Unit1

Wheredidyougoonvacation？

單元主題寫作一話題分析典型例題思路點撥素材積累小試身手話題分析本單元以“介紹某次旅行經(jīng)歷”為話題，以書信或日記的格式描述自己的某次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹自己旅行經(jīng)歷中的所見、所聞、所感、所想。寫此類作文時應注意以下幾點：1．時態(tài)是一般過去時。要注意動詞的過去式變化。2．文章的開頭句和結(jié)尾句要簡單明了，直接點題，中間段落的細節(jié)描寫是文章的重點。3．在描述旅行經(jīng)歷時，按照時間順序來寫，使用一定的關聯(lián)詞使文章層次清晰。典型例題假設今天是十月一日，天氣晴朗，你和家人去北京平谷區(qū)金海湖(JinhaiLake)游玩。請根據(jù)下面表格提示，寫一篇70詞左右的短文，記錄本次活動并簡要表達你的感受。時間

活動感受出發(fā)得比較早，早上九點到達劃船，玩沙灘排球，游泳，享用海鮮，做游戲，唱歌等疲憊但很開心思路點撥1．人稱：第一人稱為主2．時態(tài)：一般過去時(注意動詞變形)3．段落間和句子間使用恰當?shù)倪B詞。素材積累常用短語1．去劃船________________2．打沙灘排球________________3．去游泳________________4．玩得愉快________________________5．享用海鮮________________goboatingplaybeachvolleyballgoswimminghaveagoodtime/enjoyoneself

enjoyseafood常用句子1．Iwenttothemountainswithmyfamily.2．AlthoughIwastired,Ihadagoodtime.3．Wewenttothebeachandplayedbeachvolleyball.4．Wedidsomethingspecialandhadgreatfun.5．Wewentsomewhereinterestingandtookalotofphotos.高分模板TodayisNationalDay.Itwasfine.IwenttoJinhaiLakewithmyfamily.Weleftearlyinthemorningandgotthereatnine.Thereweremanypeople.①First,wewentboatingonthelake.Itwasfun.Then,Iplayedbeachvolleyballwithmyfather.Heplayedbetterandtriedhisbesttoteachme.Afterthat,wewentswimminginthelake.②IfeltlikeIwasafish.

Iwasrelaxedandenjoyedmyselfinit.Wehadlunchat12：00.Ihadsomedifferentkindsofseafood.Itwasdelicious.Finally,weplayedgamesandsangsongs.At5：00p．m.,wewentbackhome.③Althoughweweretired,wehadareallygreattime.IhopeIcangothereagain.名師點評①按照時間順序描述一天的活動，恰當?shù)厥褂眠B接詞，如：first,then,afterthat,finally，使文章更有邏輯性。②句子“IfeltlikeIwasafish.”的使用使文章更加生動形象。③結(jié)尾扣題，總結(jié)感受，表達愿望。小試身手假設你叫張寧，請根據(jù)下列提示，給你的QQ好友Helen發(fā)一封電子郵件，介紹你暑假期間的游玩情況。70詞左右。提示：1.Theplaceyouwentto.2．Howyouwentthere.3．Howlongyoustayedthere.4．Thethingsyoudid.5．Howyoufeltduringyourvacation.Onepossibleversion：DearHelen，Longtimenosee.How'syoursummervacationgoing?Letmetellyousomethingaboutmysummervacation.Lastmonth,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.Wewenttherebytrain.Westayedthereforaboutfivedays.Theweatherwasveryhot.Wedidalotofinterestingthingsthere.WewenttoBeihaiParkandtookalotofphotosthere.WevisitedtheSummerPalace.Itwaswonderful.WealsovisitedtheGreatWall.Wewentshoppingandboughtmanythi