閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AChristmasTreeforMrsMuellerMrsMuellerwasournext-doorneighborwhenmysisterLaurelandIweregrowingup.Shemovedhereafterherhusbanddied.Shehadnochildrenandnorelativesthatweknewof.Shewasgentleandkind,andLaurelandIconsideredherourspecialfriend.OneDecember,MrsMuellerwasillinhospital.LaurelandIwerebusymakingChristmaspresents,andweponderedwhattomakeforMrsMueller.Wecouldn’tbearseeinghercomehomebeforeChristmastoanemptyhousewithnoholidaydecorations.Thenwelitupontheideaofdecoratingasmalltreethatwouldgreetherwithlightsandcheer.Wewerewonderinghowtocarryoutourplanwhentheanswerappeared.IwasinMissO’Keefe’ssixthgradeclassthatyear,andwedecoratedasmalltreewithpaper-linkchainsandornamentswe’dmadeinartclass.Itwasbeautiful.Bestofall,ithadtoberemovedfromtheclassroombeforeChristmasvacation.MissO’Keefesaidtherewouldbeadrawingforthetree.We’deachwriteournameonapieceofpaperandputitintheboxshehadprepared.Onthelastdayofschoolbeforevacation,she’ddrawanamefromthebox,andthatstudentcouldtakethetreehome.Great!ThatwasexactlywhatIwaslongingfor!SoIwrotemyname“HelenWheeler”neatlyonapieceofpaperandfoldeditcarefully.AsIputitintothebox,IwhisperedtoMissO’KeefethatIreallyhopedI’dwinthetreebecausemysisterandIwantedtogiveittoourneighbor.Thoughtherewere30childrenintheclassandeachmightwinthetree,IwassomehowcertainthatIwouldgetitbecauseourcausewasgood:WewantedtomakeMrsMuellerhappy.Thedaybeforevacationfinallyarrived.LaurelandIusuallywalkedtoandfromschool,butthatdayIpersuadedMomtopickusupinhercarafterschoolincaseIreallygotthetree.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Beforeschoolwasover,MissO’Keefeannounceditwastimeforthedrawing.ThenexteveningwewelcomedMrsMuellerbackatherdoor.【寫作解析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了米勒夫人是作者妹妹勞蕾爾和作者小時候的鄰居，米勒夫人住院了，于是作者決定在圣誕節(jié)的時候給她布置屋子。作者最后用抽到的圣誕樹布置了米勒夫人的屋子，米勒夫人非常感動。1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“放學(xué)前，奧基夫老師宣布該抽簽了。”可知，第一段可描寫作者他們抽到圣誕樹的經(jīng)過。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“第二天晚上，我們在米勒夫人的門口迎接她。”可知，第二段可描寫米勒夫人看到圣誕樹的反應(yīng)以及作者反應(yīng)過來老師秘密幫助了自己。2.續(xù)寫線索：宣布抽簽——抽到圣誕樹——布置圣誕樹——米勒夫人回家——米勒夫人感動——作者感悟3.詞匯激活行為類：（1）跳動：pound/beat；（2）打開：unfold/open；（3）出現(xiàn)：appear/showup情緒類：（1）美麗：beautiful/pretty；（2）驚訝：surprised/astonishment/amazed【典型句式】[句型1]SinceMomhadakeytoMrsMueller’shouse,wetookthetreestraighttoherlivingroomandsetituponatable.(運用了since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)[句型2]Thoughshehadannouncedmyname,shenevershowedanyonewhatwaswrittenonthatpieceofpaper!(運用了though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句)【答案】

Beforeschoolwasover,MissO’Keefeannounceditwastimeforthedrawing.MyheartpoundedasMissO’Keefeputherhandintotheboxanddrewonefoldedpieceofpaperout.Thensheunfoldedthepaper.lookedatitandannounced.“Helenhaswonthetree!”Iwasbesidemyselfwithexcitement!AndI’llneverforgettheastonishmentonmymother’sfaceasmysisterandIcarriedthetreetohercar.SinceMomhadakeytoMrsMueller’shouse,wetookthetreestraighttoherlivingroomandsetituponatable.Itlookedsobeautiful!ThenexteveningwewelcomedMrsMuellerbackatherdoor.Sheslowlymadeherwayintothehouseandturnedonthelights.GreetedbythesparklingChristmastree.MrsMuellerwasrootedtothespot,lookingsurprised.Thenasweetsmileappearedonherfaceandtearswelledupinhereyes.“Thankyousomuch.shesaidsoftly.WhileLaurelandIwereexcitedlyrecountingthestory.itsuddenlydawnedonmethatMissO’Keefehadhelpedmeinasecretway:Thoughshehadannouncedmyname,shenevershowedanyonewhatwaswrittenonthatpieceofpaper!讀后續(xù)寫專題高級句式升級：虛擬語氣虛擬語氣主要用來表示假設(shè)，所陳述的是一個條件，不一定是事實，也有可能與事實完全相反。虛擬語氣通過謂語動詞的特殊形式來表示，常用來表達驚異、惋惜、遺憾、理應(yīng)如此等含義，在寫作中可以用來表達比較強烈的感情。

（一）沒....的話，某人就....：Without...,sb.would../Butfor...,sb.would...功能：Without、Butfor后接名詞或名詞短語，用來表示委婉的虛擬語氣。e.g.:1>

