讀后續(xù)寫語料積累之如何表達感動背誦與測試(詞-句-文)講義

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背誦積累區(qū)：背誦遷移舉一反三

一、必背單詞

1.憤怒類形容詞：

angry,furious,annoyed,mad,annoying

2.憤怒類名詞：

anger,rage,fury,annoyance,irritation

3.憤怒類動詞：

glare怒目而視；roar/storm怒吼；anger使發(fā)怒，激怒；rage發(fā)怒，怒斥；annoy使惱怒；irritate使

發(fā)怒

二、高頻語塊

1.flyintoafury勃然大怒

2.tremblewithanger氣得發(fā)抖

3.aburstofanger一股怒火

4.flushwithanger氣紅了臉

5.getmad/crossatsb.生某人的氣

6.toone'sannoyance令某人生氣的是

7.explodewithanger勃然大怒

8.burstintoanger/annoyance勃然大怒

9.containone飛anger抑制怒火

10.setoffone9sanger讓某人生氣

11.fuelone?sanger使某人更加憤怒

12.stampone^feetinanger生氣地跺腳

13.stormoutof/into/off氣沖沖地..

14.shake/boilwithanger/rage怒火中燒

15.loseone'stemper發(fā)脾氣

16.betongue-tiedwithanger氣得說不出話來

17.stampone'sfootinanger某人氣得直跺腳

18.beseized/overcome/swallowedbyanger非常生氣

19.beoverwhelmedbyanger/annoyance非常生氣

20.feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury)感到一陣憤怒

三、佳句賞析

1.Hisangerboiledover.他怒火中燒。

2.Hisfaceflamedwithanger.他氣得面紅耳赤。

3.Hisfacewascloudedwithanger.他怒容滿面。

4.Hewentpurplewithanger.他氣得臉色發(fā)紫。

5.Hesprangupinafury.他勃然大怒，跳了起來。

6.Hercheeksflamedanangryred.她氣得臉漲紅了。

7.Histeethlockedtogetherinanger.他氣得咬牙切齒。

8.Mary*sfaceturnedtothunder.瑪麗的表情變得憤怒起來。

9.Helookedasifheweregoingtoburst.他看上去快要氣炸了。

10.Hetrembledwithangerfromheadtofoot.他氣得渾身發(fā)抖。

11.Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他連呼吸都噴著火焰和怒氣。

12.Angerengulfedhimlikeawildbeast.怒火如同野獸一般將他吞沒。

13.Boilingwithrage,Jimshookhisfistatme.Jim怒火中燒，朝我揮舞著拳頭。

15.Thedreadfulmanleapedoutofhischairwitharoar.那可怕的人咆哮著從椅子上跳了起來。

16.Filledwithfury,Jimwasunabletoutterasingleword.Jim滿腔憤怒，一句話也說不出來。

17.AflushofangerspreadacrossMr.Murdstone'scheeks.一抹憤怒的紅暈掠過摩德斯通先生的面頰。

18.Hercolorcameup,aheavyragecameoverherlikeadarkcloud.她臉色突變，一股怒火像烏云一樣籠

罩著她的臉。

19.Hegraspedthethinginbothhands,afireofrageburninginhisheart.他雙手抓著那東西，一股怒火在

心中燃燒。

20.Herreplyfueledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano.她的回答如火上澆油，于是他的憤怒就像火

山一樣爆發(fā)了。

測試鞏固區(qū)：分級測試步步為贏

一、高頻語塊漢譯英

1.氣得發(fā)抖

2.一股怒火

3.氣紅了臉

4.勃然大怒

5.勃然大怒

6.抑制怒火

7.讓某人生氣

8.使某人更加憤怒

9.生氣地跺腳

10.氣沖沖地……

11.發(fā)脾氣

12.氣得說不出話來

13.非常生氣

14.非常生氣

15.感到一陣憤怒

二、佳句賞析漢譯英

1.Hisangerboiledover.他怒火中燒。

2.Hisfaceflamedwithanger.他氣得面紅耳赤。

3.Hisfacewascloudedwithanger.他怒容滿面。

4.Hesprangupinafury.他勃然大怒，跳了起來。

5.Hercheeksflamedanangryred.她氣得臉漲紅了。

6.Histeethlockedtogetherinanger.他氣得咬牙切齒。

7.Helookedasifheweregoingtoburst.他看上去快要氣炸了。

8.Hetrembledwithangerfromheadtofoot.他氣得渾身發(fā)抖。

9.Angerengulfedhimlikeawildbeast.怒火如同野獸一般將他吞沒。

10.Boilingwithrage,Jimshookhisfistatme.Jim怒火中燒，朝我揮舞著拳頭。

11.Filledwithfury,Jimwasunabletoutterasingleword.Jim滿腔憤怒，一句話也說不出來。

12.AflushofangerspreadacrossMr.Murdstone'scheeks.一抹憤怒的紅暈掠過摩德斯通先生的面頰。

13.Hercolorcameup,aheavyragecameoverherlikeadarkcloud.她臉色突變，一股怒火像烏云一樣籠

罩著她的臉。

14.Hegraspedthethinginbothhands,afireofrageburninginhisheart.他雙手抓著那東西，一股怒火在

心中燃燒。

15.Herreplyfueledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano.她的回答如火上澆油，于是他的憤怒就像火

