HowtoEnrichyourWritingbyAddingDetails假使你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Henry最近來(lái)信，詢問(wèn)你高考后的暑假安排。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)回一封信，說(shuō)明你的計(jì)劃，并簡(jiǎn)述理由。1.休息；2.讀書；3.陪伴父母；4.參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)假使你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Henry最近來(lái)信，詢問(wèn)你高考后的暑假安排。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)回一封信，說(shuō)明你的計(jì)劃，并簡(jiǎn)述理由。1.休息；2.讀書；3.陪伴父母；4.參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcause,Iwilldosomereadingforfun,andforknowledgeaswell.Iwillspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemaboutmyfuturemajorchoiceanddoingsomehousework.Ifpossible,Iwilltakepartinsomesocialactivities,throughwhichIwillsurelybroadenmyhorizonsandenrichmylifeexperience.1交際性拓展Communicativeexpansion拓展2細(xì)節(jié)性拓展Detailedexpansion3邏輯性拓展LogicalexpansionHowtoadddetailstoyourwritingIamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions.SampleOne1).Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.2).Knowingitwillbealongsummervacationbeforeyouareadmittedtoyourdreamuniversities,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.1.給今年即將畢業(yè)的全體高三學(xué)生寫封信，信中建議他們?cè)诟呖迹╰heCollegeEntranceExamination）結(jié)束后的暑假中能夠安排一些有意義的事去做。給建議Lookforwardtoyourreply.SampleOne

Iwillappreciateitverymuchifmyapplicationcanbetakenintoconsiderationandlookforwardtoyourreply.2.聽說(shuō)某中外合作辦學(xué)大學(xué)招收廣東高中畢業(yè)生，有意申請(qǐng)到該校英語(yǔ)系學(xué)習(xí)，用英語(yǔ)寫一封自薦信。tip：交際性拓展(communicativeexpansion)，主要集中在信件開頭與結(jié)尾，可通過(guò)背景介紹，感謝期待等內(nèi)容的添加，讓書信交際功能更生動(dòng)而又有人情味。

Knowingitwillbealongsummervacationbeforeyouareadmittedintoyourdreamuniversities,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.

Iwillappreciateitverymuchifmyapplicationcanbetakenintoconsiderationandlookforwardtoyourreply.第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)邀請(qǐng)外教Henry一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2017全國(guó)II卷DearHenry，

I’mverydelightedtowritealettertotellyousomethingaboutChinesepaper-cuttingexhibition,whichwillstartonJune20inourschoollecturehallandlastforaweek．(展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn))

Asiswell-knowntousall，Chinesepaper-cuttingisfamousallovertheworldandI’msureyou

willbe

interestedinit，soIplantoinviteyoutopayaclosevisit.Theexhibitionisacollectionofworkscreatedbysomefamouspaper-cuttingartistsinChina.(展覽內(nèi)容)Duringtheactivity,IwillshowyouaroundourschoolandthisisagoodchanceforyoutoenjoyyourselfandlearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture．

Wouldyoupleasehavealookat

theexhibitionwithme？I‘dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.

I’mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplyassoonaspossible．(殷切希望)

Yours，LiHuaInChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities.SampleTwoInChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,suchasvisitingfamily,enjoyinglotsoffood,andmostimportantly,gettingluckymoney.1.中英寒假生活調(diào)查，向英國(guó)朋友介紹中國(guó)學(xué)生的寒假生活。InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship.SampleTwoInChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,

reunion,harmonyandgoodluck.2.你準(zhǔn)備了中國(guó)結(jié)作為禮物送給外國(guó)網(wǎng)友，感謝他的幫助。細(xì)節(jié)拓展可通過(guò)兩方面進(jìn)行:1.下義延伸，即通過(guò)適當(dāng)添加例子，將寫作內(nèi)容具體化。（suchas,forexample,like…）2.平行補(bǔ)充：挖掘?qū)懽鲗?duì)象的不同方面。1.InChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,suchasvisitingfamily,eatinglotsoffood,andmostimportantly,gettingluckymoney.2.InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,

reunion,harmonyandgoodluck.DeareditorI’msogladtogivemypersonalopinionsonmyfavoritenewspaperEnglishMonthlysetupbytheStudentUnion.I’mahighschoolstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutreadingnewspapersandIwanttolearnsomethingfromthem.IthinkEnglishMonthlyhasmanyadvantages.Foronething,it’srichincontent,rangingfromeconomytocivilization.Foranother,it’saguidetoEnglishlearning.Throughit,Icanhaveagoodknowledgeofwhat’sgoingonathomeandabroadandI’veimprovedmyEnglishreadingskills.IfonlyyoucouldintroducesomemoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureandinspirationalstoriesintheculturecolumn.HereIreallyhopeEnglishMonthlywillattractmorereaders.

Yours,Lihua.SampleThree1.邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)中國(guó)體驗(yàn)文化。

2.暑假建議你去學(xué)車。IwouldliketoinviteyoutocometoChinathissummer.Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense.WhynotpayavisittoChina,

sothatyoucanhaveatasteofChinesecultureinperson?Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense,whichwillenableyoutodriveinyourdailyroutine.sothatwhich表結(jié)果3.向外國(guó)朋友介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)繪畫，推薦同學(xué)李雷為導(dǎo)游。4.李華，考試不要緊張。I’dliketorecommendmyclassmateLiLeitobeyourguide.LiHua,don’tbenervouswhiletakingexams.AsIknow,youwantsomeonewhohasabroadknowledgeoftraditionalChinesepainting,soI’dliketorecommendLiLeitobeyourguide.LiHua,don’tbenervouswhiletakingexams,because

itwillpreventyoufromconcentratingyourattentiononthetestpaper.SampleThree表原因邏輯性拓展前因，后果,讓步，遞進(jìn)…拓展小技巧背景介紹；感謝期待；下義延伸（舉例子）；平行類拓展（多方面；多角度）

掌握拓展技巧，在于先寫出句子主干(核心信息)，再根據(jù)需要增添附加成分。邏輯性拓展交際性拓展細(xì)節(jié)性拓展拓展小結(jié)前因，后果,讓步，遞進(jìn)…NoticeNextweek,ourEnglishClubwillholdaseriesofactivitiesduringour“EnglishLearningWeek”.WehavepreparedavarietyofactivitiesonEnglishlearning,suchaswatchingEnglishfilms,holdingpartiesandgettingtogetherwithforeignstudents.TherewillalsobeanEnglishspeedcontest,inwhichourforeignteacher,Peter,willbethejudge.Theseactivitieswillbeheldateveryeveningclassinourschoolhallnextweek.IamsuretheseactivitieswillnotonlyhelpimproveyourspokenEnglish,butalsobringyoumuchfun.Ireallyexpectyourenthusiasticparticipation.(2018全國(guó)Ⅱ)你受學(xué)生會(huì)委托為校宣傳欄“英語(yǔ)天地”寫一則通知,請(qǐng)大家觀看一部英文短片Growing

Together,內(nèi)容包括:1.短片內(nèi)容