother’shappinessandpride.Seeingthesplendidsurpriseandenjoyingthedeliciousbreakfast,fourofthefamilyeventuallyunderstoodthemeaningoffamily--everyonecherishesother’sdevotionandiswillingtoshowgratitudeandpaybackunconditionally.4.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Theirfatherseemedtounderstandexactlywhathadhappenedandwhattodonext.Hegrabbedthehandleofthepanandslippedabarofbuttertomeltbeforeputtinganothersliceofcup.Thenheswiftlyremovedtheburntporridgeaway,andpouredanothercupofrice,startingtocookitalloveragain.Inbetween,hekeptsilentandfocusedonwhathewasdoing.Thetwinsstoodstraightandawe,watchingthehustleandbustlefromtheirfather.At7o’clock,everythingwasdoneandperfect.Thetwinstookoverthetray,feelingguiltyaboutbeingover-confidentabouttheircompetenceinperformingthehousechores.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theypresentedthewell-cookedbreakfastinfrontofMother.Theirmotherbeamedfromeartoear,praisingandappreciatingchildren’sniceactofgesture.However,thetwinsloweredtheirheads,shouldersdroopingdown.Itdidn’tturnoutastheyhadplanned.Finally,Jennabrokeoutthesilence,confessing

“Mother,wehavetakenitforgrantedforsolongthatthebreakfastthatyoumakeforuseverymorningisasupereasyjob.

”

Jeffcutin

“Butitwasn’t.”

Jennacontinued

“OnthisMother’sday,wewouldliketothankyouforyourdedicationandcareforus.”’“Andfromtomorrow,wewilllearntomakeourownbreakfastinordertotakebackourresponsibilityfromyou.

”

Mother’seyeswerewelledupwithtearsandnodded.5.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Seeingthemess,theirfatherfrozewithshock,asifrootedontheground.Butsoonherealizedtheirintention.Inconsequence,hejoinedthetwinsinpreparingtheMother’sDaysurprise.Thoughhehadneverbeenseencooking,actually,hewasexpertindoingso.Thetwinsassistedtheirfatherwiththebreakfastwithgreatcuriosity,anditwasapleasuretoteamupwiththeirfather.Eventually,theycouldsmellhowgoodthedisheswere.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theysaid

“HappyMother’sDay”,withtheireyestwinklingwithexcitement.Theirfatherlaughedheartilyandtoldherthetwinshadpreparedbreakfastforher.Thenthetwinswhisperedtoherthattheylovedhersomuchandtheywereeagertoseehersmileeveryday.Hearingthewords,sogladwasshethatherfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.Atthatmoment,theyallsensedhowbeautifulsomethinglivingcouldbe.Whatasweetsurprise!6.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Seeingtheblackbreadandthespilledporridge,Dadsuddenlyfiguredouttheirsecret.Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.Withoutasecondthought,Dadofferedtohelp.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.Theyhelpedcleanthekitchenwhiletheirfathercookedasandwichandsomeporridgeskillfully.Soon,thedelicioussmellofbreakfastfilledthekitchen.Dadhintedtoshowthatitwasasecretandwentbacktothebedroom,askingthetwinstogoontocarryouttheirgreatplan.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theyyelled

“HappyMother’sDay,darlingMummy!Abigsurpriseforyou!”

Whenshesawthebreakfast,hereyeswidenedupandtwinkledwithexcitement.Dadwaspretendingtobesurprisedtoseesuchdeliciousfood.Motherhuggedthetwinsandshowedherthanks.Shetastedandpraisedthatitwasthebestbreakfastshehadeverhad.Thetwinssmiledtotheirfathersecretly.Afeelingoflovefilledthewholeroom.Whatabeautifulsurprise!7.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Onelookand

heknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheirgloomyfaces,headvisedthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinsimmediatelycheeredupanddidastold.Withinhalfanhour,thekitchenwasascleanasanewpin,andatthesametime,Fatherhadmadesomeeggsandwichesandcookedsomeoatporridge.Thenhesneakedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addingadelicatecardtheyhadmade,andthencarriedthetrayupstairstotheirparents‘

bedroom.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastandwoketheirmotherup.

Theyhuggedherandyelled

“HappyMother’sDay!Roomservice!”

Motherhuggedbackthetwins,sleepy-eyed.Aninvitingsmellofbreakfasthangingintheair,Mother’seyesautomaticallyrestedonthebreakfasttray.SosweetwasthesurprisethatsheexcitedlyshookFather,whowaspretendingtosnore?Hefeignedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintoasandwichandexclaimeditwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffinstantlybeggedtohaveabite.JennaexchangedaglancewithFather

andtheywinkedateachothersecretly.8.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfather

appeared.

SecureintheknowledgethatnoblisterwasdevelopingonJeff'shand,fathertookcommandofthekitchen.Sweeping

thestoveclean,hegrabbedahandfulofriceintothepotandleftitto

simmer.

Fatherthendipped

twoslicesoffreshbreadintotheeggmixture,slippedthemontothepanandconstantlyflippedthemuntilbothsidesweregoldenbrown.

