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（一）

Davidknewthewaterfallwascoming.Itwasn'thisfirstvisittotheriverin

centralCalifornia.Hefiguredhewouldhopoutofhisraftintotheshallowwater,

rappeldowntherocks（沿巖壁繞繩下降）oneithersideofthefalls,andcontinueon

hisway,ashehadonaprevioustrip.

Butthisyearwasdifferent.Heavysnowandspringrainshadturnedtheusually

manageablefallsintosomethingfierce.Andthisyear,insteadofhisfriends,David's

companionswerehiswife,Sara,andhis13-year-oldson,Hunter.Asthethreeofthem

approachedthefallslateontheafternoonofthethirddayoftheircampingtrip,

Davidcouldtellfromtheincreasingroarofwaterinthenarrowingvalleythatthey

wereinserioustrouble.Therewasnowaythey，dbeabletorappeldowntherocksas

planned.

Theycouldwade（踵水）totheshore,butwouldanyonefindthemthere?Theyhad

nophoneservice,andtheyhadn'tseenasinglepersoninthepastthreedays.And

Davidknewthey*dbesharingthegroundtherewithsnakesandmountainlions.

Ashewonderedwhattodo,Davidhadabitofluck—heheardvoicescomingfrom

theothersideofthefalls.Heyelled,butthesoundoftherushingwaterdrowned

himout.

“Wehavetogetthesepeopleamessage,“Davidthought.Hecaughtastickand

pulledouthispocketknifetocarve“Help"init.Thenhetiedaropetoitsothe

peoplewouldknowitwasn'tjustanystick.Hetriedflyingitoverthefalls,but

itfloatedawayinthewrongdirection.

Thenhespottedhisgreenwaterbottle.Davidgrabbeditandcarved"Help!”

onit.Saraalsoremindedhimthathehadapenandpaper,whichshe'dbroughttoplay

gameswith,inhisbackpack.

Davidknewitwasjustanattempt.Buthewrotedown“6T5-19Wearestuckhere

atthewaterfall.Gethelpplease”andpushedthenoteintothebottle.

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Thistime，histhrowoverthewaterfallwas

perfect.__________________________________

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Thenextmorning,theyheardahelicopterhovering（盤旋）abovethem.

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Thistime,histhrowoverthewaterfallwasperfect.“Allright,that'sallwe

cando,“Davidsaid.Ittook30minutestonavigatebackupstreamtothebeachwhere

they，dhadlunch.Theymadeafireandastheeveningworeon,theywaitedforrescue

anxiously.Byabout10：30p.m.,theydecidedtheyprobablyweren，tgoingtogetrescued

thatnight,sotheypulledouttheirsleepingbags.Beforeturningin,Saraaddedmore

woodtothefiretokeepthemountainlionsaway.

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Thenextmorning,theyheardahelicopterhovering（盤旋）abovethem.Thethreewere

wavingandyellingwhentheysawthehelicopter.Afterthepilotlanded,theywent

aboardthehelicopter.Whenchattingwiththerescuers,thefamilylearnedmoreabout

theeventssavingthem：Twomenpickedupthebottleandnoticedthewriting.Then

theyrealizedtherewasanoteinside.Aftertheyreadit,theywenttothecampground,

turnedthebottlein,andleftwithoutleavingtheirnames.

(-)

Ayoungandsuccessfulmanagerwastravelingdownaneighborhoodstreet,going

abittoofastinhisnewJaguar.Hewaswatchingforkidsdartingout(竄出)frombetween

parkedcarsandsloweddownwhenhethoughthesawsomething.Ashiscarpassed,

nochildrenappeared.Instead,abrickhitviolentlyintotheJaguar*ssidedoor!

HesteppedonthebrakesandbackedhisJaguarbacktothespotwherethebrickhad

beenthrown.

Theangrydriverthenjumpedoutofthecar,grabbedthenearestkidandpushed

himupagainstaparkedcarshouting,“Whatwasthatallaboutandwhoareyou?

Justwhattheheckwereyoudoing?That*sanewcarandthatbrickyouthrewisgoing

tocostalotofmoney.Whydidyoudoit?”

Theyoungboywasapologetic."Please,mister...please.TmsorrybutIdidn't

knowwhatelsetodo,“heexplained."Ithrewthebrickbecausenooneelsewould

stop...”Withtearsrollingdownhisfaceandoffhischin,theboypointedtoa

spotjustaroundaparkedcar.alt,smybrother,“hesaid.^Herolledoffthesidewalk

andfelloutofhiswheelchairandIcan，tlifthimup."Nowsobbing,theboyasked

theastonishedmanager,uWouldyoupleasehelpmegethimbackintohiswheelchair?

He'shurtandhe'stooheavyforme.”

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Movedbeyondwords,thedrivercooledhisanger.

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Thedriverwatchedtheboypushhiswheelchair-boundbrotherdownthesidewalk

towardtheirhome.

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Movedbeyondwords,thedrivercooledhisanger.Hehurriedlyliftedthe

handicappedboybackintothewheelchair.Onseeingthebleedingcuts,themantook

outhiswhitehandkerchiefandwipedthewoundgentlywithgreatcare.Aquicklook

toldhimeverythingwasgoingtobeokay.Whenthedriverwasabouttoleave,theyoung

brothersteppedforward."Thankyou,“saidthegratefulchild,tearsfillinghis

eyes.

