高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)不懼別人的目光，帶動(dòng)更多的人加入到撿垃圾的行列1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwaselevenyearsold,ImovedtoTampa,Florida.Myparentstraveledforaliving,soAuntEmilytookcareofmewhiletheywereaway.Onerainymorning,therewasanoldladywhowasdressedinabrightorangecoatcarryingarubbishbagandastick.“What’sthatoldladydoing?”IaskedEmily,pointingoutofthewindowtothestreetinfrontofthehouse.Hearingmyquestion,Emilyanswered,“She’spickinguprubbisharoundhereforfun.”“Oh,”Ianswered.“Interesting...Whywouldsomeonethinkpickinguprubbishisfun?”Foralongtime,Ioftensawthatoldlady—rainorshine—onmywaytoschool.Inthebeginning,Ithoughtshewascrazytopickuprubbish.However,IfinallysmiledandwavedathereachtimeIsawher.Later,whenImovedtocollege,I’dseerubbishinthegrassandfeelreallyangryaboutit.I’dthink,“Whyisn’tanyonepickinguprubbish?Peoplearesounconcerned!”Butshortlyafterthat,Isaidtomyself,“WhydoIthinkpickinguprubbishissomeoneelse’sduty?”AndIcouldn’twalkpasttrashwithoutfeelingguilty(內(nèi)疚的).4續(xù)寫原文Sowhilewalkinginthecollege,IbeganpickinguprubbishandmadesurethecampuswasinbettershapethanIpreviouslyfoundit.Mybehaviorinfluencedsomestudents.Theystartedtohelpmeout.Likeme,theyalsopickeduprubbishwhenevertheynoticedit.Andourcollegebecamemorebeautiful.Seeingthat,Ibegantothink,“IfIcanpickuprubbishoutsidethecollege—inotherplacesofthetown,itmaymakeabigdifferencetothetown.”Butpickinguprubbishinfrontofmanypeopleoutsidethecollegeneedscourage.Itcouldbeembarrassing.Butitwastherightthingtodo.Idecidedtotryit.5段首句Para1：SoonedayIcalledupallmycourageandcollectedrubbishonanearbystreet.

Para2：Ithoughtifmorestudentstookpartinthevoluntaryactivity,thingswouldbemuchbetter.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以撿垃圾為線索展開，講述了作者在少年時(shí)經(jīng)常見到一位撿垃圾的老婦人，所以開始疑惑老人為什么經(jīng)常撿垃圾，姑姑的一句“她撿垃圾是為了好玩”讓作者對(duì)撿垃圾這件事情有了最初的認(rèn)識(shí)。但是到了大學(xué)以后作者發(fā)現(xiàn)很多人對(duì)于草叢里的垃圾是視而不見時(shí)又有了新的困惑和擔(dān)心。作者想撿，卻又怕被嘲笑，但最終戰(zhàn)勝了膽小的自己，勇敢地?fù)炱鹆死髡叩男袨橐矌?dòng)了更多的人來(lái)?yè)炖?。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：SoonedayIcalledupallmycourageandcollectedrubbishonanearbystreet.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“所以有一天，我鼓起勇氣，在附近的街道上收集垃圾。”可知，第一段可描寫陌生人看到作者撿垃圾的反應(yīng)，作者在此過(guò)程中的感悟和作者決定鼓勵(lì)更多的學(xué)生在鎮(zhèn)上這樣做。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Ithoughtifmorestudentstookpartinthevoluntaryactivity,thingswouldbemuchbetter.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我想如果有更多的學(xué)生參加志愿活動(dòng)，情況會(huì)好得多?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者怎樣帶領(lǐng)著其他人撿垃圾以及由此所帶來(lái)的改變。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索我撿垃圾——?jiǎng)e人的不解——之后他人贊揚(yáng)和感謝——帶動(dòng)別人撿垃圾——帶來(lái)積極影響——感悟12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①撿垃圾：pickuprubbish/collectgarbage/trash②意識(shí)到：realize/beaware③決定做某事：decidetodosth./determinetodosth./makeupone’smindtodosth.情緒類①表?yè)P(yáng)：praise/speakhighlyof②感謝某人：thanksb./expressone’sgratitude13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].SomepeoplewatchedmewithastrangelookthatseemedtosayIwascrazy.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和省略that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2].TheinterestingthingwasthatIwasactingjustlikeher!(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)SoonedayIcalledupallmycourageandcollectedrubbishonanearbystreet.SomepeoplewatchedmewithastrangelookthatseemedtosayIwascrazy.Andsuddenly,Irememberedthatoldlady,whooftenpickeduprubbishyearsago.TheinterestingthingwasthatIwasactingjustlikeher!Asstrangeasitmightseem（倒裝句）,pickinguprubbishiskindoffunforme!Gradually,manypeoplerealizedIwasvolunteeringtohelpmakeourtownclean.Theypraisedmeandthankedme.ThenIdecidedtoencouragemorestudentstodothisinthetown.16范文呈現(xiàn)Ithoughtifmorestudentstookpartinthevoluntaryactivity,thingswouldbemuchbetter.Weboughteachstudentabrightorangecoatwithwordsonit:Let’smakeourtowncleaner!Andwetooktimetonotonlypickuprubbishbutalsosortthroughitandrecycleit.Somethingamazinghappened—thestrangersaroundushelpedusouttoo!Ithoughttomyself,“Theoldladymadeallthishappen;shemadeabigdifferenceinmylife.”17范文譯文我想如果有更多的學(xué)生參加志愿活動(dòng)，情況會(huì)好得多。我們給每個(gè)學(xué)生買了一件亮橙色的外套，上面寫著：讓我們的城市更干凈！我們不僅花時(shí)間撿垃圾，還把垃圾分類回收。令人驚訝的是，我們周圍的陌生人也幫助了我們！我心想：“這一切都是老太太促成的；她給我的生活帶來(lái)了巨大的改變?！?8范文譯文所以有一天，我鼓起勇氣，在附近的街道上收集垃圾。有些人用一種奇怪的眼神看著我，似乎在說(shuō)我瘋了。突