讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（一）讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（二）1.萬(wàn)能情感句2.句式提升3.真題演練句式提升1.with/without的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)沒(méi)有男孩住的房子如同一座墳?zāi)挂话惆察o。(2020年1月浙江卷)Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Theboyisn’tlivingthere,andthehouseseemedquietasatomb.他用一只手扶著欄桿，向狼噴了噴霧。(2017年6月浙江卷)Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.一切準(zhǔn)備就緒，伯納德開(kāi)始了他的新業(yè)務(wù)。(2020年新高考全國(guó)Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Heputsonehandonethebarsandfiredthesprayatthewolf.Aftereverythingwasready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.充分利用這次近距離接觸，我給這只熊拍了一些照片。(2020年7月浙江卷)Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter,Itooksomepicturesofthebear.簡(jiǎn)在黑暗中躺在床上睡不著，她非常想和湯姆以及家人在一起。(2016年10月浙江卷)Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.2.現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)Imadethebestofthiscloseencounterandtooksomepicturesofthebear.Janelayawakeinthedark,shewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.他站起來(lái)，擁抱父母，微笑著，努力不讓情緒影響到自己。(2020年1月浙江卷)Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotionsgetthebetterofhim.爬到高處后，她轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身，希望能看到湖泊。(2016年10月浙江卷)Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiledandtrynottolethisemotionsgetthebetterofhim.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaroundandhopedtoseethelake.母親離開(kāi)房間后，孩子們坐在那里想著伯納德的事情。(2020年新高考全國(guó)Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensattherethinkingaboutBernard.Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthereandthoughtaboutBernard.既害怕又震驚，貝蒂一句話也說(shuō)不出來(lái)Scaredandshocked,Bettycouldn'tsayaword.他和安妮于1960年結(jié)婚，他們沒(méi)有孩子。Marriedin1960,heandAnnewerechildless.3.過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)Bettywasscaredandshocked,soshe

couldn'tsayaword.HeandAnnemarriedin1960,andtheywerechildless.受到這些話的啟發(fā)，他開(kāi)始脫穎而出,并在整個(gè)學(xué)校生活中繼續(xù)這門(mén)課程。Inspiredbythewords,hebegantoexcelandcontinuedthiscoursethroughouthisschoollife.Afterhewasinspiredbythewords,hebegantoexcelandcontinuedthiscoursethroughouthisschoollife.鍋太熱了，面包在幾秒鐘內(nèi)就變黑了。(2021年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)然后杰夫注意到蒸汽從鍋里冒出來(lái)，鍋蓋開(kāi)始搖晃。(2021年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)4.并列句Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.但是杰夫的手碰到了滾燙的爐頭，他發(fā)出了痛苦的叫聲。(2021年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)我從未有機(jī)會(huì)知道那個(gè)好心人的名字，但我永遠(yuǎn)會(huì)記得他出人意料的好意。Inevergotanopportunitytoknowthatkindman’sname,

butIwouldalwaysrememberhisunexpectedkindness.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.早餐后，我去幫蒂娜姨媽喂雞，而我的爸爸和保羅叔叔一起去放羊吃草。(2018年6月浙江卷)Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).饑餓的熊聞著味道來(lái)到我們的營(yíng)地，營(yíng)地被高高的鐵絲網(wǎng)包圍著。(2020年7月浙江卷)Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.有一位男子生病在床，他的妻子照顧他，還有他們的小孩子，不能出去工作。(2020年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,

who

couldnotgoouttowork,tookcareofhim

andtheirlittleboy.5.定語(yǔ)從句Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,andthecampwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Therewasamansickinbed.Hiswifetookcareofhimandtheirlittleboy,soshecouldnotgoouttowork,.他站起來(lái)，喊道：“我有一個(gè)好主意！我有一個(gè)我們都可以幫助完成的解決方案?！?2020年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)Hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish.”他們開(kāi)車(chē)把兒子送到離城里好幾個(gè)小時(shí)車(chē)程的大學(xué),他不久將要在那兒生活和學(xué)習(xí)。(2020年1月浙江卷)Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolution,andwecanallhelpaccomplishit.”Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversity,andhewouldsoonbelivingandstudyinginit.雙胞胎一想到為母親節(jié)準(zhǔn)備的驚喜就興奮不已。(2021年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)(時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)6.狀語(yǔ)從句ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.當(dāng)他們把早餐送到床上時(shí)，媽媽會(huì)多么高興和自豪啊。(2021年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)(時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)工作很累人，但我很期待著薪水，盡管我不確定那會(huì)是多少。(2021年6月浙江卷)(讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbe

whentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn’tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.

