選擇性必修三作文一應(yīng)用文作文訓(xùn)練班級姓名一單元Art主題寫作——關(guān)于藝術(shù)展的通知考題回放：你校的藝術(shù)俱樂部正在舉行名家藝術(shù)展覽，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，寫一篇口通知。展出內(nèi)容：徐悲鴻的名作，其中亮點(diǎn)是他的作品《六駿圖》；(2)本周六早上8點(diǎn)在學(xué)校門口集合；(3)觀展后要寫藝術(shù)評論。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3)開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Attention,please.Ihaveanannouncementtomake.(1)一審：確定寫作體裁和主題 體裁：應(yīng)用文——口頭通知。主題：藝術(shù)展(2)二定：確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱（與體裁和主題息息相關(guān)） 時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)（介紹一般的情況）和一般過去時(shí)（介紹徐悲鴻的情況）為主人稱：以第三人稱為主(3)三明確明確寫作要點(diǎn)：有通知宣布一介紹徐悲鴻的情況一介紹畫的情況→一些要求。四分段黃金分段法則：結(jié)合文章內(nèi)容分三段。第一段說明有通知要說；第二段介紹徐悲鴻的情況和所展畫作的情況；第三段提一些要求。素材：(1)關(guān)鍵詞語 realistic,inparticular,setapartfrom,influential,breakthrough,reputation,purchase,emerge,befondof,criticise,representative,exhibition,recognition,bring...backtolifeguarantee,contemporary,beworthyof,ondisplay/show/exhibition(2)完成句子①徐悲鴻作品展正在我們學(xué)校的藝術(shù)俱樂部舉行。(hold)②徐先生不僅在他同時(shí)代的人中享有良好的聲譽(yù)，而且他也是國內(nèi)外最有影響力的藝術(shù)家之一。（notonly...,reputation,influential）③這個(gè)展覽值得人們參觀。（beworthyof)④畫中有六匹奔跑的馬，飛揚(yáng)的毛發(fā)使它們鮮活起來。(therebesb./sth.doing...,bring...tolife)⑤你會(huì)覺得它們好像要從畫里飛奔而出，出現(xiàn)在你面前。（asif,emerge）⑥我們被要求寫一篇關(guān)于這些畫作的評論。（berequiredtodosth.)⑦如果你仔細(xì)觀察和欣賞它們，我保證你會(huì)學(xué)到很多。(guarantee)Keys:①AnexhibitionontheworksofXuBeihongisbeingheldinourschoolartclub.②NotonlydidMrXuhaveagoodreputationamonghiscontemporariesbutalsohewasoneofthemostinfluentialartistsathomeandabroad.③Theexhibitionisworthyofbeingvisited.④Therearesixhorsesrunninginthepainting,andtheflyinghairbringsthemtolife.⑤Youwillfeelasiftheyweretoflyoutofthepaintingandemergebeforeyou.⑥Wearerequiredtowriteareviewabouttheworks.⑦Ifyouobserveandadmirethemcarefully,Iguaranteethatyouwilllearnalot.一單元范文1Attention,please.Ihaveanannouncementtomake.AnexhibitionontheworksofXuBeihongisbeingheldinourschoolartclub.ThehighlightoftheworksondisplayisTheSixHorsesbyXuBeihong.NotonlydidMrXuhaveagoodreputationamonghiscontemporariesbutalsohewasoneofthemostinfluentialartistsathomeandabroad.Asaresult,theexhibitionisworthyofbeingvisited.Therearesixhorsesrunninginthepainting,andtheflyinghairbringsthemtolife.Therefore,youwillfeelasiftheyweretoflyoutofthepaintingandemergebeforeyou.Wearetogatherat8:00a.m.thisSaturdayatthegateofourschool.Wearerequiredtowriteareviewabouttheworks.Ifyouobserveandadmirethemcarefully,Iguaranteethatyouwilllearnalot.1單元范文2假定你是李華，你想邀請你校的留學(xué)生Peter一起參觀國畫展。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1)展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；(2)展覽內(nèi)容。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter,SinceyouarefondofChinesepainting,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendaChinesepaintingexhibitionwithme.TheexhibitionwillbeheldfromOctober1toOctober6intheartgallery,whereChinesepaintingscreatedbymanyinfluentialartistsfromdifferenttimeswillbeondisplay.YouwillappreciatemasterpiecesandfeelthecharmofChinesepaintinginperson.I'msureitwillbeafeastforyoureyes.PleaseletmeknowwhichdaysuitsyoubestsothatIcanbookticketsonlineinadvance.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.Yours,LiHua二單元Healthylifestyle主題寫作：給編輯的一封關(guān)于健康的生活郵件考題回放：假設(shè)你是李華。最近，雜志HealthyLife就中學(xué)生的生活式進(jìn)行征稿。請你給編輯發(fā)一封電子郵件投稿，稿件包含以下內(nèi)容：（1）你過去的生活方式以及問題所在；（2）你做出的改變；（3）最后的結(jié)果。Ⅱ?qū)懽魉悸罚ㄒ粚?、二定、三明確、四分段）

