九年級(jí)（全）Units3-4第三部分高頻話題寫(xiě)作指南我們的變化寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖昆明近六年未涉及相關(guān)話題，從云南近四年“我們的變化”相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，此類作文命題角度如下：1.實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的目標(biāo)，心態(tài)的變化，如2012曲靖“珍惜眼下”；2.成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷，如2011大理“成長(zhǎng)”。Example:motherwasillTiredDeliciousbutsaltyNowCookmealUsedtobeChangealotTearsineyesGothotwaterWeakandshortCareaboutothersStrongerandstrongerLearntounderstand亮點(diǎn)句型速成常用句型：MyteachersandclassmateshelpmewithmyEnglish.MyEnglishisgoodnow.推薦句型：→①Thankstomydearteachersandclassmates,myEnglishbecomesmuchbetternowthanbefore.→②Withthehelpof(Underthehelpof)myteachersandclassmates,myEnglishhasimprovedalotnow.→③IhavemademuchgreatprogressonmyEnglishwiththehelpof(underthehelpof)myteachersandclassmates.常用句型：Ilikedplayingcomputergamesbefore.AndIplayeditalot.推薦句型：→①I(mǎi)wasinterestedinplayingcomputergamesbefore,soIplayeditalot.→②Iusedtobeinterestedinplayingcomputergames,soIalwaysspentplentytimeonthem.中間句：1.Iusedtobeabitshy,butnowIbecomeoutgoing.2.Daybyday,Igetonverywellwithmyclassmates.3.Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastthreeyears.4.IwasfatandshortbeforeIcametothemiddleschool.5.Now,IlikesportsandIoftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesafterschool.6.SoIbecometallerandstrongerthanbefore.7.Iamwillingtocareaboutothers.結(jié)尾句：1.Goodhabitshelpmetostudybetterandkeephealthier.2.Myparentsandmyteachersusedtoworryaboutme,butnowtheyarebothpleasedwithme.（更多常用詞匯見(jiàn)“28天話題詞匯分類速記表”話題（一）個(gè)人情況、話題（三）居住環(huán)境）典例剖析（’11大理）IAmNotaChildAnyMore提示：在陽(yáng)光雨露里，我已長(zhǎng)高、長(zhǎng)壯！但這還不是全部，長(zhǎng)大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、回報(bào)親朋師長(zhǎng)？還是……成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)以“IAmNotaChildAnyMore”為題記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已不再是一個(gè)小孩了。要求:1.請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給的題目，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于60；2.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔；3.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)?！緦忣}指導(dǎo)】1.對(duì)自己的現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去做比較，以此說(shuō)明自己已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)大；2.寫(xiě)出自己在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事情，通過(guò)事例來(lái)證明自己的觀點(diǎn)；3.作總結(jié)，再次突出主題；4.詞數(shù)不少于60；文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)?！靖叻址段摹縄AmNotaChildAnyMoreIama16-year-oldgirlnow.Ihavechangedalot.Iusedtobeweakandshort.Butnow,Iamstrongerandastallasmymother.ThemostimportantthingisthatIhavelearnedtounderstandandcareaboutothers.ItwasaWednesdayevening.WhenIwentbackhome,noonewasin.SoIcookedthemeal.Ididn’tknowmymotherwasilluntilmyparentscamebackfromthehospital.Theybothsaidthemealwasverydelicious,thoughittastedsalty.Aftersupper,Ifoundtheyweretootired.Igothotwaterforthem.Whenmymotherputherfeetintothewater,withtearsinhereyesshesaid,“Dear,youhavegrownup.”ItwasthefirsttimethatIcaredaboutmyparents.IrealizedIwasnotachildanymore.【檢測(cè)菜單】1.____________過(guò)去常