讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)

默寫(xiě)清單讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)情感描寫(xiě)1.喜樂(lè)：Katelaughed,happinessandhopebubbling(冒泡)withher.凱特笑了，幸福和希望圍繞著她2.憤怒:Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼熱的眼睛瞪著我。3.悲傷

（三選一）Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著臉頰流下來(lái)。2.IfeltlikeIwasfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我感覺(jué)自己漂浮在悲傷的海洋中。4.害怕:Myheartseemedtojumpoutofmythroat,andmylegsweretooweaktostand.我的心似乎從喉嚨里跳了出來(lái)，我的腿太虛弱了，站不起來(lái).5.驚訝:Theshockofthenewsquitetookmybreathaway.這消息的震驚使我大吃一驚。6.后悔:Shamehitting,thewomankeptsilent,havingnocouragetolookherhusbandintheeye.

羞恥感襲來(lái)，女人保持沉默，沒(méi)有勇氣直視丈夫的眼睛。7.煩惱:Helookedlikeanantonahotpot.他看起來(lái)像火鍋上的螞蟻。8.希望：Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametohim.在這黑暗而絕望的時(shí)刻，他想到了一個(gè)好主意。9.感謝：Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她熱淚盈眶，表示衷心的感謝。10.Iswollowedtheemotiondownmythroatandmetherpaleblueeyes.我控制住我的情緒，看著她灰藍(lán)色的眼睛。描寫(xiě)與head有關(guān)的動(dòng)作noddedone’shead點(diǎn)頭shookone’shead搖頭描寫(xiě)與arm（手臂）有關(guān)的動(dòng)作wavedhisarms.揮手grabbedherleftarm抓住左臂puthisarmsaroundher他摟著她描寫(xiě)與hand有關(guān)的動(dòng)作heldone'shand抓住某人的手/shookhandswith與…握手/(handinhand手拉手)raisedone'shand舉手/heldoutone'shand伸出手/tookone'shand牽某人的手tookout取出/拿出Herhandsshook/trembled她的手顫抖著描寫(xiě)與shoulder（肩膀）有關(guān)的動(dòng)作lookedoverone'sshoulders回頭看/shruggedone'sshoulders聳肩/tapped/pattedsb.ontheshoulder拍某人的肩膀描寫(xiě)與leg（腿）有關(guān)的動(dòng)作herlegstrembled她的腿顫抖著draggedone'sheavylegs拖著沉重的雙腿描寫(xiě)“說(shuō)”這一動(dòng)作溫和地說(shuō)，補(bǔ)充道，堅(jiān)持說(shuō)，抽泣著說(shuō)，耳邊輕聲說(shuō)saidgently/added/insisted/sobbed/whispered描寫(xiě)“看”這一動(dòng)作詞：saw看見(jiàn)/spotted發(fā)現(xiàn)recognized認(rèn)出observedsbdoing/dosth注意到某人做了/做過(guò)短語(yǔ):staredat盯著看glaredat怒視glancedat瞥一眼帶“eye”的表達(dá)：lookedsbintheeye直視某人的眼睛帶“sight”的表達(dá)看得見(jiàn)：sb/sthbeinmysight/cameintomysight/sb.caughtsightofsth看不見(jiàn)：sb/sthbeoutofsight/fadedaway哭/笑：burstintotears/laughter(大哭/大笑)

couldn’thelpcrying/laughing(情不自禁地哭/笑)

tearswelledupintheeyes眼淚涌出動(dòng)作鏈描寫(xiě)Thekids

rushed

excitedlytothelake,

tookoff

theirclothesand

jumpedinto

thewater.孩子們興奮地沖到湖邊，脫下衣服，跳進(jìn)了水里。She

dashed

forward,

kneltdown

and

gathered

herson

into

herarmstightly.她向前沖過(guò)去，跪下來(lái)，把兒子緊緊地抱在懷里。Thesinger

anxiouslyglancedat

theaudience,

took

adeepbreathandbeganto

sing.歌手緊張地瞥了眼觀眾，深吸了一口氣，開(kāi)始唱歌。Theoldmansatunderthesunset,

reading

thenewspaperand

listening

totheradio.老人坐在夕陽(yáng)下，看報(bào)紙，聽(tīng)廣播。Deeplymoved

bythestory,thechildrenbeganto

cry.深深地被這個(gè)故事打動(dòng)，孩子們開(kāi)始哭了起來(lái)Havingtoldthetruth,shewasinrelief.

說(shuō)出真相后，她心里輕松了很多。Todistractthewolf,wethrewapieceofbreadfaraway.為了分散狼的注意力，我們往遠(yuǎn)處丟了一片面包。Touchedbythebeautifulsceneoutside,theCorgirushedintothesnow,barkingandjumping.被外面美麗的景色所打動(dòng)，這只柯基快樂(lè)地沖進(jìn)雪里，又叫又跳。Tearswellinguphiseyes,hethankedthepolicewithatremblingvoice.淚如泉涌，他顫抖著聲音，感謝警察。Eyesfilledwithregretfultears,myspiritssank.

眼里滿含著悔恨的淚水，我的情緒消沉。Faceblushingscarlet,heapologizedforwhathehaddone.滿臉通紅，他為他做的事情道歉。Herheartburning/filledwithfrustration,sheapologizedforwhatshehaddone.

她的心充滿沮喪，她為她做的事情道歉。1.消極情緒：Afeelingofnervousnesssweptoverme.

一種緊張的感覺(jué)朝我席卷而來(lái)。IfeltIwasfloatinginanoceanofanxiety.我感覺(jué)我飄在焦慮的海洋中。2.動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：Aninnervoicetoldmethat

內(nèi)心的聲音告訴我...