(1)一審：確定寫作體裁和主題體裁：應(yīng)用文——一封電子郵件主題：健康的生活方式

(2)二定：確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱（與體裁和主題息息相關(guān)）時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)（介紹過去的情況）和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)（敘述現(xiàn)在的情況）為主人稱：以第一人稱為主

(3)三明確

明確寫作要點(diǎn)：給編輯的電子郵件一介紹自己過去的情況（沉迷于吸煙、身體和精神狀況都不好)→改變的過程(打籃球、鍛煉等)→現(xiàn)在的狀況（精力充沛，愛學(xué)習(xí)）。

(4)四分段

黃金分段法則：結(jié)合文章內(nèi)容分為三段。第一段講述自己過去的情況；第二段介紹自己做出的改變；第三段介紹現(xiàn)在的狀況。

素材整理

(1)關(guān)鍵詞語

tobacco,discipline,straightaway,share...with,stressedout/wornout,whatisworse,beeaddictedto,beeaware,makeupone'smind

(2)完成句子

①隨著我的學(xué)業(yè)增加，我感覺心力交瘁。（stressedout)

②曾經(jīng)有一段時(shí)間，我晚上失眠。（therebeatimewhen...)

③我沉迷于吸煙，這對我的身心健康有消極的影響。(beaddictedto,haveanegativeeffecton,physical)④我突然意識到，如果不加以控制，我的壞習(xí)慣會(huì)讓我一事無成。（ifleftunchecked）⑤我下定決心馬上改變自己。(makeupone'smindtodosth.)⑥每當(dāng)我想吸煙時(shí)，我就盡量通過做其他事情來約束自己。（discipline）⑦毫無疑問，我更有活力，更專注于我的學(xué)習(xí)。(Therebenodoubtthat...,dynamic)Keys:①Asmystudiesgrew,Iwasstressedout.②TherewasatimewhenIcouldn'tsleepatnight.③Ibecameaddictedtosmokingtobacco,whichhadanegativeeffectonmyphysicalandmentalhealth.④Isuddenlybecameawarethatifleftunchecked,mybadhabitwouldmakemeacplishnothing.⑤Imadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.⑥WheneverIwantedtosmoke,Itriedtodisciplinemyselfbydoingotherthings.⑦ThereisnodoubtthatIammoredynamic,concentratingonmystudy.二單元范文1：DearEditor,Here,Iwouldliketosharemystorywithyou.Asmystudiesgrew,Iwasstressedout.TherewasatimewhenIcouldn'tsleepatnight.Whatwasworse,Ibecameaddictedtosmokingtobacco,whichhadanegativeeffectonmyphysicalandmentalhealth.Oneday,Isuddenlybecameawarethatifleftunchecked,mybadhabitwouldmakemeacplishnothing.Therefore,Imadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.WheneverIwantedtosmoke,Itriedtodisciplinemyselfbydoingotherthings.Ichosetoplaybasketballinstead.Inaddition,Igotupearlytotakeexerciseeverymorning.Now,thereisnodoubtthatIammoredynamic,concentratingonmystudy.Yours,LiHua二單元范文2：假設(shè)你是李華，得知好朋友Jack在升入高三之際感到學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大。請你按照以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封信，幫助他放松身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。

