書面表達20篇(2024年江蘇省名校真題)1．（2024·江蘇鹽城·二模）成長過程中有個懂你的人非常重要，如你的朋友、老師、父母等。校報英語專欄正在舉行主題為“_________knowsmebest”的征文活動，請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇英語短文投稿。提示內(nèi)容：1.Whoknowsyoubest?2.Whydoyouthinkhe/sheknowsyoubest?3....注意事項：答案見微信

公眾號：熱愛生活（1）請補全標題；（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)除公眾人物外的真實姓名、校名等信息；（3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)）；（4）語言通順，意思連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。_________knowsmebestDuringtheprocessofgrowing,itisveryimportanttohavesomeonewhoknowsus.Amongallthepeoplearoundme,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2024·江蘇南通·二模）你們班想在畢業(yè)之前分小組為學校做一些有意義的事，如種植紀念樹、捐書給圖書館、拍攝宣傳學校的視頻等。假如你是李華，你們組打算邀請交換生Peter一起參加這次活動。請你根據(jù)提示，用英文寫一封電子郵件，告訴他活動安排及你們組的打算。提示詞語：memorial紀念的提示問題：●Whatactivitiesdoesyourclassplantodo?Why?●Whenandwherewillyourclassorganizethem?●Whichactivitywillyourgroupchoose?Why?注意：1.表達中必須包括所給要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。2.

詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.

表達中請勿提及真實校名和姓名。DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wesincerelyinviteyoutojoinusforthisspecialactivity.Yourpresencewouldmeanalottous.Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua3．（2024·江蘇揚州·二模）假如你叫李華，將代表學校參加揚州市中學生英語演講比賽，演講的題目是“Learningtogetalongwithourparents”。請你用英語寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容要點如下：Phenomenon(現(xiàn)象)1.feelithardtogetalongwithourparents2.…Reasons/Causes1.caretoomuchaboutourmarks2.…Suggestions

1.communicatewiththem2.…3.…要求：1)表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫：2)必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當發(fā)揮；3)詞數(shù)：100詞左右(演講稿的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名。Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.Todaymytopicis“Learningtogetalongwithourparents”.Thesedays,mostofusfeelithardtogetalongwithourparents.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!4．（2024·江蘇揚州·二模）時間在不經(jīng)意中從指尖劃過，轉(zhuǎn)眼我們即將從母校畢業(yè)，愉快的暑假也即將來臨了，同學們可曾思考如何度過一個多彩的暑假呢？根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，以”Mysummerholidayplan”為主題的寫一篇暑假計劃的英語短文。參考詞匯：socialpracticeactivities社會實踐活動要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括流程圖中所有要點內(nèi)容，并適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭己給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。MysummerholidayplanSummerholidayiscoming._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2024·江蘇徐州·二模）《環(huán)球時報》目前正舉辦以“MyCountry,MyPride”為題的征文活動，這個活動特別面向全球的青少年，鼓勵他們通過文字來介紹自己深愛的祖國。請你寫一篇短文投稿，從下列提示中選擇兩到三點適當展開，介紹你深愛的祖國。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右(開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù))；2.短文中不得泄露個人信息。MyCountry,MyPrideIcomefromagreatcountry,ithasabeautifulname--China._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2024·江蘇宿遷·二模）“天高海闊萬里長，華夏少年意氣揚。發(fā)憤圖強做棟梁，不負年少?！薄渡倌曛袊f》歌頌了少年的朝氣蓬勃和發(fā)奮圖強的精神風骨?！动偪裼⒄Z》雜志社正在開展以“IHaveaDream”為題的英語征文活動。請你結(jié)合以下問題，寫一篇英語征文。1.Whatisyourdream?2.Whydoyouhavesuchadream?(atleasttworeasons)3.Howcanyouachieveyourdream?