Minesweeper（掃雷）

掃雷行動(dòng)------Proof-reading(短文改錯(cuò)專練)I’mdelighttowelcomeyoutoourWildlifeClub.You’llbesurprisedthatavariousofplantsandcreaturesarelivinghere.Herearethemostvisitedtouristsites.OneofthepleasantplaceisHollandCommon.Thishasbeenpubliclandfortwohundredofyears,andthatyou’llfindinterestingisthattheRiverOusehasitssourceintheCommon.There’sinformationboardabouttheplantsandanimalsandtheCommonisaccessibly24hoursaday.Thenthere’sHollIslandwhichwasnotedforitsgreatrangeoftrees.ItisopenonlyfromFridaytoSundaybecauseit’squitesmall,butiftherewerepeoplearoundeveryday,manyofthewildlifewouldkeepaway.Haveagoodtimehere!Whichisyourmaintrouble?1.看不出句子有錯(cuò)。2.看出句子出錯(cuò)的地方,但無(wú)法改正。3.知道改正句子錯(cuò)誤的地方,但答案不正

確。掃雷行動(dòng)如何進(jìn)行？Howtofindthebombs（errors）?Howtodigoutthebombs(errors）?I’mdelighttowelcomeyoutoourWildlifeClub.You’llbesurprisedthatavariousofplantsandcreaturesarelivinghere.Herearethemostvisitedtouristsites.OneofthepleasantplaceisHollandCommon.Thishasbeenpubliclandfortwohundredofyears,andthatyou’llfindinterestingisthattheRiverOusehasitssourceintheCommon.There’sinformationboardabouttheplantsandanimalsandtheCommonisaccessibly24hoursaday.Thenthere’sHollIslandwhichwasnotedforitsgreatrangeoftrees.ItisopenonlyfromFridaytoSundaybecauseit’squitesmall,butiftherewerepeoplearoundeveryday,manyofthewildlifewouldkeepaway.Haveagoodtimehere!delighted∨varietyplaceswhatanaccessibleisandmuch詞性誤用詞性誤用名詞復(fù)數(shù)介詞關(guān)系詞冠詞詞性誤用動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)連詞代詞解題方法從句法角度分析從行文邏輯角度分析從詞法角度分析Group1動(dòng)詞

高考鏈接：1.Ididn’trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.2.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.3.Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfromtextbooks,andmistakesaswell.4.Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisorherparagraphaloud.were考點(diǎn)歸納;1.動(dòng)詞的_____和_____錯(cuò)誤2._______不一致的錯(cuò)誤3.______________的誤用

used時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)主謂非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞

從詞法錯(cuò)誤分析:includeswaiting

1.______與_______名詞的混用2.可數(shù)名詞的________的錯(cuò)用高考鏈接：

1.Besides,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet..(2017全國(guó)卷Ⅱ）2.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Group2sortsinformation可數(shù)不可數(shù)單復(fù)數(shù)常見(jiàn)的不可數(shù)名詞有：advice,news,work,fun,homework,equipment,information,knowledge,progress等名詞高考鏈接：

1.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotbysellingthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.2.Ihaddonemyhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidtospeakinfrontofalargergroupofpeople.happylarge考點(diǎn)歸納：1._______和________的誤用2.________級(jí)和_______級(jí)的誤用。Group3形容詞比較副詞最高修飾名詞作定語(yǔ)，表語(yǔ)修飾動(dòng)詞,形容詞，副詞,作狀語(yǔ)形容詞和副詞高考鏈接：1.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichinashortperiodoftime.2.Theywouldsaytomethatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillIwasunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.ofwithGroup4介詞考點(diǎn)歸納：1、介詞的多余或缺失

2、介詞的錯(cuò)用∨Group5代詞3.it

作形主、形賓或指代時(shí)有缺漏.高考鏈接：1.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.2.Atfirst,IthoughtIcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.3.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.4.Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.his

∨it1.人稱代詞，物主代詞,反身代詞的使用．2.代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯(cuò)誤.both4.both,all等不定代詞的使用.myself高考鏈接：1.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.2.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbymyself.3.Everyonewassilent,waitingtoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraph.anGroup6冠詞、連詞or１.冠詞a,an和the的錯(cuò)用．２.連詞but，and，or,so和although的錯(cuò)用．從句法的角度去分析:2.名詞性從句3.狀語(yǔ)從句1.定語(yǔ)從句1.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestedinplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.which/that2.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavorite.which1）定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系_____和關(guān)系______的誤用代詞副詞1.MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.where2.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.what2）名詞性從句連接代詞和連接副詞及從屬連詞的混用ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereIwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.when3）狀語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)詞的誤用1.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrow

steady.答題要注意句與句之間的關(guān)系以及前后文之間的聯(lián)系，將單個(gè)句子中不易發(fā)現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤，如連詞不當(dāng)、人稱混亂、前后矛盾等問(wèn)題全部找出來(lái)。steadily

his2.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereis

noneedtospendmoney.and從行文邏輯的角度去分析:短文改錯(cuò)解題步驟瀏覽全文，掌握大意分句閱讀，逐句判斷前后貫通，復(fù)讀檢查規(guī)范解答，注意細(xì)節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)答題原則“規(guī)范性”原則“四不改”原則“四改動(dòng)”原則假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其

下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。“規(guī)范性”原則：①標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改。②大小寫不改。③詞序錯(cuò)誤不改。④單詞拼寫不改

。

“四不改”原則：1）錯(cuò)誤以改動(dòng)最少為原則2）忠實(shí)于原文原則，不可改變?cè)脑?）虛詞以添加或者刪除為原則4）實(shí)詞以改變形式為原則，不能隨便添

加或刪減，不能改變其詞義“四改動(dòng)”原則：Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents.Ifindabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalsohadasmallpondwhichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotbysellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,butheagreed.直擊高考------掃雷小組在行動(dòng)∨thefoundotherchickenswheresellinghappyand∨inthere老師建議：1.語(yǔ)法脈絡(luò)框架要理清，細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題要牢記。2.拼寫單詞記憶準(zhǔn)確，并記牢單詞詞性。3.短文改錯(cuò)和書面表達(dá)相結(jié)合。每篇書面表達(dá)要自查自

糾，同桌互評(píng)互改，互相學(xué)習(xí)，共同提高。4.大聲朗讀，熟讀背誦，培養(yǎng)語(yǔ)感。AssignmentDo