由于經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退，該鎮(zhèn)有些人失業(yè)了。(2020年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)(原因狀語(yǔ)從句)Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.高中畢業(yè)后，詹妮弗上了當(dāng)?shù)匾凰夹g(shù)學(xué)院，靠打工來(lái)支付學(xué)費(fèi)，因?yàn)闆](méi)有多余的錢(qián)用于大學(xué)教育。(2020年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)(原因狀語(yǔ)從句)Afterhighschool,Jenniferattendedalocaltechnicalcollege,workingtopayhertuition(學(xué)費(fèi)),becausetherewasnoextramoneysetasideforacollegeeducation.

當(dāng)他們到達(dá)湖邊時(shí)，簡(jiǎn)非常生氣，她對(duì)湯姆說(shuō):“我要為我們找到一個(gè)更好的露營(yíng)地”,然后就走了。(2016年10月浙江卷)(時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句+結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,Janewas

soangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.當(dāng)他們靠近時(shí)，他們意識(shí)到那只狗是一頭狼。(2017年6月浙江卷)(時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.當(dāng)夜幕降臨時(shí)，簡(jiǎn)累得不得不停下來(lái)過(guò)夜。(2016年10月浙江卷)(時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句+結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.盡管這是我生活中褪色的記憶之一,但有時(shí)我會(huì)清晰地記得他的臉,尤其是他的眼睛。(讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylife,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.我想知道無(wú)論后果如何，父母是否應(yīng)該始終說(shuō)實(shí)話。(2020年全國(guó)Ⅰ卷)(賓語(yǔ)從句)Iwonderifparentsshouldalwaystellthetruthnomattertheconsequences.7.名詞性從句Iwonder...parentsshouldalwaystellthetruthnomattertheconsequences.看起來(lái)天要下雪了。(表語(yǔ)從句)Itseemsthat/asifitisgoingtosnow.然而,在餐桌上迎接我的是一個(gè)微波爐包裝。(主語(yǔ)從句)However,whatgreetedmeatthetablewasamicrowavepackage.itseems…itisgoingtosnow.whatgreetedmeatthetableitwasamicrowavepackage.她突然想起可能在她離開(kāi)家時(shí)沒(méi)把門(mén)關(guān)上。(同位語(yǔ)從句)Thethoughtcametoherthatmaybeshehadleftthedooropenwhenshelefthome.thethoughtcametohermaybeshehadleftthedooropenwhenshelefthome.她一生中從未嘗過(guò)比這更好的味道。(2016年10月浙江卷)Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.直到那時(shí)，我才意識(shí)到，盡管喬在做家務(wù)方面遇到了麻煩，但他還是懂得如何照顧我。OnlythendidIrealizeJoeactuallyunderstoodhowtotakecareofmedespitehistroublewiththehousework.8.倒裝句式Shehadnevertastedanythingbetterinherlife.ThenIrealizeJoeactuallyunderstoodhowtotakecareofmedespitehistroublewiththehousework.我?guī)缀鯖](méi)有意識(shí)到那天會(huì)發(fā)生一些異常的事情。LittledidIrealizesomethingdifferentwouldhappenthatday.Ialmostdidn’trealizesomethingdifferentwouldhappenthatday.正是它眼睛上的黃色斑點(diǎn)讓我意識(shí)到它的存在。Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.然后亞瑟意識(shí)到也許那一刻正是他可以解決他的問(wèn)題。ThenArthurrealizedmaybeitwashethatcouldsolvehisproblematthatverymoment.9.強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)Theyellowspotsonitseyes