(atleastintwoways)注意：（1）短文應(yīng)包括表格中的全部信息并適當發(fā)揮，要求條理清楚、行文連貫、段落分明；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名、姓名；（3）詞數(shù)90左右，征文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。IHaveaDreamEveryonehasadream.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2024·江蘇連云港·二模）生活技能對于個人的成長和成功起著重要的作用。掌握常用生活技能，可以把生活過成自己喜歡的樣子。21stCentury英文報社現(xiàn)征集題為“Lifeskills”的英語演講稿，假如你是林濤，請根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，用英語寫一篇演講稿，描述你應(yīng)該具備的生活技能以及如何提高這些技能。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容包含思維導(dǎo)圖所含提示，可適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、校名等信息。Learninglifeskillsisnecessaryforourgrowthandsuccess.Whatkindoflifeskillsshouldwelearn?Andhowtoimprovethem?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2024·江蘇常州·一模）常州歷史文化底蘊深厚、經(jīng)濟實力雄厚、自然風光秀麗、人文景觀豐富。某報社正在征集主題為“你眼中的常州”的文章，請你寫篇英語文章投稿，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。Youshoudshareyourideasaboutthetopic:1.WhatwasChangzhoulike10yearsago?2.WhatisChangzhoulikenow?3.Whatdoyouthinkofthechanges?注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱；2.要點齊全，語句通順，表達清晰，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)不少于100。文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Changzhou,myhometown,haschangedalotoverthepasttenyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2024·江蘇蘇州·一模）親愛的十年后的自己：你好！當你打開這封信的時候，我們已經(jīng)相隔了整整十年的時光。現(xiàn)在的我，正坐在考場里，提筆給未來的你寫這封信，心中充滿了感慨?！瓋?nèi)容要求：在這封信中，你可以談?wù)勛约含F(xiàn)在的生活狀態(tài)、學習情況，分享你的夢想和追求，也可以向未來的自己提出期望和建議。請充分發(fā)揮你的想象力，用英文書寫這封跨越時空的信件。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2.內(nèi)容完整（照抄試卷內(nèi)容不得分）；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實校名和姓名等信息。Dearfutureme,Howareyou!Iamsittinginanexamclassroom,peninhand,writingalettertoyou.Bythetimeyouopenthisletter,tenyearswillhavepassed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Love,Presentme10．（2024·江蘇無錫·二模）中華文化源遠流長，博大精深。我校學生會特組織用英語講好中國故事活動，邀請同學們分系列介紹中國文化。本期主題是“我最喜歡的城市”，請介紹你最喜歡的城市并陳述理由。注意事項：1.短文須自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.詞數(shù)在100個左右，文章開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.短文必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。MyFavouriteCityMyfavouritecityis____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyoucanvisititsomeday.11．（2024·江蘇蘇州·一模）中考將至，不同的同學在面對中考時有不同的情緒表現(xiàn)，因此你校將舉行一次以“調(diào)節(jié)情緒，迎戰(zhàn)中考”為主題的班會課，來探討如何調(diào)節(jié)自己的情緒，請你為這次的班會課準備一份演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡述面對中考，同學們不同的情緒及表現(xiàn)；2.提出調(diào)節(jié)情緒的方法（至少三點）；3.鼓勵同學們積極樂觀面對中考。注意事項：1.詞數(shù)：100左右（首尾不計入總字數(shù)）。2.圍繞主題，表達內(nèi)容積極向上（照抄閱讀語篇不得分）。3.作文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實校名和姓名等信息。Hello,everyone.Iamgladtomakeaspeechheretoday.TheHighSchoolEntranceExam(中考)iscominganddifferentstudentsbehavedifferently.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening.12．（2024·江蘇無錫·一模）畢業(yè)在即，陽光中學某班英語老師請同學們在成長檔案中加入主題為“MyDreamJob”的一頁，希望大家記錄憧憬，分享自己對理想職業(yè)的理解和行動計劃。假設(shè)你是該班的一名學生，請結(jié)合自身特點撰寫一篇英語短文。下表是你從教材中找到的相關(guān)信息，僅供參考。NameJobPersonalityActionSayingLiuTaoChiefengineercareful;seriousandorganizedpayattentiontoeverydetail;worktohighstandardsAmissisasgoodasamile.DrMadoctorkindandpatientdomorevolunteerworktohelpmorepeople…WuBingteacherkindandhelpful注意事項：1.