Withoutyouradvice,

Iwouldn'thavesucceeded.2>

Butforyourinstruction,Iwouldnothavemadesuchgreatprogress.句子練習(xí)：1.如果沒有挫折，我們的人生就不會充滿精彩的故事。Withoutsetbacks,ourlifewouldnotbefilledwithwonderfulstories.2.要不是這次經(jīng)歷，我就不會意識到我應(yīng)該花更多的時間和家人在一起。Butforthisexperience,Iwouldn'thaverealizedthatIshouldspendmoretimewithmyfamily.3.要是沒有Eric當(dāng)時的鼓勵，我可能接下來的一天都仍然沉浸在悲傷的情緒里。WithoutEric'sencouragement,Iwouldhavebeenimmersedinsorrowfortherestoftheday.4.如果沒有這些錢，這個人可能會一

整晚挨餓，失去對生活的希望。Withoutthismoney,themanmighthavestarvedthewholenightandlosthopeforlife.（二）希望.....：wishing

(that)

...功能：wish表實現(xiàn)不了的愿望，此處將其用作非謂語動詞，表示主語的一種愿望。e.g.:1>Hesatthere,

wishing

hehadstayedathomethen.2>

Heturnedoverthephotoalbum,

wishingthat

hehadjoinedthepartylastnight.句子練習(xí)：1.Steven

尷尬地低下頭，真希望剛才沒有口誤。Stevenloweredhisheadwithembarrassment,wishinghehadn'tmadethatslipoftongue.2.伙伴們都在到處跑著，玩得很開心，可Susan卻獨自坐在草坪上，希望自己此刻在家里。Hercompanionswererunningaboutenjoyingthemselves,butSusansataloneonthegrass,wishingshewereathomethismoment.（三）但愿、只要、如果......就好了：Ifonly...功能：Ifonly后接從句，表示不可能的一種虛擬。e.g.:1>

Ifonly

Iwereascleverasyou.2>

Ifonly

Iwouldgetthescholarship.句子練習(xí)：“要是我當(dāng)初聽取了媽媽的建議該多好!”小女孩低聲對自己說。“IfonlyIhadlistenedtomymother'sadvice!"thelittlegirlwhisperedtoherself.（四）如果再有一次機會，我......：Givenonemorechance,Iwould..功能：為了表達這種渴望再來一次的情緒，該句使用了虛擬語氣Givenonemorechance,Iwould...e.g.:1>

Givenonemorechance,Iwouldn'tletmyparentsdown.2>

Givenonemorechance,Iwoulddefinitelymakeitbetter.句子練習(xí)：1.再給我一次機會的話，

我不會再以外貌來判斷一個人。Givenonemorechance,Iwouldn'thavejudgedapersonbyhisappearance.2.如果再給我一-次機會，我會毫不猶豫地與他分享我的食物。Givenonemorechance,Iwouldsharewithhimmyfoodwithouthesitation1

無靈主語：心理，情緒，行為意義名詞，無生命的事物作主語/結(jié)尾句A

wave

ofjoy

(happiness/sadness/sorrow/delight/panic/fear/horror/depression/guilt/embarrassment/hate/regret/panic/jealousy/envy/pride/shame/anxiety/boredom/relief/satisfaction/humiliation/insecurity/irritation/isolation/loneliness/misery/outrage/rage/resentment/torture)washedover（積極

消極）/seized（積極消極）/enveloped(消極）/struck(消極）

himas/whenheheardthenews/atthesightof........./atthefactthat..../atthethoughtthat............

當(dāng)他聽到消息，他非常開心。Thecityhasseenitsworstheatwaveindecades.2

虛擬語氣情態(tài)動詞+did/havedone

ifonly+did/haddoneIwish

Icouldbeamillionaire.

我希望我是百萬富翁Ifonly

Iwererich.

我希望我有錢Ifonly

Ihadgonebytaxi.

我希望我那時是坐出租車出去的3

獨立主格Tearswellinguphiseyes,hethankedthepolice.

淚水濕潤眼眶，他感謝警察。Herworkdone,shesatdownforacupoftea.

她干完了活，坐下來喝茶。Thejobfinished,wewenthome.

工作結(jié)束后我們就回家了。Theconditionbeingfavorable,hemaysucceed.

若條件有利，他或許能成功。Hewrappedherupwithgreatcare,

thenightbeingdarkandfrosty.

夜又黑又冷，所以他把她裹得嚴(yán)嚴(yán)實實的。4

擬人比喻

likea....

ashappyasaking

aseaofsorrowIwanderedlonelyasachild.Theroomsatsilent.HetastedthemusicofMozart.Hefeltasfreeasabirdflyingoutofacage.5

介詞短語

with.....

withoutWithnoonetotalkto,Johnfeltmiserable.由于沒人可以說話的人，約翰感到很悲哀。Withalotofworktodo,hewasn'tallowedtogoout.因為還有很多工作要做，他沒有被允許外出。Withthecrowdscheering,theydrovetothepalace.在人群的歡呼聲中，他們驅(qū)車來到皇宮。Witheverythingdone,shewenthome.

一切都完成了，她回家。Withthechildrenatschool,

wecan'ttakeourvacationwhenwewantto.由于孩子們