記敘文寫作策略2序言部分：引出主題和背景ItwasatypicalSundaymorning,andIwaslyinginbedscrollingthroughmysocialmediafeeds.Iwasboredanddidn'treallyhaveanythingplannedfortheday.That'swhenIsawit,anadforahotairballoonride.Now,I'vealwaysbeenabitofanadventurejunkie,butIhadneverbeeninahotairballoonbefore.IknewIhadtodoit.

那是一個(gè)典型的星期天早晨，我躺在床上翻看社交媒體。我感到無聊，也沒有什么計(jì)劃安排在當(dāng)天。就在這時(shí)，我看到了一個(gè)熱氣球飛行的廣告。我一直都是冒險(xiǎn)愛好者，但以前從未嘗試過熱氣球。我知道我必須去體驗(yàn)一下。

主體部分：敘述故事的情節(jié)

Iarrivedatthelaunchsitejustasthesunwascomingup.Thehotairballoonwasalreadyinflatedandwaitingforus.Iclimbedintothebasketalongsideafewotherpassengers,andweslowlyliftedofftheground.Itwasanincrediblefeeling,soaringhighupintotheskywiththewindinmyhair.Aswedriftedoverthecity,thepilotpointedoutdifferentlandmarksandgaveusabitofhistory.Itwaspeacefulandquietupthere,andIfeltlikeIwasinanotherworld.IwassocaughtupintakingitallinthatIalmostdidn'tnoticewhenthepilotstartedtolookconcerned.Hetoldusthatthewindhadchangeddirectionandwewereheadingtowardssomepowerlines.Hetriedtomaneuverusaway,butitwastoolate.Wecollidedwiththecables,andthewholebasketstartedshakingviolently.Iwasterrified.Inthatmoment,weallthoughtitwastheend.Butthepilotwascalmandcollected.Heradioedforhelpandtalkedusthroughtheemergencyprocedures.Weallheldonastheballoonswayedbackandforth,tryingtofreeitselffromthecables.Andjustwhenwethoughtitcouldn'tgetanyworse,westartedtolosealtitude.Butthankfully,theemergencycrewswereontheirway.Theywereabletocutusfreefromthecablesandguideustoasafelanding.

當(dāng)太陽升起時(shí)，我到達(dá)了熱氣球發(fā)射場。熱氣球已經(jīng)被充滿熱氣，等著我們了。我和其他幾名乘客一起爬進(jìn)籃子里，我們緩緩升空。隨著風(fēng)在我頭發(fā)中拂過，我感到不可思議的感覺，高高飛天。我們飄過城市，在空中漂流時(shí)，飛行員指著不同的標(biāo)志性建筑，告訴我們一些歷史。在那里，它是寧靜而安靜的，我感覺自己仿佛身處另一個(gè)世界。我太過沉浸于這個(gè)美妙的體驗(yàn)而幾乎沒有注意到飛行員開始變得擔(dān)憂。他告訴我們，風(fēng)向變了，并且我們正在向電線靠近。他試圖把我們移開，但為時(shí)已晚。我們撞上了電纜，整個(gè)籃子開始劇烈震動(dòng)。我非常害怕。我們當(dāng)時(shí)都認(rèn)為這是結(jié)束了。但飛行員保持冷靜。他發(fā)出無線電求援并指導(dǎo)我們進(jìn)行緊急程序。我們都緊緊抓住籃子，熱氣球搖擺不定，試圖從電纜中掙脫出來。就在我們認(rèn)為情況不能更糟糕時(shí)，我們開始下降。但幸運(yùn)的是，緊急救援隊(duì)已在前往救援。他們能夠把我們從電纜中解救出來并引導(dǎo)我們安全降落。結(jié)論部分：總結(jié)故事和主題的意義Lookingbackonthatday,Irealizethatitwasatrulylife-changingexperience.Itremindedmethatlifeisunpredictable,andweneverknowwhat'sgoingtohappen.Butwithcourageanddetermination,wecanovercomeeventhemostdifficultchallenges.Despitethefrighteningexperience,I'mgratefulforthathotairballoonride.Ittaughtmetobemoreopentonewexperiencesandtocherisheverymoment.回想那一天，我意識(shí)到那是一次真正改變?nèi)松慕?jīng)歷。它提醒我生活是不可預(yù)測的，我們永遠(yuǎn)不知道會(huì)發(fā)生什么事情。但是我們有勇氣和決心，我們可以克服最困難的挑戰(zhàn)。盡管經(jīng)歷了驚嚇，但我感激那次熱氣球之旅。它教會(huì)我要更加開放地接受新的經(jīng)歷，珍惜每一刻。通過以上的模板，我們可以看到一個(gè)完整的記敘文結(jié)構(gòu)。每個(gè)部分都有自己的作用，從序言部分引入讀者、展示故事的場景和引出主題，到主體部分?jǐn)⑹銮楣?jié)和展示人物形象、引出主題和故事的目的，再到結(jié)論部分總結(jié)故事的意義和啟示并引導(dǎo)讀者思考。在寫作時(shí)，我們需要注意語言規(guī)范、句子結(jié)構(gòu)、詞匯和語調(diào)以及文章結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)方式。事先規(guī)劃并按照模板來寫，可以幫助構(gòu)建一個(gè)連貫、有吸引力的記敘文。

