專題05應(yīng)用文寫作（第09期）-2023屆江蘇高考英語模擬試題分項匯編【2023屆江蘇省蘇北四市（徐州連云港宿遷淮安）高三上學(xué)期第一次調(diào)研測試】假定你是李華，上周你校舉辦了中國傳統(tǒng)文化周活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動目的；2.活動內(nèi)容；3.活動反響。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ATraditionalChineseCultureWeek________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Onepossibleversion:ATraditionalChineseCultureWeekAtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschooltoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.Duringthecampaign,westudentswereencouragedtoparticipateinnumerousculturalactivities,includingsingingChinesefolksongs,attendingChinesecalligraphyclassesandintroducingtraditionalChinesefestivals.Everyoneofuschoseonetoourtasteandweenjoyedourselvesverymuch.Thecampaignwasasuccessandhasgainedinpopularityamongusstudents,whichwillencourageustofurtherspreadChinesecultureinfuture.【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生為上周你校舉辦的中國傳統(tǒng)文化周活動寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：活動目的；活動內(nèi)容；活動反響。1.詞匯積累增加：enhance→boost參加：participatein→takepartin許多：numerous→massesof獲得：gained→obtained2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：AtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschooltoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.拓展句：AtraditionalChinesecultureweekcampaignwaslaunchedlastweekinourschool,whosepurposewastoenhancestudents’confidenceinournationalculture.【點睛】[高分句型1]Duringthecampaign,westudentswereencouragedtoparticipateinnumerousculturalactivities,includingsingingChinesefolksongs,attendingChinesecalligraphyclassesandintroducingtraditionalChinesefestivals.(運用了非謂語動詞作賓語)[高分句型2]Thecampaignwasasuccessandhasgainedinpopularityamongusstudents,whichwillencourageustofurtherspreadChinesecultureinfuture.(運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【江蘇省南通市2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期12月月考】假如你是李華,一名高三學(xué)生。英語作文讀后續(xù)寫這一項讓你備受困擾。你計劃向南京師范大學(xué)張教授(此領(lǐng)域的專家)寫一封求助信。希望他幫你在情節(jié)構(gòu)思、語言組織和表達等方面給予指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括:1.介紹困擾;2.希望得到幫助。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右:2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:讀后續(xù)寫continuationwritingDearProfessorZhang,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范范文】DearProfessorZhang,IamLiHua,aseniorthreestudent.Recently,I’vebeenstrugglingwithmycontinuationwriting.Learningthatyouareanexpertinit,Iamwritingtoseekadvicefromyou.Iamencounteringsomeproblemswhichbothermealot.Firstofall,Ihavedifficultyindesigningplots.Inaddition,Iamatalosshowtoapplyproperexpressionstomywriting,whichmakesmefrustrated.Facingtheproblems,I’manxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonhowtosolvetheseproblems?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生寫一封求助信，向南京師范大學(xué)張教授求助如何寫讀后續(xù)寫。1.詞匯積累尋求：seek→lookfor首先：firstofall→tostartwith困難：difficulty→trouble另外：inaddition→furthermore2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Facingtheproblems,I’manxioustogetyourhelp.拓展句：WhenIfacetheproblems,I’manxioustogetyourhelp.【點睛】[高分句型1]Learningthatyouareanexpertinit,Iamwritingtoseekadvicefromyou.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Inaddition,Iamatalosshowtoapplyproperexpressionstomywriting,whichmakesmefrustrated.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【江蘇省無錫市江陰市2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期1月期末】上周你校舉辦了一場籃球比賽活動。請你寫一篇英文報道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動目的；2.活動過程；3.活動意義。