1、The Beauty of Writing,Why is writing so tough?,Input,Output,高考作文高分卷的特點(diǎn),外在美：第一印象很重要！書(shū)寫(xiě)清楚，字母勻稱(chēng)，詞、行間距適當(dāng)，卷面整潔。 結(jié)構(gòu)美：有合理的段落層次，多為3段式，條理清晰；每段有每段的主題。,詞匯美：詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。likebe fond of,be addicted to/ helpdo sb a favor 句式美：運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。 銜接美：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，對(duì)寫(xiě)一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下

2、銜接自然、條理清晰。,你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)部要組織一次英語(yǔ)賽， 就“是否應(yīng)該縮短中學(xué)生在校時(shí)間為8小時(shí)”這一論題進(jìn)行辯論，請(qǐng)你作為正方代表，寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.保證充足睡眠 2. 提高學(xué)習(xí)效率 3. 增加自主學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3. 辯論稿的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that,語(yǔ)法篇,這第一句寫(xiě)的,I strongly recommend that This is right we as a senior high student.,I

3、strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.,你再看這開(kāi)頭,I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows.,這動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)的,Short students time in school can have a good effect

4、on study, it can important for students study xiaolu, and increase students own time.,原來(lái)改書(shū)面表達(dá)就是改錯(cuò),In my opinion, we must have enough time to study, but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep, either of them are important. Because of we have time to relax, we can study energetic. Reduce s

5、tudy time also can improve the quality of our school life.,這詞匯,你再看這詞匯,欣賞一下這篇文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu),If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time, study efficiently is expected to be enhanced. Moreover, extra-curricular time will make up more of the students schedule. That is to say, c

6、hances are we can make a better use of our time.,卷面篇,養(yǎng)眼的,當(dāng)批到下午兩點(diǎn)看到了它們,太擠了,太亂了,太空了,太潦草了,太花了,太沒(méi)譜了,老師最恨的作文,大鍋，標(biāo)點(diǎn)呢？段呢？,姐，你長(zhǎng)發(fā)及腰的字體難掩你每句都錯(cuò)的事實(shí)啊！,神，你別抄閱讀理解行不？俺們也會(huì)看試卷的！,老師最喜歡的作文,Great minds think alike!,一點(diǎn)提示,好練的字,筆,筆,過(guò)長(zhǎng),答題不可越界,作文五檔：（ 從教師閱卷印象角度劃分）,漂漂亮亮 （2125分） 有模有樣 （1620分） 馬馬虎虎 （1115分） 稀里糊涂 （610分） 一塌糊涂 （05分）,

7、Three Rules:,1.You learn to write by writing. 2. There is no good writing; only good rewriting. 3. When in doubt, refer to Rule No. 1 and 2.,Five Steps:,Analyze the writing task. Organize it. Draft. Revise. Edit.,高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中怎樣使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),1.適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)態(tài) 2.使用不定式 3.使用過(guò)去分詞 4.使用V.+ing形式 5.使用名詞性從句 6.使用定語(yǔ)從句 7.使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣 8.使用倒

8、裝句,感嘆句,怎樣運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：,怎樣運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：,1.主動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)被動(dòng),People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般),that the conference be put off. (高級(jí)),The advisor is expected to work 4 hours a week .,We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week .,It is suggested,2. 使用不定式,3. 使用過(guò)去分詞,In order to earn money by myself and broaden

9、my horizons,She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般), she walked out of the room . (高級(jí)),，I intend to look for a part-time job as a salesman. （為了獨(dú)立賺錢(qián)和拓寬視野）,Followed by many students,4. 使用v-ing形式,2） , Ill visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.（天氣允許

10、的話(huà)）,1）Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般),Now our School has three teachers，,Weather permitting,teaching 48 pupils.,伴隨狀語(yǔ),What is the most important is that,5. 使用名詞性從句,2. I can help children improve their English.(最為重要的是),1.I am sorry. I didnt reply without delay.,I am sorry

11、 that I didnt reply without delay.,6. 使用定語(yǔ)從句,1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般),The girl was highly spoken of. (高級(jí)),2)maybe I will work as a volunteer for a school as a teaching assistant_.(這將豐富我的生活),which is able to enrich my life.,which will make my life colorfu

12、l.,whose composition was well written,enriching my life,7. 使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣,我相信如果你是我，你也會(huì)做出同樣的選擇。,I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.,8. 使用倒裝句、感嘆句,earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不僅能獨(dú)立賺錢(qián)),1. I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. (我多

13、么希望),2. not only but also引起的倒裝,How I wish,Not only can I,高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中要學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞,III.常用的連接詞 1.表示遞進(jìn);在同一話(huà)題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 另外，還有：whats more; besides; also; moreover; in addition 2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.,3. 表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus;

14、 therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else,5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng) 的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 直到才: notuntil 一就 : as soon as 后來(lái)， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來(lái): lately; recently 自從 :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on,6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先:fi

15、rstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end 7. 換一種方法表述 換句話(huà)說(shuō): in other words; that is to say;,8. 進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, for this reason 9. 用于陳述事實(shí) 實(shí)際上: i

16、n fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說(shuō)實(shí)話(huà) : to tell you the truth,10. 對(duì)一個(gè)話(huà)題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來(lái)說(shuō): on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in conclusion, generally speaking, as you know, in the end , 其它常用到的副詞 therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; per