SectionⅦ

ReadingforWriting——建議信TeenageLife

本單元的寫作任務(wù)是讀一封建議信，了解建議信的結(jié)構(gòu)和語言特征，然后再寫一封建議信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthemodel10September，2018DearWorriedFriend，Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend，ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou，sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest，SusanLuo(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①____________vt.建議

②___________adj.不健康的③____________vt.鼓勵

④___________adj.有用的⑤____________vt.忠告，建議

⑥________________閑暇⑦____________盼望，期望

⑧_______________對……

擔(dān)心⑨____________喜愛

⑩____________對……上癮?____________集中精力于

?___________________對……有益處

?____________交朋友

?____________收到……的來信?___________________玩得愉快

recommendunhealthyencourageusefuladviceinone’ssparetimelookforwardtobeworriedaboutbeattractedtobeaddictedtoconcentrateonbegoodfor/dogoodtomakefriendshearfromenjoyoneself/havefunⅡ.While-writing假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請根據(jù)下面提示給她寫一封建議信。1.要交朋友首先要做一個朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友誼需要時間和投入(effort)。Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：the____________oftheletterParagraph2：the____________thatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’s____________purposesuggestionshopeStep2

Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①_____________________________n.建議②_____________________________n.情況③_____________________________交朋友④_____________________________做……有困難⑤_____________________________接受某人的建議⑥_____________________________和……同甘共苦⑦_____________________________需要⑧_____________________________全心全意

tip/advice/suggestionsituationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvicesharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartinto2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很抱歉。(havetroublein...)______________________________________________________②如果你采納我的建議，改變這種情況是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)______________________________________________________③要交朋友為什么不先做一個朋友呢？(whynot)______________________________________________________④你和朋友同甘共苦難道不是一個好主意嗎？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)________________________________________________________________________⑤正如一句諺語說的，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)______________________________________________________Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Step3

Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleast15Sept，2019DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours，LiHuaⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytoread?篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Thefirstpart：thebeginning(dateandgreeting)oftheletterThesecondpart：thebody(fact-stating，youropinionandhope)oftheletter

Thethirdpart：theend(wishesandsignature)oftheletter亮點表達1.建議信開頭常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人交流方面有些麻煩，你也可能經(jīng)常感到孤獨。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。

2.表達建議常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參加一個俱樂部？如果你這樣做的話，就會交到朋友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你應(yīng)該盡力與人交談。這樣，你會感覺好點。③Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，如果你看書或聽音樂將會是個不錯的主意。通過這樣做，你會使自己平靜下來。④Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最后但同等重要的是，你應(yīng)該先和她談一談。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看來，你們應(yīng)該互相幫助