第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Severalyearsago,IwaslivinginNewYorkandworkingforanairline,soInevergotbackhomeforChristmas.MyChristmaswashappytoowithsomeothercolleaguesaround.ButinmyheartIwassadbecauseIcouldn’tstaywithmyfamily.SometimesmycolleagueswouldsayourChristmaswasfilledwithtears.ButthisChristmaswasdifferent.Iwaslucky.Ihadthewholedayoff,whichmeantIcouldstaywithmyfamilyonChristmasEve.

WhenChristmasmorningcame,Iawoketoasmallhandrubbingmyface.“Dad!MerryChristmas!”wasallmyyoungersonhadtimetosay.Heseemedtoberacingagainsttime【比喻】.Iknewhewashuntingfor【動作細(xì)節(jié)】giftswithhisbrothereagerly.Igotdownstairsjusttoseethetwolittleboys’facesastheylookedatthepocketsSantaClaushadleftthem.IrealizedthattherealChristmaswasforthechildrenwhohaddeepbeliefintheamazingpowerofSantaClaus.Atfirst,theirfingerswentalmostshyly【動作細(xì)節(jié)】overtheirtoys.Whentheirinspection(檢查)hadbeencompleted,thetwoboysensuredthatthegiftswerereallydeliveredbySantaClausandtheydragged【動作細(xì)節(jié)】everythingintothecentreofthelivingroom.

Delightfloodedtheroom【渲染氛圍】.Astheirmotherbegangivingoutgifts,Ismiledtomyself,wonderinghowmyunexpectedgiftsthisyearwouldbereceived.WithsomanyChristmasspentoutside,IhadpreparedsomanygiftsformychildrenandtogetherwithmywifeIhidtheminseveralsecretplaces.Butthechildrenwereexcellentdetectives【比喻】andtheyfoundallofthem.TheywerehappilyopeningpackagesconstantlythankingconsiderateSantaClausforhiskindnessandabilitytoknowtheirdesires.ButIhadnotreceivedasingleone.IknewtheyhadforgottenmyexistencewithmyabsencefromtheirChristmastheseyears.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好；注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左石：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。審題：Theme(what):familybond–loveandconsiderationConflict-WasIreallyforgottenbythefamilyonChristmas?Writingpurpose(why)–torecordanunforgettableandpreciousChristmasspentwithhisfamily//toshowfamilyattachmentwritingstyle(how)–vivid,sensitiveandlivelyDetails:1.setting--whenandwhere(時空線)onChristmasmorning//athomefromupstairs(bedroom)todownstairs(livingroom)who:afamilyconsistingoftwosons,awifeandme(thehusbandwhoworkedforanairline)2.plot(情節(jié)線)IhadadayoffonChristmas→awoketoobservechildrenhuntingforgifts→thefamilyreceivedgiftsandopenedpackages→Ihadnotreceivedasingleone3.feelings(情感線)excited→delighted&amazed→alittledisappointedPredictthepossibleplotIhadtoadmitthatmydisappointmentwasgrowingsteadily._______________________________[Showhisdisappointment–whatdidhedo/say?howdidhefeel?][Bycontrast,whatwerethechildrenandwifedoing?]Suddenlymywifewalkeduptome.__________________________________________________[Whatwouldshedo?Would“I”receiveaChristmasgift?][HowdidIfeeltheloveandaffectionofthefamily?]細(xì)節(jié)呼應(yīng)：tears/detective/knowtheirdesires/airline/…學(xué)生跑偏了的思路1.自責(zé)版Itwasmyfaultbeingabsentforyears.IrealizedIdidn'tshouldermydutyofaccompanyingmyfamily.Iwasn’tagoodhusbandandfather.Mydisappointmentgraduallyturnedintoself-accusation.Ifeltashamedandwantedtoquitmyjob.2.爭風(fēng)吃醋，指責(zé)孩子Myboysdidn’tknowhowtoshowgratitudetotheirfather,therealSanta.Iwastheonetosendthemgifts,notSanta.Ineedtouncoverthetruth—therewasnoSantaClause!TherealChristmaswasnotonlyforthechildrenbutalsoforme.3.生氣惱怒，顧影自憐，需要妻子開導(dǎo)Maybeeveryonehadforgottenmyexistenceanddidn’tpreparedinadvance.Myeyesgrowingmisty,Imustbethemostpitifuldadandhusband.4.逃離家庭，借工作消愁I(lǐng)wantedtosaysth.but…Iwenttomyofficetosolvethedifficultiesinmyjob.ItseemedthatI’llbesurroundedbyabademotionwhenIstayedathome.IthoughtIwouldnevercomebackforChristmasagain.5.受委屈了想回家找媽媽Ihadn’treceivedanypresentsinceIleftmyparents.IrangupmyparentsandtoldthemhowmuchIlovedthem.語言錯誤一、動詞時態(tài)隨機播放，不規(guī)則動詞亂寫一氣standed,understanded,shaked,stricken,bursted…二、非謂語動詞的誤用1.Itmustbethemostdisappointedandlongesttime.Icouldn’thelpcry.Beingforgottenwasanembarrassedthing.Myexistencewasembarrassed.2.I’dliketotellyouanexcitednewsthat…3.Staringatthefamiliarfaces,tearsrollingdownmycheeks.…Thoughsorrowpainfillingmyheart,Ifeltgrateful.4.Withallemotionssurgedintomymind,Idecidedtohaveawalk…5.Lookingattheboys’faceslitup…,I…6.Asworkingforanairline,beingoutisthethingshappeningrapidly.7.Feltmyeyesbecomingmisty,Iliftedmyhead.三、介詞錯誤1.in/atChristmas2.lookmyboyscheering/theirhappyface/yourgift3.Yourcomingworthtocelebrate.4.Theyexpressedgratitudetomydevotion四、詞不達(dá)意，詞性不管1.缺席ItwasmethathadabsentedtheirChristmas.MaybethatistheendingofbeingabsencefromChristmas.2.陪伴Ihadn’taccompanywiththem.TheyhavesufferedtoomanyChristmaswithou