(1)快樂學(xué)習(xí)；(2)參加體育活動(dòng)，聽聽音樂；(3)與同學(xué)交流。

DearJack,I'msorrytohearthatyouarewornoutbecauseoftheheavypressureinyourstudy.Iwouldliketoofferyousomeadviceonhowtostudyeffectively.Tostartwith,youshouldlearninarelaxingway,whichwillreduceyourpressureandmakeyourstudybeeaneasyjob.Anotherwaytokeepyoudynamicistotakepartinsportsregularly,whichenhancesyourbody.Listeningtomusicisanothereffectivemeansofrefreshingyouandhelpingyougetridofyournegativethoughts.Moreimportantly,youaresupposedtoexchangeideaswithyourclassmatesandfriends.Sokeeptryingandyouwillmakeit.Yours,LiHua三單元寫作Environmentalprotection環(huán)境保護(hù)假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國好友Leslie發(fā)來電子郵件詢問你所在社區(qū)周圍的環(huán)境狀況，請你給他回一封電子郵件。郵件主要包括以下內(nèi)容：(1)社區(qū)環(huán)境狀況和存在的問題；(2)建議采取的措施；(3)可能的結(jié)果。寫作思路（一審、二定、三明確、四分段）(1)一審：確定寫作體裁和主題體裁：應(yīng)用文——回復(fù)郵件主題：介紹社區(qū)的環(huán)保問題(2)二定：確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱（與體裁和主題息息相關(guān)）時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主人稱：以第三人稱為主，第一人稱為輔(3)三明確明確寫作要點(diǎn)：給Leslie回復(fù)電子郵件→社區(qū)環(huán)境狀況和存在的問題（總體很好，但是有人亂扔垃圾）→建議采取的措施→可能的結(jié)果。(4)四分段黃金分段法則：結(jié)合文章內(nèi)容分三段。第一段現(xiàn)狀和問題；第二段采取的措施；第三段可能出現(xiàn)的結(jié)果。素材(1)關(guān)鍵詞語 introduce,generallyspeaking,beworthyof,garbage,dozensof,tolerate,takestrictmeasures,carryout,regulation,inthemeanwhile,remend,install,fine,implement,harmonious (2)完成句子①總的來說，值得表揚(yáng)。（beworthyof)②有強(qiáng)有力的證據(jù)表明，一些居民經(jīng)常到處扔垃圾。(Thereisevidence...)③情況太差了，很多人都無法忍受它。(so...that,tolerate)④毫無疑問，有必要采取嚴(yán)格的措施，并執(zhí)行一些規(guī)定。（Thereisnodoubtthat...)⑤那些被抓到亂扔垃圾的人應(yīng)該被罰款。(becaught doingsth.,fine)⑥隨著這些措施的最終實(shí)施，我們相信一個(gè)和諧的社區(qū)將被建造。（withsth.done,harmonious)1.Generallyspeaking,itisworthyofbeingpraised.2.Thereisstrongevidencethatafewresidentsfrequentlydropgarbageeverywhere.3.Thesituationissoterriblethatdozensofpeoplecan'ttolerateit. 4.Thereisnodoubtthatit'snecessarytotakestrictmeasuresandcarryoutsomeregulations.5.Thosecaughtthrowingawaygarbageshouldbefined.6.Withthesemeasuresimplementedfinally,we'reconfidentthataharmoniousmunitywillbebuilt.三單元范文1：DearLeslie, Now,I'mwritingtointroducethestateoftheenvironmentinourmunity.Generallyspeaking,itisworthyofbeingpraised.Butthereisstrongevidencethatafewresidentsfrequentlydropgarbageeverywhere.Thesituationissoterriblethatdozensofpeoplecan'ttolerateit. Thereisnodoubtthatit'snecessarytotakestrictmeasuresandcarryoutsomeregulations.Inthemeanwhile,someresidentsstronglyremendthathighdefinitioncamerasshouldbeinstalled.Thosecaughtthrowingawaygarbageshouldbefined. Withthesemeasuresimplementedfinally,we'reconfidentthataharmoniousmunitywillbebuilt.Yours,LiHua3單元：范文2某英文報(bào)社正在舉辦以環(huán)保為主題的英語作文大賽，假設(shè)你是李華，請你寫篇作文參賽。內(nèi)容包括：