山一樣爆發(fā)了。

三、情感表達片段運用

請運用以上必備單詞或高頻語塊，把下面的語篇補充完整。

Thedooropenedandincameayoungman.Shockedtoseeuspackingthingsintooursuitcase,the

youngman1（憤怒地大叫了

一聲，眼里閃爍著惱怒的光芒）.2______________________________（他大發(fā)雷霆，跺著腳走來走去）.He

accusedusofillegallyenteringhisroomandthreatenedtocallthepolice,whichscaredmychildrento

death.Justatthatmoment,myhusbandreturnedafterhisgroceryshopping.Hearingtheman'srude

words,3（一股怒火在心中燃燒）.Itseemedthatnosettlementwouldbe

possible,andthesituationreachedaboilingpoint.4（爭吵如火上澆

油，于是他的憤怒就像火山一樣爆發(fā)了）.Eventually,5（無法控制

心中的怒氣，我丈夫氣得沖出房間，狠狠地摔上門）.

四、情感表達語篇運用

1.（2023上?重慶渝北?高三重慶市渝北中學(xué)校校考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭

語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Ourchurchcongregation（集會）inTorontohasawayofassistingthosewhohavefinancialdifficulties

withoutmakingthereceiverfeelshameorguilt.Moneyisdroppedintoanofferingboxwithonlythenameofthe

receiverontheenvelope.Theenvelopesarethendistributedtothosememberswithoutthemknowingthenameof

thegiver.

TherecameatimewhenmyhusbandandIwereamongthoseinneed.Bothofuslostjobsatthattimeand

therewaslittlehopethatwecouldbeemployedwithinashorttime.Ofcourse,outofself-esteem（自尊），wedid

nottalkaboutourfinancialdifficultywithanyoneelse.Theonlyreasonourchildrenknewwasthatwehadtocut

backonmanythings.Still,wehopedtheywerenotawareoftheextentofourneed,norofhowmuchtheirfather

andIweresufferingbecauseofit.Wedidnotwanttoburdenthemwithaproblemtheycoulddonothingtosolve.

Withtimegoingby,oursituationwasn'timproving,andmyhusbandandIknewthatwewouldhavetolook

foroutsidehelp.Inthatcoldwinter,justaswereachedthepointofdespair,ourchurchgaveusagiftenvelopethat

hadbeenleftintheofferingbox.Youcouldn'timaginehowoverjoyedwewereonreceivingsuchavery

substantialamountofmoney,whichwasenoughtobringusthroughthatdesperatetime.Wecouldn'thelpbut

wonderwhohadgivensuchagenerousgift.Wewereextremelyrelievedandenormouslygrateful.Inthisway,we

couldsurvivethistoughperiodwiththemoney.Besides,weneedn'tworryaboutourson'suniversitytuition,that

is,heneedn'tapplyforanyloanbecausehehadtakenapart-timejobandworkedhardtoearnsomemoneysince

hewasnineyearsold.HehadbeenapapercarrierforTheTorontoStar,acarwasher,adishwasherandsoon.He

hadbeencarefulforhissmallearningssowehadtrustedhimtoleaveallhiswageswithhiminsteadofputtingit

intothebanktowardshiseducation.

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Oneyearlater,oursonwasapplyingforastudentloan.

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Finally,intears,andwithgreatunwillingness,mysontoldusthetruth.

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者和丈夫因為失業(yè)有了經(jīng)濟困難，幸虧得到了教會的幫助。他

們可以用這筆錢度過這段艱難的時期，并且不需要擔(dān)心兒子的大學(xué)學(xué)費。結(jié)果一年后發(fā)現(xiàn)兒子正在申請學(xué)

生貸款，追問才得知兒子把自己的積蓄當(dāng)作禮物送給了急需用錢的父母。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“一年后，我們的兒子正在申請學(xué)生貸款”可知，第一段可描寫作者發(fā)現(xiàn)兒子的財務(wù)狀

況有異樣以后的反應(yīng)。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“最后，我兒子帶著極大的不甘，流著淚告訴了我們真相。”可知，第二段可描寫兒子

坦白積蓄放在了捐款箱里，以及作者和丈夫感動。

2.續(xù)寫線索：發(fā)現(xiàn)儲蓄賬戶是空的一擔(dān)心錢被濫用一追問兒子一得知真相一感動

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①發(fā)現(xiàn)：discover/find

②要求：require/request/ask

③大喊：yell/shout

情緒類

①激發(fā)我的怒火：fuelmyanger/arousemyannoyance

②喉嚨哽咽：withalumpinmythroat/withmythroattightening

【點睛】【高分句型1】Whatdisturbeduswasthathemightabusethemoney.（由what引導(dǎo)d主語從句，that

引導(dǎo)d表語從句）

【高分句型2】NeverinmylifehadIbeenawareofmyson'slove,silentbutpureanddeep,whichhadcarried

ourfamilythroughthetoughtimeandnowwarmedmylifelikesunshine.（由which弓|導(dǎo)d三￡限定'性定語從句）

2.（2023上?湖北?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)

成一篇完整的短文。

APreciousDress

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Oneday,mymotherdrovemedowntowntobuysomehouseholdnecessities-andthereitwasintheshopping

window.Pink,lovely,delicatelytrimmed（鑲嵌著）withlace,thedresswinked（眨眼）atmeandIknewIhadto

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