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Possibleversion1:p.m.Fridaywitnessedabasketballgameontheplayground,whichwasmeanttoenrichstudents’campuslife.Withawhistle,afiercebasketballgamekickedoffat1:00p.m.Alltheplayerswentallouttoshoot,showingtremendousenthusiasm.Astheyfiercelycompeted,loudapplauseanddeafeningcheersfilledtheair.Duringthegame,theplayersalsodemonstratedthesportsmanshipoffriendshipfirstandcompetitionsecond.Thematchwasundoubtedlyasuccess.Itnotonlycontributedtoaclosebondbetweenstudents,butalsoenrichedourschoollife.Possibleversion2:LastFridaywitnessedabasketballmatchinourschool,whoseaimwastohelpbuildupourbody.Theprincipaldeliveredanopeninglectureat1:00pm,afterwhichthematchbegan.Representativesfromeachclasswentalllengthstoshoot.Theotherstudentscheeredwithenthusiasm.Afterseveralrounds,ClassOneGradeThreesnatchedthefinalchampionship.Thematchwasundoubtedlyasuccess.Itnotonlycontributedtoaclosebondbetweenstudents,butalsoenrichedourschoollife.【解析】本篇書面表達屬于新聞報道，要求考生報道校內(nèi)的一場籃球比賽活動，包括活動目的、過程及意義。1.詞匯積累激烈的：fierce→intense極大的：tremendous→huge毫無疑問：undoubtedly→withoutdoubt促進：contributeto→promote2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Alltheplayerswentallouttoshoot,showingtremendousenthusiasm.拓展句：Alltheplayerswentallouttoshoot,whoshowedtremendousenthusiasm.【點睛】【高分句型1】LastFridaywitnessedabasketballgameontheplayground,whichwasmeanttoenrichstudents’campuslife.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Astheyfiercelycompeted,loudapplauseanddeafeningcheersfilledtheair.（運用了as引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）only...butalso...otonlycontributedtoaclosebondbetweenstudents,butalsoenrichedourschoollife.（運用了notonly...butalso...句型）【江蘇省揚州市高郵市第一中學(xué)等2校2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期1月期末】假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，因為感染新冠病毒人數(shù)還在不斷增加，請你代表學(xué)生會就如何過好即將到來的寒假，給全體學(xué)生一些建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.做好個人防護。2.注意勞逸結(jié)合。注意：1.寫作詞匯應(yīng)為80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：新冠病毒novelcoronavirusDearstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’Union【參考范文】Dearstudents,Withmanypeoplebeinginfectedwithnovelcoronavirus,we’dliketomakesomeconstructivesuggestionstohelpyouspendameaningfulwinterholiday.Tobeginwith,confrontedwiththeseriouscondition,westudentshadbetterhavepersonalprotectioninpublicandstayathometohaveenoughrestifpossible.Inaddition,sopreciousisthetimethatwecan’taffordtowasteitasseniorstudents.Itisadvisablethatweshouldkeepabalancebetweenrelaxationandstudy.Hopefully,theadvicewillofbenefittoyou.Students’Union【解析】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生代表學(xué)生會就如何過好即將到來的寒假，給全體學(xué)生一些建議。1.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→advice首先：tobeginwith→firstofall另外：inaddition→what’smore放松：relaxation→easing2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Withmanypeoplebeinginfectedwithnovelcoronavirus,we’dliketomakesomeconstructivesuggestionstohelpyouspendameaningfulwinterholiday.拓展句：Asmanypeopleareinfectedwithnovelcoronavirus,we’dliketomakesomeconstructivesuggestionstohelpyouspendameaningfulwinterholiday.【點睛】[高分句型1]Inaddition,sopreciousisthetimethatwecan’taffordtowasteitasseniorstudents.(so位于句首的倒裝句和that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)[高分句型2]Itisadvisablethatweshouldkeepabalancebetweenrelaxationandstudy.(that引導(dǎo)的主語從句)【江蘇省南通市如皋市2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期1月期末】假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，隨著防疫政策的調(diào)整，周圍越來越多的人感染，請你圍繞“從我做起，共戰(zhàn)疫情”這一主題，給全校學(xué)生寫一封倡議書。要點如下：1.倡議的原因和目的；2.倡議的具體內(nèi)容；3.發(fā)出倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Onepossibleversion:Dearschoolmates,Withtheadjustmentsoftheanti-pandemicpolicy,moreandmorepeoplearoundushavecaughtthevirus.Facedwiththeriskofbeingaffected,westudentsshouldrespondactivelytotheappealfromtheauthorityandexperts.Firstofall,stayathomeanddon’tgooutifnotnecessary.Inaddition,dowearmaskswhileintheopenair,whichcanreducethechanceofcontractingthevirus.Washinghandsasoftenaspossibleisneeded,too.Moreimportantly,weoughttotakeapositiveattitudetothecampaignwiththedisease.Let’sworkhandinhandtoovercomeanxietyanddoourbits.TheStudents’Union【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生圍繞“從我做起，共戰(zhàn)疫情”這一主題給全校學(xué)生寫一封倡議書，介紹倡議的原因、目的和具體內(nèi)容。