(1)地球面臨的問題；(2)我們應(yīng)如何保護(hù)地球；(3)呼吁人們采取行動(dòng)。

Inrecentyears,theenvironmenthasbeenworseningwithmoreandmorecarbondioxidereleasedintotheatmosphere.Theairissodirtythatdozensofpeoplecan'ttolerateit.Garbageisbeingseensomewhere.Unlesswetakeactionnow,theearthwillbeunfittoliveon

Actually,therearemanythingswecandotomakeadifference.Governmentsshouldmakepoliciesandregulationstorestricttheburningoffossilfuels.Organisationsshouldlaunchcampaignsagainstvariouskindsofpollution.Weasindividualsshouldcontributetoreducingpollutionbydoingsomethingsmall.四單元Adveristyandcourage困境與勇氣本單元寫作課文要求寫一篇讀后感，但和高考考情結(jié)合：寫作項(xiàng)目是描述一個(gè)有毅力的人物，屬于人物描寫的寫作范疇。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇關(guān)于Shackleton和他的探險(xiǎn)隊(duì)的英語小短文。Shackleton和他的探險(xiǎn)隊(duì)乘船去南極探險(xiǎn)。不幸的是，接近南極時(shí)，他們的船被冰壓碎了。在船沉沒之前，Shackleton帶頭扔掉一些寶貴的財(cái)產(chǎn)，上了幾艘小船。面對困境，他們沒有失去信心。Shackleton把一些船員安置在象島上，然后他和另外五名船員去尋求幫助。他許下諾言會(huì)回來救他們。最終，他使船員們安全回家了。寫作思路（一審、二定、三明確、四分段）一審：確定寫作體裁和主題體裁：記敘文——小短文主題：介紹Shackleton和他的探險(xiǎn)隊(duì)面對困境不屈不撓的故事。二定：確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱（與體裁和主題息息相關(guān)）時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主（介紹過去發(fā)生的事情）人稱：以第三人稱為主三明確：明確寫作要點(diǎn)：簡單介紹Shackleton和他的探險(xiǎn)隊(duì)→他們遇到的困境（船沉）→克服困境→安全回家。四分段：黃金分段法則：結(jié)合文章內(nèi)容分三段。第一段簡單敘說Shackleton和他的探險(xiǎn)隊(duì)要去南極探險(xiǎn)。第二段敘述遇到的困難。第三段敘述他們克服困難平安回家。素材整理(1)關(guān)鍵詞語adversity,bitter,sink,belongings,unfortunately/unluckily,abandon,resolve,crew,mitment,persevere,perseverance,courageousandadventurous,makeanexpeditionto,getcrushed,throwaway,befacedwith,loseheart,struggletosurvive,inthebitterconditions,aswellas,seekhelp,makeamitment,safeandsound,befamousas,meetwith,giveup(2)完成句子①勇敢且愛冒險(xiǎn)的Shackleton和他的團(tuán)隊(duì)乘船到南極探險(xiǎn)。（makeanexpeditionto）②不幸的是，接近南極時(shí)，他們的船就被冰壓碎了。(unfortunately,getdone)③Shackleton別無選擇，只能棄船。（havenochoicebuttodo,abandon)④面對逆境，他們并沒有失去信心。（befacedwith,loseheart)

⑤Shackleton要求一些船員留在象島，在那里他們在艱苦的環(huán)境中掙扎著生存。（where引導(dǎo)定語從句）

⑥他承諾，他會(huì)回來救他們。（makeamitment)

①Courageousandadventurous,ShackletonandhisteammadeanexpeditiontoAntarcticbyship.②Unfortunately,theirshipgotcrushedbytheicewhentheyalmostapproachedAntarctic.③Shackletonhadnochoicebuttoabandontheship.④Facedwithadversity,theydidn'tloseheart.⑤ShackletonaskedsomeofthecrewtostayonElephantIsland,wheretheystruggledtosurviveinthebitterconditions.⑥Hemadeamitmentthathewouldebacktosavethem.四單元范文1Courageousandadventurous,ShackletonandhisteammadeanexpeditiontoAntarcticbyship.