mademerealizeitspresence.ThenArthurrealizedmaybehecouldsolvehisproblematthatverymoment.直到她到了醫(yī)院才明白所發(fā)生的一切。Itwaswhenshegotinthehospitalthatsheunderstoodeverythingthathadhappened.正是這些障礙和困難使我們變得強(qiáng)大，并為生活中的更大挑戰(zhàn)做好準(zhǔn)備。Itistheseobstaclesanddifficultiesthatmakeusstrongandgetpreparedforthegreaterchallengesinourlife.Whenshegotinthehospital,sheunderstoodeverythingthathadhappened.Theseobstaclesanddifficultiesmakeusstrongandgetpreparedforthegreaterchallengesinourlife.幫助動(dòng)物園管理員捉住小偷的不是勇氣,而是智慧。It’snotthecouragebutthewisdomthathelpsthezookeepercatchthethieves.Notthecouragebutthewisdomhelpsthezookeepercatchthethieves.營(yíng)地管理者建議我用胡椒噴霧。(2020年7月浙江卷)ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.如果一個(gè)陌生的家庭出現(xiàn)在家門(mén)口,媽媽會(huì)很高興的。(2017年11月浙江卷)Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.10.虛擬語(yǔ)氣要是她沒(méi)有把手機(jī)忘在湯姆的包里就好了。(2016年10月浙江卷)IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.“我希望我們能幫助他賺錢(qián),”克萊拉說(shuō)?！八募胰嗽馐苤薮蟮耐纯唷！?2020年新高考全國(guó)Ⅰ卷)“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”如果沒(méi)有他的及時(shí)幫助，我肯定會(huì)誤了飛機(jī)。Withouthistimelyhelp,Iwouldhavecertainlymissedmyplane.高考真題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。(注：浙江卷已按照新高考模式將劃線詞刪除)(一)(2021年新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)

AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestorewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.Paragraph1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2：Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.____________________________________________________________________________________

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Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheirdepressedfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadesomeeggsandwichesandcookedsomeporkporridgeinstead.Thenhesneaked(溜進(jìn))backtobed.Meanwhile,thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray(托盤(pán)),addedacardtheyhadmadeandwalkedoutofthekitchen.Paragraph1：Paragraph2：

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theyhuggedherandyelled“HappyMother’sDay,darlingMummy!”Motherhuggedthetwins.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.SheshookFatherwhowaspretendingtosleep.Heactedastonishedwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintoasandwichandsaiditwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffimmediatelywantedtohaveabite.Jennacaughtherfather’seyeandtheywinked(眨眼示意)ateachothersecretly.(二)(2020年新高考全國(guó)Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.MrsMeredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch.

“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon’tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.I’lltellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”P(pán)aragraph1：WhenMrsMeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2：Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.______________________________________________________________________________________

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WhenMrsMeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Thenshesaid,“YoumaysendhimthepopcorneverySaturdaymorning,ifyouwillpopthecornforhimyourself.John,willyouagreetotakechargeofthework?”

“Indeed,Iwill,”repliedJohn,andhekepthisword.Thenthechildrenwerebusypoppingthecorn,whiletheirmotherwentouttobuythepaperbags.Whenshecameback,shebroughtBernardwithher.Verysoonthepaperbagswerefilled.Paragraph1：Paragraph2：

Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Andmuchsoonerthanheexpected,hereturnedwithanemptybasket.Neverhadheearnedsomuchmoney.Whenhefoundthatitwasalltobehis,hewassodelightedthathecouldhardlyspeak,buthisbrightsmilingfacespokeforhim.Peoplebegantowatchforthe“l(fā)ittlepopcornboy”,andeveryweekhehadatleastfiftycentstotakehome,andoftenmore.AllthiswasbecauseofJohn'sbrightidea.(三)(2022新高考Ⅰ卷)Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.Paragraph1：

