書面表達(dá)專題---Howtowritealetterforadvice高中英語：如何寫建議信如何算是一篇好文章？－覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)－應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯－有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。要點(diǎn)全詞匯,句型（高級(jí)）和語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語言地道連接詞高中英語：如何寫建議信寫作要點(diǎn)：1.建議信：作者就有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析并針對(duì)這些問題提出自己的看法和建議。2.對(duì)象：1）寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；2）寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。高中英語：如何寫建議信3.基本框架：開頭（beginning）----開門見山，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn).(stateyouridea)主體(body)----對(duì)所提出的問題進(jìn)行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)結(jié)尾(ending)----呼應(yīng)開頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion.)高中英語：如何寫建議信4.注意事項(xiàng)：1）建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力；2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)?？蓮恼?、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化、倫理、法律以及個(gè)人等多角度給出建議；3）符合英文信件的基本格式；4）基本時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。高中英語：如何寫建議信常用套語A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletterIamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof…Iamwritingtosharesomeadvice/opinionswithyou.Youhaveaskedmeforsomeadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout/on…高中英語：如何寫建議信B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…4.Whynot…?/How(What)aboutdoing…5.…isagood/greatidea.6.Youmayconsiderdoing…7.Itwouldseem/seemstomethatyoucould…8.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.9.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould…

First,/Firstly,/Secondly,/Then,/Afterthat,/Intheend,/Finally,/Meanwhile,/What’smore,/Inaddition,/Besides,/Furthermore,…高中英語：如何寫建議信C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.高中英語：如何寫建議信假如你叫孫軍，是紅星高中的學(xué)生，要給市長寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：參考詞匯:穿行threadone’sway天橋overpass問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。高中英語：如何寫建議信第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的體裁是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么(topic)怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？

(order)動(dòng)作是什么時(shí)候發(fā)生的？(時(shí)態(tài))(when)第一人稱一封信建議政府采取措施舒緩交通擁擠的狀況說理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)高中英語：如何寫建議信書面表達(dá)如何寫？三個(gè)步驟Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish高中英語：如何寫建議信適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板高中英語：如何寫建議信模板二：Dear_____(對(duì)象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(問題).Firstandforthemost,_______(建議一).Inaddition,_____(建議二).What’smore_____(建議三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing高中英語：如何寫建議信Dear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙見),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou/your______(祝愿).YourssincerelyLiMing高中英語：如何寫建議信DearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

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問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。

高中英語：如何寫建議信學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對(duì)著大街standnextto…primary…face/befacedwith…themainstreet…There’saprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwith/facingthemainstreet.推薦句型：Therebe+并列句非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.高中英語：如何寫建議信潤色小建議Nexttoaprimaryschool將介詞短語提前（全倒裝）stands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.可將standnextto替換為高級(jí)詞匯/短語belocatednextto(near/beside/by)border/adjoinvt.beadjacentto與…毗鄰在…對(duì)面beoppositeto高中英語：如何寫建議信

Thetrafficisbusyduringtherushhours.高峰期交通繁忙…..traffic….duringtherushhoursDuringtherushhours,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat…Duringtherushhours,thereisalotoftraffic.so….that…with結(jié)構(gòu)Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,…高中英語：如何寫建議信潤色小建議“高峰期”可意譯:atpeaktime，alargecurrentofcarsandpeople“交通繁忙”可譯為:trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞bechokeupwithbecrammedwith被…堵塞/塞滿高中英語：如何寫建議信

加之孩子小,家長接送,交通更擁擠send…to…,fetch….,which…

非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)….Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.高中英語：如何寫建議信加之孩子小，家長接送，交通更擁擠What’smore,…pickup….make….Tomakethings

worse/What’sworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.What’smore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.高中英語：如何寫建議信makingthesituationmoreserious.makingthetrafficheavier可意譯為：so….that….=too…toThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,which

makes/makingthetrafficheavier.making可替換為：causing,leadingto,resultingin“send…fetch…”可替換為短語：pickup潤色小建議高中英語：如何寫建議信

學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)threadone’sway，whendoingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型Itis+adj.for…todo….高中英語：如何寫建議信Studentsarerisking

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takesteps/measures/actiontodo…suchas政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。Mysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…表語從句固定句型Itishightimethat…(虛擬語氣)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakestepssuchasbuildinganoverpass.簡單句高中英語：如何寫建議信1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,…潤色小建議2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshould…A.適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過渡句）Thegovernment

shouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtrytosolveit.B.語義的意譯3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…C.添加形容詞和副詞Istronglysuggest…,active/effectivemeasures高中英語：如何寫建議信第三步.連句成文但要注意：篇章的連貫性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitcomestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatA.C.D.B.高中英語：如何寫建議信反面范例高中英語：如何寫建議信反面范例高中英語：如何寫建議信反面范例高中英語：如何寫建議信反面范例高中英語：如何寫建議信不推薦字體高中英語：如何寫建議信優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生能靈活地處理各個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，大量運(yùn)用非謂語，介詞短語，從句，連詞等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯個(gè)性和語言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例1高中英語：如何寫建議信優(yōu)秀作文范例2優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生的書面整潔，字體美觀，運(yùn)用therebe句型，介詞短語，從句，非謂語，套用句式等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。高中英語：如何寫建議信優(yōu)秀作文范例3優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生運(yùn)用倒裝句，so…that句式，精彩的表達(dá)以及虛擬語氣等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。高中英語：如何寫建議信優(yōu)秀作文范例4優(yōu)點(diǎn)：該考生最大的特色是運(yùn)用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯深厚的語言底蘊(yùn)。高中英語：如何寫建議信高中英語：如何寫建議信優(yōu)秀作文范例5高中英語：如何寫建議信優(yōu)秀作文范例6高中英語：如何寫建議信Congestionn.阻塞,擁擠,充血高中英語：如何寫建議信高中英語：如何寫建議信如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

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假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。

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I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；看電視，報(bào)紙，雜志；學(xué)唱中文歌曲；交中國朋友；高中英語：如何寫建議信DearPeter, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

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TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese. TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua高中英語：如何寫建議信為了迎接即將到來的期末考試，你校要取消所有的體育課。請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生王麗的身份給校長寫一封信，建議不要取消體育課。注意：1.詞數(shù)：120左右；2.文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearHeadmaster,I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourschool’sdecisionthatallphysicaleducationshouldbecancelled.高中英語：如何寫建議信常見連接詞表時(shí)間關(guān)系：

when/after/before/until/not…untilassoonas/later/afterwards/soon/lately/recently/since/eventually/fromthenon/inthemeanwhile(meantime)/then/finally/atlast/allofasudden/afterawhile/sincethen/immediately/instantly/everytime/eachtime/thefirsttime高中英語：如何寫建議信常見連接詞羅列觀點(diǎn)：●Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith/Aboveall/Inthefirstplace/OnonehandForonething,●Secondly/Besides/Apartfrom…/What’smore,/Inaddition，/Furthermore,/Moreover，/Worsestill,/Tomakemattersworse,/aswell/Ont