1.詞匯積累首先：firstofall→firstly此外：inaddition→what’smore機會：chance→opportunity克服：overcome→conquer2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Moreimportantly,weoughttotakeapositiveattitudetothecampaignwiththedisease.拓展句：Moreimportantly,weoughttotakeapositiveattitudetothecampaignwiththedisease,whichwillhelpusovercomeanxiety.【點睛】【高分句型1】Facedwiththeriskofbeingaffected,westudentsshouldrespondactivelytotheappealfromtheauthorityandexperts.（運用了過去分詞短語在句中作狀語）【高分句型2】Inaddition,dowearmaskswhileintheopenair,whichcanreducethechanceofcontractingthevirus.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【江蘇省南京市2022-2023學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期1月六校聯(lián)合調(diào)研測試】假定你是李華，上周外教Mr.Green布置了一份作業(yè)，截止時間是本周五，但是你因故不能如期提交。請你給Mr.Green寫一封郵件，申請延期提交作業(yè)，要點如下：1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Mr.Green,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】Mr.Green,IamwritingtoshowmydeepapologyfornotbeingabletosubmitmyhomeworkonFriday.Asoneoftherepresentativesofourschool,IamscheduledtoparticipateinaPoetryReadingCompetition,whichleavesnotenoughtimeformyhomework.IsincerelyhopeyoucanoffermeanotherchanceandletmesubmitmyhomeworknextMonday.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandthankyouforyourunderstanding.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就本周五因故不能如期提交作業(yè)一事給Mr.Green寫一封郵件，申請延期提交作業(yè)，要點如下：1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因。1.詞匯積累提交：submit→handin參加：participatein→takepartin誠摯的：sincerely→genuinely機會：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：IamwritingtoshowmydeepapologyfornotbeingabletosubmitmyhomeworkinFriday.拓展句：Iamwritingtoshowmydeepapology,becauseIwillbenotabletosubmitmyhomeworkinFriday.【點睛】【高分句型1】Asoneoftherepresentativesofourschool,IamscheduledtoparticipateinaPoetryReadingCompetition,whichleavesnotenoughtimeformyhomework.(運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】IsincerelyhopeyoucanoffermeanotherchanceandletmesubmitmyhomeworknextMonday.(運用了省略that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)【江蘇省常熟中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期一月份學(xué)業(yè)質(zhì)量校內(nèi)調(diào)研】假定你是李華，一個月前你從某海外網(wǎng)站買了一本原版小說《小王子》。今天到貨后，發(fā)現(xiàn)包裹已破，書頁污損。你想給網(wǎng)站客服Smith先生寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.購書情況；2.陳述問題；3.提出訴求。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMrSmith,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearMrSmith,MynameisLiHua,oneofyourcustomers.IorderedanoriginalnovelLittlePrinceamonthagoonyourwebsite.TodayIreceivedthepackagewithdisappointment.It’spartlybrokenwhendeliveredtome.What’sworse,somepagesofthebookaredamagedandstained,nolongerreadable.Attachedtotheemailisapictureofthesepages.Ihopeyoueitherdeliveranewbooktomeorgivemymoneyback.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給網(wǎng)站客服Smith先生寫一封電子郵件，投訴海外網(wǎng)站買了一本原版小說《小王子》包裹已破，書頁污損的問題。1.詞匯積累訂購：order→giveanorderfor更糟的是：What’sworse→Evenworse照片：picture→photo期望：lookforwardto→expect2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：MynameisLiHua,oneofyourcustomers.拓展句：MynameisLiHua,whoisoneofyourcustomers.【點睛】【高分句型1】It’spartlybrokenwhendeliveredtome.（運用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句和省略結(jié)構(gòu)）【高分句型2】Attachedtotheemailisapictureofthesepages.（運用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）【江蘇省揚州中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期末】假如你是李華，你聽說好友小明因為壓力太大想輟學(xué)。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示給他寫一封信：1.勸小明正確對待壓力，并提出減輕壓力的幾個方法；2.