Asfatherwasdancingaroundinthekitchen,JennaandJeffstood

besideinawe,theireyesround

inadmiration.Itwasmerelytwentyminuteslaterthateverythingwassetonatray.Winkingatthetwins,fathersankhisvoicetoawhisper,"takeittoyourmother!"Thetwinscarriedthebreakfast

upstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

Rubbingherblearyeyesandsittingup,motherwasgreetedby

abowlofsteamingporridge,twopiecesofcrunchybreadandsomefruits,allneatlyarrangedonatray.

"HappyMother'sDay!"thetwinspresentedthetraytotheirmother,atouchofshameetchedontheirsmilingfaces,"weneverknewhowharditwasforyoutopreparemealsforuseveryday.Thankyoumum,forwhatyouhavedoneforus!"

Handstightlypressedonthechest,mumcouldhardlyutteracompletesentence,herfacestreakedwithtearsofgenuinehappiness.ItwastrulythemostdelightfulMother'sDaysurprise.9.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Theirfather’sjawdroppedinamazement

whenhesaweverythingbeforehim.JennaexplainedtotheirfathertheirplanforMother’sDayandtheaccidentthathadjusthappened.

HavinghandledJeff’sinjury,their

fathertoldhimtorestforawhileinthelivingroomwhileJennacontinuedtostayinthekitchentohelp.

Theycleanedthemessy

stove,and

afteraboutanhour,thegoldentoastandthethickporridgeweremade.

Atthatmoment,broadsmilesspreadacrosstheirfaces.

(87

words)Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“Mom,happyMother’sDay!”

theysaidwithonevoice.Themotherlookedatthesweet-smelling

breakfast

-theFrenchtoastandthechickenporridge,saying,

“MyGod,youaresogreat!”

Hervoiceshookwithemotion,a

waveofhappinessflooding

her.

Shesuddenlyfeltherchildren

hadgrownup!

Seeingjoyandpride

ontheir

mother’s

face,Jenna

andJeff

couldn’thidetheirexcitement.

TheMother’sDayprogramalsomadethemawareofthevalueoflabor.(82words)[169words]10.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Theypretendedtobepoised,tryingtoblockthemessyscenefromhisfather’ssight.

However,theodorofburningbetrayedthem.Questionedby

hisfather,Jeffnarratedthewholestory,

twiddlingwithhisfingers

nervously.

“

Oh,man.Youguysaresosweet.Nowlet’sgetmomasurprise!”

theirfathersaidinasoothingmanner,

hispreviousangergivingplacetoecstasy.

Withouthesitation,theirfatherguidedthemtoprepareforthefestivefeast.

Notlongafterthat,aninvitingcuisinewasready.

Then

theirfatherretiredintothebedroom.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

“HappyMother’sDay!”

thetwinsexclaimedtogether.Theirmothergotoutofthebed,

hardlyableto

believethegiftbeforeher.Shefeltawarmupsurgeinherheart,

tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.

Stretchingout

herarms,shelappedtheminherarms.

“Thankyou,sweethearts.Itisthe

bestmealI’veeverhad,”

shesaid

after

savoringthesandwich.Atthatmoment,proudandoverjoyed,JeffandJennastealthilywinkedattheirfatherstandingbesidethem.Actually,notonly

isthemealasurprise

but

asecretbondingthefatherwithhistwins.11.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Catchingsightoftheirfather,Jenna’sgloomyfaceturnedintobigsmilewhileJeffwastryinghardtofightbacktears.Confusedaboutwhathadhappened,thefatherdartedtocheckJeff’shandandatthesametimelistenedtoJenna’sexplanationcarefully.Anexpressionofintensejoyilluminatingthefather’seyesaftergettingtoknowthelovelyheartofhistwins,hepatientlyguidedthemtomakeattemptonceagain.Withinhalfanhour,sweet-smellingporridgeandwell-bakedbreadwerelyingonadelicateplate,onwhichaheartwasdrawnwithsomeapplejam.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

“HappyMother’sDay,dearMom.”

thetwinswhisperedtotheirmother.Withambersunlightpiercingthroughthewindow,themotherhadadrowsylookatthetwinsandthenglancedatthefoodintheirhands,tearsmistinghereyes.Shequicklytookholdoftheplate,putitonthetable,andhuggedthetwinstightlyinherarms,murmuring,

“Thankyou,mybabies.Youaremybestgifts.”

Justatthatmoment,thefathertiptoedin,lookingatthesceneasifhehadthewholeworldhewanted.Lovemaybeclumsy,butbeautifulindeed.12.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Spottingthemessysituation,theirfatherunderstoodeverything.Insteadofblamingthemfortheircarelessness,theirfatherputonabrightsmileandpattedontheirheads.

“

Doyouwanttogiveyourmotherasurprise?Letmehelpyoufixit.

