Unit7WritinggetearspiercedchooseourownclothessmokeplaycomputergamesbringphonestoschoolWearenotallowedto…..Teenagersshouldn’tbeallowedtobringphonestoschool.Opinion:Idisagreewiththatteensshouldn’tbeallowedtobringphonestoschool.Why:Teenscouldbeallowedtousephonesif

theygivethemtotheteacheronweekdaysandonlyusethemonweekends.Anyway,weneedtokeepintouchwithfriendsandfamily.AgreeDisagreeOpinion:Iagreewiththatteensshouldn’tbeallowedtobringphonestoschool.Why:Becauseteensshouldconcentrateonstudying.Usingphoneswillinfluencetheirstudy.Maybetheywillplaygamesonthephone.AgreeDisagreeTeenagersshouldn’tbeallowedtotalkwhentheyaredoinghomework.Opinion:Iagreewiththatstudnetsshouldn’tbeallowedtotalkwhentheyaredoinghomework.Why:Becausetheyneedtokeepquietandthinkbythemselves.Ifnot,theywillmaketoomuchnoiseandit’shardtoconcentrateonstudying.表明觀點(diǎn)：Iagree/disagreewith….2.Wecouldbeallowedtodo…if…..3.Ihavenothingagainstdoing….but…4.Ithinkit’sunfairto…..給出理由：1.…cangetinthewayof…2.…beseriousabout…3.Studentsneedtospendmoretimeon….結(jié)尾：Weshouldknowhowimportantitistoobeytherules.Onlywhenweobeytherules,wecan…..我校的班級(jí)建設(shè)正在如火如荼的開展著，為了建設(shè)更好的班風(fēng)班貌，最近班上擬定了一些班規(guī)，需要討論通過。已擬定的規(guī)則有：在學(xué)校必須穿校服。

在自習(xí)課上做作業(yè)時(shí)不被允許討論，只能獨(dú)立完成。不能帶手機(jī)來學(xué)校。你是否同意這些規(guī)則并說明理由，如果不同意，那你覺得該如何改？要求：內(nèi)容要包含以上規(guī)則要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：80-120詞（開頭已給出）卷面字跡清楚，卷面整潔2分字跡清楚，但卷面有涂改1-2布局結(jié)構(gòu)段落層次清楚（標(biāo)題，開頭，中間，結(jié)尾）2分該寫標(biāo)題缺無標(biāo)題-1，沒有清楚的段落層次-1要點(diǎn)若要點(diǎn)齊全6缺一個(gè)要點(diǎn)-2分語句表達(dá)（正確，準(zhǔn)確，豐富）語法句式正確，語句通順+3分，美句：+1標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)一個(gè)-0.5分，

單詞1-2處-1分，

語法（人稱，時(shí)態(tài)）1處-1分句式錯(cuò)誤1處：-1分邏輯正確使用連接詞和連接句2分英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：分析：1.審：（審題）人稱：__________時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)：____________文體：______________We

一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)議論文2.列（列要點(diǎn)）1)在學(xué)校必須穿校服。_______________________________贊同或不贊同：__________________________理由：____________________________________如何改進(jìn)：_______________________________2)在自習(xí)課不能討論。_____________________________________贊同或不贊同：_____________________理由：____________________________________如何改進(jìn)：_______________________________3)不能帶手機(jī)來學(xué)校。____________________________________________贊同或不贊同：_____________________理由：____________________________________如何改進(jìn)：_______________________________Wehavetowearschooluniformsatschool.Iagreewiththatidea.Weneedtoconcentrateonourstudynotonclothes.Wearenotallowedtodiscussproblemsineveningclass.Ithinkweshouldobeythisrulewell.Ifwetalkinclass,itwillbenoisyintheclass.Wecan’tbringourphonestoschool.

IhavenothingagainsttherulebutIthinkitneedstobechangedalittle.Weneedtotalktoourfamilywhenweareatschool.

Wecanhandinthephonestotheteacherandjustuseitontheweekends.3.加（加中心句，加出要點(diǎn)的中心句）1)學(xué)生們需要嚴(yán)格的規(guī)定。我們班上有三條規(guī)則需要討論來成為班規(guī)。_______________________________________________________________________2)不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)，我想談?wù)勎业挠^點(diǎn)。______________________________________________________________________________Studentsneedstrictrulesatschool.Wehavethreerulestodiscusstomakethemasclassrules.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Iwanttoexpressminehere.4.連：第一：_________,第二:___________,第三:_____________________在一方面,另一方面_____________,不僅…而且:______________First

Second

Third

Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand

Notonly…butalso…

5.美：（美化語言和結(jié)構(gòu)）

開頭：1)Asweallknow,rulesplayanimportantpartinourdailylife.2)Weallknowthatwherethere’snorule,there’snogames.中間:1)Ihavenothingagainst….but….2)Weshouldhavethechanceto….3)Wearereallyseriousabout….4)It’simportantforusto…….結(jié)尾：

1)Onlywheneveryoneofusfollowstherules,willwebuildabetterclass.2)Aslongasweobeytherules,wecanhaveabetterclass.3)Ihopethatsomerulescanbechangedsothatwecanhaveachancetodevelopourselvesbetter.可能用到得諺語：Norules,nogames.1.大顯身手吧_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________卷面字跡清楚，卷面整潔