希望小明接受自己的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右：2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearXiaoMing,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【參考范文】Dear?Xiaoming,I’m?sorry?to?learn?that?you?intend?to?drop?out?for?high?stress.Asoneofyourbestfriends,Ihopethatyoucangiveuptheidea.First?of?all,you?should?have?a?right?attitude?towards?stress.Stress?is?a?small?part?in?our?normal?life.Second,?I?suggest?you?calm?down?and?find?out?the?cause?of?your?stress?and?manage?to?come?up?with?ways?of?dealing?with?it.Astohowtoreducestress,youmaytakeexercise,listentomusicorturntoyourteachersorclassmatesforhelp.I?hope?that?you?can?take?my?suggestion?into?account?and?I’m?convinced?that?you?will?make?arightdecision.Yours?truly,Li?hua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封信給好友小明，讓小明正確對待壓力和提出一些建議。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文人稱：第一、二人稱時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總-分-總法要點：1.勸小明正確對待壓力，并提出減輕壓力的幾個方法；2.希望小明接受自己的建議。第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）intend?to；drop?out；bestfriends；giveup；have?a?right?attitude?towards；normal?life；calm?down；find?out；manage?todo；come?up?with；deal?with；asto；takeexercise；listento；turntosb.forhelp；take?sth.?into?account；make?arightdecision等第三步：連詞成句1.I’m?sorry?to?learn?that?you?intend?to?drop?out?for?high?stress.2.Asoneofyourbestfriends,Ihopethatyoucangiveuptheidea.3.You?should?have?a?right?attitude?towards?stress.4.I?suggest?you?calm?down?and?find?out?the?cause?of?your?stress?and?manage?to?come?up?with?ways?of?dealing?with?it.5.Astohowtoreducestress,youmaytakeexercise,listentomusicorturntoyourteachersorclassmatesforhelp.6.I?hope?that?you?can?take?my?suggestion?into?account?and?I’m?convinced?that?you?will?make?arightdecision.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First?of?all；Second；2.表并列補充關(guān)系：asto；and；or；連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改【點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：I’m?sorry?to?learn?that?you?intend?to?drop?out?for?high?stress.這句話使用了由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；Ihopethatyoucangiveuptheidea.這句話也使用了由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；I?suggest?you?calm?down?and?find?out?the?cause?of?your?stress?and?manage?to?come?up?with?ways?of?dealing?with?it.這句話使用了省略that的賓語從句；I?hope?that?you?can?take?my?suggestion?into?account?and?I’m?convinced?that?you?will?make?arightdecision.這句話使用了由and連接的并列句等。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！窘K省南京市第三高級中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三上期期末英語達標(biāo)訓(xùn)練】你所在班級正在進行“迎北京冬奧”英文手抄報評選活動。你將代表學(xué)習(xí)小組向全班展示本組作品。請你寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿，須包括以下要點:1.主要欄目;2.設(shè)計亮點;3.呼吁投票。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Goodmorning.It'smypleasuretopresentmygroup'swallpaper.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Goodmorning.Itismypleasuretopresentmygroup’swallpaper.The“BeijingOlympicWinterGamesisaroundthecorner”,ourgroup’swallpaperiswelldesignedinbothlayoutandcontent.Inthewallpaper,variouscolumnsareavailable,rangingfromthelatestupdatesontheevent’spreparationtothedetailedintroductionofseveralmostanticipatedgamestobeheld.Appealingasallthesecolumnsare,theonewearemostkeenonisthelegendarystoriesofathletes.Throughthesestories,notonlycanwegettoknowthembetter,butalsowewilldefinitelybeinspiredbythem.Dovoteforusifyouarefondofourwallpaper.Thanksforyourattention.【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿，向全班展示你組參加“迎北京冬奧”英文手抄報的作品。1.詞匯積累各種各樣的：various→varied快要來了：bearoundthecorner→bedrawingnear（在……到……內(nèi)）變動：rangefrom...to...→varyfrom...to...喜愛：befondof→bekeenon2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inthewallpaper,variouscolumnsareavailable,rangingfromthelatestupdatesontheevent’spreparationtothedetailedintroductionofseveralmostanticipatedgamestobeheld.拓展句：Inthewallpaper,variouscolumnsareavailable,whichrangefromthelatestupdatesontheevent’spreparationtothedetailedintroductionofseveralmostanticipatedgamestobeheld.【點睛】[高分句型1]Appealingasallthesecolumnsare,theonewearemostkeenonisthelegendarystoriesofathletes.（運用了as引起的表語提前的部分倒裝，that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that）[高分句型2]Throu