Unfortunately,theirshipgotcrushedbytheicewhentheyapproachedAntarctic.Shackletonhadnochoicebuttoabandontheship.Hefirstthrewawaysomevaluablebelongingsbeforetheshipsank.Theygotonseveralsmallboats.Facedwithadversity,theydidn'tloseheart.

ShackletonaskedsomeofthecrewtostayonElephantIsland,wheretheystruggledtosurviveinthebitterconditions.Shackleton,aswellasfiveothercrewmembers,wentsomewheretoseekhelp.Hemadeamitmentthathewouldebacktosavethem.Intheend,heledallthecrewbackhomesafeandsound.四單元范文2：假定你是李華，得知英國好友Jim和他的隊(duì)友在國際航空設(shè)計(jì)大賽(InternationalAeroDesignpetition)中失利。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給他寫一封信。內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示關(guān)心；(2)鼓勵(lì)他面對困境，不畏失敗，繼續(xù)努力；(3)期待他成功。DearJim,I'msorrytoknowthatyourteamfailedintheInternationalAeroDesignpetition.NowI'mwritingtoencourageyoutoperseverewhenyouarefacedwithadversity.Asthesayinggoes,“Failureisthemotherofsuccess."Manysuccessfulpeoplehadgonethroughcountlessfailuresbeforetheyeventuallysucceeded.Itwastheirperseveranceandcouragetofacefailurethathelpedthemachievesuccessintheend.I'mconvincedthatyouwilllearnmorefromthisexperienceandperformmuchbetternexttime.Keepontryingandyou'llmakeitsoonerorlater.Yours,LiHua五單元Poems詩歌假定你是李華，你的英國好友Lucy非常喜歡英文詩，并在郵件中詢問你最喜歡哪首英文詩。請你給她回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)詩的名稱和作者；(2)詩的內(nèi)容。寫作思路一審：確定寫作體裁和主題應(yīng)用文——回復(fù)郵件；主題：喜歡的英文詩二定：確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱（與體裁和主題息息相關(guān)）時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主（介紹你喜歡的詩的基本情況)人稱：以第三人稱為主

(3)三明確

明確寫作要點(diǎn)：給Lucy回郵件→說出自己喜歡的英文詩以及喜歡的原因（英文詩簡單易懂，傳遞情感）→希望Lucy也喜歡這首詩。

(4)四分段

黃金分段法則：結(jié)合文章內(nèi)容分三段。第一段發(fā)郵件告訴Lucy自己喜歡的英文詩；第二段寫詩的名字、特點(diǎn)等；第三段希望Lucy也喜歡這首詩。

素材整理

(1)關(guān)鍵詞語

sorrow,rhyme,recite,bemadeupof,mood,convey,prehension,core,sympathy,version,contest,polish,plicated,variation,oneofthefamous/outstandingpoets,ameaningfulpoem,befondof,followone'sdream

(2)完成句子

①知道你喜歡英語詩歌，所以為了和你分享我最喜歡的詩歌我正在寫信。（befondof)②這首詩很容易理解和背誦，在結(jié)尾有押韻詞。(recite,rhyme)③它只有八行組成，句子很短。（bemadeupof)④然而，這首詩傳達(dá)了一個(gè)重要的信息。（convey)⑤即使我們遇到困境，我們也不應(yīng)該放棄我們的夢想。(evenif)⑥每次讀它，我的心里都充滿了希望。（everytime)Keys:①KnowingthatyouarefondofEnglishpoems,I'mwritingtosharemyfavouriteonewithyou.②Thepoemiseasytounderstandandreciteandhasendrhymes.③Itismadeupofonlyeightlinesandthesentencesareshort.④However,thepoemconveysanimportantmessage.⑤Evenifwemeetwithadve