我校即將舉行主題為kindness的演講比賽，請你寫一篇演講稿。要點(diǎn):1.結(jié)合經(jīng)歷,簡述你幫助他人或得到幫助的事2.你對(duì)此的感想3.你未來的計(jì)劃注意：1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名。3.詞數(shù)：100左右。4.演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Goodmorning,everyone!It‘smygreathonortogiveaspeechabout“kindness”____________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!WritingTask一審(Read)1.Topic主題3.Style體裁2.Person人稱5.Tense時(shí)態(tài)6.Purpose意圖4.Keypoints要點(diǎn)theFirstPerson

thePastTenseNarrativewriting記敘文Argumentativewriting議論文

theFutureTense二列(List)1.Structure結(jié)構(gòu)thebeginningpartthemainparttheendingpart2.Content

內(nèi)容TopicExperienceFeelingPlan二列(List)3.Keypoints要點(diǎn)·Point1When,what,how，who,where……Experience：·Point2Feelings：Goodsentences？?直到嘗試了，你才會(huì)知道你會(huì)成功。?當(dāng)我看到人們臉上喜悅的表情的時(shí)候，我得到一種強(qiáng)烈的滿足感。?幫助別人對(duì)我來說是夢想成真。?我可以做自己喜歡做的事情，同時(shí)也能幫助其他人。?有了你的幫助，我才有可能……?再次感謝你改變了我的生活。Howdoyoufeelwhenyouhelpothers?IgetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseethelookofjoyonpeople’sfaces.Helpingothersisadreamcometrueforme.IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.Youhelpedtomakeitpossibleformetodosth…Thankyouagainforchangingmylife.二列(List)3.Keypoints要點(diǎn)·Point3I’mgoingtodo…InthefutureIwilldo…Icanvolunteertodo…Idecidetodo…Iplantodo…Iwouldliketodo…Iwanttodo………

theFutureTensePracticeWrite6sentencestodescribeyourexperience,feelingsandplans.kindnessExperience:____________________________________________________Feelings:______________________________________________________Plans:__________________________________________________________三加(Add)四美(Beautify)Adddetailslinkingwords,adjectives(形容詞)，adverbs(副詞)，differentsentencepatterns(不同句式)，proverbs/sayings,...予人玫瑰，手有余香。幫助別人就是幫助我們自己。你付出的越多,你得到的越多.讓我們通過幫助別人讓世界充滿愛和溫暖。Helpingothersishelpingourselves.Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.Themoreyougive,themoreyouwillget.Let’smaketheworldfullofloveandwarmthbyhelpingothers.Goodmorning,everyone!It‘smygreathonortogiveaspeechabout“kindness”.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!五查(Check)六抄(Copy)1.Allthekeypoints.內(nèi)容充實(shí)，覆蓋要點(diǎn)（內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)）2.Richwords,sentencepatterns.Nogrammarorspellingmistakes.用詞適切，語法正確，句型多樣（詞匯，語法，句型）3.Clearstructure,linkingwords…結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，意思連貫（語意，連詞，指代）4.Correctpunctuation(標(biāo)點(diǎn)),letters.Cleanandneathandwriting,100words.書寫規(guī)范，詞數(shù)適宜（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫、詞數(shù)）Today,Iwanttotalktoyouaboutkindness--animportantvaluethat,Ibelieve,canmaketheworldabetterplace.IstillrememberthedaywhenIwaswalkinghomefromschoolandsawanelderlywomanstrugglingwithhergroceries.Ididn'thesitate,Iimmediatelyofferedtohelphercarrythem.Wehadanicechatontheway,andIlearnedthatshelivedaloneanddidn'thaveanyonetohelpher.Itwasasmallactofkindness,butitmadeabigimpactinmylife.Itmademerealizethateventhesmallestgesturecanmakeadifference.Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofempathyandkindness,andIhavetriedtoincorporatethesevaluesinmydailylifeeversince.Fromholdingthedooropenforotherstolisteningtomyfriends'problems,Ibelievethateverylittleactofkindnesscansnowballintosomethingbiggerandmoremeaningful.Inthefuture,Iplantocontinuetospreadkindnessbyvolunteeringinmycommunityandhelpingthoseinneed.Ibelievethatwhenweallcometogetherandshowcompassionandempathytowardsoneanother,