英語專業(yè)八級寫作指導(dǎo)(forstudents)WritingDirections:“Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks”,英語專八作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評價一篇八級作文的得分多少，大致可以參照以下四個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)來確定:內(nèi)容(content)、組織(organization)、語法(grammar)和得體性(appropriateness),這四個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，前兩個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是關(guān)于內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)的，屬于謀篇布局部分，后兩個是關(guān)于語言的，屬于表達部分。在八級考試的作文評閱中，一般將作文分為五個等級：第五級：化秀作文(effectivemunicationwithaccuracies)這樣的作丈觀點清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，內(nèi)容充實，語言運用得體，基本沒有語言錯誤.得分在18-20分。第四級：良好作文(goodmunicationwithfewinaccuracies)這樣的作文觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，內(nèi)容充實，語言運用較得體，稍有語言錯誤。得分在15-17分。第三級：尚可作文(passablemunicationwithsomeinaccuracies)這樣的作文觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容尚可，語言運用的得體性一般，語言錯誤不少，影響到作文的理解,得分在14-12分。第二級：問題作文（problematicmunicationwithfrequentinaccuracies)這樣的作丈觀點不甚明確，結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，內(nèi)容匱乏，語言得體性較差，語言錯誤較多，影響到作文的理解.得分在11-9分。第一級：失敗作文(almostnomunication)這樣的作丈基本沒有達到寫作要求，幾乎無結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容可言，通篇充斥語言錯誤，無語言得體性可言，作文難以理解.得分在8-6分或以下。全球化globalization高科技產(chǎn)品high-techproducts盜版piratedproducts可持續(xù)發(fā)展sustainabledevelopment素質(zhì)教育educationforall-rounddevelopmentquality-orientededucation學(xué)生減負(fù)toreducestudyload上網(wǎng)getonline/surfthenet網(wǎng)民netizen(netcitizen)力口入China’sentryintoWTO申辦奧運會bidfortheOlympicGames小康relativelyfortablelivingstandard安居工程housingprojectforlow-eurbanresidents再就業(yè)工程reemploymentproject假冒偽劣商品fakemodities腐敗現(xiàn)象corruptionphenomenon信息化information-based;informationization下崗職工laid-offworkers資源枯竭resourcesexhaustion環(huán)保意識environmentalawareness美容手術(shù)cosmeticsurgery如要表示“我認(rèn)為”，不要僅依靠Ithink:IbelieveIsupposeImaintainIclaimIargueI’mconvincedthat,I’moftheopinionthat,IholdtheviewthatAsforme,AsfarasI’mconcerned,AsfarasIcansee,如要表示“重要的”，不要僅依靠important:significant,vital,essential,crucial,beofgreatimportance,figureprominently/largelyItis。thatcounts.playakeyrole,shouldbetakenseriously,attachgreatimportanceto如要表示“關(guān)于”，不要僅依靠about:concerning,regarding,asregards,asto,withregardtowithreferenceto,relevantto,relatedto,involve,haveconnectionwith,havesomethingtodowith如要表示“說明”， 不要僅依靠show:indicate,reveal,demonstrate,convey,suggest,illustrate如要表示“使”,不要僅依靠make:Thissocietystillmakeswomenunabletoenjoyequalrights.Womenarestilldeniedequalrights.Theincidentmademerecalloneofmypastexperiences.Theincidentremindedmeofoneofmypastexperiences.如要表達“越來越”，不要只使用moreandmore:MoreandmorestudentsfindlearningEnglishhasemoreandmoredifficult.Studentsingrowingnumbersfindlearninghaseincreasinglydifficult.Moreandmoreteenagerssmokecigarettesinrecentyears.Teenagesmokingisontheriseinrecentyears.Moreandmoreteachersaredemandedwiththedevelopmentofeconomy.Thereisanincreasingdemandforteacherswiththedevelopmentofeconomy.如要表達“大多數(shù)”，不要一味使用most:Moststudentstakepart-timejobafterclass.Thevastmajorityofstudentstakeapart-timejobafterclass.Mostpeopletakepartinsportsofdifferentkinds.Theconsiderableproportionofpeopletakespartinsportofdifferentkinds.Mostcollegestudentstakeanegativeattitudetowardssmoking.Thelargepercentageofcollegepopulationtakeanegativeattitudetowardssmoking如要表達“不僅，而且”如要表達“不僅，而且”,socialbutalsopsychological.Thefactorsforariseinteenagesmokingarepsychologicalaswellassocial.Takingapart-timejobcannotonlyearnalittlemoney,butalsohaveanopportunitytocontactwithsociety.Takingapart-timejobmeansmorethanalittlemoneyyoucanearn.Italsomeansanopportunitytocontactwithsociety.Oldpeoplegotoparknotonlytodoexercisebutalsotomakefriends.Oldpeoplegotoparkasmuchforpanionshipasforexercise.不要總是以有生命的名詞和人稱代詞開頭(受漢語表達習(xí)慣的影響，不少考生總喜歡以I,People,We等開頭)，a.ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.Itiswidely(monly,generally)thought/believed/held/acceptedthatbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.Moreandmorepeopleagree(realize/areaware)thatwomenshouldenjoyfullequalitywithmen.Thereisagrowingagreement(realization/awareness)thatwomenshouldenjoyfullequalitywithmen.ManyChinesepeoplehavegonetotheUnitedStatesinthepast15years.Thepast15yearshavebroughtmanyChinesepeopletoUnitedStates.Wealmostforgetthisevent.Thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.a.Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.b.Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired.Weeasilydrewtheconclusionthroughtheinvestigation.Theinvestigationeasilyledustotheconclusion.不要千篇一律的使用主動態(tài)(英語中被動結(jié)構(gòu)的使用頻率遠(yuǎn)高于漢語)，a)WearemakinggreateffortstoimproveourEnglish.b)GreateffortsarebeingmadetoimproveourEnglish.a)Weknowverylittleaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.b)Littleisknownaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.Becauseofsocialdemands,thereappearmanyeveningschools.Manyeveningschoolsarecalledintoexistencebysocialdemands.Socialdemandsgiverisetotheemergenceofmanyeveningschools.Wemaythinkmoreoftheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.Morethoughtmaybegiventotheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.不要總是用if(如果),because(因為),when(當(dāng))等口語意味較重的句子，要注意使用書面語體的句子，Ifyouparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicyclesaresuperiortocars.Carefulparisonofbicycleswithcarswillshowthesuperiorityoftheformeroverthelatter.Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresults.Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon’tbringyougoodresults.Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth,wewillhaveacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowthisessentialtoacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.Whenawomanseesthatsheisgoingtobelaidoff,shebeginstoworryalldayandnight.Themereprospectoflay-offwouldsetawomantoworryalldayandnight.Whenourteacherhadleft,theheateddiscussionthenendedThedepartureofourteacherbroughttheheateddiscussiontoanend.Onlywhenwemakecontinuousefforts,canweseizeanopportunitywhenitoccurs.Continuouseffortsmustbemadebeforeitispossibleforustoseizeanopportunitywhenitoccurs.Becausewecannotapplybookknowledgetopractice,wecannothandlerealproblemsinsociety.Theinabilitytoapplybookknowledgetopracticepreventsusfromhandlingrealproblemsinsociety.Becausethedecisionrecognizestherightofstudents,sotheyalleit.Studentsallethedecisionwhichrecognizestheirrights.不要對動詞過分依賴；要學(xué)會用名詞結(jié)構(gòu)來表達意思.Thestyleoflivinghasemoreandmorepopularandacceptedbymoreandmoreyoungpeople.Thestyleoflivinghasfounditsgrowingpopularityandacceptanceamongyoungpeople.Itistimeforustoreviseeducationalsystemandthenprovideittooursociety.Itistimeforustoprovideoursocietyarevisededucationalsystem.IfwearewatchingtoomuchTV,ourreadingabilitywillbeseriouslyaffected.HeavyexposuretoTVwillexertanegativeeffectonourreadingability.Ifwedon’trecognizetheseriousproblemofgrowingpopulation,wewillmakeabigmistake.Failuretorecognizetheseriousnessofgrowingpopulationwillleadtoabigmistake.不要總是用肯定句來表達，要學(xué)會用否定句來表達肯定的意思Everyyoungboyandgirlwantstoearnalittlemoneytohelpcoverhighercollegecost.Thereishardlyayoungboyandgirlwhodoesn’twanttoearnalittlemoneytohelpcoverhighercollegecost.Wheneveryoupickupanewspaper,youwillalwaysfindadvertisements.Itisimpossibletopickupanewspaperwithoutfindingadvertisements.Gatheringaroundandlisteningtomotherorfatherreadagoodstoryisthebestpastimestobringafamilyclosertogether.Fewpastimesbringafamilyclosertogetherthangatheringaroundandlisteningtomotherorfatherreadagoodstory.Foodisthemostbasicissuetoindividualandnationalsurvival.Noissueisasbasictoindividualandnationalsurvivalasfood.恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂门疟?、平行句Toerrishuman,toforgive,divine.Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen.Ithinkwomenshouldespeciallyhavetherighttopetewithmenforjobsonequalterms.Theyshouldgetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob.Theyshouldalsohaveequalopportunitiesforpromotion.Iaminfavorofequalrightforwomen,especiallytherighttopetewithmenforjobsonequalterms,therighttogetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob,andtherighttoequalopportunitiesforpromotion.Thenationwidecontroversyoverthecurrentreformswilltestthecourageofourpeople.Throughthecontroversywecanalsoseethedeterminationofourgovernment.Thenationwidecontroversyoverthecurrentreformswilltestthecourageofourpeopleandthedeterminationofourgovernment.ForthefirsttimeinhistoryChinesecitizensheldsuchpowerintheirownhands.Inthepasttheyhaveneverbeenallowedsuchvigorousandunrestraineddebateonpolitics.NeverbeforeinhistoryhaveChinesecitizensheldsuchpowerintheirownhands.Neverbeforeinhistoryhavetheybeenallowedsuchvigorousandunrestraineddebateonpolitics.建議：一定要背會一些常見句型，以減少語法錯誤?？忌诙潭?0分鐘內(nèi)寫出200詞的作文，如果考前不做準(zhǔn)備，考試中緊張，自然寫出的作文枯燥無味，還多語法錯，而如果考生已經(jīng)背了一部分固定的語句，臨場再加進與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的一部分，就勝券在握了。Thereisnodenyingthat毋庸置疑Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat普遍認(rèn)為Itgoeswithoutsayingthat不言而喻Nowadays,withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology(moderncivilization,marketeconomy),thereisagrowingconcernover(awarenessof).Neverbeforeinhistoryhastheissueof。beenmoreevidentthannow.Whenitesto,people’snotionsvaryfromonetoanother.Recentlyasensationaldebatehastakenplaceastowhetheror.isaclassicexampleofsuccess.(isacaseinpoint.)Icannotthinkofnobetterillustrationsthanthefollowingones.Generallyspeaking,therearethreeprimaryfactorsaccountingforthechange.Whydoesthisphenomenontakeplace?Peopletendtofocuson(concentrate)threefundamentalfactors.Takingintoaccountalltheabovefactors,wecansafelydrawaconclusionthatOnthebasisoftheaboveanalyses,wecanconfidentlypredictthefuturetendency.Thereisnodenyingthatwillcontinueinthebetterdirection(willbeontherise).Itisessentialtoheedwarningsofpotentiallycatastrophicconsequencesassociatedwithand,inturn,toattachtoppriorityinfindingeffectivesolutionstoensureabrighterfuture.11種段落起始段1話題引出段2現(xiàn)狀說明段3圖畫圖表描述段擴展段4觀點對比段5利弊說明段6舉例說明段7原因列舉段8意義闡釋段結(jié)論段9歸納結(jié)論段10預(yù)測趨勢段11建議措施段建議：把各種段落模式爛熟于心，以不變應(yīng)萬變。專四滿分作文Newconceptsalwayspenetrateourdailyliveswithoutbeingnoticed.Whenmostofusareaccustomedtospendingthesparetimereading,moreandmorecollegestudentsbegintotakepart-timejobeitherinsideoroutsidethecampus.Itismyconstantbeliefthatitsprosoutweighitscons;bythatImean,ithasfarmorepotentialadvantagesthandisadvantagesthatcanbeminimized.Firstly,apart-timejobprovideastudentwithachancetopracticewhathehaslearnedfrombooks,especiallyinthefieldssuchaseconomics,engineeringandteaching.Practicemakesperfect.Secondly,itcanhelpthestudentstobeeconomicallyindependentoftheirparents,althoughsometimesjustpartially.Ontheonehand,parentsmayhavealighterburdenofthecollegetuitionsandmiscellaneousexpensesoftheirsonsordaughtersthantheyusedtohave.Ontheotherhand,westudentswillrealizethatmoneyesnotaseasilyaswethink,thusdevelopgoodhabitsofnotwastingit.Andfinally,ifwecanbalancethetimespentonboththestudyandthework,itwon’tethecauseoffailureinacademicstudy.What’smore,aparttimejobmaymakeourcampuslifemoreexciting.Inviewoftheproceedingparagraph,Iwouldliketomendthateverystudenttakeapart-timejob,ifpossible.專人滿分作文WritingTask(45mins)20%(2006)JosephEpstein,afamouswriter,oncesaid,“Wedecidewhatisimportantandwhatistrivialinlife.Wedecide(so)thatwhatmakesussignificantiseitherwhatwedoorwhatwerefusetodo.Butnomatterhowindifferenttheuniversemaybetoourchoicesanddecisions,thesechoicesanddecisionsareourstomake.Wedecide.Wechoose.Andaswedecideandchoose,soareourlivesformed.Intheend,formingourowndestinyiswhatambitionisabout.’Doyouagreeordisagreewithhim?Writeanessayabout400wordsentitled:AmbitionthewordambitionsovividlyandaccuratelydefinedthaninJosephEpstein’smentthat“intheend,formingourowndestinyiswhatambitionisabout."Acosmeticdefinitionasitseems,h