中考書面表達(dá)——學(xué)校和學(xué)校生活Whatdoyouthinkofwhenyouseethesepictures?FreetalkWhatdoyouthinkofourschool?Whatcanyouthinkofwhenwetalkaboutourschool?ThinkandsayWehavenotonly…butalso…inourschool.Weoften…there.Ourteachersarevery…Theyalways/usually/often…kind,friendly,helpful,strict,hard-working,knowledgeable,…Ourschoollifeis…Iprefer…to…Howdoweintroduceourschoolandschoollife?Readandfind

Hello,I’mMary.Nowletmeintroducemyschoolandschoollifetoyou.Myschoolisapublicschool.It’scleanandbeautiful.Youcanseemanykindsofflowershereandthere.Therearemanymodernteachingfacilitiesinmyschool,suchasthelab,theplaygroundandsoon.What’smore,althoughmyteachersarestrictwithus,theyalsocareforus.Theyarenotonlymyteachersbutalsomyfriends.Myclassmatesareveryhelpful.TheyalwayshelpmewithmyChinese.Lastbutnotleast,theactivitiesinmyschoolareverycolourful.Therearemanydifferentskindsofclubs.Ipreferreadingtotakingpartinotheractivities.SoIlikegoingtothelibrarywhenIamfree.Ilovemyschoolandschoollifeverymuch.Readandfind1.Howmanypartsarethereinthepassage?Three.BeginningMaincontentConclusion2.Whatdoesthewritertalkaboutinthemaincontent?

Thewritertalksaboutherschool,herteachers,herclassmateandtheactivitiesinherschool.3.Underlinetheconnectingwordsinthepassage.4.Whichsentencedoyoulikebetter?Chooseoneanddiscussitwithyourpartner.E.g.Ilike“Ipreferreadingtotakingpartinotheractivities.”,becausethewriteruses“prefer…to…’’inthissentences.Youwillgraduatefromourschoolinafewweeks.Whatdoyouhopeyournewschoolwillbelike?WrittenexpressionHowtowrite審列連查謄五步寫作法審確定內(nèi)容確定人稱確定時(shí)態(tài)選擇喜歡的學(xué)校，介紹學(xué)校信息和喜歡的原因第一人稱事實(shí)性信息一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)確定結(jié)構(gòu)敘述三段式首段:點(diǎn)明主題——點(diǎn)明想去的學(xué)校中間段:圍繞主題，展開敘述——敘述喜歡的原因尾段:回應(yīng)主題，總結(jié)升華——重申想去的愿望審確定內(nèi)容:選擇喜歡的學(xué)校，介紹學(xué)校信息和喜歡的原因確定人稱:第一人稱確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)確定結(jié)構(gòu):敘述三段式首段:點(diǎn)明想去的學(xué)校（Beginning)中間段:敘述想去的原因(Maincontent)尾段:重申想去的愿望(Conclusion)列結(jié)合三段式，列出寫作提綱BeginningIwouldliketogoto…MaincontentTheschoolis…Theteachers…Thestudents…ConclusionIhope…連1.連詞成句BeginningIwouldliketogotoOrangeSchool.MaincontentTheschoolisprivate.It’swell-known.Theteachersareyoungandactive.Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.ConclusionIhopeIcangotoOrangeSchool.——添加動(dòng)詞和關(guān)鍵信息連2.擴(kuò)句成段MaincontentsTheschoolisprivate.It’swell-known.ThePurpleSchoolispublic.Ithasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Theschoolisprivate.It’swell-knowninourcity.——添加補(bǔ)充信息連2.擴(kuò)句成段Maincontents——添加補(bǔ)充信息Theteachersareyoungandactive.TheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Theteachersthereareyoungandactive.Icangetalongwellwiththem.連2.擴(kuò)句成段Maincontent——添加補(bǔ)充信息Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.ThestudentsinPurpleSchoolhavelesshomework.ThestudentsinOrangeSchoolhavecolorfulactivities.Ilikehavingmorecoloufulactivities.連3.修改潤色——添加連接詞、高階詞匯或句型

ThePurpleSchoolispublic.Ithasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Theschoolisprivate.It’swell-knowninourcity.

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thePurpleSchoolispublicandhasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Becauseit’sawell-knownprivateschoolinourcity.連3.修改潤色——添加連接詞、高階詞匯或句型TheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Theteachersthereareyoungandactive.Icangetalongwellwiththem.

IknowtheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Butmostofthemarestrictwithstudents.Instead,theteachersherearenotonlyyoungbutalsoactive.Theyarepatientwithstudents.So

Icangetalongwellwiththem.連3.修改潤色——添加連接詞、高階詞匯或句型ThestudentsinPurpleSchoolhavelesshomework.ThestudentsinOrangeSchoolhavecolorfulactivities.Ilikehavingmorecoloufulactivities.

What’smore,OrangeSchooloffersmanycolourfulactivitiestostudents.It’sgoodtohavelesshomeworkinPurpleSchool.ButIpreferhavingmorecolourfulactivitiestohavinglesshomework.查對(duì)照中考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)逐項(xiàng)自查查要點(diǎn)是否齊全查語言結(jié)構(gòu)是否豐富，行文是否流暢，表達(dá)是否清楚查是否有錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)查是否有達(dá)到寫作目的注意：句式運(yùn)用的多樣性IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.IpreferOrangeSchool.ThefirstreasonIchoosethisschoolis…Thestudentshavecolourfulactivities.Theactivitiesofthestudentsthereareverycolourful.Thestudentsintheschoolcanenjoymanykindsofcolourfulactivities.工整謄寫，注意詞間距、行間距和段間距IwouldliketogotoOrangeSchool.

AlthoughthePurpleSchoolispublicandhasalonghistory.IlikeOrangeSchoolbetter.Becauseit’sawell-knownprivateschoolinourcity.IknowtheteachersinPurpleSchoolishard-working.Butmostofthemarestrictwithstudents.Instead,theteachersherearenotonlyyoungbutalsoactive.Theyarepatientwithstudents.SoIcangetalongwellwiththem.What’smore,OrangeSchooloffersmanycolourfulactivitiestostudents.It’sgoodtohavelesshomeworkinPurpleSchool.ButIpreferhavingmorecolourfulactivitiestohavinglesshomework.Inmyopinion,OrangeSchoolismoresuitableforme.IhopeIcangotoOrangeSchoolandenjoymylifethere.謄Trytowrite假如你是華文中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生，即將中學(xué)畢業(yè)，馬上就要進(jìn)入高中學(xué)習(xí)，你對(duì)未來的高中生活充滿了憧憬。請(qǐng)你以“MyLifeinHighSchool”為題，根據(jù)表格信息，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)學(xué)校寧靜而美麗，有悠久歷史老師

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豐富多彩，可自由選擇要求：1．短文的標(biāo)題和開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。MyLifeinHighSchoolMymiddleschoollifewillbeover.AndIwillentermyhighschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Checklist時(shí)態(tài)是否運(yùn)用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)結(jié)構(gòu)是否使用了三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)內(nèi)容是否涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)語言是否使用了豐富的語言，行文是否流暢，表達(dá)是否清楚寫作目的是否達(dá)到了寫作目的ExampleMyLifeinHighSchoolMymiddleschoollifewillbeover.AndIwillentermyhighschool.Iexpectmylifeinhighschoolwillbeverywonderful.

Inmyopinion,

myhighschoolwillbenotonlypeacefulbutalsobeautiful.Itwillbeaschoolwithalonghist