短文內(nèi)容須自擬，要求觀點明確、語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.詞數(shù)在100個左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.短文中不得使用真實的個人及學校信息；4.短文必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．（2024·江蘇宿遷·一模）在初中三年的學習生活中，你迎難而上，勇于擔當，逐漸成長為“眼中有光，心中有愛”的新時代中國青少年。作為初三年級的學生代表，請你根據(jù)以下中文提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，與同學們分享你身上的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)和心路歷程。優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)樂于助人，積極參加志愿者服務(wù)（舉一例說明）心路歷程勤學好問，克服困難（舉一例說明）展望未來1.自擬一點對自我的要求；2.做一位健康陽光、感恩的少年。要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：90詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Duringthepastthreeyears,Ihavedevelopedanumberofgoodpersonalqualities.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．（2024·江蘇常州·一模）假如你叫李華，作為九年級畢業(yè)生學業(yè)很忙，你發(fā)現(xiàn)有時在某門學科上花的功夫與考試成績不成正比，所以你想給你的某學科老師寫一封信表達你的想法。要點：（1）你對該學科學習的認識（重要性以及作用……）；（2）你目前在該學科上的現(xiàn)狀以及主要問題；（3）你希望老師在哪些方面給予你幫助。注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名字；（2）詞數(shù)100左右；文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,AsaGrade9student,IamsobusywithmyschoolworkthatIwouldliketosharemyworrieswithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua15．（2024·江蘇宿遷·二模）又到一年畢業(yè)季，又逢青春告別時。假設(shè)你是九年級一班的李華，你所在的班級計劃舉辦一場告別初中的晚會（afarewellparty）。請你撰寫一份發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勅陙砟愕某砷L，你對未來的期待，以及你對同學或老師們的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容須包括所給要點，可適當發(fā)揮，條理清楚、語句連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名等信息。Dearteachersandclassmates,Aswearegoingtosaygoodbyetojuniorhighschooldays,Iamfilledwithjoyandexcitement._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua16．（2024·江蘇連云港·一模）享受閱讀，享受生活。為了迎接世界讀書日，學校英語俱樂部上個星期組織了“Enjoyreading,enjoylife”為主題的校園讀書節(jié)系列活動。請你根據(jù)以下提示，為校英文報寫一篇活動報道。注意:(1)詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、校名等信息。Enjoyreading,enjoylife!TowelcometheWorldBookDay,ourschoolEnglishclub__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17．（2024·江蘇常州·一模）中考臨近，很多同學為了能取得好成績，經(jīng)常熬夜復(fù)習，這對身體健康產(chǎn)生了較大的影響。請你就“Stayinguplate”這一話題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容需包括：（1）除了影響健康，熬夜會對學習帶來怎樣的影響？（2）你認為應(yīng)如何取得好成績？注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2．詞數(shù)100左右。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。WiththeEntranceExaminationfortheHighSchoolcomingcloser,manystudentsstayuplateeverydayinordertogetagoodresult,whichhasinfluencedtheirhealthalot.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________18．（2024·江蘇南通·一模）近來，安全問題備受關(guān)注。專家指出，提高青少年的自我保護能力可以避免80%的意外傷害。因此，自我保護是青少年必備的意識和能力之一。請你以“Self-protection”為題寫一篇演講稿，選擇或自擬兩個方面，談?wù)勛晕冶Ｗo的重要性并提出具體建議。要求：詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)?？梢赃m當發(fā)揮，使條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與校名。參考詞匯：school-bullying校園欺凌Self-protectionGoodafternoon,everyone!Recentlysafetyhasbeenpaidmuchattentionto.Itisreportedthat80%oftheinjuriescanbepreventedbyimprovingourself-protectionabilities.Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillstous.