第第頁2024屆高三英語二輪復習讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作講義素材讀后續(xù)寫

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試題呈現(xiàn)：

Livingintheshadowofmytwoeldersistersatcollegewhoalreadyhadtheirlivesplannedoutsincetheywerelittle,Iwasalwaysundecidedabouteverything.Asateenager,Iwasfickle(反復無常的).Iwouldlikeonethingforaweekandthenhateitthenext.ButIwasconstantlysearchingforthebeginningoftherainbow.Changingmydreamfromavettoanastronaut,Ithoughttherewerevariousoptionsavailabletome.However,myparentswouldshaketheirheadsandrepeatedlyaskedmesuchquestionsas,“Whycan’tyoubemorelikeyoursistersWhatareyougoingtodowithyourlifeAren’tyouinterestedinanythingatall”Afteracoupleofshrugs(聳肩),myparentsusuallystoppedtalking.Iwasnotsureiftheygaveuporanticipatedmydullreactions.Ioftenresponded,“Icouldn’tanswerallofyourquestionsnow.”

Actually,myparentsjusthadhighexpectationsthatneverseemedtobefulfilled.Plus,likeotherparents,theyjustwantedtogivethebesttomeandexpectedmetoachievesuccess.Theargumentswithmyparentsseemedchildish.Oneday,mymothermadeherthoughtsclear,“Yourgradesaren’thighenough.Noschoolsaregoingtowantyou,dear.Wedidn’tpaysomuchmoneyfornothing.”Hesitatingforawhile,Isaid,“Nomatterwhatyousay,IbelieveIwillenteragoodcollege.”Still,Iletmyemotionscontrolmyself.

Certainly,Ihadneverplannednottogotocollege.Afteranotherdebatewithmymom,Idecidedtomakeachange.NolongerwouldIsitbackandletmyparentsmistakemeforabadboy.Itwastimetotakeaction.

Iknewitwasacrucialyearathighschool.Releasingmyfeelings,IbegantocollectalltheknowledgeIhadlearnedandreviewitwithallmyheart.Ididn’targuewithmyparentsanymore,butinsteadturnedtomysistersforhelpandtriedmybesttostudy.Finally,Itookthenationalcollegeentranceexaminationwitheaseandconfidence.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Afewdayslater,Ireceivedacallfrommyschool,sayingmycollegeacceptanceletterhadarrived.

Myparentsexcitedlysaidbehindme,“Well,opentheenvelope!”

參考范文：

Afewdayslater,Ireceivedacallfrommyschool,sayingmycollegeacceptanceletterhadarrived.ThenIhurriedtotheschoolwithmyparents.Itwasbeyondmywildestdreamtillthatmoment.Asamatteroffact,IdoubtedthenwhetherIwasinthedream.Inormallydreadedthelongwalktotheschool.Butthatdaywasdifferent.Thereseemedtobesome-thingintheair,anelectriccurrent,connectingmybodytotheletter.WhenIgotit,Iwasreallyafraidthattheenvelopwasempty.Buttherewasawhitepackageinside.Withmyheartbeatingfaster,Iwonderedwhetheritcouldreallybewhatwasexpected.

Myparentsexcitedlysaidbehindme,"Well,opentheenvelop!"WhatIgrabbedinmyhandscontainedeverythingIhadbeenwaitingfor.Slowly,IopeneditandaflashofCONGRATULATIONSinboldbrightletterscaughtmyeyes.Afeelingofhappinessandreliefrushedthroughmybody.Iwasholdingmyfirstofferfromagoodcollege.Needlesstosay,itwouldn'thavebeenpossibleifitweren'tforthecountlesshoursofstudyingandwriting,butmostimportantly,myparents'constantreminders,infact,werethebestformofeducationforme."Thankyou,MomandDad!"Isaidgratefully.

下水作文：109+111

Afewdayslater,Ireceivedacallfrommyschool,sayingmycollegeacceptanceletterhadarrived.Attheexcitingnews,I,togetherwithmyparents,headedtotheschoolformyadmissionletter,withmymindstillwonderingwhichuniversityIhadbeenadmittedinto.AndIhadnoideawhethermylastyearofhardworkatschoolwouldfinallypayoffasIhadexpected.Whenwearrivedattheteacher’soffice,whatgreetedmewasmyheadteacher’ssmilingfaceandsincerecongratulations.Hehandedmethemail/packagewithmyacceptanceletterinside,Therewasnoinformationofthecollegeonthemail/package,whichmadememorecuriousaboutwhatwasinside.Soonweleft,withexpectationsandsmileswrittenonourfaces.

