2020-2021學(xué)年新北師大版高中英語必修2：Unit6TheAdmirable單元寫作梳理SectionⅥWriting——概要本單元的寫作項目屬于新課標(biāo)中記敘文體類別中的概要。概要是對一篇文章的主題思想的簡單陳述，它用最簡潔的語言概括了原文的主題，使讀者對一篇文章有一個簡要概括的了解。概要主要包括總結(jié)原文的主要觀點、主要支撐細(xì)節(jié)、總體性評價。Ⅰ.Pre－writing(Ⅰ)LearntowriteafterthemodelOn7December,2015,TuYouyouwasawardedaNobelPrizeforherdiscoveryofartemisinin,alife－savingdrugformalaria.TuYouyoumajoredinmedicineinuniversityandlaterstudiedChinesemedicinewithexpertsinthefield.In1969,TuYouyouwasgiventhemissiontosetupateamtofindacureformalaria.Whenworldwidescientistsfailedtofindacureusingmodernchemicals,TuYouyouturnedtoChineseherbsforhelp.Despitetheirlimitedresourcesandhundredsoffailedexperiments,theyfoundapossiblechemical.Inordertotestthemedicine,TuYouyouandherteamtestedthemedicineontheirownbodies.Theyfinallydiscoveredthemosteffectivedrugtocurethedisease.AlthoughTuYouyouhaswontheNobelPrizeandbecomewell－known,sheisuninterestedinfameandpreferstocontinueherresearch.篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Part1：TheNobelPrizeAwardPart2：PersonalinformationPart3：HermissionandresearchPart4：Herattitudetowardsfame(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①discoveryn．發(fā)現(xiàn)②summaryn.概要；摘要③teamn.隊；組④attractiveadj.吸引人的⑤progressn.進(jìn)步⑥r(nóng)esearchn.研究⑦easy－goingadj.好相處的⑧majorin主修⑨graduatefrom畢業(yè)于⑩haveagiftfor對……有天賦?workhardat努力做?bedeterminedto更喜歡，寧愿?setsbagoodexample給某人樹立一個好榜樣?beconsideredas被認(rèn)為/看作是……?berememberedas作為……而被銘記Ⅱ.While－writingWriteasummaryofthetext“TheSuperheroBehindSuperman”．注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加連接詞，以使行文連貫。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.1．首段：總結(jié)原文的主要觀點2．中間段：主要支撐細(xì)節(jié)(出生時間、地點、主要經(jīng)歷、主要貢獻(xiàn)、成就等)3．尾段：總體性評價Step2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1．Wordsandphrases①contributionn．貢獻(xiàn)②respectn.尊敬③famousadj.著名的④achievementn.成就；成績⑤bebornin出生于⑥beregardedas被認(rèn)為是⑦makeremarkableprogress取得顯著進(jìn)步⑧bedevotedto獻(xiàn)身于⑨t(yī)hinkhighlyof高度評價⑩tryoutfor參加選拔2．Sentences①雖然他再也不能走路了，但里夫以尊嚴(yán)和勇氣開始了他的新生活。(讓步狀語從句)Althoughhecouldneverwalkagain,Reevebeganhisnewlifewithdignityandcourage.②里夫解釋說，盡管他可能激勵了數(shù)百萬人，“我所做的是基于我們內(nèi)心的力量……你不需要成為‘超人’才能做到這一點?！?賓語從句；主語從句)Reeveexplainedthat,whilehemaybeaninspirationtomillions，"whatIdoisbasedonpowersweallhaveinsideus...andyoudon’thavetobea‘Superman’todoit.”Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.and,fromthenon,unfortunately,although，shortlyafter,butChristopherReevenotonlyplayedasuperheroinmanyoftheSupermanfilms,buthewasalsoasuperherotomanyinreallife.Reeveactedinhisfirstschoolplayattheageofeight.Asanactor,hetriedoutfor,andstarredinfourSupermanfilmsfrom1978to1987.Fromthenon,hebecameaworld－famousactor.Unfortunately,aterriblethinghappenedin1995.Reevewasthrownfromahorseandbrokehisneck.Atfirst,doctorsdidnotexpecthimtolive.However,“Superman”didn’tgiveup.Althoughhecouldneverwalkagain,Reevebeganhisnewlifewithdignityandcourage.Shortlyafterhisaccident,Reevereturnedtofilmmaking.Overthenextfewyears,hedevotedhimselftohelpingthoseinneed.ChristopherReevediedon10October,2004.Buthewillalwaysberegardedasasuperhero—inmorewaysthanone.Ⅲ.Post－writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Istheformatofthesummaryappropriate?□2.Arethereanyspellingmistakes?□3.Arethereanygrammaticalmistakeslikethetenses(時態(tài))?□4.Doesthesummaryincludeallthemaincontents?□5.IswrittenEnglishcorrectlyused?亮點表達(dá)?精彩開頭語YaoMingisagreatbasketballplayerinChinaorevenintheworld.姚明是中國乃至世界上偉大的籃球運動員。MartinLutherKingisnowregardedasoneoftheheroesofthe20thcentury.馬丁·路德·金現(xiàn)在被認(rèn)為是20世紀(jì)的英雄之一。Einstein,whodiscoveredthe“RelativityTheory”，iswellknownintheworld.愛因斯坦發(fā)現(xiàn)了“相對論”是眾所周知的。HowardCarterisoneofthemostfamousexplorersthattheworldhaseverknown.霍華德·卡特是世界上最著名的探險家之一。Shakespeare,whowasasonfromapoorfamily,amanoflittleeducation,wroteplaysandpoemsthatarereadallovertheworld.莎士比亞出身貧寒，幾乎沒有受過什么教育，他寫的戲劇和詩歌在全世界都有人讀。TomasEdison,borninAmerica,wasagreatscientistandinventor.托馬斯·愛迪生生于美國，是一位偉大的科學(xué)家和發(fā)明家。?精華結(jié)尾語Sbstillliveinone’sheart.某人仍然活在……心里。Sbsetagoodexampleto...某人為……樹立了好榜樣。Sbberespectedby...某人受到……的尊重。Sbbehonoredas...某人被尊為……Sbberegarded/acceptedas...某人被認(rèn)為/接受為……Sbbecomeaworl