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening!19．（2024·江蘇宿遷·一模）“立德樹人、五育并舉”的教育理念在我縣落地生花，中學生學習及生活上有了很大的變化。學校正在組織一個題為“HowtoBeaGoodYouth”的演講活動，請你根據(jù)下面提示，聯(lián)系實際，寫一篇英語演講稿，談?wù)勅绾巫鲆幻聲r代好少年。注意：(1)短文要求條理清楚、行文連貫、段落分明；(2)詞數(shù)90左右，征文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名、姓名。HowtoBeaGoodYouthGoodmorning,everybody!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.20．（2024·江蘇·二模）嘗試是一種積極的生活態(tài)度，它讓我們在面對困難時不退縮，不逃避，而是積極地去尋找解決問題的方法。只有敢于嘗試，我們才能突破自我，實現(xiàn)更大的成就。請你結(jié)合自身體驗描述一次挑戰(zhàn)自我的經(jīng)歷。內(nèi)容包括：1.你曾經(jīng)嘗試過做什么？2.你是如何突破自我的？3.這次嘗試給你的啟示是什么？注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右(已給出的短文開頭，不計入總詞數(shù))；2.內(nèi)容完整(照抄閱讀語篇不得分)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實姓名、校名等信息。Tryingisapositiveattitudetowardslife.Youwouldneverknowwhatyoucangetuntilyouhaveatry._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1．例文：MyfatherknowsmebestDuringtheprocessofgrowing,itisveryimportanttohavesomeonewhoknowsus.Amongallthepeoplearoundme,Ithinknooneelsebutmyfatheristhespecialpersonwhoknowsmebest.Onspecialdays,likemybirthdays,myfatherisalwaysreadytogivemeabigsurprise.HeknowsexactlywhatIlikeandwhatIdon’tlike.Also,wheneverImeetwithanydifficultyinmystudyorfeeldepressed,myfathermayreadmymindimmediately.Healwaystriestoshowmethewaystodothingsrightandencouragesmetofaceitbravely.Myfatherhashelpedmegetthroughseveralhardtimes.Iamsurehewillleadmetoamorecolorfulandwonderfulfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹對自己影響最大的人，適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹對自己影響最大的人是誰；第二步，介紹這個人為你做了什么事情；第三步，介紹自己對這個人的看法。[亮點詞匯]①isreadyto準備好……②givemeabigsurprise給我一個大驚喜 ③getthrough渡過[高分句型]①Amongallthepeoplearoundme,Ithinknooneelsebutmyfatheristhespecialpersonwhoknowsmebest.（賓語從句；who引導(dǎo)定語從句）②HeknowsexactlywhatIlikeandwhatIdon’tlike.（what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）③Also,wheneverImeetwithanydifficultyinmystudyorfeeldepressed,myfathermayreadmymindimmediately.（whenever引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）2．例文：DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.Ourclasswantstodosomethingmeaningfulforourschoolbeforewegraduate.Wehavedecidedtoplantamemorialtree,donatebookstothelibrary,andmakeavideotopromoteourschool.Theseactivitiesarenotonlyawaytogivebacktoourschoolbutalsotocreatelastingmemoriesforourclass.Wehavescheduledtheseactivitiesnextweekatourschool.Weallknowthattreescanprotectusfromsandandmakeourenvironmentbeautiful.Soourgroupdecidetoplantatreeforourschool.Wewillmeetattheschoolgateat7o’clocknextSaturday.Thenwewillgototheplayground.Wewilldigahole,plantatreeandwaterit.Wesincerelyinviteyoutojoinusforthisspecialactivity.Yourpresencewouldmeanalottous.Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當增加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明要邀請Peter參加活動；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。重點介紹班級活動內(nèi)容、時間、地點及原因，小組活動內(nèi)容及原因；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達希望Peter可以參加活動。[亮點詞匯]①meaningful有意義的②promote推廣③giveback回報④createlastingmemories創(chuàng)造持久的回憶[高分句型]Weallknowthattreescanprotectusfromsandandmakeourenvironmentbeautiful.