Myparentsexcitedlysaidbehindme,“Well,openthemail/package!”Cautiously,Itoreitopenandcarefullydrewthepapersinsideout.Onitwerethenameofmydreamuniversityandtheeye-catchingletters“CONGRATULATIONS!”“Imadeit,Imadeit!”Imurmuredandthenshouted.Unabletoconcealmyexcitement,Iembracedmyparentsandpressedkissesontheircheeks,tearsofdelightandgratitudestreamingdownmycheeksandwettingtheirshirts.“Thankyou!Withoutyourconstantremindinganddevotedhelp,Iwouldhavegotnowhere.”Iblurtedout.Cuddlingtheadmissionlettercloselytomychest,Istartedtoenvisionthebrandnewlifeunfoldingbeforeme,determinedtomakemynewblueprintintoareality.

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

ItwasachillyFridaynight,andIhadjustreturnedfromclimbingoneoftheredrocksofSedona.MyfathertelephonedmeasIwalkedthroughthearchestomydormroomandtoldmethatmymotherhadbeeninaterriblecarcrashandhadbeentakentotheintensivecareunit(重癥監(jiān)護病房)ofanearbyhospital.

WhenIgottothehospital,myfatherledmedownawidehallwaywithmachinesallaround.Astrongsmellofmedicinebroughtasickfeelingtomyalreadyturningstomach.AsIturnedintomymother’sward,thecadaverous(形容枯槁的)conditionofherbodyshockedme.Herfacehadswollen,hereyeshadhugedarkbruise,andshehadtubesdownherthroatandinherarms.Gentlyholdinghercoldswollenhands,Isaid“hi”inacalmvoice,controllingmyurgetocryout.

Shekeptlookingatmeasshepoundedherhandagainstthebed,lookingpainful.Iturnedmyfaceawayfromher,tryingtohidethetearsthatwererollingdownmyface.ThatwaswhenitstruckmethatIreallymightlosemymother.

Fromthatnighton,mylifecompletelychanged.Uptothatpoint,I’dhadtheluxuryofjustbeingakid,havingtodealwithonlytheexaggeratedmelodramasofteenagelife.Asmymotherstruggledfirsttostayaliveandthentorelearntowalk,mysenseofprioritieschangedsharply.Mymotherneededme.Thetrialsandtroubleofmydailylifeatschool,whichhadseemedsoimportantbefore,nowappearedinsignificant.MymotherandIhadfaceddeathtogether,andlifetookonanewmeaningforbothofus.

Afteraweekoftreatmentinintensivecare,mymother’sconditionimprovedenoughtobemovedtoaregularhospitalward.Shewasfinallyoutofdangerbut,becauseherlegshadbeencrushed,therewasdoubtwhethershewouldbeabletowalkagain.Iwasjustgratefulthatshewasalive.Twomonthslater,asortofhospitalsuitewassetupinourfamilyroom,andshewasallowedtocomehome.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Mymother’sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.

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Mymother’srelianceonmechangedourrelationship.

參考答案

Mymother’sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.Iwouldfeedher,batheherandhelphertothebathroom.ItstruckmethatIwasprettymuchplayingtheroleofmothertomyownmother.Thedifficultpartformewastryingtobealwaysupbeat,andtokeepmymother’sspiritsupwhenshebecamefrustratedwiththepainandherinabilitytodosimplethingsbyherself.Lookingaftermymotherwasn’tmuchfun,butitfeltgoodtobetherewhenmymotherreallyneededme.

Mymother’srelianceonmechangedourrelationship.Inthepast,wehadmorethanourshareofthestrainsofmother-daughterrelationships.Theaccidentthrewusintoarelationshipofinterdependence.Togetmymotherback,Ihadtohelpregainherstrengthandabilitytoresumeanindependentlife.ShehadtoacceptmyhelpaswellasthefactthatIwasnolongerachild.Sincethen,wehavebecometheclosestfriends,genuinelylisteningtooneanotherandtrulyenjoyingeachother’scompany.

優(yōu)作展

Mymother’sreturnhomewasablessingforusall,butitmeantsomeunaccustomedresponsibilitiesforme.Thoughmymotherwasoutofdanger,shewasstillunabletodoanythingbyherself.ItdawnedonmethatIm