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Thedriverwatch6dtheboypushhiswheelchair-boundbrotherdownthesidewalk

towardtheirhome.Thenhetookalong,slowwalkbacktotheJaguarandcontinued

histravelingdowntheneighborhoodstreet.Eventhoughthedamagewasverynoticeable,

thedriverfeltsatisfiedwiththeexperienceandneverbotheredtorepairthedamaged

sidedoorbecauseitenabledhimtorealizetheincrediblesignificanceofhelping

others.Moreover,hekeptittheretoremindhimofthismessage:"Don'tgothrough

lifesofastthatsomeonehastothrowabrickatyoutogetyourattention!”

（三）

Therewasonceawonderfuloldmanwholovedeverything：animals,spiders,insects

andallsortsoflivingthings.

Onedaywhilewalkingthroughthewoods,theoldmanfoundacocoon（M）.Hedecided

totakethecocoonhometowatchitsbeautifultransformationfromalittlecocoon

toabeautifulbutterfly.

Afewdayslater,thecocoonstartedtomove.Itmovedfrantically!Hesatand

watcheditstruggleandstruggleforseveralhours.Butitseemednottomakeany

progress.Thentheoldmanfeltsorryforthelittlebutterflyinside,andrushedto

itsaid.Withapairofscissorsandgently,hecutalittleopeninginthecocoon

sothebutterflycouldcomeout.Andthenthebutterflycameoutofitscocoon.Ithad

aswollenbodyandsmall,fragilewings,butitneverwasabletofly.

Hewasquitepuzzled.Hadheaccidentallykilledthelittlebutterfly?No,itwas

stillmovingalittlebit.Maybeitwassick.Thenhedecidedthatthebestthinghe

coulddoforthebutterflywastoplaceitgentlybackintoitscocoon.Hedidso,

andplacedadropofhoneyonittosealthecocoon,leavingthebutterflytonestle（處

在）initsnaturalstate.

Thenextdayhenoticedthatthecocoonwasmovingagain.Itstruggledand

struggled.Finallythebutterflybrokefreefromitscocoonandstretcheditswings

out.Itsbeautifulwingswerefilledwithwonderfulcolors1Ittookoff1Itwasflying!

Thewonderfulbutterflyflewandflewtillitwasalmostoutoftheoldman*s

sight."Whatajoy,“heexclaimed!Butthenhestartedtothink:whatdidIdowrong

bytryingtohelpthatbeautifullittlebutterflyoutatfirst?

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Finallytheanswercameout.

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Sometimesstrugglesareexactlywhatweneedinour

life.____________________________

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Finallytheanswercameout.Thebutterflyhastostruggleandstrugglewhile

insidethecocoon.That'showitgetsitsstrength.That'sjustwhatthecreatureis

designedtoovercomeinordertobestrongandbeautiful.Well,needlesstosay,

theoldmanfinallyrealizedthatsometimesappearancesaren'twhattheyseemtobe.In

fact,theseeminglyhardtimethebutterflywashavingwaswhatbroughttheamazing

transformation.

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Sometimesstrugglesareexactlywhatweneedinourlife.Lifeisfullofupsand

downs,andwe'reoftenconfrontedindailylifewithunexpectedproblemsandoutcomes

thatcaneasilydepressandevendefeatus.Sometimeswefailtorealizethatit's

outofthestrugglesoflifethatwegainstrengthandbuildcharacter.Ifwewere

allowedtogothroughourlifewithoutanytoughness,itwouldcrippleus.Wewould

notbeasstrongaswhatwecouldhavebeen.Andwecouldneverfly.

（四）

1havekeptawatchfrommygrandfather.WhenIwasaschoolboy,thewatchhung

bymygrandfather，sbed.ThefacewasmarkedwithelegantRomannumeralsandthecase

wasgold.ItwasasplendidwatchandIoftenstaredatitlonginglysittingwithmy

grandfather.Hewouldoftenaskaboutmyprogressatschool.ThedayItoldhimmy

successintheexaminations,hewasovercomewithpleasure."You'11begoingtoa

newschoolnext.Andthenyou'11gotouniversity,willyou?”heasked."Butyou'11

needplentyofpatience.Patienceandhardwork.That，sthewaytosucceed.”

Hetookoffthewatchandwoundit."Itwasgivenmeforfiftyyearsoffaithful

servicewithmyfirm,“hesaidproudly.Finally,hehandedmethewatchduetothe

progressinschool.Iheldit,feelingitsweight.AsIwasleavinghim,hesaid,

“Andyou'11notforgetwhatItoldyou?”Iwassuddenlyverymoved."No,Granddad,“

Ipromised,"I'llnot.”

Arrivinghome,mymotherwastoholditintrustuntilsheconsideredmeoldenough

tolookafterit,butIprotestedsostronglythatshefinallyagreedtohangitwhere

1couldalwaysseeit.Thesummerendedanditwastimeformetoenterthenewschool.1

nevermadefriendseasilythere.Oneboy,Crawley,wasawell-to-dofellowwhoseway

ofimpressinguswastoshowoffhispossessions.Hisbicyclewasnew；hisbootswere

ofthebesthide；everything,infact,wasbetterthanours-untilhebroughta

watch.Crawleysaidhiswatchwasabsolutelythefinestwatch.

“Ihaveabetterwatch,“Iannounced."Well,showittous,“Crawleysaid

sneeringly（諷刺地）."I'llbringitthisafternoon,"Isaid.“Thenyou'llsee.v

Irodemybikehome,wonderinghowIwouldpersuademymothertoletmetakethe

watch.Luckily,shesteppedoutsideandIslippedthewatchintomypocket.

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Irodemybikefasttoschoolafterlunch,excitementthrough

me.______________________

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When