(賓語從句)3．例文Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.Todaymytopicis“Learningtogetalongwithourparents”.Thesedays,mostofusfeelithardtogetalongwithourparents.Weeasilygetangryfornoreasonandevendon’ttalktothemfordays.Herearesomeofthereasons.First,ourparentscaretoomuchaboutourmarksanditmakesusstressed.Second,weareunwillingtocommunicatewiththem.It’stimeforustochange.First,wecancommunicatewiththem,bysharingourjoysandworrieswiththem.Then,wecanhelpdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Finally,weshouldachieveabalancebetweenourschoolworkandhobbiessothattheywon’tfeelworriedaboutus.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：要點已經(jīng)部分給出，注意要點銜接自然順暢。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹演講的主題——學會和父母相處；第二步，介紹父母和子女現(xiàn)狀，介紹原因；第三步，給出建議。[亮點詞匯]①stressed感到有壓力②achieveabalance獲得一個平衡[高分句型]Finally,weshouldachieveabalancebetweenourschoolworkandhobbiessothattheywon’tfeelworriedaboutus.（結(jié)果狀語從句）4．Onepossibleversion:MysummerholidayplanSummerholidayiscoming.Weshoulddowhatisinterestingandmeaningfultohaveacolourfullife.First,weshouldreadaloteveryday.Becausereadingbookscanhelpuslearnalotofknowledge.Readingcanmakeamanprogress.Second,weshouldlearnsomenewskills.Wecanhelpourparentsdohousework,suchaswashing,cleaningandcooking.Becausedoingthesethingscanhelpusnotdependonourparents,butonourselves.Third,weshouldtakepartindifferentsocialpracticeactivities.Wecanbevolunteersforourneighborhood.Finally,Iwanttomakeanewfriend.BecauseIlikemakingfriends.Ithinkifwecarryoutthisplan.wewillhaveacolourfulandmeaningfulsummerholiday.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明目的，想要一個多彩的假期；第二步，具體闡述計劃，包括讀書、學技巧、參加社會活動，交朋友，并介紹原因；第三步，總結(jié)，表達自己的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事②takepartin參加③dependon依靠[高分句型]①Readingcanmakeamanprogress.(動名詞作主語句型)②Ithinkifwecarryoutthisplan.(賓語從句)5．例文：MyCountry,MyPrideIcomefromagreatcountry,ithasabeautifulname--China.Itisacountrywithalonghistoryandrichculture.IthasamazinghistoricalsitesliketheGreatWall,ForbiddenCity,andTerracottaWarriors.TheyallshowthewisdomandhardworkoftheChinesepeople.China’slandscapeisfantastic,fromitsfamousmountainsandvastdesertstoitslivelycitiesandpeacefulvillages.Visitorsoftenfinditattractiveanddon’twanttoleave.TheChinesepeoplearefriendlyanddiligent,tryingtomaketheircountryrichandpowerful.Ilovemymotherlanddeeply.AndIamproudofitsachievements.Iwillstudyhardtocontributetoitsfuturedevelopment.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，介紹自己的國家，注意不要遺漏材料中的內(nèi)容，并適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“我來自一個偉大的國家，它有一個美麗的名字——中國?！眮硪鱿挛膶χ袊慕榻B；②第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“中國的歷史和文化、風景名勝、中國人”三方面入手，重點介紹中國；③第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達對祖國的愛，努力學習為祖國做貢獻。[亮點詞匯]①historicalsites歷史遺跡②beproudof為……感到自豪[高分句型]①China’slandscapeisfantastic,fromitsfamousmountainsandvastdesertstoitslivelycitiesandpeacefulvillages.(from…to…)6．例文:IHaveaDreamEveryonehasadream.Mydreamistobecomeafamouspianist.Ilovepianoandthemagicsoundsitmakes.Ihavebeeninlovewithpianosincemychildhood.Eachtimemyfingerstouchthekeys,myheartisshakingwithexcitement.Nowplayingthepianohasbecomemyhabit.Itcanmakemerelaxedandforgetalltheworries.AlthoughI’velearnedthepianoforalmosttenyears,Iknowthereisstillalongwaytogo.First,Ishouldspendenoughtimeeverydaytopractise.Justasthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”Besides,goingtothepianoconcertsisalsoimportantbecauseitisofgreathelptome.IreallyhopethatIwillbecomeafamouspianistoneday.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏題目中詢問的三個主要問題，并適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]①第一步，承接開頭，介紹自己的夢想及原因；②第二步，具體闡述如何實現(xiàn)夢想；③第三步，表達期許。[亮點詞匯]①beinlovewith愛上②Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。③beofgreathelp很有幫助[高分句型]①AlthoughI’velearnedthepianoforalmosttenyears,Iknowthereisstillalongwaytogo.（although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）②Besides,goingtothepianoconcertsisalsoimportantbecauseitisofgreathelptome.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）7．例文Learninglifeskillsisnecessaryforourgrowthandsuccess.Whatkindoflifeskillsshouldwelearn?Andhowtoimprovethem?First,weshouldtryourbesttokeephealthy.It’sagoodideatokeepabalanceddietanddodailyexercise.Andbehappyeveryday.Second,workingwithother