”

Fathersaidwithamischievoustwinkleinhiseyes.Hearingthewords,thetwinsnoddedtheirheads,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.Underthefather’sinstruction,theyfirstcleanedupthemess,andthentheyrespectivelytookresponsibilityforFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Withtheexperienceoffailure,theyaccomplishedtheirtaskperfectlythistime.Lookingattheinvitingbreakfast,theyweredeprivedofallpowerofspeechbyexcitement.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theinstantshenoticedthebreakfastwasbroughtinbed,arippleofexcitementflashedthroughherface.Hereyeswanderedbetweenthebreakfastandthetwinsasifshewasaskingwhathappened.

“HappyMother’sDay!”

thetwinsexclaimedwithonevoice.Themother’sfacebeamedandhershiningsmilelituptheroom.

“Thankyoumyangles!Comehereandgivemeahug.”Thetwinsrushedintotheirmother’sarmsandjustatthatmoment,their

fatherstoppedbehindthem.

“Hey!Lookhere!”

Themotherandthetwinsturnedtheirheadssimultaneously.

“Click-click.”

Usingthecamera,thefatherrecordedthememorablescene.WhataMother’sDaySurprise!13.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Withtearsinhereyes,Jennarantoherfatherandexplainedeverything.AfterconfirmingtheburnonJeff’shandwaswelltended,theirfathercheeredthemup,helpedthemcleanitupandpreparedthebreakfastalloveragain.Itdidn’ttakehimtoolongtofillaplatewithtoastandabowlwithporridge.

“Let’shopeyourmotherisstillfastasleep”

prayedtheirfather,

“Bringitupandgiveherabigsurprise.”Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“What’sgoing

…”

theirmother’squestionwasinterruptedbythesweetscentofthebreakfast.Sheexclaimedwithdisbelief,

“OhmyGod,thankyousomuchmychildren!ThisisthebestMother’sDayever!”

Thensheslowlyenjoyedeverybitofthebreakfast,withthetwinsexcitedlytellingherabouttheirsecretplan,theirdisappointingpreparationandtheirfather’stimelyhelp.Theirfatherwentbacktothebedroomwhentheyjustfinishedtheirstory.

“Darling,whatdoyouthinkofthebreakfast?”

heasked.

“Unique,becauseittastesofloveandcare”

shesmiledalongwiththetwins.14.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Withtearsinhereyes,Jennarantoherfatherandexplainedeverything.AfterconfirmingtheburnonJeff’shandwaswelltended,theirfathercheeredthemup,helpedthemcleanitupandpreparedthebreakfastalloveragain.Itdidn’ttakehimtoolongtofillaplatewithtoastandabowlwithporridge.

“Let’shopeyourmotherisstillfastasleep”

prayedtheirfather,

“Bringitupandgiveherabigsurprise.”Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“What’sgoing

…”

theirmother’squestionwasinterruptedbythesweetscentofthebreakfast.Sheexclaimedwithdisbelief,

“OhmyGod,thankyousomuchmychildren!ThisisthebestMother’sDayever!”

Thensheslowlyenjoyedeverybitofthebreakfast,withthetwinsexcitedlytellingherabouttheirsecretplan,theirdisappointingpreparationandtheirfather’stimelyhelp.Theirfatherwentbacktothebedroomwhentheyjustfinishedtheirstory.

“Darling,whatdoyouthinkofthebreakfast?”

heasked.

“Unique,becauseittastesofloveandcare”

shesmiledalongwiththetwins.15.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Astonished,Fatherwasrootedonthefloor,staringatthescenewitheyebrowfrowning.Whenturningoffthefireintearinghurry,Jennasawtheirfatherwalkingtowardsthemwithragehaunting.

“What'sup?”

Dadquestionedtheminacoldvoice.

“We…WejustwanttomakebreakfastforMomasMother’sDaygift.”

Jennawhispered.

“I'msosorry.Dad.WemadeamessinthekitchenandJeffhadhishandburned."Soashamedwasshethatsheshedguiltytearswithheaddrooping.Onlyatthistimedidfatherrealizethatthetwinswerehisprecioustreasure.Then,withDad’shelp,JennaandJeffpreparedaheartybreakfast.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Astheirmotheropenedhereyelids,asubstantialbreakfastcaughthersightandasweetsmellwaftedintohernose.

“HappyMother’sDay!”

Thetwinscongratulated.

“Wejustwanttomakebreakfastforyouasyoudothatforus.Mom,weloveyou!”

Momkissedthemandsmileddazzlingly

“Ohdear,thankyoumysweeties.Whatabigsurprise!”

Theirfatherwasstandingbesidethedoor,recordingthistouchingscene.ThewholeroomwasbathedinahappyMother'sDayatmosphere.16.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Adisastrouskitchengreetinghiseyes,Fatherwastotallystunned,notutteringasingleword.Aftercalminghimselfdownamomentlater,hegottoknowwhatwasgoingon.Hesmiledwithragechokingbackandsaid."Doyouneedahand?"Thetwinswerefilledwithjoyandtidiedthekitchenuptorestartcookingthedishes.Thistime,everythingseemedtogosmoothlywithoutahitch.Thechickenandriceweredancingharmoniouslyintheboilingwaterpotandbreadsliceswereshowingoffitsmosttremendousgoldencolor.Despitetheoilstainsandholesonthetwinsaprons,not