3.轉(zhuǎn)折（個(gè)人努力或借助外界）：Withouthesitation/Withouteventhinking,Ididsth

毫不猶豫，我做了某事。4.轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：AndIsaw/feltaglimmerofhope我看到一絲希望5.失望：Unfortunately,whatIdidwasinvain/

withoutsuccess

/nouse.Iwasunsurewhattodonext.不幸的是，我所做的事是徒勞無(wú)功的，我不知道接下來(lái)該如何做。6.新法：Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,itsuddenlyoccurredtomethat

從句.在這黑暗和無(wú)助的時(shí)刻，我突然想到一個(gè)主意：八部創(chuàng)意法7.結(jié)果：感動(dòng)：1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved,especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.不用說(shuō)，他們被深深地感動(dòng)了，尤其是Bernard最終找到了為家里賺錢(qián)的方法。2.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords.Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.

一瞬間，我的眼睛涌出淚水，我感動(dòng)得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。我覺(jué)得如此溫暖以至于我覺(jué)得我的胸膛有9個(gè)太陽(yáng)。3.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears.我感激地點(diǎn)著頭，眼睛因?yàn)閺?qiáng)忍的淚水而閃耀。4.Stunnedandmoved,Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.驚訝又感動(dòng)，我盯著這個(gè)筆記，為我之前所有人都漠不關(guān)心的想法感到一陣?yán)⒕巍?/p>

八部創(chuàng)意法7.結(jié)果：notlongafterthat,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

從句.不久,...

WiththeaidofTom,Iapproachedtheproblemfinally.在Tom的幫助下，我最終解決了這個(gè)問(wèn)題。Tomysurprise(delight),itturnedoutthat

從句令我吃驚的是，結(jié)局是....欣慰：Tohisrelief,..

使他欣慰的/放心的是

Awaveofrelieffloodedoverme.我感到如釋重負(fù)。感謝：Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.眼睛中充滿淚水，她表達(dá)了誠(chéng)摯的感謝。MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn’tthankhimenoughandeveryoneinvolvedinforwhattheydidforher.MollyandShawn在周二見(jiàn)面了，她說(shuō)她非常感謝他及每一個(gè)幫助了她的人。八部創(chuàng)意法8.升華1.ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.是愛(ài)讓世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)。Bernard也在他小小的內(nèi)心世界深深地感受到了。2.Imadeupmymindtopasson“l(fā)ove”toothers.Justasasayinggoes:“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”我決定傳遞愛(ài)給其他人。就像諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō)的：“贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手有余香”。3.Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindnessthatMexicanfamilyofferedme.從那一天開(kāi)始，每一次我遇到需要幫助的人，我總是伸出援手，希望將Mexiacn一家提供給我的善意傳遞。4.Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.有時(shí)候，小小的善行可能會(huì)足夠有力，會(huì)有很大不同。

八部創(chuàng)意法第一段：

1.一種緊張的感覺(jué)席卷而來(lái)。1.Afeelingofnervousnessfloodedoverme.

【不同的文本，到底是什么感受要根據(jù)上文決定，記住不同的情緒詞】2.我的手顫抖著，心臟似乎要從喉嚨里跳出來(lái)。

2.Myhandstrembledandmyheartseemedtojumpoutofmythroat.3.毫不猶豫，我又按了一次琴鍵。3.Withouthesitation,Ipressedthekeyagain.4.不幸的是，我所做的事是徒勞無(wú)功的。我不知道接下來(lái)該怎么做了。4.Unfortunately,whatIdidwasinvainandIhadnoideawhattodonext.5.在這黑暗而無(wú)助的時(shí)刻，我突然想到我可以向老太太尋求幫助。5.Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametomethatIcouldaskhelpfromtheoldlady.6.老太太拍了拍我的肩膀，溫和地說(shuō)道“不要擔(dān)心，我們肯定可以成功的（makeit）。在她的幫助下我成功地解決了問(wèn)題。6.Theoldladypattedmeonmyshoulderandsaidgently:“don’tworry.Wewillmakeit.”Withtheaidofher,weapproachedtheproblemsuccessfully.”

【看第二段開(kāi)頭，或許問(wèn)題沒(méi)有解決，那么就不需要寫(xiě)這一步，留到第二段寫(xiě)】

【注意：如果問(wèn)題沒(méi)有解決，但事情肯定也有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，可以換成語(yǔ)言描寫(xiě)、動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)。如：6.她看著我的眼睛，溫和地對(duì)我說(shuō)：“我們?cè)僭囋嚻渌霓k法”6.Shelookedmeinmyeyesandsaidgently:“Let’stryotherways.”】7.一種放松的感覺(jué)席卷而來(lái)。Afeelingofreliefsweptoverme.

第二段：1.動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)2.情緒描寫(xiě)3.對(duì)話描寫(xiě)4.總結(jié)：這是一段多么令人難忘的經(jīng)歷啊。WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad.續(xù)寫(xiě)賞析WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.①So,theywentout,headedto

thelocalsupermarketandboughtmaterialsincludingabagofcornand

somespecialbagsforpopcorntogether.

②Agreatsenseofexpectationwellingupintheirhearts,they

carefullyopenedpopcornmachineandbegantomakepopcorn.③Havingmadetheporpcon,whichsmeltsweetanddelicious,theyputitinthespecialbags.Withthepopcorn,theywenttoBernard’shome,hopebubblingwiththem.TheytoldBernardhowtosellthepopcorn.:Bernardcouldgodoortodoortosellpopcorn.④Hearingtheidea,Bernardandhisparents

wereverygrateful,te