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners._______________________________________________________________________學(xué)生習(xí)作Heseemsfrustratedanddidn’tsayanything.“Doyoufearthatotherswilllaughatyou?”Iasked.Helookedatmeandnoddedhishead,atthesametime,Ifoundtheterrorfromhisappearance,whichmademehuggedhimtightly.“Don’tthinkofthat,youareabraveboy!It’sunnecessarytocareaboutothers,justdoit!”Icontinued.Aftermysaying,Davidwaslostindeepthoughtandacceptedtorunfinally.Hisdeterminedlooktoldmehewouldnevergiveup.Whenthestartinggunwentoff,Davidjuststartedforwardandkeptrunning.Manyaudiences’encouragevoicearoundme,IpaidmyfullattentiontoDavid.Suddenly,hefellontheground,awaveofintensionwellingupinmyheart.Ishouted“ComeonDavid，youcandoit!”Inspiredmyencouragement,othersrepeatedmywords.Withthevoicesounded,Davidpickedhimselfupandstartagain.IwasastonishedtoDavidwhenhesurpassedotherrunnersonebyone.Finally,hegotit.Catchingmyhandandsaid“Thankyou,youmakemeknowhowtobelievemyself.IhopethatIcandobetterjobnexttime”P(pán)aragragh-1修改Heseemsfrustratedanddidn’tsayanything.“Doyoufearthatotherswilllaughatyou?”Iasked.Helookedatmeandnoddedhishead.Atthesametime,Ifoundtheterrorfromhisappearance,whichmademehughimtightly.“Don’tthinkofthat,youareabraveboy!It’sunnecessarytocareaboutothers,justdoit!”Icontinued.Aftermysaying,Davidwaslostindeepthoughtandacceptedtorunfinally.Hisdeterminedlooktoldmehewouldnevergiveup.Heseemsfrustratedanddidn’tsayanything.“Fearingotherswouldlaughatyou?”Iasked.Helookedatmeandnoddedhishead.Atthesametime,Ifoundtheterrorfromhisappearance,whichmademehughimtightly.“Don’tthinkofthat,youareabraveboy!It’sunnecessarytocareaboutothers,justdoit!”Icontinued.Afterhearingmywords,Davidwaslostindeepthoughtanddecidedtorunfinally.Hisdeterminedlooktoldmehewouldnevergiveup.Seeingthisscene,Iwasinvolvedinagreatsenseofreliefandexpectation.Whenthestartinggunwentoff,Davidjuststartedforwardandkeptrunning.Manyaudiences’encouragevoicearoundme,IpaidmyfullattentiontoDavid.Suddenly,hefellontheground,awaveofintensionwellingupinmyheart.Ishouted“ComeonDavid，youcandoit!”Inspiredbymyencouragement,othersrepeatedmywords.Withthevoicesounded,Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagain.IwasastonishedatDavidwhenhesurpassedotherrunnersonebyone.Finally,hegotit.Catchingmyhandandsaid“Thankyou,youmakemeknowhowtobelievemyself.IhopethatIcandoabetterjobnexttime.”Whenthestartinggunwentoff,Davidjuststartedforwardandkeptrunning.Manyaudiences’encouragevoicearoundme,IpaidmyfullattentiontoDavidandsawhimfellonthegroundsuddenly.Awaveofintensionwellingupinmyheart.Ishouted“ComeonDavid，youcandoit!”Inspiredbymyencouragement,othersrepeatedmywords.Withthevoicesounded,Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagain.IwasastonishedatDavidwhenhesurpassedotherrunnersonebyone.Finally,hegotit.Holdingmyhand,hesaid“Thankyouformaking

meknowhowtobelievemyself.IhopethatIcandoabetterjobnexttime.”P(pán)aragragh-2修改Heseemsfrustratedanddidn’tsayanything.“Fearingotherswouldlaughatyou?”Iasked.Helookedatmeandnoddedhishead.Atthesametime,Ifoundtheterrorfromhisappearance,whichmademehughimtightly.“Youareabraveboy!It’sunnecessarytocareaboutothers,justdoit!”Icontinued.Afterhearingmywords,Davidwaslostindeepthoughtanddecidedtorunfinally.Hisdeterminedlooktoldmehewouldnevergiveup.

Seeingthisscene,Iwasinvolvedinagreatsenseofreliefandexpectation.Whenthestartinggunwentoff,Davidjuststartedforwardandkeptrunning.IpaidmyfullattentiontoDavidandsawhimfellonthegroundsuddenly.Awaveofintensionwellingupinmyheart.Ishouted“ComeonDavid，youcandoit!”Inspiredbymyencouragement,

Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagain.IwasastonishedatDavidwhenhesurpassedotherrunnersonebyone.Finally,hegotit.Holdingmyhand,hesaid“Thankyouformakingmeknowhowtobelievemyself.IhopethatIcandoabetterjobnexttime.”改進(jìn)版

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.WhatconfusedmemostwasthathowIcouldencouragehimtocherishtheopportunity.Afterall,hehaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent.SoIsaidgentlyandquietly,“Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hearingmywords,Davidfeltagreatsenseofwarmthanddelightwe